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Shatter the Bad Ending!

[Restore The Crown] This was the novel that I was tasked to review as a contestant for our yearly webnovel event and as someone who had to probably read hundreds of novels by now. It was utter garbage, it was full of overdone tropes and cliches that you could have seen from a mile away. A bland and mary sue protagonist ✓ A list of heroines who fall in love and become obsessed with the protagonist instantly ✓ A myriad of villains who have no other personality other than to hate and try to kill the protagonist ✓ They were all there. Except for the surprisingly catchy title, there was no other positive thing about this novel. But was pissed me off the most was the ending. With no build-up and seemingly out of nowhere, most of the heroines were killed and the world that they lived in became hell on earth. It was literally revealed in a couple of chapters and was clearly done just to shock the readers. Honestly, I wish I could restore the time I wasted reading this novel. But as I said my criticism to the author. The f*cker shot me in the head! (I proofread my chapters by myself, sadly I am only human, so if you find any mistakes, kindly point them out and I will fix them as soon as possible) (This is my first attempt at writing novels, to those who keep on reading despite the occasional mistakes here and there, I thank you from the bottom of my heart and I will promise to be a better author, anyways have a nice day and please never build galeforce on twitch, if you do, you don't deserve 8 hours of sleep, that is all, thank you)
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Warning! Homophobic minggir !!! Cerita Dewasa 21++ Sienna, 23 tahun. Dia baru saja menyelesaikan pendidikannya dan menyandang gelar MBA di MIT, Amerika Serikat. Ponsel Sienna tiba tiba bergetar dan panggilan dari Steve, "Nona, Tuan Besar masuk ICU karena perusahaan akan bangkrut." Sienna segera bersembunyi dari adiknya, Jonathan agar dia tak mendengar pembicaraan antara Sienna dan Steve. "Aku akan segera pulang." Sienna langsung memesan tiket untuk kepulangan esok harinya. Meski adiknya sedih dia harus pergi. "Aku liburan kan mau ketemu kakak, tapi kakak malah meninggalkanku sendirian di sini." Sienna membujuknya dan mengatakan bahwa dia paling lama hanya 2 minggu di jakarta. Dia pulang. Sienna melihat Kakeknya membujur kaku di ranjang rumah sakit. Ibunya pun tak sehat. "Bagaimana kalau Jonathan kesini?" Tanya Sienna pada ibunya. "Itu bagus." Ada riak bahagia di wajah ibu. Jonathan pun tiba. ** "Hiks, Hikss, Kak Ibu kak, Ibu jangan tinggalkan Jonathan." Jonathan berteriak histeris, Sienna memeluk ibunya yang berdarah. ** "Apa-apaan berita sialan ini?" Sienna melihat berita di internet bahwa dia bertunangan dengan Dave Mckill. "Tidak boleh dengan Dave Mckill. Dia adalah penggila sex." ** "Kawin Kontrak?" Sienna akhirnya tidak bisa memilih jalan lain. Perusahaan hampir bangkrut dan hanya Dave yang bisa membantunya. Masalah Sienna tidak kunjung usai, semakin menikah dengan Dave masalah malah semakin banyak. Konflik semakin besar dan Sienna masih harus kehilangan tiap orang yang dia cintai. ** "Sienna aku sangat menyesal dengan semua yang aku lakukan, aku mohon kembalilah padaku." Pria di depan Sienna berlutut tapi Sienna tak bergeming. Hatinya terlalu sakit, lukanya terlalu besar, dan tidak bisa di obati. Sienna meninggalkan pria itu yang masih berlutut di jalan. Hujan turun dengan deras sama seperti air mata pemuda itu yang tak pernah menangis seperti itu sebelumnya. Cover : Free License From unsplash + edited by canva
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