Mongolian Chop Squad

The Wound revolves around characters that try to come with the past events that significantly influenced and shaped their lives. Kev a former gang member is just out of jail, he is seeking to find a way to mend one mistake he had done in the past, when young he had committed terrible acts on a woman he had met just that night, but he had not intended to he had been highly intoxicated, he had done alot of destruction but that young womans innocence had hit him differently he had never been in that position before, also kev was walking a tight rope while in jail he met Jacob, known as the chameleon he had sensitive information that he used as protection in jail. And through him Kev had survived jail, but now that he is outside he has to get the list and also he had to get the rest of Jacob's cash to make sure his family safety, this was a promise he had made on his life. Kev now is caught between two worlds, he has to stay alive from the government hired hit squad, that are constantly on his back and he has to survive criminals who are out seeking revange for thinking Kev is a traitor. Annie on the other hand is the woman who once got to see Kev's dark side, but she had survived and for seven years she had waited for an oppotunity to meet this monster who destroyed her life while she was still a young naive university girl. She missed her first chance to carry out her plot but gets a second chance, when Kev moves to town. She makes a mistake of getting to close to Kev for a perfect chance to exert her revange but things change whe she knows of his regrets and guilt that has been overburdening him for years. They fall inlove, amidst all these venomous surrounding, the question is will they survive? Will Kev get to meet his daughter? will their love grow? Or will death win?

Zero Shift follows the story of Josuke, a powerful hybrid born from a devil and an elf, as he navigates a world divided by ancient rivalries and dark secrets. Together with Unit Zero, an elite squad of young warriors, Josuke battles dangerous foes, uncovers hidden truths about his lineage, and confronts a sinister conspiracy led by the Elders to maintain their grip on power. As Josuke struggles to master his chaotic abilities and balance his dual heritage, he faces betrayal, loss, and the ultimate challenge of becoming a symbol of hope in a universe on the brink of collapse.

Reikon has appeared in Japan since 2012. The death toll reached nearly the total of both atomic bombings during World War 2 combined. Since then, Reikon has become viewed as an enemy of Japan. Our main, Ryoka has the power to stop these creatures. He would use everything he could to wipe them out. Later, 4th Reikon Squad was founded because of him. He'd lead them. But, is it enough?

In 2120, a massive gateway that connects Earth with the Otherworld replaced the Aels boulder in central Australia. The Earth, representative of science, and the Otherworld, representative of magic, subsequently made contact and two wars broke out. Both wars inflicted enormous damage on both sides, eventually leading them to choose peace negotiations, and thereby marking a thirty-year era of peaceful exchanges between Earth and the Otherworld. Even though both sides chose to coexist peacefully, they each coveted the other's benefits. With the impending arrival of the third inter-world war, Earth's Otherworld combat General Staff Headquarters decided to secretly dispatch an advance team to the Otherworld to conduct pre-war reconnaissance. As a hybrid of Earthlings and Otherworld elves, Luoer, after secretly studying and training for over twenty years in Haiya Academy, which specializes in cultivating hybrids of Earthlings and Otherworld inhabitants, will soon lead his squad into an exciting adventure in the unknown Otherworld. Swords and magic? No, this is a world of guns and magic!

Fang Heng was transmigrated to a parallel world and his soul was forced into the body of a man who had just committed suicide. Huh? What? Every human here was being forced to join a game? Those who refused would be killed? Wait? This suicide dude was a pro gamer? He had the highest S-rank talent sill, the Zombie Clone? Damn! The S-rank skill evolved! My zombie clones could auto hunt! [Your zombie army has crafted Wooden Axe x720 when you were offline. You have received 1921 experience points for the Basic Crafting skill.] [Your zombie army has chopped down 27,821 trees and gathered 128,973 pieces of wood while you were offline. You have received 2,171,921 experience points for the Basic Wood Chopping skill.] Just as the rest of the players were struggling to survive in the zombie apocalyptic game, Fang Heng's zombie clones were starting to clear every resource out of the forest. Hm... What an interesting game!

A boy named Rin who's a former Quincy trains to become a SoulReaper and regain his Quincy powers as a bonus. In his prisuit of doing so meets the SoulReapers Shizu&Carri and the 13 Cort Squad Captains now that Ren has been found and met them how will Rin adpte in the Soul Society @ the SoulReaper Academy find out what will happen. So release your Shekai , use FlashStep and cast Kedo and cast your votes on this story.

