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Critical Hit Series! is a quiet, emotionally resonant character drama that explores what happens when imagination becomes the most honest form of expression. Told through a dual-narrative lens that blends high school life with a collaboratively built fantasy campaign, this story offers something rare: a heartfelt, slow-burning exploration of connection, vulnerability, and the quiet transformation of a boy who never thought he’d be seen. At its core is Ranjiro Akizora, a boy with no charisma, no friends, and a notebook full of rules for a game no one’s asked to play. But when his private world is cracked open by people who challenge and surprise him, that game becomes something more. What follows is a story about found family, emotional risk, and the unexpected intimacy that blooms when people tell stories together. This is not a tale of flashy powers or world-ending stakes. It’s about the small moments that hit like critical damage: a shared glance across the table, a choice made in character that reveals something real, a joke that turns into trust. As the campaign evolves, so too do the players. Each of them wrestling with their own role both in the game and in each other’s lives. The novel’s wow factor lies in how it uses fantasy not as escape, but as reflection. The story invites the reader to see how emotional truths can emerge through storytelling, and how characters can say things in fiction they’re not ready to say out loud. The two halves of the narrative are not competing genres. They’re a dialogue between self and shadow, imagination and reality. Readers can expect a grounded, cinematic tone, layered character relationships, and a story that rewards patience with emotional payoff. Fans of character-first fiction, light novel aesthetics, and introspective coming-of-age arcs will find much to hold onto here. Critical Hit Series! doesn’t shout to be heard. It draws you in with feeling, with stillness, and with the quiet thrill of watching someone step into the story of their own life for the first time.

A critic reader finds himself trapped in the novel he hated the most, as the 3rd class young master.

She wakes up at 6 a.m. to lift weights, pushes through volleyball and basketball practices all summer, and takes care of her siblings — but no one sees how exhausted she really is. Criticized for resting, pressured to keep going, and haunted by anxiety at night, she just wants one thing: a break.

Cesare Caruso, a renowned actor and a global superstar, appeared to have it all—fame, fortune, and an impeccable reputation. Yet, hidden beneath the surface was a secret he had guarded for years—he was an Omega. That carefully guarded secret came crashing down in one fateful night, during a glamorous masquerade ball aboard a luxurious cruise ship. Overwhelmed by an unexpected heat cycle, Cesare loses control of himself, devoured by his own desires and falling into the arms of a mysterious Alpha—a reckless moment that changed everything. [Zahir al-Tamid. That’s my name.] To his shock, the Alpha was Zahir—a proud prince from an oil-rich kingdom and an unwelcome figure from Cesare’s past. Worse, that night left Cesare unexpectedly pregnant! Before Cesare could make sense of it all, Zahir made a grand entrance at Cesare’s mansion by helicopter, uninvited, catching the attention of major media outlets around the world, demanding a settlement claiming that Cesare shall be responsible for ‘imprinting’ a royal family like him! “...Seriously, it’s not as if I have a ludicrous $2 billion just lying around, you know.” “Thus, marry me, Cesare.” Pregnancy, imprinting, and a royal marriage proposal—showered by a series of unwanted events, Cesare is desperate to find a way to cut ties with Zahir. But Zahir, stubborn and relentless, has no plans to let go. Can Cesare outrun the tempest, or will it pull him under? #BL #Omegaverse #Obsessive #Crybaby #One-sideLove #Prince #Superior Text copyright ⓒ 2024 by Kim Sol Da All right reserved. The Korean edition was originally written by 김솔다, Korea Translated and Published by We’ve Lab.

After publicly criticizing a controversial new game by the world's top gaming company, hardcore gamer Alex is unexpectedly killed in a tragic accident. But death isn’t the end. He awakens in the very game he condemned but not as a side character, but as the hero.

Two teenagers experienced a chance encounter and after that they became basically inseparable. Unfortunately they are faced with critical circumstances that might split them a part. Is their bond strong enough to overcome these circumstances or will they go their separate ways?

