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La nueva novela Espacio de Renacimiento: Encanto de los 80 ha sido lanzada. Como la hija mayor de la rama principal de la Familia Yang, el placer de Yang Ruxin era construir la fortuna familiar y apoyar a sus hermanos menores. Pero, ¿por qué ese hombre ciego y cojo era un Espíritu Tan Persistente? Cuando ella cocinaba, él venía a encender el fuego; Cuando ella montaba su puesto, él seguía para pregonar sus productos... —Digo, señor Gu, ¿tiene que ayudar con todo lo que hago? —preguntó Yang Ruxin con un toque de molestia. —Sí. —el señor Gu asintió seriamente. —Entonces ahora quiero... —Esposa. —El señor Gu se levantó rápidamente de su silla de ruedas—. Mientras no nos separemos, te daré todo lo que quieras.

Buku baru sudah terbit! Meng Yunhan telah bereinkarnasi kembali ke masa 'era kupon makanan', suatu masa di mana orang-orang kesulitan mendapatkan makanan dan pakaian. Tapi kali ini dia tidak takut. Dilengkapi dengan 'kode curang', dia siap tidak hanya untuk memulai bisnisnya sendiri tetapi juga untuk menggenggam erat-erat saudaranya yang berwajah datar dan bahkan mendukung Baozi, anaknya. Saudara berwajah datar: "Istri, ayo kita bungkus Baozi dan pergi!" Dia mengklaim bahwa memiliki seorang anak yang lebih lengket dengan istri daripada dirinya sendiri sungguh memalukan! "Mommy, ayo cari daddy baru!" Baozi menyarankan. Daddy-nya, seorang pria dewasa, masih sangat lengket dengan mommy. Sungguh memalukan! Meng Yunhan menghela napas: Mereka memang ayah dan anak.

Novel baru "Rebirth Space: Charm of the '80s" telah dirilis~ Sebagai putri tertua dari cabang utama Keluarga Yang, kesenangan Yang Ruxin adalah membangun harta kekayaan keluarga dan mendukung saudara-saudarinya yang lebih muda. Tapi kenapa si pria buta dan pincang itu seperti Arwah yang Tak Kenal Lelah? Ketika dia memasak, dia datang untuk menyalakan api; Ketika dia membuka lapaknya, dia akan mengikutinya untuk menjajakan barang-barangnya... "Saya bilang, Pak Gu, apakah Anda harus membantu saya dalam segala hal yang saya lakukan?" tanya Yang Ruxin dengan sedikit rasa kesal. "Ya," Pak Gu mengangguk dengan serius. "Lalu sekarang saya ingin..." "Istri," Pak Gu buru-buru berdiri dari kursi rodanya, "selama kita tidak berpisah, saya akan memberikan apa saja yang Anda inginkan."

The new book is out! Meng Yunhan has been reincarnated back to the time of 'food coupon era', a time when people struggled with food and clothe shortages. But she is not afraid this time around. Equipped with a 'cheat code', she is ready not only to start her own business but also to grab a hold of her stoned-face brother and even support Baozi, her child. Stoned-face brother: "Wife, let's pack up Baozi and leave!" He claims that having a son who is even clingier to his wife than himself is utterly shameless! "Mommy, let's get a new daddy!" Baozi suggests. His daddy, a grown man, is still so clingy to mommy. How disgraceful! Meng Yunhan sighs: They are indeed father and son.

In the depths of Atheria’s Forest, Arbor — a lazy, fox-like humanoid — wants nothing more than peace. A quiet life collecting odd rocks and chasing pleasant dreams is all they’ve ever asked for. But fate rarely listens. Their nights are plagued by twisted dreams of stars, tar, and snapping teeth. Their days are no better, spent training as a mage to join a Legion they never asked to be part of. Worse still, their memories are a haze, with no clear answer as to how they ended up here. Every day is a drag, but somewhere in the fog of their mind, a spark of hope remains — a hope to make sense of it all. But unseen forces are moving in the shadows. Dark creatures stir, ancient plots unfold, and something hungry watches from the edges of their dreams. Arbor's world is changing, and whether they like it or not.

The year 6048. The human race has evolved to be the apex predators as all humans gained the gift of abilities. But with power comes responsibility and humans are not known for taking responsibilities. So the world descended into chaos as the rise of abilities comes. "What the fuck man, the only ability I have is shadows .To see in the dark and move shadows , why can't I get fireballs and telekinesis or super strength . What a load of crap". A short boy no less than 15 years said bitterly as he found out the powers he has.

