Archetypal Criticism

Léonard Dumont, a 16-year-old French teenager and geek of the SCP Foundation's myths, one day receives a notification on his computer from the SCP Foundation Management System. His duty is to build the SCP Foundation has The Administrator of the Foundation. This story is a mix of several canons of the Foundation. Mix everything with our own real world to add a weight of realism to all this. This is my very first story, I hope you will enjoy it and I am open to all criticism and comments.

Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

Two teenagers experienced a chance encounter and after that they became basically inseparable. Unfortunately they are faced with critical circumstances that might split them a part. Is their bond strong enough to overcome these circumstances or will they go their separate ways?

Bumping into a stranger while looking for shelter while raining, Avery was about to scold the stranger but got tongue tied in seeing the handsome face . Follow the story of Avery and the millionaire playboy Alex Gibson who is also a mafia lord #Forced marriage # Betrayal # Funny # Bloody Note We're here to read not to criticize, also mature content and bloody

A soldier perishes on the battlefield under mysterious circumstances. She thought it was the end—until she opens her eyes again, only to find herself surrounded by unfamiliar faces. But that's not all; somehow, she's now a baby—and not even a human one! What is going on? Now, she must move forward, leaving her bloody past behind and embracing this second chance at a peaceful life. However, things won’t be that simple. . . . This is my first time writing, and I’m very open to criticism—just please be gentle. English is not my first language, so keep that in mind!

"Let's see what my ability is.....huh!" [Ding...] [Congratulations!..You have acquired«Infinite Adaptation(SSS)»] [Congratulations!.. You have acquired«Telekinetic Control»] Anything that does not kill me makes me stronger. "If a dragon fires its breath on me I adapt" "If an unknown otherworldly entity attacks me, will I die" "Nah I'd adapt" [Congratulations! You have been chosen to climb the Tower of Trials] Hop on if you want to enjoy a long journey full of mysteries and adventures. ------ English is not my first language. If you find any mistake please point out. I am open to all criticism. Well... enjoy the read.

The Augmentation technology failed to save humanity, but its power still rages through Andy’s veins. Wielding his affinity weapon with devastating power, Andy must synchronise his AI implant to unlock the potential of his Gunslinger archetype. But in order to progress, Andy must explore extreme apocalypse zones and conquer the dangers within. For a mercenary in an unforgiving wasteland, being a borderline psychopath has its perks–the only thing keeping him anchored to humanity is his sister, Clara. When the mercenary duo land a lucrative contract with a powerful chieftain, they are pushed to their extremes. Haunted by mutated abominations and the demonic unknown, Andy and Clara must confront a terrifying truth: in this wasteland, some fates are worse than death. Priority Alert: DNA compromised. Mutation detected. Emergency protocol initiated. Shutting down…

A story about a normal high school student who sacrificed his own life to save his friends in a critical moment reincarnating to the world of Sardonia. Instead reincarnating into a hero... he became a ball of light? This is my first ever novel. Hope you enjoy.

Arthur is a mercenary on a quest to learn magic. Once a blacksmith’s apprentice, he left his comfortable life behind at fourteen to chase his dream of crafting enchanted weapons. With no noble blood or wealth, he turned to mercenary work, earning coin for the chance to study magic and uncover ancient relics. This is my first story. so sorry for any mistakes. I do plan to add romance later in the story when I feel more confident writing it. Constructive criticism please.

After criticizing a game, William, a game critic, is punished by the Goddess of Eternity, Aurora, and transforms into the young Princess Ayla within this universe. Waking up kidnapped by 7 Demon Lords, Ayla must endure their lust, but also uncover the dark secrets that inhabit the castle. Immortal and trapped in a cycle of desire and manipulation, each revelation takes her deeper into a maze of mysteries where the line between ally and enemy becomes increasingly blurred. What she discovers may be the key to her liberation—or her eternal damnation.