A chilling air swept across the desert as a figure in a black cloak and obsidian crown walked toward the advancing army of House Elyria. With a raise of his hand, the sun turned black, plunging the battlefield into darkness. The wind ripped away the sand, revealing an ocean of skulls, and from it, thousands of undead surged, surrounding the army. Blood spilled, and with each death, the army grew—undead rising even before their bodies hit the ground. The figure stepped onto the shoulder of a massive giant, its molten eyes burning as it crushed entire squads with a single swing. As the black sun set, only the general remained. Kneeling, he glared. “You think this will go unanswered? House Elyria is one of the strongest forces on the continent!" The figure smirked. "Your House will answer soon enough. I’ll be visiting it tonight." With a wave, the undead surged, swallowing him whole. -- After his death in an accident, Roye awakens in the midst of a dark sacrificial ritual, surrounded by hundreds of lifeless corpses inside the body of Roye Valdrin—a disowned noble, the forgotten younger brother of a ruthless villainess, and the discarded ex-fiancé of a destined heroine. Worse yet, he has transmigrated into the world of Valoria, a dark fantasy realm where humanity began reclaiming its place on the surface only eight hundred years ago, after living underground for millennia with no idea why they were forced to hide in the first place. A world where gods and ancient emperors still influence the living from their graves. A world where politics run amok. A world where evil hearts and questionable morality lurk beneath a beautiful facade. Could he even survive in such a brutal world? Core Bloodline Acquired— Special Inheritance Gained: Apostle of Death.(Rank- Unknown) Roye doesn’t know if he will survive, but he knows one thing: he’ll do whatever it takes. Messing with the plot, killing main characters—nothing is off-limits. If the world wants to destroy him, he’ll burn it down first.

Jeff Anzon, a young man who had just turned 18, was instructed by his father to inherit their family's fortune. He was stunned by this news since what was he going to inherit - their old wooden house? He didn't argue and decided to go back home since he missed them. But a huge problem occurred when he went to the airport and boarded the plane. During the flight, a weird phenomenon happened. Even though it was a bright and sunny day, suddenly it turned stormy, dark, and rainy. As the plane crashed to an uncharted island, Jeff found himself stuck on this island. So, what should he do? Of course, move on and build shelter. Luckily a suitcase floated before him, and he saw an axe inside. As he chopped a tree, he was stunned by the sudden occurrence. 10 Golden Tickets = 1 Bonus Chapter 100 Power Stones = 1 Bonus Chapter

Gu Jin the boss of a top mafia organization was stunned to find that she had suddenly arrived in Magic World. She thought she transmigrated in a novel about Magic, and she became a supporting character who would die protecting the Female lead, and this is all due to her incompetency in magic. Gu Jin laughed 'incompetency?' She can die in every possible way but not due to incompetency. Before transmigration, she was the queen of the mafia world, a strong-willed iron lady. After transmigration, she became a good-for-nothing? She was nothing but a potential mage. She took an oath to become a Heaven Rank Mage. Every colleague of hers despised her until one day they got to know about her potential. Incompetency? She has a special body type which grants her power to have multiple elements while others only had few. Not talented enough? While others were cultivating and having trouble learning alchemy, she cultivated, made formulas of her own, and learned other things too. Is poor? Sorry with her talent in business and alchemy, she had built a business empire of her own and ranks among the top rich individuals! Does she have no supporters? The citizens of Fujio worship her like a god. Her popularity is more than that of the female lead. Has no family? So what! The little boy she adopted is Beast Tamer, the little girl she rescued was a Mystic cultivator. But the drama began when her biological family picked her up. Turns out the Female Lead was the fake daughter and Gu Jin was the real daughter. The Female lead warned her, "Eldest Brother, Second Brother, and Third Sister are too cold, if they ignore you and you feel hurt I will apologize on their behalf, after all, I am their beloved person." Gu Jin didn't have much hope from her biological family, since the female lead was so lovable... she was sure that they wouldn't love her. However... The Eldest Brother of the family patted Gu Jin's head, "I bought this Star Level Artifact for fun you can have it." Gu Jin: "..." The Second Brother of the family who had a cold nature chuckled, "Who dares to taunt Gu Jin? I will chop off their finger...I mean I will have a civilized talk with them! " Gu Jin:"..." The Third Sister of the family secret sneaked into Gu Jin's room every day and claimed to have a headache, "Sister Jin~ Let me sleep with you~ I am having a headache." Gu Jin: "..." Was the female lead telling her the truth? Why was everything so different? .............................................. Follow the journey of Gu Jin to become a powerful mage. This is an original work. My English is not so good so please bear with me.

