Critical Tole

Agent Baek Beom-ki is sent on a perilous mission to Russia with two critical objectives. His primary task is to locate "Seraphim," a highly classified weapon rumored to have the potential to shift global power dynamics. However, his mission comes with a grave warning: he must steer clear of Yaroslav Olegovich Vyshnevsky, a notorious and unhinged killer who stalks the Russian underworld. With international tensions rising, Baek Beom-ki finds himself caught in a high-stakes game of cat and mouse, where the line between hunter and hunted blurs with each passing moment.

Have you ever wondered if god exists? If there is life on another planet? Does magic exist? What is there after death? Well, the answer to these questions is not difficult. Follow the story of a young porn lover who reincarnated in a fantasy world as the candidate for the God of sex, eroticism and obscenity. Accompany our protagonist on his journey full of fantasy, intrigue, women and lots of sex. English is not my native language, therefore, I apologize in advance if I present grammatical errors, I appreciate any correction and constructive criticism to improve.

After dying unexpectedly, Ella is reincarnated into a fantasy world as Karina Goldbrace, the Empress of the struggling kingdom of Avugon. Given a mysterious system to guide her, she must navigate court politics, rebuild her empire, and uncover her true purpose. The system, however, is glitchy and often fails at critical moments. Complicating matters is Damian Frostfeather, the arrogant yet magnetic Emperor of the neighboring kingdom of Mitira. Their constant clashes, filled with sharp banter and undeniable chemistry, teeter between rivalry and romance. As tensions rise, Ella must decide if trusting Damian could lead to salvation—or betrayal—in her quest to secure peace and her kingdom’s future.

Prince Arthur Aethersworn of Tashran knows his place: powerless, caged by tradition, and haunted by his lack of magic in a family brimming with it. Under his father’s impassive yet critical eye, he’s forced into training for a throne he can never claim without true power. Just as he’s about to resign to a bleak fate, a mysterious figure with ties to forbidden magic offers Arthur a choice: break free and seek the fabled Dragon's Eyes, or remain bound by royal duty. On this quest, he risks everything: his loyalties, family ties, and deepest beliefs. As he uncovers hidden powers, he faces powerful forces determined to prevent him from changing his destiny. Embark on Arthur's journey, an adventure where casting aside one’s humanity becomes a path, not a barrier to untold power.

After enduring a lifetime of torment from her parents' experimental pursuits, Kalara's world turns upside down when they die, leaving her their house in the will. Desperate for cash, she discovers that she must fulfill a series of enigmatic requests outlined in the will before she can sell the property. While rummaging through her parents' cluttered workroom, Kalara stumbles upon a peculiar bottle labeled “a sip per day,” accompanied by a letter addressed to her. Despite her reservations about their motives, curiosity compels her to take a sip. With each taste, Kalara unlocks the floodgates of her memories, reliving her past in vivid detail but unable to change the trajectory of her experiences. As she confronts the haunting moments of her life, she faces a critical dilemma: will uncovering the truth of her history empower her to break free from the shadows of her parents’ legacy, or will it entangle her in a cycle of pain and repetition? In her quest for liberation, Kalara must navigate the duality of knowledge and choice as she seeks to reclaim her future.

A Russian economics expert had been making money through long-short strategies during the Russia-Ukraine war. Despite his economic success, he felt deep regret about Russia's historical mistakes. He wrote on his blog that "Russia has been on the wrong path since the 19th century," critically analyzing Russia's history. Then, remarkably, he traveled back in time to 1891 and found himself in the body of Russian Crown Prince Nicholas II during his visit to Japan.

Miel and Jasmine's love is as fierce as it is destructive. Bound by passion and driven by desperation, these two women find themselves on the run after pulling off a high-stakes heist. As they race through city streets and backroads with their stolen fortune, their love is tested by the dangers that pursue them and the demons within. Each twist in their journey reveals the raw intensity of a relationship that teeters between devotion and destruction. In a world where trust is a luxury they can't afford, Miel and Jasmine must decide if their love is worth the cost-or if it will ultimately lead to their downfall. --- **Copyright 2024 by Mya Skeete** **Author: Myra Sinclair** **All rights reserved.** This book is protected under copyright law. No part of this book may be reproduced, distributed, or transmitted in any form or by any means, including photocopying, recording, or other electronic or mechanical methods, without the prior written permission of the copyright owner, except in the case of brief quotations embodied in critical reviews and certain other noncommercial uses permitted by copyright law. **Published on August 19, 2024.**