A teenage boy was walking home from school,in his mind nothing could go wrong as he just confessed to his crush and was happily heading home until two massive figures appeared a few distance away from him battling for the rulership of the third seat of hellfire canyon "why did you teleport us here" one of the massive figures spoke furiously to his adversary "I wanted to teleport us here but felt a spiritual qi here in the boy and it made teleporting us here easier" "you want to kill us and give our powers to him ,I won't go down without a fight you know"

The journey of a young man who lost everything finding a new reason to live and let go of the past. _______________________ Deep in the darkness a ruined palace made of stone adorned with scars from wars of old. Inside a regal throne of bones atop sat a figure lurking in the darkness. Tic Tic Tic... Flipping open his pocketwatch he smiled "It's almost time" Looking up with his purple orbs he leaned back waiting once more. "Tick Tock Tick Tock... Are you ready?" In the darkness, seven figures stood awaiting his orders. ______________________ I am a new author so any feedback would be great I would like to be able to improve and make this story the best as possible so don't be afraid to correct me on stuff I get wrong or tell me if I worded things badly.

Hunter, a regular university student is plagued by the issue of not having money, so he goes to his uncle. A drug addict and smuggler and asked him for some jobs to earn money. But is sold instead to a vampire who is looking for an available person to be used for a project. Watch as he rises to power and becomes the most powerful vampire and becomes the newest seraph

It's absolutely free. Please support my work as I'm a rookie writer and it's my very 1st work. Anna Woods gets pregnant at the age of 16 so she gives up all her dreams & time to her new born baby . But after 9 years when she gets to know that she has a blood cancer. She decides to find the real daddy of her daughter to give him her responsibility and joins a beauty pageant competition to fulfill her last dream. But the things gets very complicated for Anna because on one hand her time gap , age and motherhood gets in the way of her beauty competition and on the another hand James Watt (the biological dad of Anna's daughter ) is a gangster + womanizer and doesn't believe in love and responsibility.

He had his hands in his pockets as he walked quietly to school . Backpack slung lazily on his right shoulder as hw seemed to be mumbling to himself, he was lost in his own thoughts . " Where is it ......, I can ......smell it , but I can't find it " He mumbled to himself as he looked around to see if he could find the demonic spirit. Milo could see spirits ......, all spirits , that walk upon the earth , and not just that .....he could also kill them . And eat them too. No one else can see these spirits , only he can . Today, he missed most of math class to hunt for a particular spirit. It would probably add a few more weeks to his life . If he could find it that is.

What do you do when you hold the greatest power known to mankind . The power of creation. A teenager sat in an alley staring at a trash can intently as if he wanted to pierce a hole through it with his gaze. The next moment , the trash can turned into a dinner table with lots of luxurious dishes on it. The teenager sighed softly as he looked at the table with a smile"I finally got it, now my powers can be helpful to me"

A few years ago, the human race witnessed an apocalypse. One person's mistake that affected the whole world and threw it into chaos. 'There is now a tree in the moon, how it got there, i don't know.

I was in my room watching taimanin asagi for research purposes and the beautiful artwork. why is that the taimainin and other hentai girls like akane and chizuru always have a bad end most of the time when a questionaire pope's up on my laptop screen " do you want to change their fate" and I clicked yes and it was light out for me. will contain other hentai and anime characters too a big harem and crossovers. Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters used in this story apart from the oc's I created.

Shi Yuhan is the most heartless and evil human Song Qinghuan has ever met. He's arrogant, sharp-tongued, ruthless, and heartless towards her. Yet, he asks (read threaten) her to marry him and she has no choice but to agree. She needs to get into the Era Group to investigate her elder brother's whereabouts. Will her sacrifice be worth it? Will she be able to find the truth of her elder brother's disappearance? Will Shi Yuhan continue tormenting her? What's his motive?

First sport novel i am ever writing so please give me feedback :D Also do expect some grammar or spelling errors since english isn´t my first language

Jason had thought about punching a Shil’vati. Who hadn’t? Not only had the aliens conquered Earth with almost trivial ease, the seven-foot purple amazons also had the audacity to start running the planet better than Humanity ever had. He'd never do it though. He was a reasonable guy, just trying to get by under his new feminine overlords. Wasn't he?

After an eventful night, Alyssa Williams finds herself forced to live in a world where everything that seemed to be a myth turned out to be reality. A world where she clearly doesn't belong. However, she has a goal and plan to achieve it. Alyssa will then have to try to learn about this world without raising any suspicions to survive in this hostile place while trying to get close to a certain young man.

A world filled with bounty hunters, vampires,werewolf's,demons and devils.

The fate of the world rests on the lead's hands as he is either to bring destruction or peace to the already divided world. Unraveling the secrets of the ancestors, Eren undergoes developmental changes, finding out the truth of both his people and the ones who are supposedly his enemies. He is bestowed with great power; the greatest of its kind, and with great power comes great responsibilities...

