Breath Of The Wild Critique

Nova scrambled backwards, panting hard, her short locks clinging to her damp forehead as she watched this predator stalk towards her. The vibrant and lively forest hushed, almost holding its breath to watch the scene unfold. Great, she had an audience for what would surely be a gruesome death. Death looked... a little... rugged and in nothing but a loin cloth, defined by slabs of muscle, a trail of hair leading down to such a small piece of cloth to hide a large- A spine-chilling growl snapped her gaze back up to meet his golden-red eyes, fiery, and intense, glaring at Nova as he slammed his hands either side of her head. Pieces of bark crumbled down from the impact. "I told you not to run..." He threatened, his eyes piercing hers, his voice more guttural than she'd heard from any male. His eyes clenched shut as his body trembled. "My instinct is to always stalk, always chase... until I get what I want.." Their faces were inches apart. She could feel his hot breath fanning her face. The forest was humid and hot, and his body was so close to hers that it was almost unbearable. The gruff voice, those words and the intensity of those eyes that reminded her of sunsets caused goosebumps to flourish across her arms. "What do you want?" Nova swallowed, not recognising her voice. She was so out of her depth. His chest rumbled, and more bark crumbled down from behind her head. "You..." Her breath hitched. "To. Do. As. You're. Told." - Paradise was what Nova Winslow was promised when her boyfriend whisked her away to Isla De Tayun, the perfect getaway for their busy lives. It was untouched, pristine, a hidden gem. But it had remained that way for a reason. The island doesn’t want visitors. And neither do the natives. What should have been a romantic retreat, drinking from coconuts and lounging on white-sandy beaches together, turns into a holiday from hell. Mid-argument with her soon-to-be ex, Nova stumbles into a lake. When she resurfaces, her boyfriend, the path she came from, and the resort have vanished. Alone, stranded, and with little survival skills, Nova has only a wet phone with no signal, a pair of heels, and an irrational fear of bats—which are everywhere. She is out of her depth when she falls into a mystical world of beasts. Hunted by tribesmen, stalked by beasts that shouldn't exist, and hearing animals speak, she has no choice but to trust the wild beast the forest itself fears—Yoa, a wanted man. Together, they flee the tribes pursuing them all while battling her growing attraction to Yoa. Can she survive the wild and make it back to her civilised life? Or will she lose herself to the untamed world—and to the man who belongs to it? #Beast #Ssssteamy #Adventure #Mythical #R18 -- THERE WILL BE MATURE CONTENT!! -- If you are enjoying the story, please vote with a power stone, leave comments and review! -- Cover Image: In the middle of getting one commissioned. My Instagram: @kelly_starrz My new discord server: https://discord.gg/MHMdRRqUYa

[DING! Welcome, Heir of Nature's Tao! Nature System Activated!] [New body configuration... complete. New location: Traditional Cultivation World.] [Features unlocked: Speak with living beings, control elements, enhancement through harmony.] "Huh?! System?!" Chen Xuwu tried to shout, but his voice only echoed in his head, without a throat to produce sound. This was strange, very strange. [Hint: Don't panic. This is not your usual isekai cheat. This is... NATURE.]

Ami died alone in a cold hospital room--hooked to wires, her body weak, her heart shattered. Betrayed by the people she trusted most. Her parents sold her. Her siblings erased her. Her husband handed her over like she meant nothing. And her best friend smiled while stabbing her from behind. As Ami took her final breath, she made a wish- “Give me another chance… and I’ll destroy them all.” The world listened. Now, Ami wakes up ten years earlier-in her 18-year-old body. This time, she won’t be soft. She won’t be fooled. With all her memories intact, Ami is ready to play a new game---one where she controls the board. Revenge? That’s the only thing on her list. The girl they buried is gone. This is the rise of the new Ami.

