Conan Civilisation

you follow a slave soldier known as Gabriel through a meaningless world full of vast kingdoms, shogunates, caliphates and empires, all of which ravaged by war and evil. there is magic and beasts, mysterious and barren continents, hidden civilisations, and more, all with a political and fantasy based backdrop. visit many nations and explore many diffrent cultures in The Martyr.

"Coquin, je vais sortir pour faire quelque chose, donc je ne peux plus m'occuper de toi. Tu peux descendre de la montagne et t'amuser. Mais si tu ne trouves pas quelqu'un qui correspond à ton Corps Inné Pure Yang en trois ans, tu es fini!" Ce sont les derniers mots que l'ancien, qui était le professeur de Yang Luo, lui jeta avant de disparaître. Pendant ce temps, ayant maîtrisé la plupart des compétences de son maître, Yang Luo descendit de la montagne et fit son premier pas dans la civilisation pour la première fois en des années. Avec ses compétences médicales et ses arts martiaux inégalés, il se lance dans un voyage, se liant d'amitié avec de nouveaux alliés et écrasant tous les ennemis qui se dressent sur son chemin, alors qu'il tente de résoudre sa constitution de Corps Inné Pure Yang, et de cultiver jusqu'au sommet du monde!

``` Le monde qui a vu naître le sommet de la civilisation magique est sur le point d'être détruit. Le dernier survivant est revenu d'innombrables années en arrière, à l'époque où naissait la civilisation magique, et d'innombrables mages tâtonnaient sur ce chemin épineux. Lui, qui venait de la Fin de l'Ère Magique, marchait vers le Trône Suprême ```

Dans un monde où l'ère interstellaire a apporté autant de promesses que de déceptions, Michael Fang rêve de devenir un Seigneur dans le mystérieux royaume. Il désire explorer les ruines anciennes de civilisations déchues et bâtir un territoire aimé et soutenu par ses sujets. Mais ses aspirations volent en éclats lorsqu'il réalise qu'il n'a rien de spécial et qu'il n'est qu'un garçon ordinaire dans un monde rempli de prodiges célestes. Jusqu'à ce qu'il tombe par hasard sur la Porte menant à l'Étendue d'Origine, un royaume mystérieux qui promet de changer tout ce qu'il croyait savoir sur lui-même et sur son destin. Avec un nouveau pouvoir et une détermination inébranlable, Michael fait le serment de transformer sa malchance en opportunité, peu importe combien le chemin est périlleux. "Regardez, et soyez témoins pendant que j'extrais tout !" Suivez Michael Fang dans son périple à travers l'Étendue d'Origine alors qu'il affronte obstacles et ennemis pour atteindre ses rêves et devenir le Seigneur Suprême qu'il était toujours destiné à être. ** Discord : https://discord.gg/Zr8QvWJKVT

Azel woke up in a crypt with no memory of who or even what he is. When he encounters a rather unfriendly duo he discovers that his true nature is that of a ticking time bomb. Desperate to maintain his humanity, Azel agrees to accompany the two to a civilisation that actively despises his nature. And it certainly doesn't help when he finds himself in the middle of a power struggle between individuals he can't even fathom.

A une époque reculée, au-delà de toute temporalité connue, s'était érigé, tels d'imposantes montagnes sur la vaste terre d'Akham, les royaumes Istarek et Vissaris. Ces derniers, en continuel conflit depuis la nuit des temps, s’étaient vu en 1168 ap. La Brèche, entraînés dans un énième conflit visant à s'emparer, cette fois-ci, du Golfe de Raï. Ce n'est cependant que trois ans plus tard que cette dernière s'était achevée sous la victoire vissarienne, entraînant dans son sublime triomphe l'annihilation totale du peuple adverse. Malheureusement, 14 ans plus tard, la sombre civilisation refait mystérieusement surface menaçant à présent de conquérir tout le pays. Désormais, c'est au tour de la nouvelle génération d'entrer en scène. Ainsi ’Alessio, 5ème et dernier héritier de la lignée Vissaris se porta volontaire dans le ferme objectif de réduire à jamais, ce fléau millénaire, depuis bien trop longtemps persistant...

