Manhua Waifu

## Kingdom Building LitRPG [You have been chosen as a Lord of the Intergalactic Lord Project.] [Your reward: A floating island to call your own.] [Your mission: Build your kingdom, summon legendary allies, and dominate the worlds!] [Your advantage: An SSS-grade Ultimate Gacha System.] Atlas Blackthorn, the newly chosen Lord of a floating island, wields the power to summon legendary warriors, powerful artifacts, and, of course, waifus. With boundless ambition and the Ultimate Gacha System at his side, Atlas sets out to become the strongest Lord in all worlds. How far will his ambition take him? Tags: Action, Kingdom Building, LitRPG, Fantasy, Gacha System, Post-Apocalyptic, Adventure, Power Progression, Strong Protagonist, Strategic Battles, Epic Worldbuilding, Romance *** Discord Server: https://tinyurl.com/galanteodiscord

[Ding!] [Welcome to the fantastic world of Aether Babes!!!] [Title granted: King of the Cosmos!] In his first life, Nick was an avid gamer. One of the top-ranking players in the gacha game Aether Babes, he never thought in a million years he'd be transmigrated into the world of his favorite game. However, it wasn't everything he imagined it to be. Somehow all the gods were dead, leaving him as the new King of the Cosmos far earlier than his character was supposed to be. More than that, it seemed like his favorite game actually contained the worlds of many different games... And as the King of the Cosmos, it was his duty to conquer every game, obtaining ultimate power. Finding himself in a dangerous plane of existence filled with exotic monsters and demons and even more nightmarish creatures he never dreamed of fighting in real life, Nick has to fight relentlessly just to stay alive. Luckily, he has the help of his favorite waifus! Couple warnings: Few lemons. Though the characters will be close and intimate, I do not plan on making many detailed scenes, at least at the start. Also, there wouldn't really be the chance anyways, as imminent danger is lurking around every corner. MC will be OP. Combined with his gacha knowledge and wide assortment of Valkyries (The waifus he summons) he himself is also op. To be fair, some of his enemies, especially the Endwalkers, are op as well. Also, it will be a progression based OP. Ch2 MC would not be facing the same enemies as Ch 2,000 enemies. Yes harem. NTR one time and its against abusive husband. No yuri. The harem will be filled with a bundle of different personalities, so you can expect a bundle of different personalities as well as tropes like Tsun, yandere, etc. NO F* INCEST!!! NONE!!! Book will be addicting hehe. If you enjoy, don't forget to shower with powerstones, golden tickets, and gifts!!!

Waifus, Mechs, Magic! Witness a mind-blowing ride of spell-slinging beauties, earth-shattering mech wars, and an arcane system so deep you’ll lose yourself in its brilliance! Empires crumble, celestials clash, and the birth of legends in the most explosive, heart-racing epic you'll ever read! Jack Squire, a professional debris collector in Earth's orbit, witnesses the unimaginable — the colossal magical sigil igniting the sky above his hometown, Germund. As communications fail and soon an apocalyptic light blasts skyward and splits the moon in half, horrifying questions dawn: Will his friend on Luna base survive? Is his family on Earth at risk? What or who is the doom-bringer who casts the forbidden magic and wreaks havoc upon worlds? Determined to seek the truth, Jack must navigate a perilous descent into a war-torn planet, where arcane magic and advanced tech clash in a brutal conflict between two empires. Osten Empire with its arcane: Magic & Spells V.S. Dunkelheit Empire with their war armours: Armatus In this gripping sci-fi and fantasy adventure, ~one of a kind! Jack's quest to uncover the truth behind the cataclysm and save what remains of his world leads him into the heart of a war that shall decide humanity’s fate. ----- Priority theme: Fantasy & Sci-fi, War & Tragedy, Romance, World building, Weak-to-strong, Action, Adventure, non-harem.