Nachdem er jahrelang in einer Nervenheilanstalt eingesperrt war, wurde Jin Jiuchi gerade wieder in die menschliche Umgebung entlassen, als er sich plötzlich in einem gefährlichen und spannenden Überlebensspiel wiederfand. Moment mal, stimmt mit euch allen etwas nicht? Warum seht ihr so verängstigt aus? Diese Welt ist so... aufregend! Für Jin Jiuchi, diese Bestie in Menschenkleidung, die durch die Gesetze der Gesellschaft in Ketten gelegt war, kam das Erscheinen des Albtraumzyklus einem wahr gewordenen Traum gleich! Tee trinken mit einer zerstückelten Braut in einer Spukwohnung, Tango tanzen mit einem bösen Geist in den Tiefen des Selbstmordwaldes, Seilspringen mit einem alten Gott in einer vergessenen Zivilisation... Jin Jiuchi war so glücklich, dass er fast verrückt wurde! Doch als er verrückt wurde, zitterten alle Spieler und NSCs im Zyklus vor Angst. *** Nur eine schöne Jadepuppe hatte noch nie Angst vor ihm gehabt. Shen Nianzu rief leise: "Jin-ge." Jin Jiuchi, der fröhlich im Magen einer verrotteten Leiche wühlte, ließ plötzlich alles stehen und liegen und sauste mit einer für das bloße Auge unsichtbaren Geschwindigkeit auf Shen Nianzu zu. Seine Augen waren zu Halbmonden gekrümmt, als er fragte: "Was ist los, Nian'er? Willst du dich mir auch anschließen?" Shen Nianzu starrte ausdruckslos auf den blutigen Mann vor ihm. Dann streckte er plötzlich eine Hand aus, die Handfläche nach oben. Verwirrt legte Jin Jiuchi seine schmutzige Pfote in Shen Nianzus Hand und schüttelte sie. Shen Nianzu: "Guter Junge." Jin Jiuchi: ? *** Lunatic drama king, wild beast gong x big beauty, cunning, strong-acting-weak shou Zusätzliche Tags: top/gong/seme Protagonist, Action, übernatürlich, psychologisch, Mystery, langsame Romanze, Geister, Gore, Monster, Bestien, schamloser Protagonist, Überlebensspiel, Teamwork, unbegrenzter Fluss, Horror, Spannung, jüngeres Liebesinteresse Find me on: Instagram: delanasiwarka Diskord: delanasiwarka#1490 Discord-Server: bit.ly/delanadiscord

Nach ihrer Wiedergeburt wird sie zu dem bemitleidenswerten Mädchen, das von ihren leiblichen älteren Brüdern in eine psychiatrische Klinik eingewiesen wird. Ihre leiblichen älteren Brüder verwöhnen nur die falsche junge Dame, die bei der Geburt vertauschte 'jüngere Schwester'. Sie verachtet sie in jeder möglichen Weise. Also macht Pei Yunge Ärger und konfrontiert die falsche junge Dame, wartend darauf, dass sie ihr sagen, sie solle verschwinden. Die Haltung der Brüder ist jedoch äußerst seltsam. Präsident Qin höhnt: "Meine jüngere Schwester hat einen Laden zerstört? Kauft das ganze Einkaufszentrum für meine jüngere Schwester zum Zerstören!" Bester Schauspieler Qin hebt eine Augenbraue: "Sie hat sich selbst zum Casting-Couch geschickt? Was bin ich dann, tot?" Gott Qins Ausdruck ist düster: "Du hast wiederholt Tricks gespielt und Ge'er schikaniert. Dachtest du, ich wäre blind?" Pei Yunge: "?" #Auch Abschaum-Brüder haben Tage, an denen sie abnormal sind# Nach der Rückkehr vor acht Jahren, bevor die Qin Familie bankrott geht, kümmern sich die Brüder nur um ihre leibliche jüngere Schwester, die wegen ihnen so schrecklich starb. Was macht es schon, wenn sie talentlos und dumm ist? Sie bleibt ihr Ein und Alles, das sie schwören zu beschützen und zu lieben! Gerade als die Brüder entschlossene Schritte unternehmen und Pei Yunge finden... "Meine Yunyun hat wieder den ersten Platz bei der Weltmeisterschaft erreicht. Was für ein braves Mädchen." Der kultivierte und würdevolle Mann lächelt charmant. Nachdem ihre wahre Identität aufgedeckt wird, kocht sie vor Wut. Sie packt den Mann und beißt ihn. "Denk nicht einmal daran, mich nach Hause zu locken." Die drei leiblichen Brüder: "?" #Was ist das für eine seltsame Entwicklung und wilder Mann# [Von allen verwöhnt + Identitätsenthüllung] [Ein extrem cooler und schlauer Chef und ein Präsident im Schafspelz]