[AI Art for Most of the Main Cast will be Uploaded in P@treon and some Preview Pics in Webnovel.] (AI Art for Christine in Cover Picture.[My Creation]) ~~ 6 Times a Day (6TaD) is a story centers around a male high school student named Alan Plummer, who starts off as an awkward young man. Unbeknownst to him, his mother's best friend and neighbor lusts after him and concocts a phony medical diagnosis that requires him to have six orgasms a day, in order to seduce him. Things don't go quite as she plans and a chain of events and circumstances results in an increasing number of gorgeous women finding themselves 'helping' him with his "medical treatments." **Not my Own Novel, but found on SPACER X Website which is down nowadays.. thus i am re-editing and re-posting this novel which i have greatly enjoyed..If the Original Author wants to take down this publication, pls pm me at chufeng.a@gmail.com** Otherwise Have Fun Reading this Novel you Bit$$es. Since i am editing this you expect a good update speed.. ------------ TAGS: HAREM, INCEST, TEACHER, NURSE, SEDUCTION, NTR (The Old Novel had some but I am dedicated to REMOVE them, If you find some which I missed, please mention the CHAPTER NO), SlowBurn ------------ Edit: Small amount of netorare has been mentioned by the readers, which the team is looking into, we haven't crossed that threshold,IF THERE IS NETORARE, THEN Read at your own risk, as it mostly woman seducing her son[ Acording to the readers, and i am not pushing myself to read ahead as it time consuming and not worth it] . If you are not into this categories, THIS IS A FREE NOVEL I AM PUBLISHING DURING MY FREE TIME, NOBODY IS FUCKIN FORCING YOU TO READ THIS NOVEL, SO STOP FUCKING GIVING 1 STAR REVIEWS WHEN I HAVE CLEARLY MENTIONED THE TAGS AND STORYLINE YOU FUCKIN IDIOTS.. P.S Thanks for all the Loyal Readers who have followed this novel from the beginning........Much Love...!! **/////////////////////////////** Please consider Donating however much you can to support me to keep this novel going. Every Little Donation counts. Other Works: Detective Conan: Harem begins with Kisaki Eri One Piece: Conquest of Love and Power ----------------------------- patreon.com/SnakeEmpress paypal.me/SnakeEmpress buymeacoffee.com/snakeempress [Consider becoming a P@treon and enjoy a minimum of 100+ chapters ahead.] **/////////////////////////////**

The Birthday of the Infanta by Oscar Wilde is a richly detailed narrative that blends beauty with tragedy, exploring complex themes of love, loss, and human nature. The Body Snatcher by Robert Louis Stevenson, this short story focuses on a group of men who meet regularly at an inn and become involved in a mysterious encounter with a renowned doctor. The story explores themes of identity, morality, and the weight of past actions. The Nose by Nikolai Gogol is an absurd and satirical tale that tells the strange story of a barber who finds a nose in a bun in Saint Petersburg. This discovery triggers a series of comical and peculiar events in the plot. The Most Dangerous Game (aka The Hounds of Zaroff) by Richard Connell, is a classic work of literature that tells a story of action and adventure with horror overtones. The plot follows two hunters, one turned prey on a mysterious island.The Great Keinplatz Experiment by Sir. Arhutr Conan Doyle, this book tells a story about a peculiar experiment carried out in the fictional town of Keinplatz. Through an immersive narrative and intriguing characters, The Book explores themes of scientific curiosity and human behavior.The Monkey's Paw by W. W. Jacobs, this book tells the story of a magical monkey's paw that grants its owner three wishes, with unexpected and tragic consequences. The plot revolves around themes of destiny, consequences and the supernatural, creating a captivating and somber narrative. The Lady with the Little Dog by Anton Chekhov is a story that follows Dmitri Gomov, a married man who begins an affair with Anna Sergueyevna, a woman who is also engaged. The narrative explores the complexities of love, infidelity and human emotions against a backdrop of society and social conventions.

The drums of change are beating on the Nerathian Continent. The fall of the Adler empire and the emergence of the Demons have turned the continent upside down, while a new discovery of a mine shortens the path to chaos. In the middle of it all, the meeting of ‘civilisation’ and ‘savagery’ will either create a new centre of power on the continent or spell its doom. Can our two main characters, Corvus and Belisarius, emerge from the chaos to rebuild their kingdoms?

A man from a very highly advanced civilisation is transmigrated into a world of fantasy with unique powers. Is this his destiny or something else at work? Accompany me as this man rises above everything to reach the pinnacle.

