Dark Phoenix Gets Her Powers

Kane, a former special forces operative turned mercenary, lives a solitary life in the shadows of a violent world. Haunted by the ghosts of his fallen comrades, he has traded his humanity for survival, taking on high-risk jobs for those who can afford his lethal protection. His latest mission—a quick and efficient rescue of a cartel boss’s children—leaves him questioning his own desensitization to violence and the meaning of his work. When Evelyn Bennett, a visionary tech entrepreneur whose groundbreaking educational program threatens powerful adversaries, seeks Kane’s help, he finds himself drawn into a mission that feels different. Evelyn's program has the potential to change the lives of impoverished children, but dark forces are determined to stop her. As Kane steps into the role of protector, he must confront the duality of his existence—torn between his cold, mercenary persona and the desire to fight for something worth protecting. The stakes are high, and the enemies ruthless. As the danger escalates, Kane must grapple with his own past and the question of whether he can still fight for a cause beyond personal gain, or if he is doomed to remain a weapon for hire. In a world where loyalty is rare and redemption harder to find, Kane’s final choice will determine not only his own fate but that of those he has sworn to protect.

Our story begins on a planet called Gieă in a Continent called 'Eclispe of the Oceans' where chaos slowly unfolds with its influence slowly spreading into the entire world. This is a paced story that follows multiple characters shaped ruthlessly by desires and passion. A young dragon princess thirsty for acknowledgement, A prisoner breaking free from fate, A shadow who would die for his master, A light without a source and a question without an answer. Some of these special individuals fight for power, some fight to destroy, some fight to save, some fight for freedom, some fight for love, some fight for vengeance and some fight from duty. They all bleed, some of them fall, some grow and some lose sight of their purpose while consciously or unconsciously trying to find one thing,.. Balance. In a world riddled by chaos where 'good people and bad people' have been replaced by the terms 'winners or losers', where greed determines justice and vanity replaces passion, where energies conflicts, wars emerge and ruthlessness gets imprinted by experience into the hearts of even the most innocent and brave heroes. They stand for their desire and themselves with a riddle left unanswered from the very beginning of time,.. "What truly is balance?.." Follow our main characters through their dramatic struggles for answers as the choices they make influences themselves and their world. THIS IS A SLOW-PACED STORY AND THERE WOULDN'T BE LOTS OF ACTION SCENES AT THE BEGINNING BUT AS TIME PROGRESSES, SCENES LIKE THIS WOULD BE MORE COMMON. TRUST ME, THIS IS A STORY WORTH THE INVESTMENT OF READING!.

This is story of Arin, who was transmigrated from his dying world to a strange world which was also destined to death and destruction, until Arin stepped in. This is his journey from being a simple Necromancer who had immense hate for humanity, to becoming a Dark Lord who would rein supreme and save the very Humanity he once abhorred.

Li Xueyan was supposed to be dead. Once a martial artist from the modern world, she wakes up in the body of a young woman from the fallen Li Clan. The Li Clan was destroyed because of false charges of treason, and Xueyan’s original body was betrayed, poisoned, and left to die. Before the original Li Xueyan’s soul fades completely, it passes on her hatred and desire for revenge. Now, reborn, Xueyan vows to regain her strength and take down those who destroyed her family. But the world she’s in is full of powerful martial arts sects, dangerous beasts, and ruthless royals. To survive, she must grow stronger and uncover the dark secrets of her past. Her path leads her to Prince Xiao Ren, the Emperor’s illegitimate son. Cold, calculating, and feared by many, Xiao Ren hides a shocking secret: he is the strongest martial artist alive, a truth known only to his loyal followers… and now, to Xueyan. As war threatens the land and dark forces begin to awaken, Xueyan and Xiao Ren’s fates become tangled. Together, they must fight against plots, ancient enemies, and a destiny they can’t escape. Will Xueyan rise from the ashes of her past like the Phoenix she’s meant to be? And will the hidden prince step into the light to claim his power? This is a story of revenge, power, and love. hey! guys it's my first time writing an web novel hope to get many support from readers and i really worked hard for learning English as i wanted to write an novels as my hobby so plz do support me!