The Goddess Doctor Bai Qingzhu met Royal City's richest man, Xiao Lijin, again, and from then on, she was entangled by him. To her surprise, he was even her daughter's daddy! Who could tell her what exactly had happened back then? And how did he get into her room? Five years later, she was actually lured into the Civil Affairs Bureau by this man... Oops~ Even a Goddess Doctor could have an off day, but luckily, this man wasn't bad. A mix-up led her to be spoiled by him, and he was quite attractive too, so she decided to keep him!

With clairvoyant eyes, the King of the Night, Ye Tian, secretly entered the bustling city!!!

To repay his debt of gratitude and survive, Ryan Fletcher—the direct descendant of the most prominent family—has kept his real identity a secret and become the live-in-son-in-law that everyone despises. But once the family’s ban is lifted, he is back on the Fletchers‘ heir race. "You want to make me a cuckold?" SLAP! "You try to set me up?" SLAP! "You want to fire me?" SLAP! "You want to steal my wife's company?" SLAP! Who says that a live-in-son-in-law must be a loser? I, Ryan Fletcher, never chicken out! Please enjoy every face-slapping moment at the courtesy of Mr. Fletcher.

Disclaimer: R18 - Smut - Reverse Harem I am no one, living alone in a world where humans mean nothing to werewolves. But everything changes the moment I become part of the Annual Purge. That night, I fight for my life. But I never expected to be claimed by not just one, but three werewolves. They say I’m bound to them by the will of the Moon Goddess. That my fate is now tied to theirs. Forever. “Whether you want it or not, you’re ours now, just as we are yours…” Can I really survive in this world? Can I truly tame my wild mates? I don’t think I can. So, dear God, Universe, Moon Goddess… Please, save me.

In a world that refuses to understand him, a lonely and tormented student reaches his breaking point. Surrounded by mockery, cold teachers, and relentless isolation, he struggles to make his presence known in a world that sees him as nothing more than a "freak." Despite his efforts to change, every step forward is met with rejection and ridicule.

[Warning:- Mature Content/Mpreg/detailed Omegaverse! ] In the heart of Italy’s underworld, the Romano name was law. Alessio Romano—an enigma cloaked in tailored suits and blood-soaked silence—built his empire on fear, loyalty, and a ruthless absence of love. To him, emotions were weaknesses. Power was everything. But even kings aren't free. To seal an old alliance and satisfy his family’s demands, Alessio is forced to take a mate. Even tho he's straight he found an omega boy. A formality. A body. Someone young, untouched, and pliable. Easy to control. A boy. Noah. eighteen. Auctioned like property in an underground brothel. No past, no future—just soft eyes that refused to break, even under the gaze of monsters. Alessio didn’t choose him out of mercy. He chose him because he didn’t cower. Because something in those defiant glances stirred a hunger Alessio refuses to name. And so, they married. Not with flowers or vows. But with contracts—and handcuffs.

Ranma di reinkarnasi ke dunia crossover anime sebagai Kamijou Touma, bagaimana nasib Ranma yang sebelumnya penuh dengan kekacauan menjadi jauh lebih kacau di dunia yang baru? Tokoh dari banyak anime lain juga akan muncul di novel ini!