Dans un monde en déclin, où les vestiges d’espoir s’effacent et où la confiance n’est plus qu’un murmure oublié, un jeune homme se tient à la croisée des chemins. Il ne cherche pas de héros, ni de miracles, mais une vérité : celle de sa propre identité. Déchiré entre le poids d’un passé brisé, fugace et un futur incertain, il entreprend une quête extraordinaire, semée d’épreuves, de doutes, et de révélations bouleversantes. À travers les ruines d’une civilisation qui a perdu foi en elle-même, il explore les profondeurs de ce que signifie être humain. Quels souvenirs façonnent nos âmes ? Que sommes nous sans ces derniers ? Qu’est-ce qui donne un sens à notre existence lorsque tout semble s’effondrer ? Et jusqu’où sommes-nous prêts à aller pour retrouver ceux que nous avons perdus ? Plongez dans une odyssée introspective et épique, où chaque pas est une bataille contre soi-même et le monde, où la lumière vacille mais refuse de s’éteindre. Car même dans les ténèbres les plus profondes, il subsiste toujours une lueur pour qui ose la chercher. Un periple dont le but est la lumiere.

A rain of meteors heralded a new age for the world, changing the very essence of everything. As the world shifted to using this new mineral resource to reestablish civilisation, they fall even deeper into an abyss that they have no knowledge of. Amidst it all, a man who carries both the cancer of the world and the blessing of the universe within him awakens to a power unlike anything the world had ever seen. Will he be the beacon that unites the world or will he be the arbiter that sentences it to doom? The Crucible burns ever fiercer, continuing unabated in its Eternal purpose. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This story was inspired by games like Path of Exile, Arknights, and the Trails series. (Any characters with similar design or names to characters in these games do not necessarily mirror them.) MC's power is a skill tree system that will try to replicate the skill trees of games like Path of Exile, Last Epoch, etc. It won't be exactly the same, but it will grow into something similar. It will not be as complicated as the skill gem system right away, but the story would develop into something similar in the long run.

Five thousand years of scientific and technological development have enabled human civilisation to flourish, and the desire to explore the universe has been realised, ushering in the interstellar age. But in the unknown depths of the universe, what awaits mankind is not only the deep mysteries of the universe, but also countless dangers. This time, mankind is no longer fighting for exploration, but for survival ......

Lucas was your normal 21-year-old guy with a loving family and a beautiful girlfriend. But one day, when he was with his girlfriend, a strange woman appeared to be in their room, claiming to be his gf's mom. She said that she was the succubus queen and her daughter the succubus princess, and that she is here to take his girlfriend back to her kingdom. Lucas was shocked when he heard this and was even more shocked when he heard that angels had declared war on the demons. Determined to stay with his girlfriend, Lucas follows her back to the demon kingdom. But in the midst of creatures who are far more powerful than he and gods who can kill entire civilisations with a mere thought, can Lucas make a difference?

Après un cataclysme cosmique, plusieurs planètes ont été déplacées dans un autre système solaire, créant un ensemble de mondes égarés. La Terre, alors perdue dans l’espace, est désormais entourée de civilisations inconnues. Suite à cet événement, les humains de la Terre ont développé des pouvoirs uniques, liés à l’énergie cosmique qui a modifié la planète. Ces capacités sont accordées uniquement à un groupe d’élus, qui se retrouvent au centre des conflits interplanétaires. L’Alliance des Mondes se forme dans l’espoir de réunifier les planètes dispersées et d’empêcher que certains mondes ne profitent du chaos pour s’imposer comme de nouvelles superpuissances.