In a world where elemental magic defines both power and identity, a fiery warrior woman, Emberlyn, is forced into a political marriage with the enigmatic and icy Frost King, Kael, to end a centuries-long war between their kingdoms. Their union is meant to symbolize peace, but their opposing powers—fire and ice—make their relationship volatile and fraught with tension. As they navigate their uneasy alliance, they uncover a darker threat that could destroy both their kingdoms, forcing them to confront their prejudices, fears, and growing feelings for one another.

Lin Beifan traveled through the world composed of countless urban web articles and became a villain. He has a wishing system and can make a wish every day. With the ability of the system and his own rude operations, he broke all the protagonists, and the world line was chaotic. So, Tiandao repeated the plot and cursed Lin Beifan. For whatever wish he made, the enemy would get double! Lin Beifan chuckled: “That’s it?” “I make a wish to keep my body temperature at 36.8 degrees!” The first protagonist’s brain burned to 73.6 degrees, died! “I make a wish to sleep 12 hours a day!” The 2nd protagonist becomes a vegetative person, die! “I make a wish that I will be crushed to death by a 120-pound beauty!” The third protagonist was crushed into a piece of paper by a 240-pound fat girl, pawn! Just like that, the plot is messed up again! For Access To Upto 100 Chapters Before Anyone Else, Visit — Patreon.com/itsyourstorypage

After a tragic accident, an ordinary young man awakens in a new world teeming with floating islands, supernatural abilities, and mysterious dangers. Reincarnated in a body he doesn’t recognize and granted a cryptic "system" that refuses to explain itself, he’s thrust into Vanguard Academy—a high school where only the most powerful and determined survive. With no clue why he’s been chosen or what the system wants from him, he must navigate a cutthroat world of rivalries, alliances, and mind-bending challenges. Armed with courage, wit, and untapped potential, he embarks on a journey to uncover the truth behind his reincarnation and the forces pulling the strings in this enigmatic universe. Can he rise above the chaos, or will he fall like countless others before him? Perfect for fans of Solo Leveling and The Beginning After The End, this story blends reincarnation, epic battles, and intricate worldbuilding into a gripping tale of survival and self-discovery.

So, let me get this straight, I die not knowing how, get reborn as a mythical bird, my parents are dragons and this levelling system is crap. If that isn't bad enough, I'm also terrified of flying. I'm never going to get used to this, am I? (Strong language) ---Slight summary of each volume--- Volume 1: Developing & growing up Volume 2: Romance & vengeance Volume 3: Home life & invasions Volume 4: Aftermath & exploration Volume 5: Soulmates & hunting Volume 6: Heavenly & ...

Superpowers, a mutation found within a fraction of the population. The emergence of advanced technology has come about from the research and application of these powers. Humans have used this technology to do the unthinkable. Colonising both the moon and mars. Superhumans are not all united, some misuse the power that they’ve been born with. And to combat that… Superheroes. Keepers of peace in superhuman matters, protecting from those that threaten the masses. Follow the story of Jon Bacardi as he aims to achieve it all!

Ein was a hitman on hire. A killer, a shadow, a death with insomnia, if you may. He had witnessed countless pairs of eyes dim as the light of life faded, leaving nothing but vile hollowness. Needless to say, the sight of a soul popping out of the dead body was a first. And it wasn't just any soul. It was the dead heir of Byers Holdings, the same guy he killed with his own hands. Turns out the rich boy Adriel had a horribly irritating and loud soul, but worst of it all - impossible to get rid of. Who would have thought that killing on a blue moon night could lead to being haunted?

Betrayed and murdered by his wife, tech tycoon Li Wei awakens 20 years earlier—a penniless heir with the Phoenix’s flames burning in his veins. Armed with memories of a future corporate empire and a mystical system whispering ancient secrets, he vows to rewrite destiny: save his family, crush his enemies, and reclaim his throne. But Shanghai’s glittering skyline hides more than corporate sharks. A war brews between immortal sects, his vengeful ex is a reincarnated fox spirit, and the woman sworn to protect him carries a cursed blade… and his shattered heart. To survive, Wei must master the Phoenix’s fire before time itself burns away. But when love and vengeance collide, will he rise as an emperor—or crumble as ash?