But will he succeed… Can Vikram truly stop these twisted demons—creatures who slaughter humans by making their intestines explode from within, all by simply shoving cursed feathers into their ass ? From the divine mind of Brahma, the god of creation, came not only beauty and order—but also the flaws of existence. One such flaw was born from his back, not his heart or mind—a symbol of neglect. That flaw took form as Adharma, the embodiment of impropriety. Adharma married Mithya, the goddess of falsehood, who twists truth and clouds clarity. From their union came Dambha (Vanity), representing arrogance born from lies, and Maya (Illusion), his sister and future wife, who wraps the world in deception. Dambha and Maya gave birth to Krodha (Anger)—the violent force of pride and frustration. He, too, married his sister, Himsa (Violence)—a being that thrives on pain and destruction. From them was born Kali—not a god, but a force destined to rule the final age due to his bloodline connection to Brahma. Thus began Kali Yuga, an era fated to last 432,000 years—a time where neither gods nor demons are allowed to intervene in the human realm. But one demon rebelled—Rudra. Seeking to overthrow Kali, he unleashed chaos on the human world, shattering the divine balance and leaking celestial power into the mortal realm. As humans unknowingly begin to awaken to these powers, the order of the universe teeters on collapse. To stop this spiral, the gods choose a protector for Earth: Vikram. His destiny is not to conquer, but to restore balance—to walk the line between gods, demons, and mankind… and maintain cosmic order.

Upon becoming an undead mage, Gu Xi discovered he had encountered a small problem. What was with being knocked out and thrown into a cell? To avoid becoming the first useless player to die before completing his job, Gu Xi decided to save himself! As a result, a future powerhouse known as the Breath of the Undead embarked on his legendary journey

Just give a try. Growing up surrounded by poison and silence, Ithariel never wanted much from life. A small house. A motionless mother. A world ruled by serpents that turned the air itself into death. Survival was a miracle. Hope was a lie. Gifted—or cursed—with a strange immunity and a voice that speaks from deep within, he is forced into a path of training, pain, and unnatural power. In a world where monsters rule and humanity breaks to survive, Ithariel begins to change. Not into a hero. Into something else. Because to kill the serpents… he’ll have to become worse than them.

Before breath. Before name. Before flesh. In the primordial sea where consciousness stirs before birth, two unborn souls drift through a dreamscape of forgotten gods, ancient truths, and shapeless teachings. Hector and Victoria are not yet children. Not yet anything. But in this realm outside of time, they awaken — and learn. Guided by beings long erased from memory, they explore a world woven from thought itself — the Web of Consciousness, where every being’s magic is born and defined. From gods of grief and forgotten desire to elemental truths etched into silence, each encounter grants Hector and Victoria power, wisdom, and mystery. They are not told who they will become — only that the thread they weave is different. But they are not alone. Far across the mortal world, an empress makes a pact with an angel, bearing a child shaped by divine law. In the decaying lands of demons, a king’s hatred invites an angel of rebellion to bear another child, one destined for destruction. And in secret, two archangels violate sacred edict and conceive a third soul — a child born of balance, to stand between salvation and ruin. This child is Hector. As Hector and Victoria grow closer in the formless void, sharing dreams, pain, and a haunting hum they vow never to forget, their bond deepens. But their birth into the physical world looms, and with it, the unraveling of everything they’ve come to understand. Three children. Three origins. One world that cannot hold them all.

-Originally posted on Royal Road under the same title and name- In a world that has been destroyed by the influence of monsters known as 'Sins' and ancient, forgotten wars, the land itself is scarred. Wastelands that seem endless cover areas of the map. When found in one of the most notorious wastelands, known as the 'Gale' by a group of adventurers, Aien Wisp finally sees the land outside of the lonely desert where he comes to realise the importance of his last name and status as a 'Wisp', spirits that are directly connected to nature itself as he continues to survive out in the lawless wilderness of the world as he knows it. Being haunted by instincts that he doesn't understand and connection to the rest of his kind, he comes to learn why Wisps are feared and comes to understand the responsibilities he carries being known as a force of nature himself. But his connection to the wind causes him to strive for his own freedom as he learns to navigate the world where even the so called 'Holy' hide monsters within their ranks.

