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Vishal Kumar

Child of Fate: The Enforcer

From the beginning of time, the two clans, Deva clan and Asura clan waged war against each other, where Deva's claimed to be on the righteous side whereas the Asuras were deemed to be evil as they committed atrocious acts of butchering innocent lives, meddling in the auspicious events of sages, etc., and staking claim on the throne of Deva Lok. The war has destroyed lives and various Lok's, in the end the three Supreme Gods (God Brahma the Creator, God Vishnu the Preserver and God of Gods who is also known as the Mahadev or God Shiv the Destroyer) had to intervene to stop the senseless war providing the much-needed relief to the common populace of God Realm. All the Deva Clan Members along with Devaraj Indra to the Tridev: "Namostu te Vedagarbha, Sarvavidya Pradayaka" (Salutations to the one who holds the Vedas and grants all knowledge), "Om Namo Narayanaya" (Salutations to Lord Narayana), "Om Namah Shivaya" (Salutations to Shiva, the auspicious one). While the Asuras in the leadership of their leader and Guru, Guru Shukracharya performed Shastanga Namaskara as they did worship God Brahma but for the boons he will give and the Asuras had a particular dislike for God Vishnu as he favors the cosmic balance and is on the righteous side i.e., Devas side but they still showed the much needed respect for one of the supreme beings and Asuras were devoted believer of Mahadev as he is the only one impartial among the three supreme gods. God Vishnu said "Devaraj Indra why must you continue this senseless war with the Asuras? You are King of Gods, King of Swarg Lok then what more do you need from the Asuras when they are confined to their Paataal Lok." Devaraj Indra said with respect "Lord Vishnu it was them who were creating chaos among the sages intervening in the sage's meditation and destroying livestock, so I had to confront them." Hearing Devaraj Indra slandering the Asuras in front of the Three Supreme Gods while not mentioning the mistreatment of Asuras done by Devas, the Asura Guru Shukracharya too said " Mahadev you have to uphold justice for the Asuras, we were just banished to the Paataal Lok from the beginning while the Devas got to rule the Swarg Lok. Why can't we Asuras get the same treatment as they do? And this war was started by the Asuras and Devas jointly but only we are blamed here." Hearing the Asura Guru Shukracharya, the Three Supreme Gods were too taken back as they too were not able to judge them with full impartiality so, Mahadev decided on a solution and solemnly announced among the Asuras and Devas "Very soon we Three Supreme Gods will bring into being a new force which will be born far away from here among the humans and his very journey will shape him to be the bearer of justice for all of the creation. He will be the embodiment of impartial justice whether to the Asuras or Devas for he will judge the being on the basis of his karma so I will warn all of you now that you should be careful of what karma you sow as you will soon be dealt with your karmafal." And so, the war of Asuras and Devas came to a pause. This is the story of a boy whose destiny was written before he was born, his very being was conceptualized but the Supreme Gods as he was born with the fraction of the three Supreme Gods. **It's my second novel as the first one is on pause as I am out of further plot for that one but this will be a blast because it is based on my cultural myth but there will be some changes so you can say it's my original work just taken some inspiration from the myths so whoever is reading and if he knows about the original history then don't criticize me for making the changes as I am writing a novel and I, in my full conscience am very respectful of the Gods and our culture.**
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My Supreme System

Supreme System, has an exciting premise with plenty of action and potential for character growth. The year 2305 sets the stage for a futuristic world where humans and aliens are in a deadly conflict, and where superpowers have become part of human evolution. The introduction of Sahil as an underdog, someone without powers in a world where nearly everyone else has them, creates a compelling protagonist. Sahil's discovery of the red box and the Supreme System is a pivotal moment. It taps into classic themes of hidden potential and transformation, especially when he takes the mysterious pill, leading to his awakening as a Nexari, with the unique abilities of an Emotion Weaver. The system with its quests, celestial points, and cultivation introduces a game-like structure to the story, which readers of system-based or cultivation novels will find familiar and engaging. The story also brings in a lot of world-building elements, from the war with the Dalviks to the World Government, to the use of beast weapons. The emotional stakes are high for Sahil, as he was orphaned in the war and rejected by his own family despite their wealth and resources. This rejection fuels his determination to prove himself, making his journey from being seen as a “loser” to potentially becoming a powerful figure quite satisfying. It’s clear that Sahil's journey is just beginning, and there’s plenty of intrigue about how he’ll develop his abilities, navigate the military academy, and deal with the looming alien threat. The world-building, with elements like Qi Cultivation and beast armory, promises a rich universe to explore as Sahil evolves with the system's help. You’ve set up a lot of exciting questions: How will Sahil use his new abilities? What will he discover about the Nexari race? Will the Dalviks return for another attack? How will the other students react to his newfound power? This has the potential to be a thrilling blend of sci-fi and fantasy.
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