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Alvaro Cortez, a gifted young footballer from the humble suburb of Valle Sol, dreams of playing for Blanco Royal FC, one of the most prestigious football clubs in Europe. Growing up idolizing legends and training on dusty fields. 'GOAT: Against All Odds' is the journey of Alvaro the boy with dreams to becoming a famous footballer, One of the greatest. As Alvaro navigates the highs and lows of his ascent, he faces critical moments of failure, redemption, and growth. Along the way, he learns that greatness isn’t achieved alone—it requires the support of teammates, mentors, and an unwavering determination to overcome setbacks. This is a story of ambition, resilience, and self-discovery, chronicling Alvaro Cortez’s journey from a small-town dreamer to a rising star in the world of football. Set against the backdrop of intense rivalries, personal sacrifices, and the relentless pursuit of excellence, it’s a tale of what it takes to rise to the top and stay there. ------ The story would sometimes be fast paced or slow according to the situations. System = check ✅ Critical Injury = check ✅ ( nb : predictable,i mean don't we have a system to introduce) Romance = check ✅ ----- So the system part of the story wouldn't start until quit some time.You know, I don't want anyone to criticize my guy saying he can't do sh*t without system so.And the clubs and players are inspired from irl and i won't use the real names or anything,Cause I don't want any complications later(IYKYk). -----

Agent Baek Beom-ki is sent on a perilous mission to Russia with two critical objectives. His primary task is to locate "Seraphim," a highly classified weapon rumored to have the potential to shift global power dynamics. However, his mission comes with a grave warning: he must steer clear of Yaroslav Olegovich Vyshnevsky, a notorious and unhinged killer who stalks the Russian underworld. With international tensions rising, Baek Beom-ki finds himself caught in a high-stakes game of cat and mouse, where the line between hunter and hunted blurs with each passing moment.

[SLOW BURN} (CHECK OUT MY NEW MAFIA ROMANCE. OUT NOW!) "You can't hurt me anymore, Ace. I'm not that crybaby you used to know," she warned, taking a step back. "Who said anything about hurting anyone, darling? There's only one place I need to cry for me. One very," his eyes trailed down her body, and stopped between her thighs. "Very moist place." He took two steps forward, and closed the gap between them. Ace is the legitimate heir to the Atticus dynasty, but there's a condition. Grandpa before his death says he cannot fully inherit everything until he gets married, and stays married for at least a year. Quick to think, he finds a solution to his dilemma; A contract marriage. With the help of his personal assistant, Grant, He finds Fay Landon. Dainty Fay that cries a lot, and can talk a storm. He vows it's only a marriage of convenience, until the redhead let's her hair down, and shows him the woman behind the tears. She falls first, but he falls harder. In the middle of the war for a billion dollar empire, heartless Ace Atticus will learn that to come out victorious, he needs a Fay up his sleeve. THIRD MONTH OF WIN-WIN. PLEASE SUPPORT ME WITH YOUR VOTES, COLLECTIONS, REVIEWS, COMMENTS, AND GIFTS. THANK YOU.

Criticism is very much appreciated don’t worry about my feelings being hurt. Synopsis: Humans are hunting the monsters of the other world for far too long it’s time for the revolt humans are gonna die at the hand of their own kind..

After criticizing a game, William, a game critic, is punished by the Goddess of Eternity, Aurora, and transforms into the young Princess Ayla within this universe. Waking up kidnapped by 7 Demon Lords, Ayla must endure their lust, but also uncover the dark secrets that inhabit the castle. Immortal and trapped in a cycle of desire and manipulation, each revelation takes her deeper into a maze of mysteries where the line between ally and enemy becomes increasingly blurred. What she discovers may be the key to her liberation—or her eternal damnation.

this is a test mostly for criticism this is our first time trying to make a book help us please and thank you

Bumping into a stranger while looking for shelter while raining, Avery was about to scold the stranger but got tongue tied in seeing the handsome face . Follow the story of Avery and the millionaire playboy Alex Gibson who is also a mafia lord #Forced marriage # Betrayal # Funny # Bloody Note We're here to read not to criticize, also mature content and bloody

“You have to reject her.” Amelia heard her twin say to her boyfriend. As the ignored daughter of the Alpha, Amelia has been bullied by her twin since little. She knew it was all because she wasn’t as talented and didn’t shift like her twin did. Still, getting rejected by the only love of her life was too much to bear. Amelia accepted her father’s order and set out for college in a neighbouring pack, not knowing a group of wolves were sent to get rid of her for good. At the critical moment, her only way out was get into the pack of the most feared Alpha, the King that ruled the darkness, the one who had killed his own father to take the throne.