Ava thought her life was over, but surprise! Waking up, she wasn't in the afterlife. Instead, she found herself in a bizarre new world, Ava's life took a wild turn! Not only was the world completely different from what she knew, but had possessed a beast womans body– Inheriting the original Ava's memories, she uncovers a chilling truth: her demise was no accident. Now, with the memories of the previous Ava swirling in her head, she's got to figure out how to survive in this world full of beastmen and hidden dangers. Her ultimate goal? To survive, adapt, and create a life worth living in this perilous yet captivating new world. Join Ava as she claws her way through this wild new life, seeking safety and a future in a world she never imagined.

Nolan Vale is a psychiatrist at an isolated mental facility — cold hallways, quiet patients, and secrets that never sleep. Then a new patient arrives. No name. No history. Just one request: He’ll only speak to Nolan. Varek Straven is calm. Too calm. Like he’s waiting for something... or someone. And when he says "I know you," Nolan doesn’t understand. Not yet. But some promises don’t die. And some obsessions never stay buried.

History speaks of a famous Genius... a genius who at the start, no adult whished for their child to emanate. GORT FAIRBANG. That's the name. He was the son of the current village chief, the son who won awards and even headed out to prestigious schools in a grand manner. But one day, a few screws came loose in his head, and he decided to return to the poverty stricken village, throwing away his good cards for the live of nothingness! Crazy! Crazy! He must be insane, many concluded. But what they didn't know, was that this one-in-a-million-year genius, had returned with one sole mission in mind. And that was to SAVE HUMANITY!

Welcome in this world one shall awaken mutative gens which are actually just legacies of divinity woven into humanity the world is shaped by history and wars and there are many races and possibilities and paths. And in this world we shall meet many people some are antiheroes some are murderers pretending to be heroes some are innocently murdered and some are terrifyingly strong. In this story you shall follow the lives of many people in this world their struggles their thoughts their hope and their never stopping flames of courage. You shall meet many peoples lives and choose your favorite and see what they shall do in the final tournaments and other events. Don’t forget power is gained and not blessed. And follow your favorite characters in this adventure in their pursuit of fame, perfection, imagery, hierarchy, legalism and finding their through nature and embodiment. We shall meet serious wars and great events with as foundation the social contacts between characters. Which gen-user is your hero, who do you believe and when do they collide?… =+=+A Must Read To Share With Your Friends+=+=

The story follows about a prince who does what it takes to keep a promise to his mother. See how he fulfills his promise