Set against the backdrop of the 1940s, a time marked by profound upheaval and change, the lives of multiple individuals navigating the complexities of a world at war are woven together. One such individual, a young teenager named Alfred, vows to liberate his homeland, Forentia, from the totalitarian reign of the Votyasch Empire after the tragic death of his mother. Setting out on his own, he's recruited into an elite squad of special volunteers and refugees from different corners of the world who have the same goal of bringing down the imperial rule and have the power to do so. As he fights on the frontlines, he realizes that there's more to the world and to himself than his naivete led him to believe...

Hundreds of years into the future of an even stricter surveilled America, a search and rescue squad is called in to retrieve several law enforcement officials seemingly trapped within a dead and once thought to be deserted city, but it's dark and corrupted history still seems to haunt and prowl the streets. Superior Orion Yates and his squad of highly skilled and experienced Search and Rescue Operatives accept the mission to locate these law officials and bring them back to the capitol, all while probing the mysterious nature of the darkened city and its seemingly undetectable inhabitants.

After losing everything he held dear in a single day. Okuagu in a surprising turn of events was chosen by Agu the flaming leopard and granted power so that he could grant his mother's dying wish for him to grow strong in order to protect the weak. Accompanied by five friends/squad members he embarked on a journey hunting powerful beasts, werewolves, vampires and witches in an ancient world where gifted creatures threaten the very existence of the human race. And an even greater threat lurking in the shadows that threatens the fate of their world as they know it. This book is filled with interesting powers and abilities that makes it to be an exciting read.

#### Blurb In the heart of a city rife with corruption and danger, D.P.S. Agent Lena Hart faces her most harrowing challenge yet. When Emily Kingston, the daughter of a powerful political figure, is abducted by a shadowy group known as the Continuum, Lena must race against time to uncover the truth and save her before it's too late. As she delves deeper into a web of deceit and betrayal, Lena realizes that this case is just the tip of the iceberg, revealing a sinister conspiracy that threatens not just Emily, but countless lives. Joined by her partner, Detective Ryan Brooks, Lena navigates a treacherous landscape filled with organized crime, hidden agendas, and unexpected alliances. But as they close in on the truth, they discover that not everyone can be trusted, and the stakes are higher than they ever imagined. Join Lena and Ryan in this pulse-pounding thriller filled with twists and turns, where the line between friend and foe blurs, and every decision could mean the difference between life and death. #### Other Books in the D.P.S. Death Prevention Squad Series D.P.S 1919, ABOVE THE LAW, SHADOWS OF THE PAST, TRUE CRIME LA, VOLUME ONE, WEB OF DESIRES #### Hashtags #DPS #DeathPreventionSquad #Thriller #Suspense #CrimeFiction #AgentLenaHart #PoliticalIntrigue #OrganizedCrime #MustRead #BookSeries #WomenInCrimeFiction #ActionAdventure #JarrodAFreeman #PageTurner #DetectiveRyanBrooks #ConspiracyThriller #BookLovers #ReadersOfThrillers

#### Blurb In a city teetering on the brink of chaos, D.P.S. Agent Lena Hart faces her toughest challenge yet. When Emily Kingston, the daughter of a rising political star, becomes the target of a dangerous conspiracy, Lena must navigate a treacherous landscape of organized crime and shadowy forces known only as the Continuum. As she races against time to unravel the truth and protect Emily, Lena finds herself entangled in a web of deceit, betrayal, and a fight for survival. With danger lurking at every turn, Lena must confront her own demons and rely on her instincts to thwart an impending catastrophe. Will she be able to save Emily before it's too late, or will the darkness consume them both? Join Lena on this heart-pounding journey filled with twists and turns, where every decision could mean the difference between life and death. Written by JARROD A. FREEMAN #Thriller #Suspense #Mystery #AgentLenaHart #PoliticalIntrigue #CrimeFiction #OrganizedCrime #TheContinuum #FightForSurvival #BookLovers #MustRead #PageTurner #WomenInCrimeFiction #ActionAdventure #ProtectAndServe #jarrodafreeman

