Holes Review

Hello viewers I the author of this creation, I am new to writing. so plz don't mind the mistakes and support me hole heartfelt review's thank you

"I got transmigrated into a novel because of a bad review?" Eren found his life turned upside down when he woke up as the character that he had just finished cursing in a negative review! Not only had he been reborn as an antagonist that he hated, but he was an Elder at a Devilish Sect? It would've been fine if that was the only problem, but that was just the beginning as he remembered that the Character was a spy sent into the Devil Sect by the Mythical Hero Academy... A character that died within the first fifty chapters?!

"I woke up in a fantasy world… only to realize it’s the unfinished novel I wrote, filled with plot holes, overpowered villains, and side characters I never developed. Worse? The protagonist I wrote is out to kill me. Now, I must end my own terrible writing by fixing the story, before it destroys me..." This is the story of Char, the author, as he suddenly enters his own novel, and realizes something - or someone - has been filling in the gaps left in his bad writing. Now, he's nothing more than an extra, unless he can find a way to escape the nightmare of his new reality. [Disclaimer: You might get addicted reading this story.]

He Xingzhou knew about the invasion of the zerg and the dangerous fate of the solar system. To resist the apocalyptic crisis, he stepped out to warn mankind! He Xingzhou shocked the world when he built a nuclear reactor and activated the genes of the zerg on stream! Thus, under his plan, the entire country started building steel cities, massive mechs, spaceships, space castles... He Xingzhou said, "Let's set a small goal. Let's first build a Dyson sphere around the sun." [Dark Technology] + [Engineering Upgrade] + [Solar System Exploration] + [Dyson Sphere Plan] + [Star Cluster]. All of these elements make up our latest sci-fi novel!

"He died a hero. He awoke a liar." **Kael Aranthor** sacrificed everything to slay a god. He failed. Reborn as **Elias Ravenspire**, the pampered heir to a noble house, he remembers the apocalypse that shattered his world—and the God of Destruction, **Vyrthax**, who hunts him still. But in this new life, Kael is trapped in the body of an eight-year-old boy, his legendary strength replaced by trembling hands and a family who sees him as a stranger. **The Ravenspires have secrets.** Their bloodline carries a forgotten power—a silver flame gifted by a goddess to fight the Devourer of Worlds. When shadow creatures stalk Elias’s new home and his birthmark ignites with ancient magic, he realizes Vyrthax’s hunger spans realms. To protect his sister Lila and the parents he’s learning to love, Elias must wield a power he cannot control… and confront the truth about the life he lost. **But the past won’t stay buried.** Vyrthax’s whispers poison Elias’s dreams. Family heirlooms hide forbidden histories. And when a cryptic blacksmith’s apprentice discovers Elias’s cursed magic, their fragile alliance could save the realm—or doom it. **In a world where gods feast on despair, one reborn hero must choose:** Embrace the warrior he was, or become the boy he’s meant to be. --- ### **Why Readers Will Love This Story**: - **Epic Reincarnation Fantasy**: Think *Mushoku Tensei* meets *The Wheel of Time*, with a child protagonist balancing vulnerability and latent god-slaying power. - **Morally Complex Villain**: Vyrthax isn’t just a destroyer—he’s a philosopher of despair, taunting Elias with truths that blur the line between monster and martyr. - **Family Secrets & Sacrifice**: The Ravenspire dynasty’s hidden past unravels in a gothic manor, where love and lies are two sides of the same blade. - **Relentless Pacing**: From midnight crypt rituals to shadow-infested forests, every chapter escalates tension, blending emotional depth with heart-pounding action. - **A Hero You’ll Root For**: Elias is no chosen one—he’s a traumatized soldier in a child’s body, fighting to protect a family he doesn’t believe he deserves. --- **Perfect for fans of**: - *The Stormlight Archive’s* intricate worldbuilding - *The Beginning After the End’s* reincarnation-driven growth - *Fullmetal Alchemist’s* blend of familial bonds and cosmic stakes - *Attack on Titan’s* relentless, existential dread --- **"A masterpiece of rebirth and redemption, where every flicker of hope is a rebellion against the dark."** --- **Dive into Chapter 1** and discover why one reader called it *"the love child of *Mistborn* and *Spirited Away*—dark, dazzling, and impossible to put down

The author of a novel, Ming Ze gets transported into the world he created where he must find the protagonist a lover. The more time he spends in the world, the more he realizes the changes it had to the one he wrote. The protagonist that he had wrote also seemed to act differently and he can't help but find it strange. Yet Ming Ze had too few clues to go about as his novel had too many plot holes and he finds himself questioning if he really knew the world as well as he thought.

