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My Supreme System

Supreme System, has an exciting premise with plenty of action and potential for character growth. The year 2305 sets the stage for a futuristic world where humans and aliens are in a deadly conflict, and where superpowers have become part of human evolution. The introduction of Sahil as an underdog, someone without powers in a world where nearly everyone else has them, creates a compelling protagonist. Sahil's discovery of the red box and the Supreme System is a pivotal moment. It taps into classic themes of hidden potential and transformation, especially when he takes the mysterious pill, leading to his awakening as a Nexari, with the unique abilities of an Emotion Weaver. The system with its quests, celestial points, and cultivation introduces a game-like structure to the story, which readers of system-based or cultivation novels will find familiar and engaging. The story also brings in a lot of world-building elements, from the war with the Dalviks to the World Government, to the use of beast weapons. The emotional stakes are high for Sahil, as he was orphaned in the war and rejected by his own family despite their wealth and resources. This rejection fuels his determination to prove himself, making his journey from being seen as a “loser” to potentially becoming a powerful figure quite satisfying. It’s clear that Sahil's journey is just beginning, and there’s plenty of intrigue about how he’ll develop his abilities, navigate the military academy, and deal with the looming alien threat. The world-building, with elements like Qi Cultivation and beast armory, promises a rich universe to explore as Sahil evolves with the system's help. You’ve set up a lot of exciting questions: How will Sahil use his new abilities? What will he discover about the Nexari race? Will the Dalviks return for another attack? How will the other students react to his newfound power? This has the potential to be a thrilling blend of sci-fi and fantasy.
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Supreme martial artist System

Zack wakes up in an empty space confused Zack looks around and just see endless open space it's strange and undescribable it's not any color I know of and I cannot even comprehend where this is and then suddenly Zack starts feeling a headache and memories came flooding back in so I am dead really this close to to me quitting the military and going back to my normal life I don't even know how I died or why I died and I can't seem to remember much the last thing I remember is going to get groceries near the military base I was stationed at and from there I do not remember everything what could have killed me? [##########] the thing that killed you was a Giant Beetle from your world's Mana apocalypse [Zack] who is there I get ready for a fight just in case [##########] you're kind would call me a system [Zack] wait really I thought those were only made up stories [##########] oh those are very real the people who write those novels have got information about them via someone sending it to them or it was the world sending out the information for various reasons and some people who write those novels were writing about their past lives without realizing it [Zack] that's a lot to take in... so all of those novels I read were real world's that's crazy to think about... now that I think about it what do you mean I was killed by a Giant Beetle and what the heck do you mean by Mana apocalypse and what the heck is your name [##########] I guess I will answer those in order you were killed by a Giant Beetle from The Mana apocalypse and the Mana apocalypse is what happens when a world without any Supernatural powers awakens Mana for the first time which results in explosive growth for plants and animals which turns some of the animals into Mana infused animals or in other words magical beasts and for the plants some of them become magical herbs and others become man eating plants or just dangerous in general and as for my name it's Supreme martial artist System or if you want a abbreviation it's SMAS but if you want to you can just call me Sam [Zack] that's a information dump... okay I guess I will call you Sam but I have two questions one I understand your A system but what are you and secondly I am already dead so what am I going to do [Sam] well it's hard to describe to your human brain what type of life form I am so I am not going to bother all you need to know is I am a living life form of sorts that will grow stronger with you that's the whole reason we systems attach ourselves to people like you is to become stronger and better unfortunately that has led some systems to manipulate their users and then kill them to take their power for themselves only to repeat it again [Sam] and as for your second question us systems have saved up energy to help reincarnate or transmigrate our hosts into other world's and as you can guess by what I am saying the older the system is the stronger it is which can give more benefits to The Host unfortunately I am a relatively new system I am not the youngest one but I am relatively Young in terms of system terms so right now I only have two functions one is to help you learn martial arts and combat/cultivation techniques faster and the second function is you can create new martial arts and combat/cultivation techniques based on your knowledge and previously learned martial arts and techniques heck you can even just improve the martial arts you have unfortunately like I've said previously I am relatively Young so these functions are not too strong but they can be updated by supplying the system energy [Zack] that's a even bigger information dump then the last one... [Sam] well let's not my fault the author puts too much detail into his story [Zack] hey stop breaking the fourth wall . . . I'm still new to this writing thing so if I make any mistakes please let me know if you have any suggestions for this story just let me know and I'll see what I can do goodbye
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