Generic Chinese manhua with a not so generic op mc. Ren a shy middle schooler from Japan after reincarnates in a mordern china with hidden cultivators. For more context just read it P.S:- English is my third language and this is my first book so please don't be too harsh with the criticism

Alvaro Cortez, a gifted young footballer from the humble suburb of Valle Sol, dreams of playing for Blanco Royal FC, one of the most prestigious football clubs in Europe. Growing up idolizing legends and training on dusty fields. 'GOAT: Against All Odds' is the journey of Alvaro the boy with dreams to becoming a famous footballer, One of the greatest. As Alvaro navigates the highs and lows of his ascent, he faces critical moments of failure, redemption, and growth. Along the way, he learns that greatness isn’t achieved alone—it requires the support of teammates, mentors, and an unwavering determination to overcome setbacks. This is a story of ambition, resilience, and self-discovery, chronicling Alvaro Cortez’s journey from a small-town dreamer to a rising star in the world of football. Set against the backdrop of intense rivalries, personal sacrifices, and the relentless pursuit of excellence, it’s a tale of what it takes to rise to the top and stay there. ------ The story would sometimes be fast paced or slow according to the situations. System = check ✅ Critical Injury = check ✅ ( nb : predictable,i mean don't we have a system to introduce) Romance = check ✅ ----- So the system part of the story wouldn't start until quit some time.You know, I don't want anyone to criticize my guy saying he can't do sh*t without system so.And the clubs and players are inspired from irl and i won't use the real names or anything,Cause I don't want any complications later(IYKYk). -----

Criticism is very much appreciated don’t worry about my feelings being hurt. Synopsis: Humans are hunting the monsters of the other world for far too long it’s time for the revolt humans are gonna die at the hand of their own kind..

This story is about a boy who overthinks life and is not quite sure how to face it. All this while attending the prestigious high school Stone bridge, which trains up and coming businessmen and businesswomen. All the students try to wriggle themselves into each minds and use psychological means to win negotiations. Our mc tries to top in this school, all the while trying to lead a normal high school life while keeping the fact he’s a major corporate entity a secret. Do not worry about the character being edgy he will mature over time. P.S: It is my first work, therefore constructive criticism is encouraged.

this is a test mostly for criticism this is our first time trying to make a book help us please and thank you

Let there be light, and there was light; this marked the beginning of the universe and led to the emergence of the first humans and the first murder. Join Cain and Aiden as they stop supernatural threats that seek to destroy humanity. If you’re interested in the supernatural genre, this story is for you. I’ll be posting two chapters a week, although the schedule may change. I welcome constructive criticism and suggestions! I just want to state this before it comes to bite me in the back later. This world is similar to earth but not earth, it has almost the same history as earth, so just take it as a different dimension.

In this story, our protagonist finds himself transmigrated into his favorite game, a world filled with magic and demonic beasts. To secure a peaceful life in this new world—where strength equates to power—he must leverage his knowledge of the game to grow stronger and overcome the challenges that come his way. I appreciate any constructive criticism you may have. You can expect to see improvements as the story unfolds if you think it is. Release schedule: 5 chapters per week.

Born into the royal family, Clove is the sole heir to the Aelaoria Empire. However, his frail nature makes him an unlikely candidate in the eyes of the nobles to become the next ruler. Under the watchful eyes of his uncle and the critical nobility, Clove is determined to overcome his weaknesses and transform into a respected, honorable king, like his father once was.

This is a story about a girl who dislikes the life she's living in, so she decides to run away. While in the run she finds a new friend. Along the way a tragedy occurs and they suddenly find themselves unfamiliar. They adjust to life and end up living together peacefully... Or do they? I do not own the image for the cover. I'm also new to writing so I will accept constructive criticism, but if you are just going to be negative the entire time, please leave and don't ruin the experience for others. Thanks!!

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

this is a story about a the lone hero named Aaron storm Watch as he goes on a journey through the mha universe has he built bones, relationships and alliances note this is my first writing I am willing to take any sort of criticism in order to get better so please bear with me on this one.