Different soul Different Rudues that's an old story. this one Different soul & Different circumstances & Different characters and different styles just enjoy this story is trying to fix mistakes & plot and loop holes in the story and taking ideas from other authors to make perfect story This Rudues will change the timeline don't except copy paste of the original but the fixed points can't be changed this Rudues will be well balanced MC but not weak too. Also this Rudues far from being perverted but still he got greyrat genes so he will almost have normal childhood but.... This Rudues accepted himself as Rudues greyrat so let's see what will happen in the story. English is my second language so take it easy on me on grammar mistakes. Well this story is slow paced with many slice of life scenes and will be advancing slowly because i am not 100% free to write. if any good author would like to hear the full story and take it feel free but dm me to understand how it is going. Also obviously I don't own the story I'm just a nerd fan who loves to fix loop and plot holes in the story if anything I recommend you to read the original story from (rifujin na maganote) of course if you are over 18 and prepared to read an amazing story.

 Steady beeps of a heart monitor.  The sterile scent of antiseptic.   The weight of my own weakness pressing down on me.  My body had failed me.  My time had run out. And yet… I still existed.  The pain of my body—gone.  The sterile scent of antiseptic—gone.  The weight of my own weakness—gone. No… it wasn’t gone. Rather, this time, it was replaced—not with weakness, but with something else.  Power. Not my own.  Something different. Something unknown. Something I had only just become aware of. But before I could comprehend it, I was already a target— under attack, with no choice but to defend myself.

My family is full of A-Holes! Ridiculously powerful A-Holes who have views of the world so twisted that they could literally burn all of the known world to the ground. I am the strongest of them all, yet... I'm tired of it all. That’s why I left. Being stuck with those same people for years got really bland. I needed a breath of fresh air, away from the Narcissism, Hedonism, Sadism, Masochism, and general Gotham asylum vibes that each one of them exuded like some kind of messed up perfume. Six deranged family members hanging on your back all the time gets really annoying after a while. Especially when you are just as insane as they are. Unfortunately, after five long years of bliss, I am being pulled back in. Family Drama to the rescue. A threat that can't be punched away for very long has arrived at our doorstep and I'm forced to return to help solve it. Yippee... --- For those interested in discussing about this novel and several of my other works... Discord Link: https://discord.gg/fAjMB7eFDn

A Young man opens his eyes and sees an Unknown being with eyes all over its body he Awoken to a much deeper hole and he ever could imagine not knowing what was and oblivion he trusted the being and followed the course of his own story.

Author note: Please note this is the Alpha Version still on-going there may be some plot holes or mistakes. If you find some feel free to comment on them. LG Luna Laurenzius Summary: This is a story centered around the sudden death of the main character and her reincarnation in another world. This world is similar and vastly different. Just arrived she is handed a game system and the quest to investigate a murder case in the most renowned school of the kingdom. Follow her as she tries to find her way through the challenges, she now calls her live. Who is friend? Who is foe? Find it out.

During a space expedition, Shohruh is swallowed by an unknown black hole and finds himself on the edge of parallel worlds, where the laws of time and space are distorted, and the universe is under the control of dark forces. Gaining the ability to control the black hole, he is drawn into a battle that will decide the fate of the cosmos. His main adversaries—Dark Matter and Dark Energy—seek to dominate and destroy all existence. Shohruh must find his path between light and darkness, struggle with his emotions for the Fox Girl, and fight to preserve his humanity.

Story of a guy who wakes up in a world where male member of a family is Supreme in the family and according to their rank of awakening they gets to enjoy the perks of such a suckable world. So pull your pants down and sit tight for the epic journey of our mc through the world after he awakens......

