Tears Of The Kingdom Critique

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In the waning years of Spanish colonial rule in the Philippines, a young boy named Alfonso XIII was proclaimed King of Spain in 1886. However, being just a child, his mother, Queen Maria Christina, ruled as regent in his place. Queen Maria Christina adopted a somewhat lenient policy, granting the Filipinos a degree of freedom while still keeping them as subjects of the Spanish monarchy. As time passed, the Philippines remained under Spanish rule until it was finally passed on to Alfonso, Prince of Asturias, in 1920. But Alfonso, wise beyond his years, saw the plight of the Filipino people and understood their deep desire for independence in their hearts. He made a momentous decision – renouncing his claim to the Spanish throne and requesting to govern the Philippines instead. Surprisingly, the Spanish monarch agreed to this arrangement, and Alfonso was given the unique responsibility of managing the Philippines as a separate entity. But unknown to everyone, the original Alfonso, Prince of Asturias, died due to drowning accident and was replaced by Miguel Reyes. In a world reminiscent of the early twentieth century but with a twist, Miguel Reyes, a brilliant scientist,engineer, military enthusiast, and businessman from the Philippines, found himself in a strange predicament. After a fatal car accident in 2023, Miguel was granted an extraordinary second chance at life. He awakened to find his soul inexplicably reincarnated into the body of a prince in a distant land. Confused and disoriented at first, Miguel soon discovered that he was inhabiting none other than the young Alfonso, Prince of Asturias, decades before his untimely death. Realizing the significance of this opportunity, Miguel knew he had to act wisely. He had lived a life devoted to knowledge and progress, and now he found himself in a pivotal position to change history for the better. Armed with the knowledge of Alfonso's fate and aware of the impending struggles faced by the Philippines, Miguel resolved to take a different path. Join Alfonso (Miguel Reyes) on a life-changing experience. Will Miguel Reyes find tranquility in his second life as he governs the nation and steers it towards greatness? Or will he face the shadow of a conspiracy lurking within the borders?

Michael Lockwood was a soldier forged by the fire of war, a leader whose sacrifice ensured victory in his final mission. But death was not the end. Waking in a rustic cottage far from the battles of his past, Michael finds himself reborn in the peaceful village of Dawnfield, nestled within the Kingdom of Verdwryn. Gone is the soldier's body honed by years of hardship; in its place is the fragile form of a newborn. Yet his mind remains unchanged, filled with the memories of a life lived on Earth-one of courage, loss, and the unyielding resolve of a man who gave everything for others. As Michael grows in a world brimming with magic, ancient lore, and political intrigue, he struggles to reconcile his soldier's instincts with the simplicity of his new life. The fields of Dawnfield offer tranquility, but whispers of a growing darkness beyond the village hint at greater challenges ahead. Why has he been given this second chance? Is it a gift from the mysterious Everwinds, or a curse with a purpose he has yet to understand? With the wisdom of a soldier and the innocence of a child, Michael embarks on a journey to discover his place in this new world. In the Kingdom of Verdwryn, where strength and strategy are tested as much as the heart, Michael must uncover his purpose before the darkness looming on the horizon consumes everything he holds dear. Kingdom of Verdwryn is a tale of rebirth, resilience, and redemption, where one man's legacy will shape the fate of a kingdom.

17 year old Hyrus wakes up in a peculiar forest with almost no memories of his past. He finds himself in a medieval magic-filled Kingdom of anthropomorphic animals, and the heir to the throne of this new Kingdom has saved him from his probable death in the woods. Join him as he navigates this new world and learns things may not be as perfect as they seem.

What would happen if a peasant boy became the King of England? In the heart of a crumbling British Empire, where rebellion stirs in the colonies and the kingdom’s coffers run dry, a young orphan named Elias toils away in an isolated monastery. Born with nothing and destined for obscurity, he dreams of freedom but knows the harsh reality of his place in the world. Everything changes when Prince Edward, heir to the throne, is sent to the monastery for safekeeping during England’s darkest hour. The arrogant, cold-eyed prince seems worlds apart from Elias, yet the two boys are thrust into each other's lives as a monastery fire, killing the prince and leading to Elias stepping up and taking his place - by force by his life long mentor. Through trials of betrayal, ambition, and courage, Elias begins to uncover the truth about the world, power, royalty — and about himself. What starts as a struggle to survive becomes a journey to claim a destiny far greater than he ever imagined. "Ashes of a Kingdom" is a gripping tale of power, sacrifice, and an impossible rise to the throne in a time of war and revolution. When the flames die down, will Elias be the saviour England needs—or the king it never expected?

The infamous White Clan robbed A-rank investigator James Ross's happiness by setting his house on fire, and—! Ross wants to get revenge on them after that event, but he must overcome obstacles to reach the leader of the White Clan with his allies.