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Living in an illusion Damon despised the protagonist of the novels, his way of thinking and the way he wastes his potential only to find his reality collapsing waking up to the real world where he actually is the protagonist of the novels he despised possessing overpowered cheats. Knowing a bit of the future and the power of Super Adaptation, watch as how Damon made his way to the top becoming an overpowered being with his selfish character. *** OP Chaotic Neutral MC Loner MC No Harem Note: This is an extremely laid-back novel written purely for fun. Criticism isn't welcomed; only praises will be appreciated. Just dive in and enjoy the ride!

Renji Kenjaki–a basketball addict that has the archetypes of 6 roles. Primarily, Aerial, Defender, Playmaker, Slasher, Shot creator, and Spot on Shooter. There were born with 3 archetypes but there was only one that has 6. And that was him. Until he got an accident that made him crippled and half of his bottom became paralyzed. With it, he was depressed and took time to recover. Though even with it all, he still coped up and researched about training regimens and coaching as he become old. Training the next generation as an expert. And when he got old, he retired early and got another accident. Making him go back to the past where he could still run and walk. With the second chance given, he would not take it for granted, they will learn how to fear the all-rounder genius-copycat!

Jun, a boy of unrevealed origin, suddenly found himself lost in a world similar yet different to his own while on his way back to pick up his luggage. For reasons unknown, he has become an extra in a grand-scale story. That is, without him knowing that fact himself. However, unhindered by the unfamiliar world, Jun continued onward to the Academy without a care. What will he encounter? Who knows! Things to beware: - Rare (?) concept for this archetype - I have bad writing and the writing is in 3rd POV - Enjoy the story if you can. - If you find my name familiar, you might have come upon my chapter comments on other stories. - No solid schedule, as writing is my whims - Any pacing issues, plot holes, bad characterisation,…can be attributed to all of the above. —————————————————— [Nonetheless, whether you came out of this hating it, non-interested or liking it, BIG THANKS for taking out some time of your day to read it. Even if it’s barely 1 chapter, even if it’s all the chapter. I’m but a slothful guy trying to write a story, after all.] I don’t really own the cover. If there’s any problem, contact me with the details below. Email: renkanzaki789@gmail.com

This is just a story about the MC climbing a technological tree in a fantasy world. Am new to this writing field I might make some mistakes, criticism and corrections are welcome.

A world full of challenges and dangers. A world where weakness is an inevitable fate. Humans have to become stronger to achieve their dreams. In this cruel world, Akai Sora, a failed young man, began his journey towards greatness. After falling into a mysterious cave, he finds the legacy of an immortal farmer. With a mysterious ring, a world of power and knowledge opens before him. Akai begins to hone his skills, defying obstacles and enemies، Determined to change his destiny and ascend towards the stars، To prove that failure is not the end of the road, but the beginning of a new Legend. ------ Beginner novelist, if you have any criticism or advice write it in the review.

"Catch me, Agent." the man said before jumping out of the window. She ran fast to catch up with the man who jumped from the window but no matter how fast she ran she didn't catch up with it and was even more annoyed when she saw the man smiling at her as he fell and landed smoothly on the ground. "Ughh, that fucking mafia boss." ___ "Wanna play with me, agent?" "Hide and seek?" "Sure. find me, agent."

**DISCONTINUED** After years of pouring his heart and soul into his fantasy novel, a frustrated author faces the backlash of disappointed readers. Struggling with harsh criticisms and a sense of failure, he finds himself in a shocking accident that transports him into the very world he created—only to discover he’s not the hero but a mere extra in his own story.

This is a work in progress and is more of a honby then anything not planning on doing this work for anyone enjoyment other then my own so please no criticisms unless constructive. After the death of his Grandfarther Adam returns to his family home where he meets with his farther mother and 8 siblings who try to hide their involvement in the dark underground.