I was summoned by a Goddess with my classmates to save their Empire? But I have other plans. With my Unique Skill, I will get whatever I want starting by that Goddess! °°°° Additional Tags: [Heavy Lemon], [No NTR], [NTR: Mc stealing], [Ruthless], [Step-Sisters], [Goddesses], [Beastkins], [Yanderes], [Threesome and more!], ... DISCORD LINK FOR ILLUSTRATIONS OF WAIFUS: https://discord.gg/fhdv8Eb7QP

For five years, I've lived the life of a failure. Smashing my hands against the wooden target in hopes of entering a meditative state; a necessary step to becoming a cultivator. For five years, I've faced nothing but disappointment, looks of pity, and meager attempts at encouragement. But everything has to come to an end. An end, that for me, became a new beginning! Circuits, wires, and capacitors? Or maybe spirit powder, Spricur crystals, and Qi gathering formations? In a world where cultivation is, for most, merely a hobby and the worlds of mysticism and science are divided, I shall be the one to craft a bridge between the two! Why rely on ancient arrays to harness dense Qi? Isn't it easier to buy one of my converters, plug it into the wall, and be done with it? Is your gaming console malfunctioning, yet no tech shop can find the cause? Have you tried this the exorcising swatter 3.0? And you! Yes, you, the one whose reflection appears on the screen on your phone once you block it! Why would you buy static figurines if you can come to my shop... And get your hands on waifus that will actively flirt with you? Come all ye troubled souls, and allow this God to craft a solution to all your problems! ***Technical side of things*** Daily release: 2ch/day Sunday release: 3ch + accumulated bonus chapters from mass release goals listed below ////////////All Milestones are subject to change/////////////// For every 100 winwin unlocks: 2 bonus chapters For every 50 ps: 1 bonus chapter For every 3 reviews: 1 bonus chapter Supergifts: 3 bonus chapters Me having a good day: 1 bonus, not-mass release chapter a day on days it applies >.>

It's not every day that someone has a life changing epiphany, not every day that someone decides to change their lives by the power of thought. But it's no rare gem either, people sometimes get strange bursts of motivation. And so did this guy, who spent the third year of CS undergrad at Kyoto University, just lazing around and doing nothing, barely passing with grades his past self would never have imagined getting, always just coped up in his room. Now that he is suddenly determined to change all that, would he be able to actually go through it, and not fall down after walking just ten steps ahead towards the world? Look forward to the mundane tale of this guy, as he juggles through daily struggles of school, work, social life, love, passion, and friends, while trying to make a place for himself in the light speed fast moving world of modern AI technology of 2020s with an aim to "MAKE WAIFUS REAL." ------------------------------------------------------------ The story of a wannabe hustler whose life's goal is to make Waifus real, find love, play games, and be happy. ------------------------------------------------------------ The story has a place for loving readers to support the author, a pa-t-re-on page. https://patreon.com/MeAlive

The story is about a a hitman, Who dies because of his own recklessness and transmigrates into a game he used to play after his retirement as a hitman. I'm not gonna spoil any further, but i might answer few of your questions. Is MC overpowered? Nope, he'll become strong over time and all battle he'll fight will be because of his effort and techniques. Is there magic and adventure? Yes! It have both magic like normal isekai with adventure and fighting with monsters and many other things. There are other important things like "Essence Stone" But let's talk about it in the chapters. There will be harem? Not really, He will be in contact with many beautiful female and males but one waifu but i haven't decided yet. All i can say is, give it a try, I'll try my best to make it worth your time. Discord Link : https://discord.gg/jkM2yT79dT

Dangerous Omega Series #1 After dying in a horrific hate crime, Suki, a certified Fudanshi and a covert celestial fox spirit living in the human realm undergoes a mysterious transmigration. He was unwittingly transported into the very world depicted in "Their S-Class Affairs," an intense, hardcore and smut-ty BL manhua. The story that he was reading before his untimely demise. Suki, as the legendary nine-tailed fox, would have an easy and comfortable life if he possessed a body of a nameless extra. He could watch the betrayal and messy lives of the characters in the Manhua without throwing himself into the eye of the storm. However, fate proves harsh for a demon spirit like Suki as he unexpectedly becomes the omega husband of the enigmatic alpha and wild stallion ML, Bai Tingfeng. In the panels of the manhua, Bai Tingfeng harbors no affection for his vain and irresponsible husband. Suki, who now assumes the identity of the renowned model omega, Shen Yuan, knows this all too well. There's no way in hell that he can rely on the S-Class alpha's help in consolidating his new body. Since Suki can't acquire help, he doesn't want to be affected by whatever drama that the ML's halo would attract. Who would want to get all the trouble without reaping the benefits? No one. Shen Yuan/Suki decided to stand on the sidelines while munching popcorn, ready to watch the drama. Let Bai Tingfeng unleash his beastly nature and become the notorious f*ck boy in the city. Suki/Shen Yuan doesn't care about that. All his concern was to be separated from this difficult man! Will the husband and husband fall for each other? No one knows. Only the electronic billboard asking someone's WIFE for a coffee date would do the talk. #omegaverse #alphaxomega #MPREG #dungeons #magic #transmigration #powercouple #childraising #beast #nonhumanMC #supersmutBL #misunderstanding