Say it with me: "We listen, and we don’t judge." Okay, so hear me out. I may have made a small mistake. But to be fair, how was I supposed to know that the cherry blossom tree I fell asleep under was home to the cutest squirrel ever to exist? Like, ever. A squirrel that just so happened to be the beloved pet of a powerful demon goddess from another world. I didn’t mean to grab it in my sleep and cuddle it to death. I swear! Its tail was just so fluffy! I think... I can’t be too sure since I was loopy on cough medicine. I had this really bad cold thanks to my idiot brother, who can’t seem to cover his fudging mouth. I’m getting off track, aren’t I? Sorry, sorry. Anyway, after the demon goddess sensed her pet’s life come to an untimely end, she teleported to its last location and found my sleeping self cuddling the dead thing. Remember, "We listen, and we don’t judge!" I can’t be the only sleep-cuddler here! So, in her rage and pain, the demoness kicked me into another tree—at least, I’m assuming that’s what happened, because when I woke up in agonizing pain, my head was stuck in said tree. As you can imagine, I died soon after. Bled out, the whole shebang. Long story short, the drop-dead gorgeous (hehe, see what I did there?) demoness—whom I may or may not have developed a major crush on—ended my life. Hey! Don’t judge. She gave me warm chestnuts. Golden chestnuts. That’s clearly love, right? Wait, where was I? Oh, right. My future wifey turned me into the cutest, most adorable squirrel ever! The upside—besides being able to nap on the demoness’s perfect chest? It’s the fact that, while I’m no longer a human girl, I could eventually evolve back into a human form. All I have to do is level up. If only people would stop trying to capture me and make me their pet! Back off! I know I'm cute, but I belong to my Wifey. You can't have this cute squirrel!"

Opening her eyes, she becomes the eldest daughter of the Great General of Liuyin Kingdom. She is the modern girl that transmigrated into a world that only respects the strong. Bullied by her cousins... Broken engagement... She did not care about all of that. Her motto is inspired by one of her favourite anime, Hyouka: "If I don't have to do it, I won't. If I have to do it, I'll make it quick." "You already come into this Lord's hug. Don't you dare to run?" A Lord threatens her. "Do you think I'm scared of you? You can keep dreaming." She spoke back. She just wants to have a peaceful life, however, can she has it? Author Note: - The cover image for this novel credit goes to its creator. I just only edit it -Please check my other novel as well: Reborn: Space Intelligent Woman

Abducted and forced into the world of human trafficking, Lucky endures the worst of the worst as a high end plaything for the worst of the wealthy. One fateful night, she discovers something about herself that gives her hope, a chance to escape from the hell she lives in. With escape, Lucky has a life changing chance encounter, a kind of anonymous celebrity she never anticipated, and a growing feeling of purpose that she can’t quite explain. As her new life falls in to place, that purpose suddenly makes itself clear. Fate is leading her down a path, one that leads her to realize that escaping alone was not enough. She has been chosen, as the one to bring the light to those kept in the dark, and the one to bring the end the keepers. To truly be free, she will have to go back and finish what she started. Claws will scratch far past the surface, digging deep into an evil that must be eradicated. Content Warning: This book contains some dark themes relating to the crime of human trafficking, forced sexual encounters, physical and emotional abuse, and violence. It is intended for a mature audience. Highlights: The above being said, there will also be light, and it will shine brightly upon love, friendship, family, and justice. Beware of the plump labrador retriever who loves to steal hearts, he doesn’t always return what he fetches! ❤️

The Phoenix Clan was once unmatched in power, their blessings revered and their connection to the mythical Phoenix feared across the world. But when the greed of four great empires united, the clan was destroyed, forcing its survivors to go inot hiding. In a desperate act of sacrifice, the Phoenix itself gave up its life to protect its people, leaving its essence dormant in an unborn child—Luis. Raised in a quiet village, Luis knows nothing of his heritage or the incredible power hidden within him. As he trains to master his aura, mysterious signs begin to surface, hinting at the truth of his lineage. With enemies closing in, the pressure mounts for Luis to uncover the Phoenix's legacy and embrace the power he never asked for. Torn between protecting those he loves and fulfilling the destiny thrust upon him, Luis must decide: will he rise as the savior of his clan, or will he become another casualty of the empires' unrelenting greed? Their are 2 main power systems blessings and aura. Aura: can be progressed through training every human is cable of growing their aura stronger. Blessings: are powers given by creature that rely on aura to be used and controlled. Blessings can only be obtained through mutual consent between creatures and humans. They can be passed through generations but their power diminished over generations.