In the year 2039, the divided Handong Peninsula is in a state of darkness. The violent death of Kim Jung-hoon, the leader of North Khantung, has opened a gaping hole in the power vacuum. His daughter, Kim Min-joo, hastily succeeded to the throne with the support of her aunt, Kim Jung-sook, but became a puppet in the game of power.

All Dave Parson wanted to do was leave an angry one-star review for Life.exe. You know, like a normal person. Instead, he accidentally triggered a universal debugging protocol and became the world's first (and extremely reluctant) reality QA tester. Now the universe is taking his feedback way too seriously. Physics gets "rebalanced" every other Tuesday. Cities rearrange themselves overnight to fix "user experience issues." And somewhere, a cosmic dev team is probably adding "optimization of human existence" to their sprint backlog. Armed with nothing but patch notes that appear in his dreams and help from a suspiciously glitchy tech support agent, Dave needs to figure out how to revoke his universal admin privileges before his next cranky review accidentally turns the solar system into a 404 error. Maybe he should have just downloaded a meditation app instead. The One Star Review That Nearly Ended The World - because sometimes the customer isn't just right, they're catastrophically right. (No developers were harmed in the making of this universe. Yet.)

Kade is an all time detective, tracking down the Golden Killer. The Golden Killer is a mafia boss, who only kills using his powerful golden gun, so precise that most bodies are found with less than 2 bullet holes, having died instantly after the first in most cases. So what happens when a dangerous criminal falls in love with the detective tracking him down?

A tale of young boy who encountered some events which is beyond his imagination and how caught up in it .And tale to enclose the real story of matter in light.Pls tell review of every single chapter

credit to author aaelina Dani carries Lily home from school and meets her horny mother Yuriko for the first time, soon enough they are fucking the shit of Lily and each other. All the girls favorite holes are stretched past their limits.

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Dunia dimana sihir dan monster berada. Oh ya! Skill dan System juga ada! Felrick Algor protagonis kita hidup dalam dunia yang tidak masuk akal ini dan inilah petualangannya..! [Condition has been met.] [Beginning Synchronization...] [Completed.] *note: - karena saya buat dadak jadi ga rapih sama jadwal rilis bisa lama banget. - Dont forget to write a review, ok?

just a lil sum my boo whipped up for me to read. I need feed back tbh

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Many Billions of years ago before the Humanes, Inhumanes, Beast, Giants, Nymphs and many other existence of life. A Great war occured before the world was ever created, between A Divine being and the Destroyer of the world. After the war. The Divine being sealed the defeated Destroyer, trapping it forever into the bottomless hole in a far away world were the Dragons were once the rulers with their sole enemies the Immortals. After sealing the Destroyer in their world the weakened Divine being promised to come back whenever the Destroyer releases itself before fading away. This leads us to a Billion years after when the Dragons were hibernating and the immortals were no were to be seen again, a new existence arise, in it was an orphaned traveler, ironically even before he was born, he is the sole purpose of the destruction of the world who will be used by the Destroyer now called the Beast in the bottomless hole. Strangely the traveler was emotionally connected to a Princess having strongly felt it in their Souls through their hearts, whom along side with the traveler by prophecy will fight the Beast in the bottomless hole for hundred days. Will they win or will things turn around?

A synopsis? at this time? Naw I don't think so. Note: Comment any plot hole you find. Also give it till chapter 7 before you can 'quit' or 'drop' this 'story'. Edit: I wonder how much i can up scale this mess.

**"When a cosmic glitch turns a biryani-loving teen into the god of a broken universe, he’ll need more than divine powers to survive his own creations—including a goddess who hates him, sentient pasta, and a black hole that runs on dad jokes."**

This has finally been contracted, and I can now continue writing chapters to continue the story. please find the continuation of this book here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-lightning-god's-ascension_31955425700544305 Please review and give power stone to help me write more!

The Black Hole of Eternity explores themes of identity, fate, and the unpredictability of time in a compelling combination of action, philosophy, and cosmic terror. In the first novel of the Paradox Infusion series, the lines separating time, fate, and gods are blurred in a struggle for dominance over existence itself.

Abel is reading a book called, ‘The Hero’s Quest’. Angry at the ending, he leaves a poor review that will end up changing his life forever.