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The journey of a young man who lost everything finding a new reason to live and let go of the past. _______________________ Deep in the darkness a ruined palace made of stone adorned with scars from wars of old. Inside a regal throne of bones atop sat a figure lurking in the darkness. Tic Tic Tic... Flipping open his pocketwatch he smiled "It's almost time" Looking up with his purple orbs he leaned back waiting once more. "Tick Tock Tick Tock... Are you ready?" In the darkness, seven figures stood awaiting his orders. ______________________ I am a new author so any feedback would be great I would like to be able to improve and make this story the best as possible so don't be afraid to correct me on stuff I get wrong or tell me if I worded things badly.

Das neue Buch ist da! Meng Yunhan wurde in die Zeit der "Lebensmittelgutschein-Ära" zurückversetzt, eine Zeit, in der die Menschen mit Lebensmittel- und Kleiderknappheit zu kämpfen hatten. Aber dieses Mal hat sie keine Angst. Ausgestattet mit einem "Betrugscode" ist sie bereit, nicht nur ihr eigenes Unternehmen zu gründen, sondern auch ihren bekifften Bruder in den Griff zu bekommen und sogar Baozi, ihr Kind, zu unterstützen. Stoned-face Bruder: "Ehefrau, lass uns Baozi einpacken und abhauen!" Er behauptet, einen Sohn zu haben, der sich noch mehr an seine Frau klammert als er selbst, sei absolut schamlos! "Mami, lass uns einen neuen Papa suchen!" schlägt Baozi vor. Sein Vater, ein erwachsener Mann, ist immer noch so anhänglich an Mami. Wie schändlich! Meng Yunhan seufzt: Sie sind tatsächlich Vater und Sohn.

Jiang Yi was dumped by her ex-boyfriend, and the scheming girl held his hand, saying, "The entire HR Group is under my uncle's control, and his last name is Wen. So what if you have a rich uncle? Jiang Yi, you've concealed your identity for so many years, a wealthy father, a grandfather with immense power—who among them can't compare with you? A year later, Jiang Yi made a high-profile appearance with her fiancé, Wen Suihan. Her ex-boyfriend and rival were stopped outside the door because of an invitation card. Jiang Yi's smile was radiant, "Call me 'auntie,' and you won't need the invitation anymore." The scheming girl said to the security guard, "Uncle, didn't you say we could enter without an invitation?" Jiang Yi paused, "Wait, isn't your uncle Wen Suihan?" Wen Suihan's face turned cold, "What? Are you and my security guard acquaintances?"

We were mortal enemies, yet I heard rumors that we were in love... In an accident, she provoked this demon-like rational, arrogant, cold, and charming man, a typical paranoid with a manipulative personality, who pampered her to the heavens and earth. One day, Qin Youbei finally exploded...

The world was destroyed, torn to shreds by the war as it raged on. With the falling of nuclear bombs, the mutation strangely adapted and became an entirely new element. Those who couldn't withstand this mutation became beings tethering on the edge of life and death, becoming undead. Only a small population remains on the earth now. In this small population, some can adapt to the mutation and awaken unique powers in the apocalypse, while others are entirely unaffected, still like normal people. Ray was just a normal E-class awakener, but a faithful purple crystal changed everything. Through the purple crystal, a "system" activated inside him, which could allow him to get stronger the more he spreads his genes. Necromancer, wizard, martial artist to sorcerer - every single skill was possible as long as he spread his genes. From that moment, Ray walked the path of spreading his genes "for the sake of humanity." Author note: My MC is not some stupid shit who likes the enjoyment of being stupid, although he might not be the most high IQ person but he tries his best to strive for perfection and will do everything to get stronger, also he cares for his woman and doesn't abandon them. Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/g2WEFm86CY #no ntr, yaoi or yuri

Hunter, a regular university student is plagued by the issue of not having money, so he goes to his uncle. A drug addict and smuggler and asked him for some jobs to earn money. But is sold instead to a vampire who is looking for an available person to be used for a project. Watch as he rises to power and becomes the most powerful vampire and becomes the newest seraph

The year 6048. The human race has evolved to be the apex predators as all humans gained the gift of abilities. But with power comes responsibility and humans are not known for taking responsibilities. So the world descended into chaos as the rise of abilities comes. "What the fuck man, the only ability I have is shadows .To see in the dark and move shadows , why can't I get fireballs and telekinesis or super strength . What a load of crap". A short boy no less than 15 years said bitterly as he found out the powers he has.

Wolf Anderson, a teenage girl with fluffy grey hair and bright purple eyes that only stare at her goal of freedom for all, sets out to achieve just that. With her close friends, she is thrusted into a Universe filled with scales unimaginable and opponents even larger. Filled with determination and the drive to change the way things are, she stops at nothing to achieve her goal of setting the Universe free of the restrictive grasp of the Council and become the Prime Councilor.