When the King of Ronder gets killed in his sleep, his wife and queen Sophia make it her mission to find out who killed him while also trying to keep the throne for her son. But what happens when there are people going through great lengths to see her family's downfall? She has to fight for the throne and hide her feelings for her knight and protector.

The Ghastly Kingdom is safe under the defense of it's two greates Heroines! Say hello to Huruna and Kajari, and along with them as they deal with whatever problem the Kingdom is in! Also the comedy is inspired from the undescript plumber brothers RPG games, hopefully it won't flunder as bad... Also sexual stuff is real so don't read if you can't handle.

Angelus Rathmore, heir to the Sevigoria throne, has been treated unfairly since childhood by his father, the king, who favours his mistresses children over those he had with his queen. His preference for men instead of women sparks a series of events that push out of the shadows and into the light where he aims to fight for his identity and birth right. Just when he thinks things can't get any worse. His first love is married off to his sister in his mother's attempts to protect his secret, and he loses a piece of his soul. This puts him on a path to punish the people who hurt him. When he meets a charming shapeshifter, Cassiel, who offers to put the world at his feet, Angelus finds security in the forbidden spark the male gives him. With magic and the practice of same sex relationships being punishable by death in Sevigoria, the prince and his new lover navigate the challenging ups and downs of their forbidden relationships. Will they find their way to a happy ending?

After all these years of climbing the ladder to the top of Law school, Reza are getting rejected in the court because of corrupt and disgusting kind of nepotism. Shortly after, he received the news of his mother's death. Without thinking of anything he rushed to stab his own chest, losing all means to live and decided to end it, once and for all. But a female deity are planning something different. She recognized his intelligence not only in Law, but leadership and practically, anything related to politic, and decided to bring him to save a crumbling nation, where his choice would make or break the Kingdom Of Pride.

After the Guardian God's demise. Zack inherited his legacy. Zack is a driven individual who wields a lot of power. Will he follow the Guardian God's trail of footprints? Or Will he continue to forge his own legacy? He is intelligent, calm, and composed. When it comes to making decisions, he is decisive. In the world of Humans, Monsters, and other unknown species, he learns and grows. "I know you guys were the most powerful bloodline warriors dispatched to assassinate me. However, in the end, it makes no difference." With a slight smile on his face, Zack ridiculed. "Anything that stood in my way will be obliterated by my lightning," Zack added. "Lightning is Absolute!" ****************************************************** Current Plan- 7chaps/week. For more release, Vote with Power Stones. Target: 1st level- 100PS/Week. Result- 14chaps/Week. ******************************************************* Disclaimer: This is a Fantasy novel. Everything about this novel is Fictional. *******************************************************

In a realm where magic flows as freely as the rivers and the moonlight holds secrets older than time, Princess Elara of the Moonlit Kingdom has long lived under the shadow of her royal duties. The kingdom, hidden beneath a canopy of ancient trees and bathed in the soft glow of a magical moon, thrives in harmony with its mythical creatures and mystical forces. Yet, the peace of the land is fragile, and a hidden danger threatens to unravel the delicate balance between the human and magical worlds. When a mysterious stranger, Prince Cassian, arrives at the kingdom under the guise of a visiting noble, he brings with him not only a sense of intrigue but also an undeniable connection to Elara’s forgotten past. As the bond between them grows, Elara discovers that Cassian is no ordinary prince—he is a cursed soul, bound by ancient magic and destined to break the very fabric of the kingdom’s fate. Their love, though magical, is fraught with peril, for it could either restore or destroy everything they hold dear. As the whispers of a long-forgotten prophecy surface, Elara must navigate treacherous alliances, uncover hidden truths about her lineage, and learn to control powers she never knew she possessed. With the fate of the kingdom hanging in the balance, Elara and Cassian must decide if their love can truly conquer the darkness that threatens to engulf them, or if their union will shatter the very world they’ve fought to protect. Whispers of the Moonlit Kingdom is a tale of forbidden romance, ancient magic, and the power of destiny. It explores the depths of love, the sacrifice it demands, and the timeless battle between light and dark in a world where nothing is ever as it seems.