[Warning! Contains sex scenes, lemons and perverted MC. Read at your own risk.] Rain, a typical young master, led a fine life, enjoying power and status. But once confronted by the hero, Rain suffered a crushing defeat. Unable to accept this reality, he continued to confront him, not knowing that he was doomed to defeat from the start. Eventually, when Rain had lost everything he held dear and was in the depths of despair, the fog in his head cleared and he realized. "What the fuck am I doing?" "Why am I not using my brain and d*ck to defeat the hero? After that, Rain found his own way to crush the hero... ---- What about the story? {Milfs, A lot of Netori and Stealing, Large harem, Oyakodon, Mature Women, Virgins, Yandere, Twins, Waifu of different races, Beast girls, Dragons, Elves, Succubbs, Demons, Goddesses, and lots of other cultural stuff} Of course, No Ntr, No Yuri. And what about the Main Character? {Highly Possessive, Shameless, Genius, Knows what he Wants and Gets it} ---- What about the bonuses? Luxury Car + 3 chapters Dragon + 5 chapters Magic Castle + 10 chapters Everything Other + ??? chapters (Gift to find out...) ---- Link to discord: https://discord.com/invite/gcFdZvk7QM

A hundred years ago, Chu Xiu transmigrated from Earth to Cang Qiong Continent, and received the Destined Villain System. After killing countless holy sons and daughters, he was surrounded by the older generation, and self destructed, possessing Tai Su Sacred Ground Yun Xia Mountain’s senior disciple. This time, he decided to lay low and develop strength. Let’s start small, what about becoming a saint admired by thousands? ---- The cover is not mine it is from drakescans who made a manhua of this novel. Check them out on https://drakecomic.com/!

"Wish Upon A Star" The Item I used to turn back time amidst a battlefield of gods and devils. To go back and change everything so that I can live a life without regret. With Power. To be the highest form of existence, a Sovereign just like my ex-lover. This time, I will change it all. F*ck being an extra. + What to expect: Anti-Hero Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist/Fast Progression, Genderbent Protagonist (Purely for comedic reasons, also I'm sick of writing male protagonists. I mean, when you play a mmorpg, you choose a female character right? Lemme write my own waifu) Magic. Lots & Lots of Magic. No Romantic Relationships Until Like Way Later

[Your reward: A floating island to call your own.] [Your mission: Build your kingdom, summon legendary allies, and dominate the worlds!] [Your advantage: An SSS-grade Ultimate Gacha System.] Atlas Blackthorn, the newly chosen Lord of a floating island, wields the power to summon legendary warriors, powerful artifacts, and, of course, waifus . With boundless ambition and the Ultimate Gacha System at his side, Atlas sets out to become the strongest Lord in all worlds. How far will his ambition take him?

Hùng, a 17-year-old teenager with a max-level ego, proudly declares himself the most handsome being across all universes. While other protagonists are busy being useless or isekai-ing their way to find a waifu, Hùng... is stuck washing dishes in the kitchen. Then it happens — life takes a wild turn from "boring like cold rice" to "chaotic like a cosmic-level spicy Thai hotpot" as a system suddenly activates: Disturbers System Activated! From a dishwashing nobody to a fiery, over-the-top, drama-packed adventurer, Hùng embarks on a journey filled with epic battles, hilarious antics, and occasional doses of wild drama. Oh, and here’s a plot twist — this story is written by none other than Hùng himself, along with Mako, who claims to be the smartest being in the multiverse! So if things seem a little outlandish, don’t be surprised. This is a comedy, not a guide to living a serious life, folks!