In a post-apocalyptic world invaded by alien forces, the ability user William Davis and his companions form a team called "Light of Hope" to fight against the evil Thomas Brown and his organization of powers. Through countless battles and challenges, they uncover a larger conspiracy hidden in the shadows and discover the secret of the "Gateway of Stars," which has the potential to change the tide of the conflict. Ultimately, through unity, sacrifice, and the power of love, they protect the Earth from destruction while exploring the mysteries of parallel universes and the true strength of humanity.

He will always find her. In every life he will find her. He will love her. He will be her doom. This is their curse. Seri was a smalltown girl. She had a good life, loving supportive parents and friends, a bright future as an artist ahead of her. Her world abruptly changes when she meets a handsome stranger at a bar. His presence threatens to tear her heart apart as she learns the truth about herself. Her lineage. Her past. and their curse. When sudden disappearance shake her town and someone close to her disappears, Seri's world shatters. A war is brewing between Heaven and Earth, mortals and immortals. It will be the final war. Seri will embark on a journey that threatens to unravel the secrets hidden long ago. these secrets will force her to make a choice, one that could tip the scales deciding the fate of the world. This book is a bit of a slow burn but when it picks up the steam will satisfy the wait. Exerts from the book: *BANG* My ears were ringing, it suddenly got so much colder. Hard to breathe. Next to me mother shrieks in horror looking at my stomach. There’s blood. It was leaking from me. Pain slammed into me, felt like I was hit with a thousand knives. It was so agonizing I tried to brace myself back against the railing. Hard to breathe. I could feel the warmth of my blood dripping from my mouth. Looking down and a dark red color drenched me. Mother on her knees wailing uncontrollably. Detaching my clipped life vest to look at my hole. Blood now smeared my vision as I tried to wipe the red from my eyes. Screams and footsteps echoed loudly in my ears. Then suddenly I’m falling. “Hey now, hey now, fainting at the sight of me are you?” His sensual voice slipped in my ears like smooth milk chocolate. the taste of iron consumed my mouth, hot blood flooded me when I tried to laugh. It hurt. Oh god why did it hurt so bad. Tears drifted down my cheeks the salt leaving a trail of it’s path behind it. “You’re gonna be okay, I promise.” “You found me.” a smile creeped up my face. “I’ll always find you.” The ship began to lift into the air and people began to fall. I blink and then I’m falling. With one breath in I hit the ice cold water. Paralyzed. I couldn’t move. The screams and cries of woman and children pounded with water. Slipping. I was slipping under the violent thrashing waves. The air being sucked from my lungs. I try to open to breathe only got water to rush in instead. I was drowning. I was going to die. Gasping for air only to swallow more water. The water was like liquid ice touching my skin, but my lungs burned. A scream burst from my mouth only to be drowned by the water that came in after. I sank deeper and deeper.* *I saw his eyes flash a glowing white before he closed them and started kissing me again. This time it was gentler and softer than before. He tasted like warm honey biscuits. He was passionate and relaxed with his movement. I didn’t stop him. No, instead, I let him claim my lips. I run my hands though his hair pulling his face closer to mine. He rests his body on me, his weight heavy against my smaller frame, pressing me into the bed. The pressure of his body weight made me want to spread my legs and when I did a fire sparked inside me, my core was a blaze. My intimate area felt wet and hot like lava, and it was like everything around me melted away and I was lost in this kiss. This single moment in my life was undoing me. He pulled my head up sliding his arm underneath my neck to keep his body lifted slightly as he ran his fingers up my side. My body jolted; my hips instinctively lifted upwards, pushing against him. I could feel him harden between my legs and an unfamiliar ache stirred inside me, I moaned into his mouth. I could feel my body burning up again. I was getting dizzy, and I started to sweat. Or was that steam coming from us? Stars began dancing in my vision. Then a darkness swallowed me, and I was lost.* discord for this book is: https://discord.gg/Wx3RS62W

In a world where power is hoarded by the elite and honour is a currency few can afford, Asche is a nobody—or so he thought. Mocked as a beggar and burdened by rumours whispered through market stalls, he cares for only one thing: protecting his brother, Jorg. But everything changes when an uncovered secret and a prophecy name Asche as the saviour of a kingdom he loathes. Thrust into the glittering halls of royalty, he is crowned the protector of a corrupt system that has only ever crushed people like him. The nobles sneer at him, the prophecy’s true meaning is cloaked in mystery, and enemies within and without conspire to bring him down. Caught between duty and defiance, Asche must navigate a labyrinth of deceit, combat forces beyond comprehension, and decide whether to save a kingdom he despises—or let it burn to ash.