Eren Reginald never saw death coming. One moment, he was just an average man going about his ordinary life, and the next, he found himself under the wheels of an unforgiving truck. Yet death was not the end—it was the beginning of an incredible rebirth. Reincarnated into a magical world where beasts roam wild and humans wield incredible powers, Eren awakens in the body of Eren, a young boy whose life had been torn apart. Kidnapped, and left to watch his father die in a brutal attack, Eren’s world is shattered. But Eren, determined to not repeat the mistakes of his past life, swears to protect his new family and grow stronger than any force that threatens them. In this harsh world, beasts are more than mere monsters—they are powerful, sentient creatures that dominate both the wilderness and civilisation. However, Eren soon discovers that he has inherited a unique power: the Beast Tamer System. With this system, he can tame even the most fearsome creatures, forging bonds of power and trust with them. But the world has a cruel twist—beasts, too, can tame humans, and the line between master and servant is blurred. The true battle is not just for control, but for dominance of will. It’s a brutal game of power where the stronger, more "beastly" spirit will reign supreme. As Eren’s strength grows, so does his understanding of the power dynamics of this new world. To protect his loved ones, he must tame the untamable, face off against powerful creatures, and challenge those who would use their beasts to break him. But the real test is this: will Eren become the beast himself, with his will unshakable, or will the wild forces of nature overpower him? In a world where beasts rule and power is everything, Eren must find his own path as both protector and tamer. This is a thrilling tale of survival, magic, and the raw power of will, where the battle for control over beasts becomes a battle for the soul itself.

Ren reinhart is a normal kid in India, he had moved to his motherland from the UAE. He had grown accustomed to life in the south after a year doing well but when thrust to an Apocalyptic scenario during college hours, he has to Battle monsters and other survivors on his own. He only needs his phone and stuff by his side, and he will be happy to kill anyone who gets in his way. He will grow stronger so that one day, his phone will have wifi connection and range and the facilities required for civilisation to achieve his one and only goal to read novels, manga and watch anime after rebuilding civilisation.

When you picture the apocalypse, the end of civilisation, what comes to mind? Maybe it’s a scorched earth, covered with craters and mushroom clouds from distant explosions. Perhaps it’s dilapidated camps full of hooligans and outcasts, murdering each other for sport. Possibly a nuclear winter, with mutated remnants of what used to be humans, reduced to mindless horrors. For our main character, however, the apocalypse is a mystery, waiting to be unraveled through exploration and survival.

Dans un monde primitif dominé par des tribus et des totems mystiques, un jeune homme moderne passionné d'histoire et de stratégie militaire se réincarne en un arbre sacré, le totem de la petite tribu des Pythons Verts. En tant que totem éveillé, il devient le cœur spirituel et protecteur de la tribu, capable d'absorber le Qi spirituel et la foi de ses membres pour croître et évoluer. Armé d'un système de construction de royaumes, il peut analyser les statuts de sa tribu et des ennemis, acheter des techniques et des objets pour développer son peuple, et guider les Pythons Verts dans leur quête de grandeur. Mais le chemin vers la prospérité est semé d'embûches : bêtes spirituelles féroces, tribus rivales, et mystères du monde sauvage menacent la survie des Pythons Verts. Avec sa capacité unique à fertiliser la terre et à accélérer la cultivation, il transformera les faibles chasseurs de cette tribu en guerriers martiaux redoutables. Dans cette aventure où stratégie, culture et survie s'entrelacent, l'arbre totem devra mener sa tribu vers l'ascension, en construisant une civilisation capable de rivaliser avec les grandes puissances du monde. Mais peut-il préserver son humanité tout en devenant un pilier divin pour son peuple ?

People have seen and read many different kinds of apocalypses. A tower rose from the ground bearing gifts of power and an endless tide of demons. A rift was torn in space unleashing a horde of monsters unto the world. An alien mothership blotting out the sun as it rained down an entire civilisation's worth of advanced technology. A little game by supreme beings who want nothing more than entertainment through the deaths and suffering of the world. Even the awakening of forbidden ancient horrors from deep under the surface of the world that should have never existed. We have all seen how these things go. Countless people die before they even get the chance to fight back. Most of the time, the world is caught unaware and is brought to the brink of oblivion before a hero finally rises up to save them all. Well, it seems the world has had enough. Rather than waiting for another apocalypse, Earth had chosen to take action... literally. Better yet, the Universe had recognised its resolve and gave it an equal opportunity to fight for survival, i.e. a system of its own. "These pathetic humans can't do anything right. Fine, I'll do it myself." ~~~~~~~ Disclaimer: The story will be using a bit of science to explain some things, but most will be fantasy and made-up science since I am most definitely not a physicist nor am I well-verse in science. So if you read something here that doesn't adhere to actual scientific and physical laws, just think of it as weird magic stuff even if it poses as science.