Synopsis: Life was already tough as an overworked game developer, but waking up in the world of Eldoria, the fantasy game I helped create, was not part of the plan. Worse, I wasn't reborn as the hero, the villain, or even a powerful ally—I became Kim Jiyoung, the childhood friend of the protagonist, Clara. Kim Jiyoung is kind, loyal, and hardworking... but he's also doomed to die in a month. His tragic death is the catalyst for Clara’s awakening, unlocking her legendary powers and setting her on the path to defeat the Shadow King. But I'm not ready to die—not even for the sake of the story. Armed with my knowledge of the game’s plot and mechanics, I’ll rewrite this fate myself. Can I survive in a world I know too well, help Clara awaken without sacrificing my life, and maybe even forge my own legend? This is my second chance, and I won’t let it end in tragedy. After all, who says the childhood friend can’t rewrite the script?

One night in the land of Filmond, a blinding light covered the night sky turning the once white moon to purple, it was a change that went against the law of nature. Even science could not explain the reason for the sudden change That same night the family of the bells, their first daughter kristabel was lying on her bed with purple light hovering around her while her body absorbed the light of the moon. **** What made the moon to change and why was kristabel absorbing the moon's light??

In a world ravaged by chaos and loneliness, John's life lacked purpose and meaning. The constant protests outside his apartment mirrored the turmoil within him, their noise a haunting reminder of the unrest he couldn't escape. Lost in unemployment and isolation, John sought refuge in virtual realms, where he could momentarily escape reality. Yet, his existence felt empty, like an abandoned canvas waiting for a painter's touch. With each passing day, he robotically navigated life, seeking something more. In an unexpected twist of events, a sudden explosion shattered his life, leaving him floating in a mysterious void. As panic threatened to consume him, an otherworldly voice offered him an enigmatic opportunity—to rewrite his destiny, to embrace a higher purpose. With unwavering determination, John accepted the offer, and a blinding light transported him to a new reality. His consciousness had returned, but his senses felt foreign, devoid of sight. Instead, he sensed momentous events unfolding—a significant figure being born, destined to become the emperor of a crumbling empire. John VIII Palaiologos, a historical figure tasked with confronting the mighty Ottoman Empire, was now the role he inhabited. As he grappled with his newfound identity and the weight of his responsibilities, he realized that his journey had just begun. The fate of an empire rested on his shoulders, and he was determined to shape history in a way that would bring hope and transformation to his world. --------------------------------------------- [Author Note:] Updates: 3-4 chapters/week *Miss me? Don't be, I'll be much busier than last time, but do try to write, somehow, I might be a tad below my chapters expectation for a couple of weeks depending on how busy I am.* Cheers!

It is a little Hot our Here.........(You know what I mean)

A taken away prince. A BOY UNKNOWN TO HIS OWN IDENTITY. And a knight whose duty is to protect his master. And someone who took the prince. Was it to protect him or to betray someone? The king of the kingdom of Northern Lights came to fulfill his duties. The divine beast is pretending to be a cute and harmless magical being. Destiny brings them together in a situation where they are unaware of each other's motives and true faces. Will the prince's identity remain a mystery to him, or will he discover who he truly is? Stay with us on this journey.

In "The Oni of Purple Fire," we follow Klaus, a half-ling with striking purple eyes and flames that burn eternally around him. Once a human and a D-rank hunter, Klaus's life takes a dramatic turn when a fateful encounter in a dungeon awakens his hidden powers. Disowned by his not-so-well-known clan, he grapples with his identity and the immense abilities that now define him. As he navigates this new reality, Klaus finds himself surrounded by a diverse harem of powerful men from different guilds and clans, each drawn to his enigmatic presence and unique abilities. However, a formidable villain lurks in the shadows, threatening to unleash chaos upon the world. As ominous signs of destruction emerge, Klaus must confront his past, harness his newfound powers, and unite his allies to face the impending doom. Will he embrace his destiny and protect all that exists, or will the shadows of his power lead to his downfall?

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In an alt medieval fantasy world filled to the brim with monsters and adventure. Zachary haze is just an average boy in search of a thrill. One day when coming home work he sees a flier that opens up a whole new world of possibilities. It was an add asking people to join a guild. "No way" he thought. "Could I seriously become an adventurer?" driven by purely the fever of a dream. This is his story!

Brass was just an ordinary guy, navigating his early thirties like anyone else. He’d been a fighter his whole life, toughened by hardship, but what he’s facing now is on a whole different level. Sure, he always figured death would come early for him—it was just part of the deal. But what he didn’t expect was for things to get even stranger after dying. Turns out, gods are real. The digital realm? Also real, apparently. And souls? They exist too. Oh, and just for kicks, they can be sent to new worlds with new bodies, only to be bossed around by some irritating entity that calls itself “The Great System”—or at least that’s what a god who’s now obsessed with video games has named it. So here’s to a new life in a new world… I guess.