**WARNING** -bzzt..bzzzt- "MONSTERS INCOMING!! I REPEAT MONSTERS INCOMING" "SPECIAL BRANCH: TENKAICHI SQUAD | STATUS: ARRIVED" The earth is about to get hit with a mass beast invasion from another world, but it was already predicted. Preparations under works, exclusively selected few are invited to join in the program to the Special training facility, Beastborne Initiative: TENKAICHI, to prepare them for the apocalypse and remove the limiters on their body to adapt to the upcoming changes. This is not for the light-hearted. It displays inner conflicts, psychological warfare and goes on to explore the dark nature of the intricate beings known as "Homo sapiens".

【Female Disguise as Male + Strong Female Lead + No Romance + Unrequited Love + Post-Apocalyptic + System】 Ordinary college student Abby, while working a part-time job, was taken away by a criminal who broke into her home to rob. When she opened her eyes again, she was in a post-apocalyptic world?! Xiao Qi: "Actually, I am a guidance system, it's just that I didn't pay attention, maybe, perhaps there was an accident, and that's why I sent you to the post-apocalyptic world." Abby: "??? Does your boss know how unreliable you are?" Being tricked by her unreliable system, Abby, in order to end the post-apocalyptic world and go home sooner, began to work hard to chop zombies, and incidentally collected favorability from various male and female gods, leading a life of being a top player. Huh? Without noticing, how did she become the highest combat power? Hey? Why do her good comrades look at her with increasingly strange eyes?

**Blurb:** In the heart of Little Italy, chaos reigns as Tommy Russo and Clara Voss take on the infamous Vitale crime family. With the rise of a mysterious figure known as The Bonesman—a relentless killing machine born from the ashes of The Collector—Tommy and Clara must navigate a surreal battleground of memes, madness, and mayhem. Armed with humor and fierce determination, they plunge into an explosive showdown that will change the city forever. Will they reclaim their streets, or will the darkness consume them? Join the wild ride through a world where every bullet fired is a brushstroke on the canvas of chaos, and laughter is the only weapon they have left! Written and Created by JARROD A. FREEMAN **#LittleItaly #TheBonesman #ChaosAndMemes #ActionAdventure #CrimeThriller #SurrealMoments #ViralShowdown #FightingForJustice #DareToLaugh #UrbanLegend #jarrodafreeman

A new chapter of Caspian's life opens as E.A established a squad system. This is after a new president is appointed to lead the organization. Caspian and the other agents have to adapt to working in competitive squads and earn merit points. Everything suddenly turns meritocratic. What exactly is the aim of this new president? Does he have motives unparallel to E.A's core values? Are things really as they seem to be?

[18+, nsfw, mature content, sensitive content] After the death of his parents in a car accident, Akagi Suga sold his parents' house and moved to another area. He raised his younger brother alone, their life didn't go smoothly but at least as long as Suga lived with his younger brother, their life was always pleasant. Until finally people from IHPS (International Human Protection Squad) approached him, making Akagi Suga remember again that his father was a former instructor of that special forces. He didn't want to get involved with people from an organization created by elites under the guise of ‘military’, an organization filled with crazy people, but when Nakajima Yuki, his childhood friend asked Suga to join IHPS, at first Suga refused, however— "It wasn't an accident, both your parents were killed." He already had this suspicion for a long time. 'Will going to IHPS make it easier for me to find out which organization killed my parents?' And why did a madman named Zion Hughes always make it difficult for him to find out about the organization? (ps ; I won't give warning for adult scenes iykwim, I will give warning if there's sensitive content)