In order to save her critically ill sister, Livia is forced to accept a marriage contract offer from a cold, secretive CEO. But behind this deal, there are dark secrets from their past and dangers that threaten their lives. As love and betrayal collide, can they survive the secrets that threaten to destroy everything? **Love, danger, and a big secret await behind the door of this contract—will they find the truth, or will they lose everything?

~~~WSA 2025~~~ ... [ Every being harbors malice deep within their soul. [ Although they tried their best to hide the malice, it's undeniable that it exists. The more the life forms suppressed their malice, the more scarier the malice was when it was released... [ As time passed by, although most life forms managed to suppress their malice, the malice within them, instead of decreasing, actually began to accumulate. Breaking through the critical point as they soon transformed into something; hence, an entity worse than the devil itself was born.] [ ... ] [ As a new Chaos Awakener, your sole duty was to eliminate "Malice". Preventing malice from accumulating energy and reaching the critical point, reasoning for a door to open between the two worlds.] [ ... ] [ Note: Upon accepting the task, you would no longer be able to escape your destiny. Please choose wisely! ]

This is my first ever story so any comments or critics is not only apreciated but heavily encouraged. This story is about a small octopus's adventures in a large underground city, What will he do? Will he rise to great power or destroy this whole city? Or he might just f*ck around?

Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

What would happen if a random person was summoned to a new world with a Random Summoner System? Good question. Shall we find out? A novel about a system that allows the summoning of random beings from all across creation—as long as they possess sentience. This includes self-aware weapons, artifacts, and who knows what else. Please note, this is my first ever attempt at writing, so I’m looking for constructive criticism, not trash talkers. Any help or advice you can offer would be greatly appreciated!

After criticizing a game, William, a game critic, is punished by the Goddess of Eternity, Aurora, and transforms into the young Princess Ayla within this universe. Waking up kidnapped by 7 Demon Lords, Ayla must endure their lust, but also uncover the dark secrets that inhabit the castle. Immortal and trapped in a cycle of desire and manipulation, each revelation takes her deeper into a maze of mysteries where the line between ally and enemy becomes increasingly blurred. What she discovers may be the key to her liberation—or her eternal damnation.

In a world where being an Alpha means power, control and respect. But this is only true if you respect the rules. And the first is the clearest and most important: an Alpha does not get attached to another Alpha. But Kio and Aru are two individuals who will break this rule, and will suffer the consequences, criticism, threats, loss, or even perhaps themselves, their relationships, family, inheritance... everything But also meet new people and opportunities see their relationships evolve or even worsen under pressure and judgment....

This Novel is about a man who got reborn in another world but he wants to return to his old world but is it that easy? And after this world , do you think he would return to his old world? Stick with mc to find out about his journey of this vast world. This world is mysterious but does he have enough courage to explore this world which may possess dangerous........ This is my first Novel so please go easy on me and I would love constructive criticism.

Léonard Dumont, a 16-year-old French teenager and geek of the SCP Foundation's myths, one day receives a notification on his computer from the SCP Foundation Management System. His duty is to build the SCP Foundation has The Administrator of the Foundation. This story is a mix of several canons of the Foundation. Mix everything with our own real world to add a weight of realism to all this. This is my very first story, I hope you will enjoy it and I am open to all criticism and comments.

`¥®©£™@# was reincarnated into another world yadayada new world monsters, gate , dungeons, towers.... Hope you enjoy, feel free to criticize or review, I'll probably update the same chapter multiple times since sometimes there's an error or plot hole until I'm satisfied, for now. we'll see

The story follows the experiences of a protagonist who has a mental illness. Bored with the regularness of his life, he developed a never-ending thirst for pessimism. The protagonist finds relief by complaining and criticizing everything around him, including himself. After a psychotic episode, he encountered a strange man who led him into a new episode of life.

As the title suggests, this book is about random rants. It's just a platform for me to let out my emotions. p.s.If you do like this book, I'm honoured but do not expect any regular updates. p.p.s.Positive criticism is appreciated but if you simply wish to hate then I suggest you do that somewhere else. Thank you for taking time out to check my book out and have a nice day!