18+ Quick Transmigration BL/LGBT, M-Preg MC/Phoenix/Bottom/Shou/Switch, ML/Top/Gong/Switch-only for MC Both MC & ML are complex characters, and each arc will highlight the different sides to their personalities so some arcs MC maybe a power bottom and in some ML takes charge. But mostly MC is bottom, and ML is top. Join us as we follow a young anti-hero named Phoenix, as he tries to free himself from the clutches of whom ever kidnapped him and imprisoned him, gain power & knowledge in order to take them down & regain his memory that's been locked away from him. It seems that someone else was after Phoenix too but for what and why would they help him escape? Solaris the sentient A.I. system that hacked into The Jailer System that had been forcibly bound to Phoenix's soul and helped to spring Nix from his prison but for what reason and at what cost? No good deed goes unpunished and nothing absolutely nothing in the multiverse is ever completely free. But what choice does Nix have? Surely following Solaris' missions cannot be worse than what he left behind right? Is this just another way for his captors to abuse him more? Can he ever be truly free when he just spent the last 32 thousand years being forced to live one horrific abusive life after the other. Can he even dream of healing when he cannot forget even a single moment, he spent in that hell hole? This story begins at the end of his imprisonment from "hell" and follows his journey to discovering himself, regaining his lost memory and discover who and what was and is behind all this. But can he handle the truth? What happens if he were to learn that he was being punished for crimes against the celestial Dragon Emperor and heaven itself? Could he truly be capable of such a thing and if so, what will he do then? One could definitely say that Nix is an anti-hero, since he is not benevolent but would not stand for injustice happen to the innocent or those, he deems worthy enough to care for and about. Nix is cold, apathetic & keeps everyone & everything at arm's length. Despite his cold, arrogant, apathetic & aloof exterior, Nix surprisingly has a big soft heart for animals & children, as well as all things cute & adorable but he would never admit it. ML: Hey what about me? Nix: What about you? Who are you again anyways? ML: ...? Solaris & Author: eating popcorn & booked peanuts (I know they aren't for everyone, don't come for me) ML: Nix how can you say that? Mrs_TNT do something he's being hateful again for no reason! Why must he always push me away? What did I ever do to him? Author Mrs_TNT: Is that a serious question right now? Well, I guess you'll have to read to find out. This story begins at the end of his first imprisonment and follows Phoenix as he tries to recover his memories from before he was imprisoned and bound to the Jailer System as well as gain power and complete the missions given by Solaris until he can finally be free and exact his revenge before he has his soul annihilated so that he never reincarnates again. I may do flashbacks or even write a prequel after this novel is finished depicting his long, long journey just to get to the beginning of this novel. Be Warned! There will be several triggering topics addressed in this novel, though it is not a dark romance it does touch on abuse: neglect, mental, verbal, physical and sexual. This is a Boy Love, LGBT or gay romance novel that will have explicit scenes. I will not be putting warnings up as I go along. I am working through some of my own trauma through writing this novel, so I understand it is not for everyone. That said this is very loosely based off some of my own experiences and any coincidences between names, places or events is just that a coincidence and have nothing in common unless I state other wise and will credit it if I do as well. Cover art was made by me using A.I. image generator and editing it myself. I hold all rights to this novel.

"A vampire and a demon— the love of two beings I cannot reject." Reverse Harem (Warning: Mature Content)! Skai Jayden, a project assistant at Sterling Enterprise has her heart racing twice in one night. Meeting her boss, Damien Raphael, on a night out with her friends, she is instantly drawn to him and finds herself unable to forget him. Before then, Skai only knows Damien as a ruthless, cold-hearted monster of the business world. She hadn't guessed that Damien was truly a demon in disguise. On the same night, she is attacked and saved by a man lurking in the dark. But shadows often house people with ill intentions. The accident entangles her fate with Jared Drake, a business tycoon by day, and a blood-sucking vampire by night. And that's only the start of Skai's spiral into danger. When she discovers the men's true identities, Skai is forced to deal with their intertwined fates, sandwiched in between them as their fated mate. In between pleasure, secrets, and fantasy, how will Skai face this drastic turn in her life? Will she be able to survive in a world that she once thought only existed in fairytales? ************* Disclaimer: Cover Not Mine Read-only on WEBNOVEL ––––––––––– Discord server: http//discord.gg/BH666ZK Instagram: baevidaa Discord: BaeVida#7167