**Tag:** R-18, Harem-seeking protagonist, Evil protagonist, Perverted protagonist, Handsome male lead, Cruel characters, Special abilities, Eastern and Western settings in a SciFi world, unhinged comedy, tragedy, slightly above average intelligent characters and plot twist. Synopsis: Zachary "Zach" Walters is the ultimate nerd: 22 years old, perpetually unemployed, and perfectly content to spend his days locked in his room, devouring fantasy novels. Living off rent from a shop his late parents left him, Zach believes the world outside is overrated, especially when he has his trusty laptop and an endless supply of energy drinks. But after spending weeks reading Chronicles of the Archmage: Arkanis Ascends, Zach hits his limit. The novel's ending—was shit, the power of friendship nonsense—pushes him into a full-blown rant. He tears into the author with an unhinged, scathing comment in the forums, mocking the novel, the villain's pathetic defeat, and even the author's "beady eyes" for writing something so cringe-worthy even saying he who isn't a author can write better. "You think you're better than me as an author? Better than my protagonist? Let's see how you fare in my world." Suddenly such text appeared. Before he can reply, Zach is yanked into the very fantasy universe he mocked, reincarnated as a disgraced prince banished from his kingdom for sleeping with the king’s concubine. Stripped of his royal status but not his charm, Zach quickly realizes that fighting villains or becoming a hero is overrated. Instead, he decides to focus on the finer things in life: building a perverted waifus harem and indulging in every smutty fantasy he’s ever dreamed of. But in a world of cunning regressors, overpowered plot armour characters, arch mages and scheming nobles, Zach's carefree antics might just land him in hot water—or worse, dead. Can this trash-talking keyboard warrior survive his own delusions, or will he end up as another failed side character in someone else’s story? When fantasy meets debauchery, chaos is sure to follow.

In a world filled with ancient beings/Creatures and Humans there will also be the "Marked". There are Marked who protect the world and Marked who don't. I mean- who likes a novel with all heroes only? There's gotta be some Villainous bastards to actually awaken what you call "Excitement, Anticipation, Thrill and interest" in you. And well, let's just say you came to the right place. Note: You can be in bed, Train, a corner in class, etc... as long as it's quiet and it feels like you're in your own domain to read. That's the ultimate step to make yourself comfortable when reading Novels, Manwha (Almost typed Manchester), Manhua, Manga, Light Novels and Webnovels. As you can tell, I suck at description right about now so just please read, Follow, comment, Vote and or whatever. I upload everyday, for now.

[WSA 2025] The King of the Harem was the most powerful character in the game Call of Waifu, enjoying glory, honor, and wealth. But one day, someone appeared, introducing himself as the "Player," and dragged him into his plans to save the world. He eventually died, losing his 300 wives and 700 concubines. Upon his death, facing the great enemy threatening the world, he awakened a system: "You are recognized as the new Player." However, he didn’t get the chance to use this new power. The King of the Harem was reincarnated 1,000 years later and discovered that his wives were also living their lives, scattered across the world. Save the world? I don’t care. I’ll take back everything I lost, including my wives.

This story takes place long after the events of the seven days of creation. Things had changed extremely since the earlier years, we now follow Jenny our protagonist as the world descends more and more into futuristic chaos, after all men are magically taken from the world.

What would you do if a ROB (Random Omnipotent Being) were to grant you one wish with no strings attached? You don’t have three wishes, just one. So you have to make it count. And oh, you can’t make exaggerated wishes like “Having omnipotence stronger than the ROB’s,” “Killing the ROB,” etc. Faced with that scenario, Kaiden was skeptical about whether it was true or not. However, none of that was his problem, as he had nothing to lose. After pondering for a while, Kaiden thought of the best wish a person like him, encountering such a situation, could make. “If I’m only granted one wish, can I get my personal sandbox world where I’m the omnipotent being, with its size being as huge and vast as your omniverse?” After having his wish granted by the ROB, Kaiden realized the Ultimate Escapism. Since he was the Omnipotent Being in his omniverse-sized personal sandbox world, he could literally create and realize all of his fantasies! Feeling lonely? Kaiden could create any waifus he had fantasized about. Feeling edgy? Kaiden created several multiverses in his sandbox world and then destroyed them with a wave of his hand! Wanting to feel the protagonist experience? Faced with that question, Kaiden decided to experience the worlds he created with his powers “sealed.” Whatever the scenario—whether it was as a survivor in a zombie apocalypse world, the young master of the Peng Clan in a cultivation world, or the summoned hero in a demon king vs. hero fantasy world—they all could be realized! This was Kaiden’s personal sandbox world in creative mode, where all his fantasies could be experienced and become reality!