A soldier from the coalition finds her camp under attack by imperial troops. While escaping, she falls into a river that takes her to an unknown place, and, as if that weren't enough, she is now a baby in a strange and unfamiliar tribe. What’s going on? . . . This is my first time writing and I am very open to critics, just be gentle. Also, English is not my first language so keep it in mind

Two teenagers experienced a chance encounter and after that they became basically inseparable. Unfortunately they are faced with critical circumstances that might split them a part. Is their bond strong enough to overcome these circumstances or will they go their separate ways?

Noble young master Dark Demon finally recalls memories of his past life during the sorting ceremony at the Duel Academy. He realizes he has been reincarnated into a world that is the ultimate patchwork Galgame. In this game, he is the ultimate villain—the Demon God of the Seven Deadly Sins! Pride, Envy, Wrath, Sloth, Greed, Gluttony, Lust! Once any of these seven indicators exceed the critical value, he will irreversibly transform into the Great Demon God! In the St. Marian Era, where demons are extinct and the Demon King slumbers eternally, no heretic can survive! "Eh? So as long as I don't become a Demon God, I'll be fine?" Avoid arrogance, impatience, anger, and ignorance.

[Heartless and ruthless + Multiple female protagonists + daily life + system+ Super Power + Decisive Killing +steal woman Chang Ping accidentally came to the world of "Demons and Gods". Here, humans were slaughtered by monsters. In desperation, Chang Ping awakened his physical amplification ability, and he could increase his strength by 1 jin every minute. From this day on, the monsters finally remembered the fear of being dominated by humans. Zhulong: Boss, please spare me, I didn't know Yuyan was your wife, please spare me! Mu Yue: Human, I will not surrender, you want me to be your mount, no way! ... Several years later, the Holy Emperor came and wanted to destroy the world. At the critical moment, Chang Ping took action and smashed it with one punch, shocking the world!

The Isekai genre often highlights the fantastical adventures of male protagonists endowed with superhuman strength and surrounded by adoring companions. However, an alternative narrative focuses on the plight of "strays"—individuals transported from Earth who struggle to survive in a hostile environment where they are regarded as mere commodities, goods, or even trash. This perspective challenges the traditional heroic framework by emphasizing themes of vulnerability, exploitation, and resilience. Unlike the empowered heroes who dominate conventional Isekai tales, these strays navigate a world that is indifferent or outright antagonistic to their existence, thereby offering a critical commentary on issues of marginalization and the human condition. This nuanced portrayal underscores the harsh realities and ethical dilemmas faced by those who find themselves displaced and devalued in an unfamiliar and often unforgiving realm.

Born into the royal family, Clove is the sole heir to the Aelaoria Empire. However, his frail nature makes him an unlikely candidate in the eyes of the nobles to become the next ruler. Under the watchful eyes of his uncle and the critical nobility, Clove is determined to overcome his weaknesses and transform into a respected, honorable king, like his father once was.

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

this is a story about a the lone hero named Aaron storm Watch as he goes on a journey through the mha universe has he built bones, relationships and alliances note this is my first writing I am willing to take any sort of criticism in order to get better so please bear with me on this one.

When Earth begins to experience unprecedented tidal surges and violent earthquakes, Dr. Alex Carter, a scientist and tech expert, uncovers a mind-bending truth: the Moon, far from a simple celestial body, is actually a vast, ancient machine designed to stabilize Earth. But this critical mechanism has malfunctioned, and unless it’s repaired, the planet is on a collision course with disaster. With time running out, Dr. Carter is tasked with leading an elite team on a high-stakes mission to the Moon. Once there, they must navigate its labyrinthine depths and unlock the secrets of an alien technology that has been dormant for eons. As they delve deeper, they encounter a complex intelligence—an ancient AI with motives of its own, and clues hinting at a civilization long forgotten. Each step brings the team closer to either salvaging Earth’s future or triggering catastrophic events that could seal humanity’s fate. The Hollow Moon is a sci-fi adventure that explores the limits of human knowledge, the mysteries of our nearest neighbor, and the resilience needed to confront the unknown.

Prince Arthur Aethersworn of Tashran knows his place: powerless, caged by tradition, and haunted by his lack of magic in a family brimming with it. Under his father’s impassive yet critical eye, he’s forced into training for a throne he can never claim without true power. Just as he’s about to resign to a bleak fate, a mysterious figure with ties to forbidden magic offers Arthur a choice: break free and seek the fabled Dragon's Eyes, or remain bound by royal duty. On this quest, he risks everything: his loyalties, family ties, and deepest beliefs. As he uncovers hidden powers, he faces powerful forces determined to prevent him from changing his destiny. Embark on Arthur's journey, an adventure where casting aside one’s humanity becomes a path, not a barrier to untold power.