“You have to reject her.” Amelia heard her twin say to her boyfriend. As the ignored daughter of the Alpha, Amelia has been bullied by her twin since little. She knew it was all because she wasn’t as talented and didn’t shift like her twin did. Still, getting rejected by the only love of her life was too much to bear. Amelia accepted her father’s order and set out for college in a neighbouring pack, not knowing a group of wolves were sent to get rid of her for good. At the critical moment, her only way out was get into the pack of the most feared Alpha, the King that ruled the darkness, the one who had killed his own father to take the throne.

A story about our mc, Arin, join his journey in reaching to the top of the world. he makes the world shake at his might with his dragon lineage. the stories pace will change as this is my first novel and am still learning. I would appreciate any constructive criticism. New writer, synopsis will later be updated

Born into the royal family, Clove is the sole heir to the Aelaoria Empire. However, his frail nature makes him an unlikely candidate in the eyes of the nobles to become the next ruler. Under the watchful eyes of his uncle and the critical nobility, Clove is determined to overcome his weaknesses and transform into a respected, honorable king, like his father once was.

Arthur is a mercenary on a quest to learn magic. Once a blacksmith’s apprentice, he left his comfortable life behind at fourteen to chase his dream of crafting enchanted weapons. With no noble blood or wealth, he turned to mercenary work, earning coin for the chance to study magic and uncover ancient relics. This is my first story. so sorry for any mistakes. I do plan to add romance later in the story when I feel more confident writing it. Constructive criticism please.

After criticizing a game, William, a game critic, is punished by the Goddess of Eternity, Aurora, and transforms into the young Princess Ayla within this universe. Waking up kidnapped by 7 Demon Lords, Ayla must endure their lust, but also uncover the dark secrets that inhabit the castle. Immortal and trapped in a cycle of desire and manipulation, each revelation takes her deeper into a maze of mysteries where the line between ally and enemy becomes increasingly blurred. What she discovers may be the key to her liberation—or her eternal damnation.

Jung-Ha Kiera, a young black Korean-American, deeply resents her Korean father who abandoned her for twenty years. One day, she gets news from her mother, that he is in a critical condition and requests her presence. She reluctantly travels to South Korea after much persuasion from her mother. When she got there, she met him in the hospital where he explained to her and all his family did to her mother and him. He begs for forgiveness and pleads with her to accept his will. He passes away after two days leaving her in a devastated and raged state. What will happen to Kiera? Would she abandon her father's will and all he said or will she take responsibility and take revenge on the Jung's family?

[Heartless and ruthless + Multiple female protagonists + daily life + system+ Super Power + Decisive Killing +steal woman Chang Ping accidentally came to the world of "Demons and Gods". Here, humans were slaughtered by monsters. In desperation, Chang Ping awakened his physical amplification ability, and he could increase his strength by 1 jin every minute. From this day on, the monsters finally remembered the fear of being dominated by humans. Zhulong: Boss, please spare me, I didn't know Yuyan was your wife, please spare me! Mu Yue: Human, I will not surrender, you want me to be your mount, no way! ... Several years later, the Holy Emperor came and wanted to destroy the world. At the critical moment, Chang Ping took action and smashed it with one punch, shocking the world!

Bumping into a stranger while looking for shelter while raining, Avery was about to scold the stranger but got tongue tied in seeing the handsome face . Follow the story of Avery and the millionaire playboy Alex Gibson who is also a mafia lord #Forced marriage # Betrayal # Funny # Bloody Note We're here to read not to criticize, also mature content and bloody

The Isekai genre often highlights the fantastical adventures of male protagonists endowed with superhuman strength and surrounded by adoring companions. However, an alternative narrative focuses on the plight of "strays"—individuals transported from Earth who struggle to survive in a hostile environment where they are regarded as mere commodities, goods, or even trash. This perspective challenges the traditional heroic framework by emphasizing themes of vulnerability, exploitation, and resilience. Unlike the empowered heroes who dominate conventional Isekai tales, these strays navigate a world that is indifferent or outright antagonistic to their existence, thereby offering a critical commentary on issues of marginalization and the human condition. This nuanced portrayal underscores the harsh realities and ethical dilemmas faced by those who find themselves displaced and devalued in an unfamiliar and often unforgiving realm.