[Warning : Mature content R-18] *Premium quality lemons *Excellent waifu with genuine and diverse characters. *Milfs in equal abundance. *Harem members all equally important to the story! ***************************** In a world ravaged by the XY Plague, a relentless genetic virus targeting the Y chromosome and crippling male fertility, Zafron, an 18-year-old orphan, faces a grim fate. Sold by his manipulative stepmother to a powerful noblewoman known for her wealth and influence, Zafron's life takes a sudden and dangerous turn. Lady Matilda, determined to secure a future for her noble house amidst the dwindling male population, discovers an astonishing truth about Zafron through rigorous genetic testing that changes everything. Disposed and discarded to his own means, Zaphron falls into a fatal encounter. Now at the point of death, pitied by a diety, Zafron is granted a system but not just any system. Zaphron is gifted the Eros vitality system! Now with his system, he emerges as the most genetically potent male known to exist in his world. But of course, this comes with a price.— Zafron now becomes a target not only for ambitious and desperate noble mistresses but also for men desperate to restore their own fertility, he must navigate a perilous path where trust is scarce and danger lurks at every turn. ------------------- [Lady Seraphina, prime minister of Talkyo wants your seed] [Princess Cordelia von Aldenberg would like a night with you] [The prime minister of Winchester, her excellency is offering her daughter to you] ..... "I never asked for this burden, but I will carry it. My potency is not just a gift—it's a responsibility to safeguard the future of our kind. So to all the women that I love, believe me when I say that my precious seed will be yours if you give me one thing..." ********************** [Caution: Made by a degenerate] No ntr No Yuri Mc will steal women from other men. Disclaimer : Cover isn’t mine Discord : https://discord.gg/5V9ehgcYKC

R-18 coming... After reincarnation into the Isekai world. He went into a shut-in life while hunting in a dungeon. After 7 years. He realizes! He is already the strongest person out there in any world. After that, he saved a girl. Got himself a waifu. Took her as an apprentice. And found how she was insisting on getting him more girls. Saving a nine-tailed bloodline demi-human. He got himself a godly servant. Saving a princess, he got himself a kingdom. Saving a noble lady with a cute girl. He got himself a mother & daughter pair. Well, in short, just come and read, buddy. / The image did not belong to me. If the real creator wants me to change it, please contact me in review and comment section.

Li Che, a transmigrator to another world, had spent nineteen years yearning for a life beyond the ordinary. Discontented with his mundane existence, he eventually reconciled with his fate, married, and started a family. However, his life took an extraordinary turn with the birth of his daughter. A series of miraculous events unfolded. Upon her birth, he was granted the Dao Fruit [Immortal Craft]. As she turned one, he received the Dao Fruit [Dragon Elephant Vajra]. With each passing year, he anticipated further divine gifts, each tied to her age and development.

Alex wake up in marvel were he got the power of creation which is one of the most powerful of the power are there

Nine-tailed fox is a popular Chinese mythical creature found in folklore. According to the tales passed down by generations, they have an exceptionally long lifespan. When male foxes reach the age of thirty, they have the ability to transform into human form, using this ability to attract women when visiting the mortal world. However, they have no good intentions. Using female mortals and later on making them their prey. In this case, a narcissistic mythical nine-tailed fox called Hu Xian. He is the prince of Huang Tian Heavenly Capital. He dated many female mortals upon attracting them and absorb their souls when they are asleep. He was sent to mortal world for thousands of years, by his mother as a punishment for taking unnecessary lives. The mythical fox then chanced upon, Xiao Qing, a mortal girl who lived in the mountainous area of Xuan Dong village. In his fox form, she picked him up during one night of the blue moon while he lay asleep on a stone. As days unfolded, they turn from enemies to lovers, transcending the boundaries that separated their world. However, Hu Xian’s mother, a powerful force in the Heavenly Capital, became aware of the connection between her son and Xiao Qing. She ought to employ cunning methods to hurt Xiao Qing. Due to Xiao Qing’s misery, a server from the Heavenly Capital suggested that the two seek help from the Gods of Ice, Water, and Fire, who reside in mystical places. Now, they must plan ways to find and gain the approval of these gods. The immortal and mortal realms come into a climactic struggle, testing the strength of their love and the resilience of their bond. How would their fate end up after all? *I have wattpad too, @/ dreamLand45 Character in this story is from, the Manhua, The Fox's Trap This is just a fan-fic by me :) Not affiliated with the Manhua!