Hyperthymesia. Those with this condition can remember every detail of their lives from something as significant as the world’s turning point to something as small and as insignificant as a minor fleeting thought. They cannot forget and their thirst for knowledge allows them to be considered a genius in some senses. Legend has it that Ji Yushi was this kind of genius. In addition, it was said that he was gay, and very beautiful. As soon as the news that he was going to support Tianqiong’s seventh squad broke out, it sent everyone buzzing. Everyone knew that the captain of the seventh squad, Song Qinglan, was a hoodlum and deeply homophobic. He not only relied on his super-powerful abilities to become the dark horse on the battlefield in less than two years, but he also hates it when those at the top forces a flower vase* into his squad. Sure enough, Song Qinglan announced in front of everyone, “Useful? Us brothers are going out there working ourselves to the bone, we don’t need a little genius who can only speedread quantum waves!” Later. The squad was forced into a dire situation during their mission. That beautiful little genius calmly continued, every gunfire hitting the mark, his fighting power peaking. Song Qinglan begged in front of everyone, “Adviser Ji, stay.” At the end, he added, “I’ll work myself to the bone for you.” - Ji Yushi had a secret. He would often be awake at night, suffering from memory overload and recurring nightmares. There was only one thing that could let him fall asleep peacefully. And that was Song Qinglan.

A sense of unease settled over the community as reports began to surface of students vanishing without a trace. The alarming trend soon revealed a disturbing connection: all the missing students had, at some point, attended Summer Cove High. This erstwhile institution had been a beacon of academic excellence, boasting a robust student body and a financially stable foundation. Yet, in a baffling move, the school's owner had abruptly shut down the establishment, leaving behind a trail of unanswered questions. As the spy squad delved deeper into the mystery, they uncovered a complex web of secrets and lies. The case of the missing students took a darker turn, as the team discovered the existence of a clandestine organization that had been operating in the shadows for years. This secret society, shrouded in mystery and intrigue, seemed to be linked to the disappearances, and the spy squad was determined to expose its inner workings. The revelation sent a chill down the spines of the spy squad, as they realized that they were dealing with a far more sinister force than they had initially anticipated. The disappearance of the students was no longer just a simple case of missing persons; it had evolved into a full-blown conspiracy, with the secret society at its epicenter. As the spy squad continued to dig deeper, they couldn't shake off the feeling that they were being watched, that unseen eyes were monitoring their every move. The air was thick with tension, and the team knew that they had to tread carefully, lest they become the next victims of the secret society's sinister plans.

A deadly plague ravages Upper Egypt, and whispers of a curse fueled by dark magic spread across the land. The Pharaoh's elite squad, led by the steadfast Khalid, is dispatched to find and destroy its source. Among them is Ziya al-Fayoum, a skilled healer with a dangerous secret—she is a former dark magician, hiding her true identity to avoid execution. As the squad tracks the curse to ancient ruins, Ziya must use her knowledge of magic to stop it, while concealing her past. But Hassan, the squad’s perceptive spy, begins to suspect she’s hiding something—and he’s closer to the truth than she’s willing to admit. With enemies closing in and time running out, Ziya faces a harrowing choice: confront the dark forces threatening Egypt or risk exposing herself and losing everything. Curse of the Dark Nile: is a tale of magic, deception, and survival in a world where the past may be the only hope for the future.

Fourteen years of war nearly destroyed the world. Seven years of peace have barely held it together. The Seven Nation Army, forged from the ashes of World War III, stopped the bloodshed and vowed to protect the fragile balance. But peace has a price—and not everyone is willing to pay it. A shadow looms over the fractured world. The New World Order, a ruthless organization born of chaos, plots to tear apart the fragile ceasefire. Their vision? Burn the old world to the ground and rebuild it on their terms. At the forefront of this conflict, Bravo Squad stands as humanity's shield. Led by Captain Sohel Choudhury, callsign "Ghost," this elite unit faces a daunting task: unravel the NWO's plans before the world is plunged into World War IV. But trust is scarce, alliances are fickle, and the battlefield is no longer confined to nations—it’s everywhere. Victory isn’t guaranteed, but failure means the end of everything. — “If taking one life can save a thousand, we have to pull the trigger. If that one life is at the end of your barrel, and you won't be able to take the shot, leave this room right now. Because if you don't take the shot, your enemy will. And he won't hesitate. I assembled you here to win a war, not to turn all of you into cannon fodder.” Sohel took a deep breath and looked out over his squad. “Now, let me ask again, does anybody want to leave? Does anyone here think that he'd not be able to pull the trigger?” The room buzzed with one synchronized sound, “No, sir.”

