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Gavin, a window cleaner with a love for all media involving magic and the supernatural in general, dies and is reincarnated in a world that he could only call a dream-come-true. Determined to not let himself fall into mediocrity a second time, he lets a newly formed ambition take hold of him, for better or worse. A/N: This is my first time trying to write anything and I intend to use this story as more practice than anything serious. I'm just making the plot up as I go so don't expect anything revolutionary. I only have a general direction I want to take things, so suggestions are welcome. At the time I'm writing this I have the first five chapters done. I personally think they aren't all that great, and are a bit chaotic, but I hope I'm just being overly-critical. When I wrote them, I was trying a bit of everything to get a feel for where I wanted to take things, but I think it should improve quickly. Please leave a comment and/or review letting me know what I did well/poorly and what I can do to improve, it would be appreciated.

This is Gonna be short Chapter's ok ok, I'll try to improve it ok, And English is not my First Language so bare with it. And I don't own Naruto, And i upload whenever i want cause im lazy but hardworking, oh forgot to tell Pairings are NarutoxHinata, Idc what ya'll say, no harem to complicated and Mc gonna be Slightly OP

Exiled by his father and sent to an orphanage in enemy territory, Devon grapples with feelings of betrayal and abandonment. Stripped of his royal identity, he struggles to adjust to a life far removed from the court's opulence. Amid the unfamiliar faces, he meets Caelan, a curious and unassuming boy who begins to crack the walls around Devon's guarded heart. As he navigates this new life, Devon wonders if exile might offer him something he’s never known—a true sense of belonging. “I told you—I’m done with Sysis. Whatever happens there is not my concern.” “You can run from your past, Devon. But you can’t outrun your blood.” ******** Why don't give this a try? I want to improve my writting and storyline. Any critique are open.

A boy gets reborn with a special talent for football. In his new life, he discovers that he has an incredible ability to predict plays, making him a natural on the field. As he navigates this second chance, he faces challenges and rivals, but his passion for the game drives him to improve further. With each match, he learns valuable lessons about teamwork, perseverance, and the true meaning of victory. This journey transforms not just his career but also his understanding of himself and those around him.

Adan Emika, a 34-year-old leading a stable and comfortable life, is thrown into chaos after receiving a cryptic phone call offering him a chance to "mend his dark past." Initially dismissing it as a scam, Adnan soon finds his world unraveling—his career, relationships, and sense of control spiraling into disarray. Desperate and out of options, he reluctantly agrees to the mysterious deal, plunging himself into a journey to confront the buried secrets he thought were long behind him. As the lines between redemption and sacrifice blur, Adnan must face the question: can he truly mend the past, or will the cost be too great? ~A chance to mend the past, Adan. Wouldn’t you use it?~ "Fine, yeah, sure. I’m Adan Emika, and I agree—whatever. Happy now?" ........ writting for fun and practicing

Inside a quiet pavilion located inside one of the Heavenly Sky Kingdom’s four largest cultivation sects, a young man slowly opened his eyes with a helpless expression as he gazed down towards the fog located at the base of the mountain that the pavilion was located on top of. Not only was he the youngest Core Elder in the history of a large cultivation sect, but he was also someone who had transmigrated over with a system! The system in question wanted him to train up disciples and in turn help him get stronger! But there was one major problem in all of this… He didn’t have any disciples! Ding~! Talk about great timing... ____________________________ Release Schedule: 7-14 chapters a week ____________________________ If you are interested in LitRPG, I'm writting another novel called [Reincarned as a Lizard]. A side novel, I write on it when I need something other than Xianxia.

Meet Lin Yulan a female cultivator that is host to the martial creation system it allows her to create and upgrade martail art skills. The main focus of this story will be the village where the MC is from the start over the course of the story she and her desciples will turn it into the strongest martial arts village. Please note this is my first ever attempt at writing a novell so expect many mistakes and pacing issues feel free to comment on how I can improve thank you

(REWORKED VERSION) This is a Rework of my previous story with some slight changes, improvement to the grammar, and improvement to the story overall. Some things will be the same of course and then some things will be different. ----- ----- Maximus was the son of the smartest and most powerful people in the world. His Mom and Dad being geniuses made advanced technology that boosted the world's development level but also caused more conflict. After his unfortunate death he is reincarnated in the world of Game of Thrones and granted a system to guide him along the way Follow Maximus as he tries and build an Empire in Game of thrones --- --- This Story will be faced paced and include Kingdom building and a Harem

this story is about a boy who lives in a world where he is born without any special abilities but he continues to strive and find knew ways to improve himself .He has a dream and is to one day keep hes promise he made to his mother.To seek the greatest strength

Currently, this novel is unavailable. As a "beginner" author, I’ve spent the past four months improving my skills, and looking back, I find what I’ve written before to be, well... not great. Over the next month or so, I’ll be editing and reworking this book to make it better. Completed: 4 / 116 chapters.

The Asylum exists as an abode of advancement, exploration and enhancement. The Asylum is a shelter for everyone, regardless of physical features, mental capability or state of existence. The Asylum will always welcome you. There is no reason to leave The Asylum. You will be cared for and improved. Only your safety and the value of your life depends on you.

If you could gain power, wealth, or prestige, but at the price of your soul, would you accept the deal? Humanity continues on to day-to-day life, oblivious of the supernatural creatures that lurk in the dark. Being attacked by one of these creatures, Jayce Price was given a choice, sell his soul or die as a human, picking one of the options, multiple messages appeared in front of him. [ You have acquired the System ] [ Current Demonic Synchronization 0.00% ] [ Increasing Demonic Synchronization ] --- Author here, As this is my first ever novel I would appreciate constructive criticism to help improve the quality of the novel. Hoping to improve the quality as I write more so please feel free to state your opinions on the matter. It would be most appreciated if you could support my novel in any way you can, every contribution toward a goal is valuable, regardless of how small it may be. Also, special thanks to J.G. for the artwork! Contact me through Discord or Email for any questions: Ribblood#3222 Ribblood2@gmail.com

You. Yes, you, the reader. The main character of this "Book", me. I will be going on a sort of adventure to get ideas to improve my game and book on earth in this world. That's about all of it you have to know.