A collection of stories, places, concepts, and objects that exist in this Universe. =============================== I apologize to anyone offended, and please forgive the vast difference between chapter lengths as some will only be one paragraphs and other will be several pages long. =============================== Additionally, any feedback and criticism is appreciated as I am a ignorant and inexperienced writer

Long ago, two opposing groups, the elementals, and the physicals, once coexisted peacefully. However, discovering a legendary cursed sword, the Katsuki ninjato sword, by an elemental named Haruki shatters that peace. Haruki, a cryo elemental, found the sword known for possessing its wielder with dangerous instincts. He made a critical mistake by revealing the sword to the physicals, which triggered a massive war between the two factions. Now, in the year 2105, the war continues. Both the elementals and the physicals are divided into specific categories, each with their unique abilities and roles.

Cover Art by Neo and Yaoyueyi Volume 1 - Having been summoned to another world, Claude Evers is devastated to find out that he has no attack or magic proficiency. In a world of swords and magic, Claude endeavors to become his master's...chef? Despite this turn of events, he soon finds himself relying on his wit and strange abilities to stand by his master's side. With such fearsome enemies in this world, what solutions can Claude hope to cook up? Volume 2 - Defeating a terrifying monster endangering the kingdom, Claude's fame grows. With this in mind, his next goal is to...win over his master's heart? However, he soon learns that the nobility are not one to be trifled with. What can a lone chef do against the schemes of the powerful threatening his livelihood? Volume 3 - Welcome to the 'Certain Slice', where we are sure to serve you something that perfectly hits your tastes. This is a restaurant where you can sample our line of otherworldly food and drink, created by the one and only Demon Cleaver. Please wait here while we call a maid over to attend to your orders. The owner? I'm very sorry. He's not available at the moment. The reason? I'm afraid that he is now a wanted man, for defying kings and kidnapping princesses. Volume 4 - Stuck in another country, Claude and his companions happen upon abilities far different from what they had known before. With a country full of powerful warriors wielding such techniques, guided by a prophetic Oracle, new allies and enemies are around every corner. Will they find what they need to return home, or will 'destiny' swallow them up? Volume 5 - What happens when the person you thought you knew is completely different? Past and present collide as Claude makes his way back to Sistina to once again fight alongside his Master, encountering challenges that few Electi have ever faced. Destruction looms over Sistina as his enemies attack right where one is most vulnerable, the insecurities held in one’s heart. Volume 6 - With Sistina in the process of recoverying, Claude finds himself in a new role with many new challenges ahead. Though the dangers have passed, daily life is still far from boring as messy relationships and sudden adventures are at every corner. There is never a break in the life of an Electi! Volume 7 - War breaks out with the Empire of Purnesia. With decades of hatred possessing its people, Claude becomes embroiled in the tragedy of death and suffering. With his commitment to retain his humanity in jeopardy, how can a chef protect his friends on the battlefield? Volume 8 - Various tragedies have left Claude reeling. With his heart torn and his vow to not kill abandoned, he charges forward to the capital of Purnesia. With his heart trending towards darkness, who will remain by his side as he seeks revenge... and who will point their blade at him instead? Volume 9 - Learning of the existence of an entire army of demons, led by a familiar face, the very world is at stake. What will Claude discover upon setting foot in the realm of Gods, seeking the very limits of his Electi powers? Volume 10 - Peace has come at last, along with a new role for Claude. But his dreams foretell of another hidden danger on the horizon, one that would shatter everything he knows about the world. Volume 11 - Everything has ended, or has it? The secrets of the world are now revealed, and Claude must find everyone once again to face against a threat as old as the Gods. Volume 12 - Back together again, Claude and his crew make one final attempt against The Architect. Past and present collide as the fate of two worlds rest on the victor!

Léonard Dumont, a 16-year-old French teenager and geek of the SCP Foundation's myths, one day receives a notification on his computer from the SCP Foundation Management System. His duty is to build the SCP Foundation has The Administrator of the Foundation. This story is a mix of several canons of the Foundation. Mix everything with our own real world to add a weight of realism to all this. This is my very first story, I hope you will enjoy it and I am open to all criticism and comments.