Synopsis: In a world where humanity is at the bottom of the food pyramid, a young boy raises his fists to bring justice for his people and judgment against his enemies. This novel will be blending lots of concepts. It will represent the complexity of human emotions and decisions. Have fun reading along, I'm open to feedback.

It's absolutely free. Please support my work as I'm a rookie writer and it's my very 1st work. Anna Woods gets pregnant at the age of 16 so she gives up all her dreams & time to her new born baby . But after 9 years when she gets to know that she has a blood cancer. She decides to find the real daddy of her daughter to give him her responsibility and joins a beauty pageant competition to fulfill her last dream. But the things gets very complicated for Anna because on one hand her time gap , age and motherhood gets in the way of her beauty competition and on the another hand James Watt (the biological dad of Anna's daughter ) is a gangster + womanizer and doesn't believe in love and responsibility.

He had his hands in his pockets as he walked quietly to school . Backpack slung lazily on his right shoulder as hw seemed to be mumbling to himself, he was lost in his own thoughts . " Where is it ......, I can ......smell it , but I can't find it " He mumbled to himself as he looked around to see if he could find the demonic spirit. Milo could see spirits ......, all spirits , that walk upon the earth , and not just that .....he could also kill them . And eat them too. No one else can see these spirits , only he can . Today, he missed most of math class to hunt for a particular spirit. It would probably add a few more weeks to his life . If he could find it that is.

What do you do when you hold the greatest power known to mankind . The power of creation. A teenager sat in an alley staring at a trash can intently as if he wanted to pierce a hole through it with his gaze. The next moment , the trash can turned into a dinner table with lots of luxurious dishes on it. The teenager sighed softly as he looked at the table with a smile"I finally got it, now my powers can be helpful to me"

A few years ago, the human race witnessed an apocalypse. One person's mistake that affected the whole world and threw it into chaos. 'There is now a tree in the moon, how it got there, i don't know.

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

In the depths of Atheria’s Forest, Arbor — a lazy, fox-like humanoid — wants nothing more than peace. A quiet life collecting odd rocks and chasing pleasant dreams is all they’ve ever asked for. But fate rarely listens. Their nights are plagued by twisted dreams of stars, tar, and snapping teeth. Their days are no better, spent training as a mage to join a Legion they never asked to be part of. Worse still, their memories are a haze, with no clear answer as to how they ended up here. Every day is a drag, but somewhere in the fog of their mind, a spark of hope remains — a hope to make sense of it all. But unseen forces are moving in the shadows. Dark creatures stir, ancient plots unfold, and something hungry watches from the edges of their dreams. Arbor's world is changing, and whether they like it or not.

Novel is not mine i like this novel but it is restricted here so i will post here from free novel website but give the original author his credit. The world was destroyed, torn to shreds by the war as it raged on. With the falling of nuclear bombs, the mutation strangely adapted and became an entirely new element.Those who couldn't withstand this mutation became beings tethering on the edge of life and death, becoming undead.Only a small population remains on the earth now.In this small population, some can adapt to the mutation and awaken unique powers in the apocalypse, while others are entirely unaffected, still like normal people.Ray was just a normal E-class awakener, but a faithful purple crystal changed everything.Through the purple crystal, a "system" activated inside him, which could allow him to get stronger the more he spreads his genes.Necromancer, wizard, martial artist to sorcerer - every single skill was possible as long as he spread his genes. From that moment, Ray walked the path of spreading his genes "for the sake of humanity."#no ntr, yaoi or yuri I Spread my Genes to Level Up in the Apocalypse novel is a popular light novel covering Action, Adventure, Ecchi, Fantasy, Harem, Mature genres. Written by the Author Aurelius_Imperator

Suzuki, an adult programmer, suddenly notices that he’s been thrown into a different world while wearing a casual clothes at level 1. He gained high levels and treasures after using the 3 times use-disposable-magic Meteor Shower, at once. After that, he intends to do different world “sightseeing tours”? He meets 3 beast girls, beautiful purple and black haired sisters, and an eccentric blonde haired elf girl along with various people during his trip. Although there are occasional fighting with demons and demon lords, this is a heartwarming fantasy story at heart.

One day, a light covered the world, ushering in a new era with the awakening of the Epsilon Gene. Follow Aelyra’s journey as she discovers that the world she knows is not what it seems and navigates her more than complicated family relationships. This story is inspired by My Hero Academia and similar tales. I gladly welcome any feedback or suggestions. English is not my first language.

Shi Yuhan is the most heartless and evil human Song Qinghuan has ever met. He's arrogant, sharp-tongued, ruthless, and heartless towards her. Yet, he asks (read threaten) her to marry him and she has no choice but to agree. She needs to get into the Era Group to investigate her elder brother's whereabouts. Will her sacrifice be worth it? Will she be able to find the truth of her elder brother's disappearance? Will Shi Yuhan continue tormenting her? What's his motive?

