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Hector Johanson, a resourceful university student, wakes up to a world overrun by flesh-eating zombies. As the world crumbles all around him. Hector stumbles upon an extraordinary system embedded in his mind: The Survival Shop, a store that can provide anything he needs—food, weapons, medicine, or even absurdly powerful artifacts. The only catch? He has to pay with life points—earned by battling the undead and surviving the apocalypse. The shop offers ranges from the most menial items to being able to field an army and reclaim the world. The only question is: Will he be able to afford the price tag for it? Author's note: this is my first time publishing a story all feedback is welcome. The story is meant to be grim and although the shop offers a vast selection of services the issue is mainly in their price tag.

What will happen, if you get suddenly thrown into an unknown era of time due to a simple glitch in the passage of 'Time'? What if you find yourself in an era of the past, of a place which you even don't belong to? Time has been playing games, but Things, almost everything- happen for a reason. -A 'reason', which we humans can't 'reason' on! . . Rishabh Paul, a History student from India, finds himself transmigrated from the 21st century to the 1st Millenium Jin Dynasty under some mysterious circumstances. He wakes up in the body of 'Ruo Yun Jin'- the second prince of the Caizhou Jins; and a person who can foresee the future. But, Things became worse when the conflicts of the court and country, engulfed Rishabh in the historical conflict between the Mongols and Jin Dynasty. The next is for your buddies to read and find out! . . . THIS NOVEL IS UNDER EDITS! PLEASE WAIT FOR THE AUTHOR TO EDIT THE NOVEL! ____________________________________________ Cover BACKGROUND CREDITS for the respective owners, Kindly contact for removal/credit. (BG was taken from Pinterest and edited on PicsArt) . . [Note- Most of the story is written 'on the go', it's unabridged in many chapters, it will be very kind if the reader can point out the mistakes in the text; So, it can be easier for the Author to eradicate them and correct them.] YOUR SUGGESTIONS= MY STORY!

Piper spent most of her young life climbing the ranks of her nation's military with one goal in mind: Become an Aeronaut in the Skyfleet - the most renowned and technologically advanced force in human history; however, a fatal mistake across an international border results in her immediate transfer to the last place she ever expected to be. This story has been edited by Dunham Documents. Editing requests available at dunhamdocumentservices@gmail.com

A young, ostracized orphan named Lin Wei stumbles upon a hidden system that grants him incredible power, thrusting him into a world of ancient martial arts, celestial cultivation, and a destiny he never imagined. To be edited and revise.

I am shyam, a ordinary guy with some video editing skills. I used to edit videos for clients at day and pass my time watching vtubers at night. I was doing the same at an ordinary night but — it did not go as usual, somehow I felt like I was getting deeply connected to that vtuber whom I watched. I felt in love with her, i tried to escape that feeling telling myself she deserves someone better, but my heart and soul has already decided to be hers. and so was her ---- ---- book [ version refined timed 3rd ] changed 3rd version polished ---

Currently, this novel is unavailable. As a "beginner" author, I’ve spent the past four months improving my skills, and looking back, I find what I’ve written before to be, well... not great. Over the next month or so, I’ll be editing and reworking this book to make it better. Done: 2 / 116 chapters.

Iris Morris is by no means looking for any more drama in her life ( she has loads of it thanks to her mom). However, when Lucas Andrews pops up and ruins her interview, the drama she has been running away from unfolds in all the "wrong" ways, like him suddenly filling her small circle of influence. . .and her mind! For Lucas Andrews, nothing is as important to him as getting the Adder magazine to be number one on the bestsellers list worldwide. So when Iris comes to support the promise he made to his mother out of her sheer love for editing, he can't help but fall for hard for her, especially when a fake dating deal to ward off his possessive "fan girl" comes into play.

"So... well... I died as it seems? Then I woke up as a character from an online science fiction game... And the craziest thing was that I was in my personal spaceship... Aside from that, I have this weird gaming system bugging me with missions and stuff... So... finally, something interesting happened in my life at last. At least now, I am unbound by anything and can do as I wish." - Acturus Al-Yesod Crawford "In the grim darkness of the endless space, there is only one sole constant that has ruled the space since immemorial, that dictated the life and death, the order and chaos of every single living being. Power. This is the story of one of the most controversial people in the history of the Known Universe, Arcturus Al-Yesod Crawford, the Star Mercenary, Bounty Hunter, Trader and many other titles..." - Prologue Chronicles of the Known Universe: Chapter Star Citizen, Star Date: Unknown *** Tags: Aliens, Androids, Army, Army Building, Automatons, Assassins, Artificial Intelligence, Cosmic Wars, Fleet Battles, Futuristic Setting, Male Protagonist, Mercenaries, Monsters, Outer Space, Nobles, Late Romance, Slow Romance, Money Grubber, Supernatural Powers, Psychic Powers, System, Game Elements, Strategic Battles, Strong to Stronger, Transported into a Game World, Wars, Evolution, Genetic Modifications, Industrialization, Military, Politics, Poor to Rich, Strength-Based Social Hierarchy, Time Skip