A couple weeks before Lake's Martial Course Entrance Exam, While he was taking a nap during a class he is awoken by a strange beeping sound. Opening his sleepy eyes, he could sees a strange holographic screen in front of him. [Roleplay System has successfully bonded to host. Do you wish to begin roleplaying?] [Yes?] or [No?] At first Lake thought he was still half asleep and half-heartedly chose [Yes]. Immediately After he saw a new prompt appear before his eyes. [Please select the main role the host wishes to play from the following options.] After reading that message, A series of options appeared before him. The options were so numerous that they covered the entirety of his vision. From the numerous options Lake could spot a few interesting sounding roles, [Martial Saint], [Heavenly Sage], [Harem King], [Slaughterer]… The options were too much and they made Lake dizzy. Without much thinking Lake scanned through the list of roles and choose the role whose name caught his attention the most. [Master of Fate] *** Disclaimer 1. Cover art is not mine. It belongs to kaslla. I took the image and edited my title onto it. Their twitter handle is ksb_x4 if you wish to check out their work. 2. This is my first novel that I decided to write to fill up my free time, so don't expect constant updates or any amazing writing quality. 3. I am willing to take criticism as I am still looking to improve my writing skills. For those who may post constructive criticism, thanks in advance. 4. Finally, thank you for taking the time to read my novel.

Riven Kael was once a cynical reader—an elite critic of cringe-worthy romance novels filled with virgin tropes and hand-holding cliches. But when he dies in a freak accident after flaming a popular web novel, he wakes up as the most hated villain in the story: Tyrant Prince Riven of Valkyrion Academy. With the power to manipulate desire and a system that punishes failure with death, Riven must seduce, dominate, and shatter the innocent world he once mocked. Welcome to Valkyrion Academy—a place where elite hunters train to destroy monsters, and where Riven must conquer both enemies and heroines to survive. After all, this time, he's not a critic. He's the main character.

For Leo, life is best lived quietly, especially when he's savoring a perfectly crafted meal. But beneath his shy exterior lies "PalatePilot," an anonymous online food critic whose passionate reviews are gaining an unexpected following. When his heartfelt take on Umi's Noodle Bar suddenly goes viral, "PalatePilot" becomes a local legend, bringing unprecedented crowds to the struggling ramen shop. Forced into the limelight he desperately avoids, Leo finds his quiet world unraveling. He's got his loyal best friend, Sam, by his side, but he also has to contend with a sharp, rival critic determined to unmask him. Can this unassuming underdog balance his secret fame with his desire for a normal life, all while shaping the very flavors of his city?

A gourmet food critic of unparalleled taste found himself unexpectedly transported to a future world utterly devoid of genuine food. Carbonara? This is undeniably the taste of fermented fish paste! In this distorted realm of cuisine, it seems he will have to become a chef himself!

this is my first time writing another so I hope you don't criticize me too much but please I need your feedbacks. A story About a Decendant of the Chen Family(Creators of Tai chi) ending up in an immortal cultivation world with all his knowledge.

After a long and dangerous career as an assassin and politician, a man finds himself reborn into the world of his son's novel. Born as Lucas de Clare, the son of a rich count. With his extensive knowledge and skills, Lucas must navigate the treacherous political landscape and manipulate the plot for his goals 5 chapter per week ———————— (First Novel just giving it a try) Criticism is welcomed as I always look to improve Comments Power stones and Ratings help the story grow!

A Nuclear scientist , Dr Jeffrey Oppenheim found himself reincarnated in a fantasy word as boy named Artus after a series of unfortunate events. Follow Artus adventure as he explores the world , build his own unique powers and rise to the Top.

{Edit: I should mention that this ff was redone so most of the current reviews are from the old version.}This is a Peerless Martial God/God Of Martial Arts fanfiction. Let's see how the story goes shall we. Any criticisms or suggestions you may have are welcome, regardless of how bad you may think it is, everyone's ideas are welcome here.

What happens when two worlds collide? Will there be peace and coalition or War and conquering? What will happen if the connection between these two worlds isn't by chance as it was originally thought? Find out now by reading 3D! This is an original story I've been working on with a friend for a while now and I'm excited to get it out on this platform. I am a rookie author so please give encouragement and criticism, I fully intend to learn and grow from this experience.

Looking for a way out from the cycle of abuse that plagued him, Ymir chose to believe in a rumor, sacrificing the only thing he own in the process. Follow Ymir as he build a life out of nothing and face the coming hardships as he struggles to find a real purpose in life. First novel English is not my first language, but I am trying my best Extra tags : sorcery, bloodlines, interstellar, gore, possible + 18, kingdom building type of novels without the Kingdom part. Chapter length between 1000 and 1500 words (I d like for you to provide feed back , it would tremendously help me improve , any constructive criticism is extremely welcomed)

Having no magic in a world filled with it is difficult. However, having been born in a supportive family and village is helpful, especially when they are all abnormally strong. This fact makes Nikes life much easier as she is taught how to use the sword from those people. Of course, like all stories, her life changes after a single day. Note: I don't really like working with AI for images, but the cover I wanted was the cover of a song album which is where I got the entire idea of this story from, so I decided to suck it up and use AI. Also, any and all criticism of this story is welcomed!

Hello! this is my first novel so please be patient with me. this novel is about an guy who dies and transmigrates in the body of a love intrest in a girls' dating game.. but not alone ! its my first time writing so please give me all the criticism and point out the mistakes, thank you