First sport novel i am ever writing so please give me feedback :D Also do expect some grammar or spelling errors since english isn´t my first language

Jason had thought about punching a Shil’vati. Who hadn’t? Not only had the aliens conquered Earth with almost trivial ease, the seven-foot purple amazons also had the audacity to start running the planet better than Humanity ever had. He'd never do it though. He was a reasonable guy, just trying to get by under his new feminine overlords. Wasn't he?

After an eventful night, Alyssa Williams finds herself forced to live in a world where everything that seemed to be a myth turned out to be reality. A world where she clearly doesn't belong. However, she has a goal and plan to achieve it. Alyssa will then have to try to learn about this world without raising any suspicions to survive in this hostile place while trying to get close to a certain young man.

A world filled with bounty hunters, vampires,werewolf's,demons and devils.

The fate of the world rests on the lead's hands as he is either to bring destruction or peace to the already divided world. Unraveling the secrets of the ancestors, Eren undergoes developmental changes, finding out the truth of both his people and the ones who are supposedly his enemies. He is bestowed with great power; the greatest of its kind, and with great power comes great responsibilities...

One night in the land of Filmond, a blinding light covered the night sky turning the once white moon to purple, it was a change that went against the law of nature. Even science could not explain the reason for the sudden change That same night the family of the bells, their first daughter kristabel was lying on her bed with purple light hovering around her while her body absorbed the light of the moon. **** What made the moon to change and why was kristabel absorbing the moon's light??

In a world ravaged by chaos and loneliness, John's life lacked purpose and meaning. The constant protests outside his apartment mirrored the turmoil within him, their noise a haunting reminder of the unrest he couldn't escape. Lost in unemployment and isolation, John sought refuge in virtual realms, where he could momentarily escape reality. Yet, his existence felt empty, like an abandoned canvas waiting for a painter's touch. With each passing day, he robotically navigated life, seeking something more. In an unexpected twist of events, a sudden explosion shattered his life, leaving him floating in a mysterious void. As panic threatened to consume him, an otherworldly voice offered him an enigmatic opportunity—to rewrite his destiny, to embrace a higher purpose. With unwavering determination, John accepted the offer, and a blinding light transported him to a new reality. His consciousness had returned, but his senses felt foreign, devoid of sight. Instead, he sensed momentous events unfolding—a significant figure being born, destined to become the emperor of a crumbling empire. John VIII Palaiologos, a historical figure tasked with confronting the mighty Ottoman Empire, was now the role he inhabited. As he grappled with his newfound identity and the weight of his responsibilities, he realized that his journey had just begun. The fate of an empire rested on his shoulders, and he was determined to shape history in a way that would bring hope and transformation to his world. --------------------------------------------- [Author Note:] Updates: 3-4 chapters/week *Miss me? Don't be, I'll be much busier than last time, but do try to write, somehow, I might be a tad below my chapters expectation for a couple of weeks depending on how busy I am.* Cheers!

Sumir finds himself in a future where the boundaries between games and reality have merged. For 18 long years, he waited—until he finally awakened his synthesis ability. No resources? Two bottles of diluted Physique Enhancer? Synthesize them into a Physique Strengthener. Two Physique Strengtheners? Synthesize them into a Physique Crystal… Lacking skills? A gray-quality Basic Footwork can be synthesized into a white-quality Phantom Step, then into a green-quality Dragon Step, blue-quality Shadow Body, purple-quality Flickering Shadow, and finally, a gold-quality Thousand Faces Mirage… No equipment? Gather a pile of junk. A gray, damaged Hatchet can be synthesized into a white-quality Hunter’s Knife, then into a green-quality War Blade, blue-quality Bloodletting Chainsaw, purple-quality Reaper’s Edge, and eventually, the gold-quality Annihilation Arbiter… Need pets? Synthesize them! Low job rank? Synthesize it! Precious items? Synthesize them! Rare materials? Synthesize those too! Sumir: "A lot of people ask me, ‘How do you always manage to get your hands on the rarest resources while getting stronger?’" "First of all, let me ask you this: What do you mean by rare?" "For you, these resources might seem incredibly rare. But for me? They’re as easy to acquire as reaching out my hand!"

A collection of stories, places, concepts, and objects that exist in this Universe. =============================== I apologize to anyone offended, and please forgive the vast difference between chapter lengths as some will only be one paragraphs and other will be several pages long. =============================== Additionally, any feedback and criticism is appreciated as I am a ignorant and inexperienced writer

It is a little Hot our Here.........(You know what I mean)

A taken away prince. A BOY UNKNOWN TO HIS OWN IDENTITY. And a knight whose duty is to protect his master. And someone who took the prince. Was it to protect him or to betray someone? The king of the kingdom of Northern Lights came to fulfill his duties. The divine beast is pretending to be a cute and harmless magical being. Destiny brings them together in a situation where they are unaware of each other's motives and true faces. Will the prince's identity remain a mystery to him, or will he discover who he truly is? Stay with us on this journey.