Lucinda Perry, a social recluse and a workaholic, makes a pledge to herself to go all wild on her twenty-fifth birthday and even score a one night stand if she gets her long deserved promotion at work. Few days to her twenty-fifth birthday, she gets promoted to not just a higher position but to the head office in a different city. Having to spend her birthday night in a new city, she goes to the club where she meets a very handsome stranger, Thomas Hank, who offers to be her one night stand after catching a glimpse of her dare-to-do list, which included having a one night stand. Thomas Hank, after having been used by several ladies in the past, is bent on getting the lady of his dreams who would love him for himself and not his wealth. So when he meets the cute and naive Lucinda Perry at the club, he decides to keep his true identity from her and find out if she was worth keeping. ***Excerpt*** What is more entertaining than a crazy side character? Say hello to Sonia and Bryan. Sonia's heart stopped beating for a second, and then different thoughts started flying right through her head at that same time. Bryan Hank? Her celebrity crush was kneeling right in front of her and asking her to be his wife? Was he mistaking her for someone? Was it possible this was a skit, or maybe this was like one of those celebrity pranks, and there were cameras around, waiting to capture her make a fool of herself? Or perhaps she was dreaming? Sonia wondered as she looked around them, but all she saw were curious onlookers. "Please! Be my wife and make me the happiest man on Earth," He said in a very loud voice that caught the attention of everyone. Her editor who she had been waiting on for over an hour because he was trying to sign a deal with a movie producer who was interested in one of her stories, showed up at that moment, "Sonia, you know Bryan Hank?" Her editor asked in genuine surprise as he watched the scene before him. It seemed like an hour had passed since Bryan went on his knees, but it had only been a minute. Bryan knew no lady would be crazy enough to accept such a crazy proposal, and even if any were, paying her off and calling off the whole thing would be easy since all he wanted was the scandal that could come from this. The headlines were either going to be about his rejected Marriage proposal or his supposed engagement, which would be enough to let Sophia off the hook. "Yes!" Sonia said as she bobbed her head excitedly and extended her finger for him to wear her the ring. "Yes?" Bryan asked in confusion when he heard her response. "Yes! I will be your wife and make you the happiest man in the world!" Sonia said with a giggle and wiggled her fingers until Bryan slid the ring down her finger. Surprisingly the ring was her exact size, and it sat on her finger like it was made just for her. The sound of applause erupted all around them as Sonia stood up with a big smile on her face and embraced Bryan before kissing him right on the lips. Bryan was slightly taken aback by her boldness but quickly recovered since this was his game, and he had to play along. He was the one who had approached her first, after all. So when she tried to break the kiss, he held her chin and slowly nibbled on her lower lip before parting her lips with his tongue and sucked on it in a teasing manner, eliciting a moan from Sonia. Sonia felt light-headed. This was too good to be true. It just had to be a dream. How else could she explain that one moment she was seated at the lobby of a hotel waiting for her editor, and the next she was engaged to her celebrity crush and was kissing him right here in the open? (PS: Photo belongs to me. Art by @imagineTishaD)

Matías Castleboard was humanity's last shield. A soldier. A hero. A killer. He died bringing peace... but found no rest. Reincarnated as Kael Lanpar, heir to the most powerful clan on the continent of Mayora, he now lives in a world of ancient magic, forgotten races, and gods who play with the threads of existence. However, his past has not disappeared. The scars of his former life bleed into this one, and with each memory that emerges, Kael sinks deeper into a dilemma that few could bear: Can a second life offer redemption... or only more condemnation? But there is something worse than trauma and war. Knowledge. Because the more Kael discovers about this world—and about himself—the more he understands that the truth does not set him free: it destroys him. And at the end of the road, what awaits him is not an enemy, but something even worse, something we all know but do not understand. A conscience. A truth that cannot be unlearned. A dark and introspective fantasy story about second chances, traumas that never die, and the price of knowing too much. Ideal for readers who seek more than battles: they seek meaning.

The story of an ordinary high school student, who lives his ordinary peaceful life. But his life was suddenly changed when he saw something in his school that he shouldn't have. One day, Legenn, the main character of this story, was being oppressed by the other students who is involved on in incident. While Legenn is being harassed, a transferee student, Lilian, suddenly rescued him in order to get Legenn's trust.

Imagine Poppy Playtime, but instead of focusing only the adventure on the factory, you discover the aftermath of the game, and all mascots survive. No evil CEO, scientists, and all corrupted and noncorrupted mascots lived. Now, imagine if they get a second chance to live a human life again with the one they lost. Imagine living as someone who you wasn't supposed to be. Then add the Boys kind of experiments inside of it. Yes, there's a superpower drug involved. Picture in case you need the idea of said character.

The king is dead. The capital burns. And the last heir to the throne is running for her life. In the forests of one of the five great states, a boy raised in solitude lives unaware of the world… until an arrow and a scream change his fate. He knows nothing of castles or bloodlines, but when he sees a girl chased by bandits, instinct forces him to act. Unwittingly, he becomes the guardian of a secret that could alter the future of Argenmaris. And with it… an enemy to all who seek power. A tale of war, survival, and loyalty. When the king falls... the true battle begins.