Seul hybride démon/humain, mis au plus bas du simple fait d'exister. La guerre se profil, le sceau s'amenui et sa vie se voit chamboulée plus qu'elle n'est déjà. Voici sa reconstruction, fait d’épreuves, de rencontres, de romance et de réponses sur ses origines. Voici l'aventure de Mylon dans un monde où les démons sont haïs par les hommes, un monde bâtit sur les restes d'une mystérieuse civilisation et où une guerre se prépare ...

Exiled by the Armellian guild for a crime he didn't commit, and in the process being marked as an outcast for all to see by the church of the "Luminarum" in the rare ritual of "Exilation." Banished to the lands of the Discarnum, the realm of the long dead and the forgotten. In the darkness of a past civilisation, a hidden power awakens; with it, an ancient being rears its head from deep with the shadows that stem into the darkness of the abyss, the abyss of one's broken soul. Sealed away by history long past, the secrets and truths of the forgotten, present, and future will be revealed, and the sins of those will come crashing down. Can one young man's fall into darkness and the past suffering of his soul begin the veil of chaos that will spread across the lands, or will it be their saviour from it all and the monsters that roam in the darkness and the light? "When the embers fade into the abyss... all that will remain is the void between realms. In that never-ending darkness, something is waiting. I pray that it never comes, for I know this is a lie; it is coming... I just hope that it never comes to pass. This is my only wish for their sake." The last hero of the lost age.

Un monde fut déchu ainsi que son héros, mais des cendres celui-ci sont née des royaumes supérieurs, eux même peuplé de races supérieures. La technologie fut troquée contre la magie afin de lutter contre ceux ayant détruit le premier monde, mais était-ce réellement judicieux ? De ce monde déchu est constituer l'histoire. L'histoire d'une civilisation qui avait tout, ou presque. Découvrez les échos de ce monde déchus, et comment celui-ci a pu tant changer, ou même si il a réellement disparu. Suivez Reiner, un homme ayant vécu la chute de son monde, et découvrez ce qui constitue cet univers d'apparence si ordinaire. Après tout, un proverbe dit qu'à chaque chute d'une civilisation, une plus puissante émerge. Mais est-ce nécessairement le cas ? Merci à "Pythonisse le raccoon #NFLC" qui a littéralement refait ma couverture ! Aller voir son compte et lisez ce qui est dessus!

Gods War: Civilisation A game loved by many including me. The premise was fairly simple: Play God Build a Civilisation Fight other Gods Become the one true God. I was the best player in the World and after my death I gained the opportunity to truly become a God. I was the God of forbidden Knowledge I fell And I will rise once more I am Pallas

Note: (Disclaimer at end of abstract). Synopsis: "In the heart of the boundless Phantom Continent, rests a cursed region smack in the centre of all that is known, aptly named as the Central Region. A domain shrouded in perpetual gloom, despair clings to every shadow and its sole purpose seems to be crushing the souls and dreams of the unfortunate souls that take shelter upon its land. Life is a fight for Existence and Reality however cruel, is alas never what it seems to be. Whispers of precious ore, ancient artefacts and ruins of ancient civilisations only lead to ruin - factions descend to lay claim to these scraps like vultures, blades quench the thirst of the land with rivers of fire, which mirror the stars from afar that flicker in isolation with an insatiable desire. Amongst the chaotic lands, a tale starts. An adventure, a mistake, a ghost, a foreigner, a world, many worlds, alliances, betrayals, intertwined fates and dangers fraught at every corner. A protagonist that isekai's into a still living being in an earnest bid to grow stronger and a pitiful soul that longs for what was once share a mysterious bond. Destiny is calling, the line between the living and dead is blurred, the powerful shape Reality, however amongst this rollercoaster of events, the shadows vie for their own nefarious purposes, for the shadows are always watching. As if life wasn't a misery as it were, it hit Zuck Borris with the roll of a die - the odds were never in his favour. Firstly, a stranger gave him the old boot - throwing his soul out to the dogs in the streets. Then a mysterious voice started talking to him. Yet it didn't seem to be doing him any favours in reclaiming his flesh and bones. Meanwhile that backstabbing fiend didn't even notice his existence and already seemed to be bringing trouble to his body. Roland, however, was as calm as the ocean bed. Some ignorant fools seemed to be scheming against him. Ever since he answered that damn call, his life seemed to become more troublesome. However, perhaps there was some part of him that smirked at this opportunity, to gain control over his life with enough strength to face all that may come his way. Who protects this Reality, that Reality and everything in between? Can a mortal man spit upon the immortal obstacle that tightens its grasp to crush all beneath it? Can the rivers burn what they touch as the worlds collide and the sun is all but lost? Are answers always to be sought? Turn that chapter if you so dare..." Disclaimers: There will be content in this webnovel that covers potential sensitive areas to some, including - violence (fighting), abusive language (swearing / cussing), concepts of self-harm (some bullied characters may consider self-harm), divide in society (different factions/ power levels) & other similar concepts that usually apply to any cultivation/ sci-fi webnovel. Also, the start is more world-building focused, so do saddle in your seatbelts and work through the first 20 chapters to get a feel of what we have in store. :)