One moment, Lucas closed his eyes to sleep. The next, he opened them to find himself not in his bedroom, but in a courtroom. Even more startling, he was in a different body. Lucas was confused, but there was no time to dwell on it. Why? Because.... "Your Honour, please sentence him to death!" the prosecutor demanded, looking directly at Lucas, who was seated on the judge's bench. 'It seems I have become a judge.' Lucas realized. -------- [Note:- There will be no Harem, If you want ONLY Harem then this book is not for you, there will be romance. ] Also tell me how do you like it in review, This is my first time writing {Note:- Currently I'm editing all of my strating chapters because of my poor grammar mistakes, I already edited some of starting chapter but still if you found any grammar mistakes please let me know. Thank you.}

///Author note this is my first time writing a web novel so I apologize for my writing. However I will do best to improve and I would like to say I not against making small changes to the certain character if necessary. //// This is a story about how a young boy who receives information about, the future from advice called the 'Apuls '.Which helped strengthen his mind, giving him an edge over others, watch him use his future knowledge and devilish good looks to take over the world.As he take the responsibility of taking his family and friends out of the slamps and to a life of wealth and luxury. What as he conquers the film, music, gaming fashion industry and tech industry by strom with the help of his family and friends. This story is similar to novel such as I in Hollywood but, don't focus to much of movies making heavily. But, the entertainment and business world as a whole. #No harem,

Genius Made a mistake and pays for it. The gods bring her into their game for entertainment Join us in Watching the game of the gods. EDITING IN PROCESS!! Any errors are in line with the Editing Process. Thank you for your understanding. The image is the first-ever work I had done of Chelsea. Enjoy Support me and my works at www.Patreon.com/Madjic

The fate of the world rests on the lead's hands as he is either to bring destruction or peace to the already divided world. Unraveling the secrets of the ancestors, Eren undergoes developmental changes, finding out the truth of both his people and the ones who are supposedly his enemies. He is bestowed with great power; the greatest of its kind, and with great power comes great responsibilities...

The world ushered in an apocalypse. At first, it was humans uniting to drive away the virus, but bit by bit, they still couldn't hold on--a cure wasn't found until Ellis was the last human standing. Perhaps, the gods finally glanced to this abandoned world for the last time and took a pity to the last human creation they had and sent Ellis in a world different from her own. A world of swords and magic, in the body of an orphaned child. "Dad--" "I'm not your father." "Oh--then, you, could you please tell me a bed-time story?" Ellis-- now Ruth--'s mission in this world, is to be a perfectly normal child. Or so she dreamed. [Book cover is drawn by author.] Updates every Tuesdays and Fridays - [currently under editing]

I suddenly appeared in the movie Journey to the West that I was planning to watch And why are the characters here all women? *This is an English translation of my other work, and I will edit a few things from my original work to make it more suitable for readers. *My first language is not English so don't expect good grammar

[a boy who transmigrates to another world and lets everything flow as he should, just knows that he has to remain strong in order not to be intimidated.] the image does not belong to me if you want to remove it just let me know. Just writing to see if I improve my writing and it doesn't go blank when writing. if you have tips thank you.

The only word to discribe him gorgeous. Why, why me , why us , why so many mysteries. I wish this was all a dream if I could wake up one day to be in his arms just the two of us together. To live in happiness . I will protect her even if it will cost my life. I will do everything to support and protect her that was a promise and I am not going to break it. But there seem to be something ouside that leaves the inside untouchable. Is all this just real or was it or was it not PLANNED??? This book would be under heavy editing, so It is recommended to not read until further notice. Thank you

A kind hearted young man–Yan Ming wants to escape the life and death cycles of mortals, however he only jumped from one cage to another as he realizes the dark truth about the cultivation world. (Inspired by Renegade Immortal) 1. Not edited (Might reedit if I finish writing–likely not)

{Heads up I will be rewriting and editing the first volume to better reflect changes made as well as make things flow better so please re read if you can} In a world where systems are common, from common leveling systems to evolving dragon systems to even god-making systems. I'm given a named one that now not, only do I get stronger from killing, but eating my prey as well. I don't know why, but I yearn to kill and eat all to get stronger. Maybe it's the dreams I've been having since I was bestowed with this system, or maybe...something more?.... Can I live up to my dreams and what's been given to me?