You are already having enough nightmares and demons in your day to day life. What happens when you start getting haunted by nightmares from an ancient world or maybe, as the legends say, memories from your past life? WARNING: SENSITIVE CONTENT On her 18th birthday, Li Juan had a nightmare that changed her life forever. She saw a queen of an ancient kingdom being murdered in her dream. Even though it was just a dream, intrigued by its content, she starts searching for its meanings and interpretations. Today, Li Juan is a research scholar at the archaeology department and she is on a quest to find a lost city. While searching about the lost city, she realises that her past and present life is being intertwined with three men who claim to own her heart. "Li Juan, you belong to me," declared her Highschool crush who also happens to be her current boss. "Li Juan, we are destined to be together," proclaimed her celebrity crush. "Li Juan, both of our families, wants us to become a couple," proposed her family friend. "Wait a minute!!! Are you sure the "Li Juan" whom you all mentioning is really me?" Even Li Juan herself finds it difficult to believe their claims, " I am sorry to disappoint you all, but I have already fallen in love with my research career." "But Li Juan, I promised that I'll help you to find your Queen," A blurry image of a man from her memory reminded her. Who is that? Through her broken dreams and shattered memories, Li Juan is still searching for the one who made the promise, to find the Queen from her dreams !!! No Mature content on first 20+chapters, but later chapters are under PG-18 Disclaimer: 1. Slow-paced romance with lots of mysteries. 2. Lengthy chapters (Minimum 1.5k words/chapters) 3. There are several chapters that deal with abusive toxic relationships and bullying. 4. The cover is not mine, I will remove it if the creator demands. 5. Read my other story, "No where to run: Trapped with my Archenemy" on webnovel # FIRST 100+ chapters are currently under editing # Support me on ko-fi https://ko-fi.com/monsoonmangoes0502

In the dark and divided realm of Eryndor, Selene Windrider, an 18-year-old human, finds her life turned upside down when she is sold into the service of Lucien Dravenhart, the powerful Vampire King. Unbeknownst to her, Selene harbors a hidden legacy that could change the fate of the kingdom. As she navigates her new life in the citadel, Selene uncovers secrets that link her to ancient forces and a turbulent past. Lucien, initially driven by duty, grows to protect and cherish Selene, defying his own kind and facing rising threats from factions that seek to exploit or destroy her. In a world where love is forbidden and trust is scarce, Selene and Lucien's bond becomes a beacon of hope. Together, they confront dark conspiracies and strive to bring unity to a fractured kingdom. Witches of the Dead Kingdom is a captivating tale of forbidden love, hidden legacies, and the struggle for acceptance in a world fraught with danger and ancient grudges. ▪︎▪︎▪︎ From the ashes a fire shall be woken

A Love Letter to Hip-Hop, Anime, and Fantasy Games. (Warning: 4k to 7k words a chapter)   "What happens when you isekai a rapper?"   The 13th Kingdom: Reincarnation is a Western take on the Eastern isekai genre, where soul-stirring combat and skills meet the raw grit of artistry. Xiro Mikazuki isn’t your typical overpowered hero. Reborn on the planet Gaia, he’s a former musician, a soul battered by the grind of failed dreams and corporate greed. Now, he’s thrust into a world where power flows through magical arts, and the rhythm of battle is as much about creativity as it is about dominance. In this world, M-Cees harness mana to perform Mana Arts and Skills. Xiro isn’t just reincarnated—he’s redefined. Armed with a Sonata Soul Core and two rare Vessel Skills—[Moon Sage: Tsukuyomi] and [Midnight Star: Belial]—he begins his climb in a society that worships Godwalkers, magical prodigies who inspire devotion and followers like rock stars. Every skill he learns, every clash he faces, is like mastering a new track in his personal magnum opus—a relentless pursuit of both power and identity in a world where survival demands constant improvisation. Can he conquer his new exoplanet home and create his own personal heaven, or will he follow the rest of The Creator, and destroy the Prime Realm System? What to expect: - Overpowered MC who becomes the strongest. - Fights! This is a combat-heavy series. It does get gory and dark. - Deep lore and worldbuilding. - An urban interaction with many of the familiar tropes and situations. - A long adventure that involves many solo, group, and army battles, kingdom-building, and lots of interesting characters to root for or against. - Romance/Sex. (BEWARE!! Sex & mature themes play a heavy role in certain chapters.) - Each Chapter shares a Title with a Song. (Links to the songs can be found at the end of each chapter.) - Quality over quantity. (Guarantee weekly drop. Helps allow time for editing.) Patreon - @CreativeZoneComics Read ahead a week when you join for free or one of the support tiers. 10 chapter advancement, bonus chapters, artwork, character design, and a community chat with more to come can be found here. Learn more about Gaia and the Prime Realm System with behind-the-scene insight and posts and access to the publicly released chapters a day early. - Weekly Chapter Release: Every Friday - Book volume 1 is written. Currently started on volume 2.

When ordinary man is unexpectedly teleported to a magical realm, he discovers he is chosen by a Celen's subordinate, Fate, to fulfill a grand destiny. Guided by Fate's powers and wisdom, Takahiro Grayram embarks on a journey to build an empire in a land fraught with mythical creatures and ancient mysteries. As Takahiro faces challenges, forms alliances, and harnesses newfound abilities, he grapples with the responsibility of shaping a realm with divine assistance. Together, Takahiro and Fate navigate political intrigue, battle mythical adversaries, and confront the consequences of meddling with the fabric of the universe. The tale unfolds as Takahiro transforms from an unwitting traveler to a visionary leader, exploring themes of partnership, divine intervention, and the intricate balance between mortal and divine destinies.