In a city drowning in corruption, Jack Marlowe, a dedicated agent of the Death Prevention Squad (D.P.S.), is on a mission to protect the innocent. But when his beloved partner, Benny Thompson, is murdered in a brutal kangaroo court orchestrated by the sinister Sheriff Dalton, Jack's world is turned upside down. Consumed by grief and fueled by a burning desire for vengeance, Jack must rally his team to expose the sheriff’s dark secrets and dismantle the mob's iron grip on their city. As betrayal lurks around every corner and danger escalates, Jack faces the ultimate test of loyalty and sacrifice. In a gripping tale of resilience and redemption, will Jack honor Benny's legacy and rise as the hero his fallen friend believed him to be, or will he succumb to the very corruption he vowed to destroy? Prepare for a heart-pounding journey of loss, determination, and the relentless pursuit of justice.

[Action/Science Fantasy/Battle Academy] Updating daily through Arc 1 One hundred years ago, being diagnosed with the "affliction" was the kiss of death. Whether by mutation or firing squad, Linnaeans lived notoriously tragic lives. The few that lived suffered from irreversible mutations. These creatures, few as they were, inspired legends of werewolves, mermaids, and sirens. Then came the treatments for the Linnaean affliction. The discovery of temporary gene repression meant that the development of mutations could be slowed and managed. This created an "unholy" new race that shared the DNA of both humans and animals. Feared and hated by the outside world, they created a stronghold to develop their medicines and amass their power. Today, Linnaeans from all over the continent live in the City of Mendel and train under the renowned Professor Corax, a brilliant and eccentric geneticist. Just before her eighteenth birthday, Ember is diagnosed with the affliction. Suddenly, instead of moving into her dorms and studying with the brightest in the country, she is whisked off to the City of Mendel by government officials who are as scared of her as she is of them. As she contends with a new city and her own treatment, she'll also have to face the tension of the half-baked treaty between the Linnaean people and the outside world. There's no doubt - life won't be easy in a city where the population is able to harness the abilities (and instincts) of animals. ----------------------------------------------------- Also available on Royal Road, Scribblehub, and Spacebattles Forum. Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/c/hekate37

***Warning: This book contains many violent, xxx and horror details, please consider before reading. Van Rover, 31 years old, is a coward who only wants to live an ordinary life. When the curtain concealing the secrets of this world is lifted, it is also the time when the wheel of his destiny begins to turn. Rover steps into a new land, filled with darkness, brutality, and death. In this land, Heroism and bravery do not mean you will be the main character. Cowardice and selfishness do not mean you will die. When he arrived in this gloomy land, the first terrible thing he encountered was his first love from 10 years ago. She was murdered and chopped into pieces, but she still came to find him. … Under the blurred moonlight, Rover saw his girlfriends standing on a field of human bones, waiting for him in the far away. The cold wind blew, causing the corpses hanging on the surrounding branches to sway. His girlfriends were laughing laughter as if mocking the faith of the dead. Rover knew that… stepping toward them, he would die, but he still wanted to go. He wanted to find out the truth.

What happens when humanity's greatest weapon gets a second chance at life? Commander Kronos wasn't even considered to be a human but rather a weapon to be used for the greater good of his species. He was grown in a tube to be the perfect weapon so he lacked many emotions/experiences most people take for granted. Upon experiencing some emotions for the first time he was quickly eliminated by humanity and was reborn into a world of swords and sorcery, getting a second lease on life. Of course, he didn't see it that way at the start and thought he was being fooled. It took a near-death experience and a lot of growing up but he finally decided to keep his promise to his former comrades and give his new life an honest try. Embark on the story of the former Commander of Hades Squad as he settles into his new life as the Dark Elf Kaladin Shadowheart. --- Chapters avg 3-6k+ words. As of now, I post every Monday morning. --- Support me on Ko-Fi where you can get chapters in advance. https://ko-fi.com/rangerfrank --- Join the Discord- ttps://discord.com/invite/YGSUeuTTwH --- You can also find me on Reddit- https://www.reddit.com/user/RangerFrank Royal Road- https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/48211/deathworld-commando-reborn

After being the weakest of all ranks in the academy, James felt lonely cause he had no squad and no friends so he always stay behind during any mission. all his luck changed immediately he was paired with an SSS rank squad. His destiny was placed in his hands to do as he wishes but he should be wise. After given a second chance James pushed himself to make sure he is on top. * * * * * * Would be dropping 2 chapters per day. so tell me what you think about the story in the comments section thanks.