Meihua, Princess of Nindo and only heir to 57th Emperor of Xi, learns the marriage she was looking forward to is meant to be a cage to keep her bound and locked away in the Inner Palace. In a moment of defiance, she runs, escaping the Palace and Capitol in an attempt to find freedom. But a Princess with no experience beyond the walls of her palace has no place in the starving, bandit ridden corners of the empire. Determined to survive on her own, Meihua sets out to the learn the truth about her long-bound magic and the reason the empire is so determined to seal her away. After nearly starving to death, Meihua is taken in by poor, but kind rice farmers and learns the state of the empire is not at all what she has been taught. Realizing she needs to learn to master her magic and abnormally powerful Qi, she joins rogue demonic cultivator Xuan Xiu on his travels. They’re soon joined by a powerful woman from West of the Spine of the World, an ordinary man who keeps getting stuck in extraordinary circumstances, and a fae with a serpent’s tongue as they make their way across the Land of Song and Snow in an effort to discover the great secrets of the empire and themselves. A Caged Phoenix is the first of a fantasy adventure romance trilogy chronicling Meihua’s fall from nobility to her years as a wandering cultivator and her eventual rise to Empress and the love and loss she suffers along the way.

What am I? What is this? What are we? Why can I see what I could not?

It tell a unknown legend of a dragon prince of heaven realm. And a princess of Shuilu Kingdom ..... they have to go through unknown dangerous to save the world. As the time pass both of them start to develop feeling for each other. But they don't know what was going to happen to them. There was a evil sect attacking all four realm. There was no peace in world. Prince and Princess were shocked when they know the truth of their birth. Will they be able to find a mysterious man ? Will they be able to save the world? Will they be together with each other. Or fate won't let them.... If it will then can they be together again ? Please read for more information

500 Centuries After the Sky War The world had been divided and scarred by the cataclysmic battle of the Sky War, yet whispers of an ancient prophecy lingered. It was said that a descendant of the Phoenix would rise to restore balance to the fractured lands. Li Mei, a 16 year old village girl, lived a quiet yet uncertain life, marked by a mysterious birthmark shaped like fire on her shoulder. Her days were simple, until the peace of her small village was shattered by an invasion from the forces of the Tianxu Dynasty. Forced to flee, Li Mei encountered Feng Wei, a wandering swordsman harboring a dark secret his lineage traced back to the Dragon Emperor himself. Along the way, they were joined by Zhang Rui, and Xiao Lan. As the group became entangled in a conflict that threatened the very fabric of the world, an even greater threat emerged from the shadows. Li Mei began to uncover the fiery power that lay dormant within her a force that could either save the world or bring about its ultimate destruction.

A boy Named Ray age 18 thought that he got betrayed by the girl who was his girlfriend but it was not the Bus crash and they both met God and Reincarnated in Another world and our he became and son of aristocrat as Hiroki Aldenridge and the the misunderstanding didn't solve and he gets an ancient power of a....what will be their fate wold they meet each other or he will still hate her he will kill all the people of an organization due to a certain reason he changes at the age of 7 he has get allied with all the kings and defeat all 3 continents of demon kings also and in the end will he become greatest, Assasin? And At the end may make a harem -this wn is written in simple words And because name is based on ability the story in not dark

Every time I saw the main character in the web novel, I thought: *If only I had this kind of power…* However, in reality, he is only a potential F-Ranked Player. And just as I closed the web novel I had been reading, “…uh?” Swordsmanship, assassination, magic, holy power— He was now equipped with all the skills from the web novels! Please this a Mtl novel. I'm just translating it.

By the way I should probably say this, but English is not my first language so I'm still learning the grammar there will be time that I will just edit them because the grammar is bad, and a friend is helping me with it. I love stories and I was able to make friends happy with them. I want to do this or try to at least make someone happy reading the story that I come up with hope you enjoy reading as much as I enjoy making this story. (By the way there may be times that I use comment to change a bit of the story)