In a dark corner of the Realm of Gods, a newly ascended being casts his eyes upon the Mortal Realm, Genesis. However, he is just one of the many eyes that have laid their sights upon this vast, new world and its denizens. A young world devoid of faith and the influence of higher beings. A world lacking innovation and civilisation. A world waiting to be conquered. The desire of the residents of the Realm of Gods was roused by the sight held before them. Gods. Evil Gods. Devils. Each has their plans, but they share the same thought: "Genesis will be mine" A demon who achieved devilhood, felt the flames of ambition burning once again. This world desired by all will fall into his clutches. Discord: https://discord.gg/fVcZRmZ9US

Ever pondered what chaos would ensue if Guts from Berserk stumbled into a "Slice of Life" anime? Or if Solo Leveling unfolded in a medieval landscape, complete with knights and courtly intrigue? How about the most divine irony: God reincarnated as a lowly slave? Welcome to a novel born from the depths of my most twisted and outrageous imaginings. It's a journey that spares no punches and offers little comfort to the faint-hearted or easily offended. But hey, if you're here for the ride, buckle up. To set expectations: I am not the literary offspring of J.K. Rowling (Harry Potter) or Arthur Conan Doyle (Sherlock Holmes). This tale may be somewhat unrefined, sprinkled with typos and moments of grammatical rebellion. Yet, what it lacks in polished finesse, it delivers in unrestrained absurdity and wild, unpredictable fun.

Can a thousand year old civilisation crumble within a fraction of that time? Can the very rules that bind and guide the society be it's destruction? There are so many unanswered questions, so many things she must know before she passes off. If not her then who will let the world know the truth no matter how dangerous it is to find. After all, the more you know is the more dangerous you become in the eyes of those who do not wish for you to know.

Thousands of years after the fall of Mankind's greatest civilisation, The Empire of Man has long risen to take its place. In the Frozen Reaches of the Snowlands, Isaac Endyarr's story only just begins... We follow Isaac Endyarr, a near human living in the harsh lands of The Snowlands, a mercenary and contracted killer, he and his twin sister will do anything to survive in their hellish home. Will they become something more than mercenaries or will their troubled past come back to haunt them? Please keep in mind that this is just the first Sub-story and that more will be added later. Please notify me if there are any problems in the story, thanks. If you're going to notify me on Royal Road that someone's copying me, it's just me on a new site. Same book, same name same email, thanks for the consideration though!

Anastasia Wright - or Stacey, as she prefers to be called, finds a black monolith covered in alien writing within the overgrown park near her house. Touching it causes her to become stranded in another world which is a cultural melting pot where humanity is under threat by the local people who call themselves the Ancients. Battles with the Ancients and their beastmen henchmen are common. Kidnapping and violence are the norm despite what appears to be a peaceful civilisation on the surface. With no money, no local knowledge and an inability to communicate or read the national tongue, Stacey struggles to survive. Worse, she's accidentally offended the entire country on national television. All Stacey wants is to go back home but the question is - how? When she comes across a man who is powerful and influential in both worlds, whom also has the ability to return her to her own world, Stacey asks for help. Thieren Huo agrees to help - it's just not the kind of help Stacey was hoping for... Not a romance story although some romantic themes will be involved. Contains some violence and mature themes. Parental guidance recommended. This is a pantser story. Reader suggestions and ideas encouraged for further story development. Reader assistance for editing and advice welcome. Self-editing does not catch all errors. Warning, there may be plot holes. Let me know if you find one so that the holes can be patched where possible. This is a pantser, after all. This story is going to be rewritten. I'm not happy with it. There may be huge changes to to the storyline and plot.