“I turned into a Backup villain?” Chen Yu, who stayed up late to chase the watch, had a myocardial infarction directly into the novel. And it’s the sad backup villain in the novel! If the protagonist Xiao Fan wants to stand up, he will be beaten. The protagonist Xiao Fan wants to make money, and he has to be beaten. If the protagonist Xiao Fan wants to pretend to be forceful in front of a woman, he is still beaten! The saddest thing is that his fiancée is also a green tea, and even Xiao Fan, the protagonist who cheated at the end, directly made his head green! “Ding!” At a critical moment, the Destiny Villain system was activated. You can change your fate by taking the protagonist’s luck value! “Laozi is definitely not a spare tire, Laozi is going to counterattack!” Chen Yu, who is familiar with the plot, began to launch a plan to grab the protagonist’s luck step by step!

Sapphire has moved to another town with her daughter, Emerald, Shadow, Sonic, Amy, Silver, Lucinda and Mephiles, caught in a civil war. Emerald becomes a teenager and meets someone her age, Topaz, a Cat-vampire hybrid who has been caught up in the civil war since she was born. What will happen between the two? Book three of a series of five books (one book is on Wattpad).

An unexpected turn of events leads Ryan into the dark survival game. In the shadows lurk perilous monsters, the safety zone continuously shrinks, extreme survival conditions prevail, and fellow humans devoid of humanity pose a constant threat, any misstep could result in immediate death. However, Ryan discovers that he has entered a peculiar group chat. The members of this group are, astonishingly, the very administrators responsible for the game's operation! Through this chat, Ryan gains access to critical information that other players are oblivious to... Whether it be the locations of rare supply crates or the weaknesses of dungeon bosses, he possesses intimate knowledge of impending disasters! While other players struggle for survival and fret over their next meal, Ryan has grown weary of steak. While others are driving small delivery trucks, Ryan has already upgraded to a mobile fortress. Ultimately, Ryan will uncover the secrets of this world. He will traverse the long night, leading everyone toward the dawn of victory.

This is just a story about the MC climbing a technological tree in a fantasy world. Am new to this writing field I might make some mistakes, criticism and corrections are welcome.

"Catch me, Agent." the man said before jumping out of the window. She ran fast to catch up with the man who jumped from the window but no matter how fast she ran she didn't catch up with it and was even more annoyed when she saw the man smiling at her as he fell and landed smoothly on the ground. "Ughh, that fucking mafia boss." ___ "Wanna play with me, agent?" "Hide and seek?" "Sure. find me, agent."

In a world where gods once ruled, humanity now rises up with ambition and greed, challenging divine dominance. This wave of resistance shakes heaven and earth, forcing the gods to flee the thrones they once ruled. Amidst the chaos, the conflict between gods intensifies, revealing painful intrigues and betrayals. After a devastating defeat, hopes for unity fade, and the gods are trapped in a sense of despair. However, new threats from mankind continue to lurk, forcing them to rise again in a state of devastation. Now, in a critical situation, they must choose: unite to restore what has been lost or fall into extinction. Can the divine forces still resist, or will they be trapped in their dark history? Join this epic journey, where every decision could change the fate of the world. In the battle between divine and human forces, no one is safe, and every choice can determine an unpredictable future.

Three hundred years after the spiritual energy of the earth has recovered, this is a world where technology and cultivation coexist. "Master, I heard that at the king level, a single drop of blood can annihilate a city. Is it true?" "It is true."

In order to resist the invasion of alien beasts, human beings are forced to embark on a transcendent path and start a professional path! On the day of his job transfer, Lin Han missed his dream career as a warrior! He actually awakened the only hidden profession - Life Sacrifice! But what makes him despair! Not only is this profession full of milk-based skills, but the road to career change is also extremely difficult, and you will never be able to break through! What a hellish start! Critical moment! [Ding!

**DISCONTINUED** After years of pouring his heart and soul into his fantasy novel, a frustrated author faces the backlash of disappointed readers. Struggling with harsh criticisms and a sense of failure, he finds himself in a shocking accident that transports him into the very world he created—only to discover he’s not the hero but a mere extra in his own story.

Ethan Reid, a seasoned CIA deep-cover operative, finds himself betrayed and abandoned by his own agency during a critical mission in Russia. Captured and brutally tortured, he's left for dead in a secret prison. But just as his life hangs in the balance, a mysterious force awakens within him – the Agent System designed to assist in espionage operations. Empowered with enhanced abilities, cutting-edge technology, and a burning desire for revenge, Ethan escapes his captors and embarks on a perilous quest to uncover the truth behind his betrayal. He must navigate a treacherous world of espionage and counterintelligence, battling not only his enemies but also the ghosts of his past. With the Agent System as his guide, he must master his newfound abilities and confront a powerful enemy that threatens to plunge the world into chaos.

Chou Tzuyu was an ordinary college girl who wanted to have a relaxing vacation. Because her internet connection was suddenly cut off, she found herself on the lake where she met a handsome young man who was feeding ducks. Is this a sweet love story of a young girl? Or... Is everyone hiding their true selves? (This is my first romance novel. Give a chance to this story and feel free to critic however you wish)