Tsukiyomi Ray, an ordinary guy abandoned in his childhood, wakes up one day in a mysterious forest. He's not in his world anymore, and to top it off, he's transformed into a member of the Lunarian race. Ray tries to survive in the perilous forest, unaware of the danger lurking around him. But fate has something unexpected in store. Ray finds himself surrounded by a group of powerful and captivating women who are inexplicably drawn to him. As they form a harem, their bond grows stronger every day, filled with adventure, romance, and mischief. Together, Ray and his overpowered waifus explore the enchanting world they've been thrown into. They face thrilling battles against monstrous foes and unravel the secrets of their own existence. Their journey pushes them to their limits, testing their relationships and powers. Join Tsukiyomi Ray and his harem as they navigate a world brimming with magic, danger, and heartwarming moments. Experience their captivating daily lives and witness their bonds strengthen while uncovering the mysteries that surround them. It is a novel about the slow life of a guy named Ray and his OP waifus. [Note: Picture used in this novel is not mine. It belongs to it's rightful owner. Also, sorry for my bad writings, as I am bad at it. Also, please support this novel by voting it with Powerstone.]

"A fleeting dream, a golden age restored, A youthful heart, once weary and bored. Autumn's embrace, a nostalgic sigh, A glimpse of past, beneath the fading sky." Thrown back thirteen years into the past, Cheng Xing finds himself in the heart of autumn. Yearning to rectify the mistakes of his youth, he embarks on a journey to rekindle a lost connection and reclaim the time that slipped through his fingers. As he navigates the familiar landscape of his teenage years, he soon discovers that the past is not easy to rewrite.

Novels brought Gray where he wouldn’t have gone with a gun. Bad Neighborhood? Worse... Transmigration! But that's not all. The Region’s all-powerful Duke wants him dead, his current body/soul are utterly crippled, and his backing is non-existent. He's in for a LOT of trouble! But amidst an existential crisis, opportunity arises… [Unlocked Library of Heavens Souls!] Watch Gray become the wind of change he was always meant to be! Teach as a cover? Sure! Uncover his lost past? Why not? Grow Stronger? That’s a given! Mistakenly Crush Countless Worlds? YES!… Wait, what?! ━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━ Initial concept inspired by LoHP 'cause I felt nostalgic. As for where this will all go... May the gods have mercy on my poor readers' souls! Update Schedule: Every Day! (Blame Raj) Discord: https://discord.gg/wQ54ABEF3M *PS: Yes, it's called Waifu Party: LoHS ^_^v

Greg a normal student living in a apartment gets transported into the manhua he's reading it's full of war with magic and sorcery but might be Greg gets something from our world involved

#ACTION #MANHUA #ADVENRURE Câu truyện theo chân Lâm Phong, một người sở hữu huyết mạch Man Hoang Thần Tộc.

“H-Haru.... please... go...” In the midst of the sudden and ongoing Apocalypse, which had turned their lives into a complete hell, Haru embraced his loved one amidst the sadness and despair, watching helplessly as her bitten neck turned black. The person who meant the world to him was turning into a zombie, and he felt helpless to save her. “Why... Why... Why...” Tears fell as he held her tight, not wanting to let go. He was afraid, not of death or turning into something else, but afraid of losing her once more. Yet, amongst tears and desperation, a bit of unexpected hope appeared out for Haru. [Ting! Ting! Ting!] [Sorry for the wait. System has now finally initialized!!] [Assigning a designated Class suited for the User!!] [3] [2] [1] [Congratulations! You acquired the EX Class – Zombie’s Husbando!!] [First Quest – Choose a Zombie to be your Waifu!] #################### Author's Note:- Volume 1 (The Awakening): Completed Volume 2 (The little girl & Nightmare): Completed Volume 3: Ongoing Sorry for any irregular updates.

Generic Chinese manhua with a not so generic op mc. Ren a shy middle schooler from Japan after reincarnates in a mordern china with hidden cultivators. For more context just read it P.S:- English is my third language and this is my first book so please don't be too harsh with the criticism