Knowledge is Power! And that's also the core strength of Mankind. What happens when external power deprives Mankind of this power? Age of Darkness descents. Here is the story of a young man, chosen by a Higher Power, to lead the now primitive mankind to its past glory. But what drives that chosen one is not the glory of the past, but his unquenchable thirst for knowledge!

Edward and Samantha want to turn their deep love into marriage without being aware of some hidden truth which lies in the past. They arrange dinner on Christmas Eve to meet each other's families and declare about their marriage, the situation becomes darker when Edward and Samantha Know the secret which causes them to part from their devoted love.

A strong woman was a fool for a long time. She gave everything to a man who did not love her. Stuck in a tiresome cycle of rebirth, she craves a way out. The Jester, the knight, and the mage save her. Is she still craving an alternative path or a worse demise? The goddess who once blessed the royal family abandons them for the empress. The Empress is no longer the Emperor's fool. Now she is going to do things her way including having her very own Harem. trigger Warnings for mental health or others.

*********************************** After a young lonely orphan boy died on earth, He was reborn as the Prince of the Everhart Kingdom in Melux. And in this life, he got everything he ever longed for: Luxuries that he didn't have, magic that he only read and fantasized about, different types of sweets that he didn't even know about but most importantly, he finally had a family! He was pleased with his new life as he had parents who despite being the King and Queen of a Kingdom always managed to spend time with him and His maid who would do anything at his words. He could experience the joy of sharing a dinner with family, getting angry over silly things, and then apologizing while bawling his eyes out. He finally felt like he was not alone in this universe anymore and he also had people who cared and loved him dearly. His second life was seemingly perfect in his eyes until that horrifying and gut-wrenching night that flipped his entire world...... P/S: There will be Late Romance. *Cover is made with the help of AI. *English isn't my first language, so if someone finds any grammatical mistake in my writing, please comment and point it out I will make sure to edit it, till then Keep reading The Sole Prince of The Fallen Kingdom!!

It's a story of A Princess and A Renowned Businessman!! She is one of the Famous Artist of London!! He is the Young Renowned Sharp Businessman of Asia!! She is a Happy Soul!! He is totally Workaholic!! She always Smiles!! He rarely Smiles!! She is surrounded by MYSTERY! He has a Dark Past! A PALACE !! WHICH IS WAITING FOR THEM !! What will happen if they meet? Will they make our MANAN?? PEEP INSIDE TO EXPLORE THE JOURNEY!! Hey Guys!! It's a New Story!! Recently An Amazing plot came to My Mind and I'm going to make it feel real with my story. Hope you will love the story like my previous ones and plz keep supporting me with all your valuable votes and comments so that I can entertain you with my stories

A 15 Year old Guy Helps turning a Newly Constructed Kingdom into something to be reckoned with by making friends enemies and advancing his love life

The four kingdoms Paldes, Gridania, Bluna and Mauria lived in peace, however one day a man of unknown origin usurped the throne of Paldes, bringing with it wars and conflicts. Marlo, a young knight, will search for the memories of his past in the midst of this conflict. Will Marlo be able to succeed? Or will the new king of Paldes be an obstacle to it?

The never-before told tale of a lost kingdom and an adventure that could change three souls forever.

Amidst the sea of fallen comrades, their lifeblood staining the earth, a solitary figure rises above the carnage. He stands atop a gruesome curtain of death, his longsword an instrument of divine wrath. In its gleam, one could sense a challenge to the very gods themselves. We were fools to face him; my comrades paid the price in their own flesh and blood. A desperate realization claws at my mind – a realization that I must escape this blood-soaked field and bring dire warning to the holy excellencies. I looked at my remaining comrades they instantly realized what I was thinking. They must know of this relentless force, this harbinger of doom. I looked at my comrades and as I turn to flee, fate intervenes, and our eyes lock in a moment of eerie connection. He looked at me and my comrades with his crimson red eyes. He swung his sword towards me. Why is the world upside down? I thought. Then I realized that my head was cut by his crimson sword. Time slows to a crawl as I find myself caught in the deadly dance of his blade. I see the malevolence in his eyes, a reflection of the abyss that has claimed so many. He cut through my comrades without batting an eye. The red moon casts an ominous glow upon the battlefield, and his crimson silhouette, now moving away, becomes a spectacle against the crimson canvas. With an inexplicable calmness, I embrace the darkness. As he strides away, the embodiment of destruction and beauty, I can't help but smile like a fool. Amidst the ruins and the echoes of my demise, I whisper to myself, "Beautiful!" - a final tribute to the twisted elegance that accompanies the brutality of this merciless crimson devil.