Serelina Hartwell, the orphaned daughter of Aeloria's Sixth Supreme, lives a life of neglect and hardship. When memories of her past life return, along with a strange system offering her guidance, she decides to take control of her destiny. Armed with her newfound knowledge and determination, Serelina sets out to improve her circumstances and uncover her true potential in a world of magic and opportunity. Author's Note: This may be a smut book, but I will also incorporate proper world-building.

I'm currently practicing and refining my storytelling skills with the guidance of ChatGPT for teaching and improvement. I hope you enjoy my stories. Have a wonderful day!

[a boy who transmigrates to another world and lets everything flow as he should, just knows that he has to remain strong in order not to be intimidated.] the image does not belong to me if you want to remove it just let me know. Just writing to see if I improve my writing and it doesn't go blank when writing. if you have tips thank you.

Synopsis: "When the war is over, we'll get married and I'll grow flowers like you, and our story will be one of the most beautiful love tales in the universe." A letter found in the pocket of a dead soldier; Captain Jungkook Jeon, 1895. This AU (ff) is written by @ARTSEOULVK in twitter. I just writting it for the people who don't use twitter and want to read this masterpiece. And also cause her account is deactivated now so yeah enjoy! Thank you. Ps. The book cover does not belong to me nor does the novel.

In a world where assassins are trained in the ancient arts of shadow magic, one rogue assassin seeks to uncover a conspiracy that threatens the balance of power between kingdoms. Through a web of betrayal, dangerous alliances, and hidden magic, the assassin must navigate a world where every shadow could hide a deadly foe.

A coach with a unique style to improve his players abilities, his training is vigorous yet addictive the girls can't get enough !

this is my first work am just trying to get the hang on writing, charter building, setting, mood so it might be all over the place but I would love it if I can get some feed back to improve

The year is 2050, and the game [Infinity Heaven] finally got released after years of development. Albert, a salted fish shut-in who just wants to overdose on caffeine, entered the game for fun. [Ding! Congratulations, you won "Improvement"] [Improvement: allows the host to improve equipment, skills, and items.] Albert: ??? And so, a guy with a cheat started his weird journey.

In the modern era of martial world, the human races fought endlessly against stellar beast. Chu Yan traveled through time and become a senior high school student, and found that he could improve everything. [ Consuming the attributes point for upgrading Qualification into Supreme Level ] [ Consuming the attributes point for upgrading Swallowing Chaos Arts Body Tempering ] In shot, everything in this world can be improved. With the system, it start the beginning of Chu Yan path in order to reach the peak of universe.

A collection of random story ideas. Each chapter is a different idea. If you wish to use one and improve upon it, all I ask is that you let me know before hand and give me some credit for it.

Kim Ji-Woo, a 26-year-old struggling part-time worker in Seoul, dreams of becoming a successful actor since childhood. After quitting his job, he mysteriously gains a "system" that allows him to rapidly improve his acting skills. With each new role, Ji-Woo’s talent grows, propelling him from small parts to leading roles in major productions. As his career takes off, he becomes the world’s best actor, earning fame and admiration

Kachito Mishimura is a man who seeks to become the Heavenly Swordsman, an esteemed position within the world of Han'ei. Together with many he will meet upon his journey, Kachito will shoot for the stars to become the strongest in his own era. This work is a prequel to Heavenly Swordsman: World Redux and will be released alongside it. This is also a remake of said prequel, to improve quality of the original Wattpad series.

the year was 2056 and the world had changed drastically. machines were now a normal thing in life. some humans were now embodied with machines to improve themselves. but a low life girl was about to change this scene forever?

A Starfarer travels the cosmos with a simple goal in mind. To find things it loves. Join them as they travel from planet to planet. Seeing the best and worst of what the cosmos has to offer. (This is my first time writing in general, so I'm using it as a testing playground to learn and better myself. Please leave a review so that I may improve.)

Mark got killed by a flying car and get reincarnated with The Ultimate sans system in the Undertale multiverse __________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is my first work so prepare you're eyes to bleed English is not my main language this story is principally for me to write better and improve my grammar so if you can give some advice or tips it will be nice :) I don't own this picture, if you want me to remove inform me into the review.

In a world where nothing seemed to matter, Aisam once lived a dull life with no passion or dreams. But fate took a cruel turn when he perished in a tragic plane crash planned by terrorists. Suddenly reincarnated in a new world, he found himself in the body of a forgotten orphan from a long-forgotten novel he once read. Armed with a mysterious system, Aisam chooses to traverse the world pursuing the path he chose to accept... The Path of Terror. *** It's my first novel, and English isn't my first language so I kindly ask for your patience and support. Constructive criticism is greatly welcomed as I try to improve. That's why, the further chapters you go, the overall story may have improved.

Upon waking up, Chen Bei entered the Dormitory Survival Game and was bound to a dormitory. In the game, during the day, he had to go out to collect supplies, improve his strength and reinforce the dormitory. When night fell, all kinds of strange and dangerous things would appear, and he had to hide in the dormitory to survive. People and the dormitory would live or die together! What was different from others was that Chen Bei joined the game management group. Here, he could pry into all kinds of useful information... However, as his strength improved, gradually Chen Bei discovered that what was hidden behind the whole game was not just as simple as a game. The truth was...