After dying for the 7th time Wu Liang Hui is brought back to life in the body of a young mage who passed away in his sleep. The reason : he must find where the body he had in his 1st life is being kept and reunite it with his soul

[MATURE CONTENT] Enter the world of Lila Elara Forbes Montgrave, a rose with thorns, shaped by tragedy and reborn with vengeance. Betrayed by her lover and given a second shot at life, she uses her beauty as a weapon in a deadly game of love, hate, and power. But as her past and present meet, will she reshape her fate or succumb to the darkness within? Warning: Viewers discretion is advised. Read at your own risk.

The story focuses on two characters: Oga and Nuu. Journey with them on their path to Power using any and all means necessary to reach the Apex. Extra Tags: Clan-building, and Worldbuilding I OWN THIS IMAGE Art by, Weymaker, you can find him on Fiverr for art commission. https://www.fiverr.com/s2/ba79bd2eb4 Shout-Out to ChatGPT, saving me hours of editing (Original story). Slow Updates + If It's not your taste, drop it! You owe me nothing, no need to leave a dramatic comment! (Graphic Sex) (Not for the Faint of Heart)

ON PAUSE, REVISED EDITION RELEASING BY DECEMBER.

Opening his eyes, the protagonist finds himself back in 2016, the time when he was an United trainee on the verge of being eliminated from the team. Fortunately, he's blessed with a proficiency panel by his side. Starting with Strength LV1, he grinds his way up to Muscle Dominator LV10, capable of turning the tide with sheer power. From Running LV1, he trains relentlessly until he's an unstoppable force, achieving Lightning Speed LV10. From Long-range Shots LV1, he pushes through to unlock the Nuclear Shooter LV10! In an era where the likes of Messi and Ronaldo are set to become legends, he teams up with the legendary coach Jose Mourniho to forge a new football myth. Years later, when he looks back, he realizes he’s created an unshakable legacy, dominating every aspect of the game—his journey leading to an unmatched, all-conquering football career. His name? The Football God!

"Amid the roar of engines and the dazzling lights of the racetrack, a young girl battles against her destiny. Armed with nothing but determination and an old car filled with memories, Lana enters a world of racing fraught with danger and intrigue. Yet, behind every sharp turn and winding track lies a dark secret waiting to be revealed. As her enemies grow stronger and betrayal comes from unexpected places, Lana must face her greatest battle—not just on the track, but within her own heart. Will courage and love be enough to conquer the shadows of the past, or will she be consumed by a deadly game designed to destroy her? A story of bravery, sacrifice, and secrets that could change everything." ~~~ Novel by : HanifM12 ~~~

Origins of Blood has been republished due to a new contract. All future chapters will now be uploaded to the republished version. Thank you for your understanding and support! Also join the discord: https://discord.gg/46KkdYqE

Di tengah deru mesin dan cahaya gemerlap lintasan balap, seorang gadis muda berjuang melawan takdirnya. Dengan hanya bermodalkan tekad dan mobil tua yang penuh kenangan, Lana memasuki dunia balap yang penuh bahaya dan intrik. Namun, di balik setiap tikungan tajam dan lintasan berliku, ada rahasia gelap yang menunggu untuk terungkap. Ketika musuh-musuhnya semakin kuat dan pengkhianatan datang dari arah yang tak terduga, Lana harus menghadapi pertarungan terbesar—bukan hanya di lintasan, tetapi juga dalam hatinya. Apakah keberanian dan cinta cukup untuk menaklukkan bayangan masa lalu, atau akankah dia tenggelam dalam permainan maut yang dirancang untuk menghancurkannya? Sebuah kisah tentang keberanian, pengorbanan, dan rahasia yang mampu mengubah segalanya. ~~~ novel by HanifM12

Amidst a world plagued by the terror of Goblins, portals into the Shadow Realms emerged, providing a means for humans to fight back and reduce their numbers. Despite being born during this tumultuous era without any inherent talents, Kaito Akira journeys through the shadow realm with unwavering determination and an unshakable will to gain recognition and power. With each step he takes, he rises closer to achieving heaven-defying physical prowess and abilities that will set him apart from the rest. No longer will he be a low-life met with nothing but hate and disappointment from others. But will that truly be his fate? Release Schedule: 3 per week (I'm human, so things can happen. Don't trust the schedule fully). If you like it support the book but if not recommend the book to someone else who would like it (as much as I wanted to say leave the book if you don't like it, I can't because I need support). My discord - thephoenixgod100 Discord server - https://discord.gg/R7U7bw4AFf

Okay this is heavily inspired by the Lord of change Fanfic and me.....I'll be mixing somethings up but just roll with it......took me time. Also no I've not dropped my other works, this is just one of the stories I wrote and managed to recover and simply edited.

Currently editing and re-uploading the chapters.