In the old grave on the mountain, the tattoo artist swallowed a condom containing a key chip to protect the evidence, and used his body to block the entrance of the grave to protect Little Butterfly. When the old bachelor found out that he was lying, he stabbed him with a knife. At the critical moment, Little Butterfly pulled out the knife from the tattoo artist's abdomen and stabbed the old bachelor, completing the transformation from victim to rebel. At this moment, Little Butterfly finally achieved nirvana from butterfly to phoenix.

Two teenagers experienced a chance encounter and after that they became basically inseparable. Unfortunately they are faced with critical circumstances that might split them a part. Is their bond strong enough to overcome these circumstances or will they go their separate ways?

A story about a normal high school student who sacrificed his own life to save his friends in a critical moment reincarnating to the world of Sardonia. Instead reincarnating into a hero... he became a ball of light? This is my first ever novel. Hope you enjoy.

Generic Chinese manhua with a not so generic op mc. Ren a shy middle schooler from Japan after reincarnates in a mordern china with hidden cultivators. For more context just read it P.S:- English is my third language and this is my first book so please don't be too harsh with the criticism

Alvaro Cortez, a gifted young footballer from the humble suburb of Valle Sol, dreams of playing for Blanco Royal FC, one of the most prestigious football clubs in Europe. Growing up idolizing legends and training on dusty fields. 'GOAT: Against All Odds' is the journey of Alvaro the boy with dreams to becoming a famous footballer, One of the greatest. As Alvaro navigates the highs and lows of his ascent, he faces critical moments of failure, redemption, and growth. Along the way, he learns that greatness isn’t achieved alone—it requires the support of teammates, mentors, and an unwavering determination to overcome setbacks. This is a story of ambition, resilience, and self-discovery, chronicling Alvaro Cortez’s journey from a small-town dreamer to a rising star in the world of football. Set against the backdrop of intense rivalries, personal sacrifices, and the relentless pursuit of excellence, it’s a tale of what it takes to rise to the top and stay there. ------ The story would sometimes be fast paced or slow according to the situations. System = check ✅ Critical Injury = check ✅ ( nb : predictable,i mean don't we have a system to introduce) Romance = check ✅ ----- So the system part of the story wouldn't start until quit some time.You know, I don't want anyone to criticize my guy saying he can't do sh*t without system so.And the clubs and players are inspired from irl and i won't use the real names or anything,Cause I don't want any complications later(IYKYk). -----

Criticism is very much appreciated don’t worry about my feelings being hurt. Synopsis: Humans are hunting the monsters of the other world for far too long it’s time for the revolt humans are gonna die at the hand of their own kind..

this is a test mostly for criticism this is our first time trying to make a book help us please and thank you

Noble young master Dark Demon finally recalls memories of his past life during the sorting ceremony at the Duel Academy. He realizes he has been reincarnated into a world that is the ultimate patchwork Galgame. In this game, he is the ultimate villain—the Demon God of the Seven Deadly Sins! Pride, Envy, Wrath, Sloth, Greed, Gluttony, Lust! Once any of these seven indicators exceed the critical value, he will irreversibly transform into the Great Demon God! In the St. Marian Era, where demons are extinct and the Demon King slumbers eternally, no heretic can survive! "Eh? So as long as I don't become a Demon God, I'll be fine?" Avoid arrogance, impatience, anger, and ignorance.

In this story, our protagonist finds himself transmigrated into his favorite game, a world filled with magic and demonic beasts. To secure a peaceful life in this new world—where strength equates to power—he must leverage his knowledge of the game to grow stronger and overcome the challenges that come his way. I appreciate any constructive criticism you may have. You can expect to see improvements as the story unfolds if you think it is. Release schedule: 5 chapters per week.

This is a story about a girl who dislikes the life she's living in, so she decides to run away. While in the run she finds a new friend. Along the way a tragedy occurs and they suddenly find themselves unfamiliar. They adjust to life and end up living together peacefully... Or do they? I do not own the image for the cover. I'm also new to writing so I will accept constructive criticism, but if you are just going to be negative the entire time, please leave and don't ruin the experience for others. Thanks!!