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All of a sudden, various watches appeared out of nowhere in different parts of the world. These locations were quickly controlled by various organizations, and then the marketing of the watches was strictly controlled. Why was this? Because these watches gave access to a unique world: Eternity! In this world, it was possible to increase physical strength, unlock new classes and acquire various skills and talents! Joining it also allowed you to awaken your unique talent! And above all, there was the meagre possibility of increasing one's life expectancy! It was with the aim of changing his destiny that Maxime trained his whole life in swordplay, and for many years saved his meagre salary to obtain one of these famous watches! Watch his rise in the real world thanks to Eternity! Chapter release: 1 chs/day. To find out more, to discuss, to give feedback, if you want to add certain things in the story, everything is possible here : https://discord.gg/mkbF4WtMp7

In a post-apocalyptic fantasy world layered into multiple realms, humanity faces extinction due to their endangerment of the main realm. Forced to merge all realms back into one, a deity grants humans a leveling system to empower them, lest they become extinct when facing the mythical creatures. Noah, our protagonist, embraces the role of a monster tamer, trading his humanity for strength and eventually transforming into a monster himself. As Noah struggles with his evolving identity, he must navigate a world where the line between human and monster becomes increasingly blurred. Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together. I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you. Release chapters will only be one chapter a day on weekdays. The releases will become more consistent depending on how well the story does.

"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

Johan thought he knew monotony—long hours at work, nights spent solo gaming. But when he’s summoned to Eosdadalon, a world of magic, his friends are hailed as the Heroes of Prophecy, while Johan is cast aside, deemed unworthy. Stumbling upon the mysterious Sanity System, a power unlike anything the heroes possess, Johan's path veers into the unknown. Meanwhile, the Penumbra—a pitch-black fog consuming everything in its path—creeps across the land, threatening to engulf the world. Outside the prophecy, with no place in its story, Johan must carve out his own path, unlocking the full potential of the Sanity System to help save a world that may never accept him. His journey is no longer about being a hero but about survival. ------------------------------------------------------------------ I'm currently updating In-Sanity System weekly with multiple chapters, but if this story gains more traction, I'll happily update more. Your support makes all the difference—so please don't forget to leave comments and reviews, give power stones, and let me know what you think! Every bit of feedback helps this story grow!

After being kidnapped by a Dual Cultivation sect composed entirely of women, a young man discovers that the world he lives in is not as simple as he once thought. The five continents, which were always considered to be the reality, are actually an illusion created by a powerful cultivator. The true Earth is vast, endless, and filled with mysteries to be unraveled. [The work may contain sm*t elements, but that is not the main focus. The true essence of the story lies in the exploration of the world.] Yandere? Yes. Harem? Yes. NTR? No. Yuri? No. I welcome feedback, as I am a novice author with some writing experience, seeking to improve.

Feel free to leave a comment or share your feedback, I'd love to hear your thoughts and it helps me improve! ... In the perilous and swamp-ridden land of Thornmarsh, Dorian, a young orphan, struggles to survive. Born with a rare potential as a Beast Tamer, his future holds promises of power—but only if he can overcome the deadly dangers that plague his world. Living in the treacherous Black Briar Lowlands, Dorian learns early on that strength and survival aren’t given freely—they are earned through grit, cunning, and perseverance. At the age of eight, Dorian discovered his Silver-tier potential, a rank that grants him the ability to bond with powerful beasts. Yet, without the wealth and resources of the noble classes, Dorian is forced to rely on his wits to survive. He’s scouted by gangs, but his moral compass keeps him from taking their bloodstained paths. Refusing to join them, he continues to live on the fringes of society, finding work as a guide for traders and navigating the deadly marshes of ThornMarsh.

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

Ian who woke up from his past highschool life , happily wanted to change the way he lived not knowing the world already change for him but what hurdles comes before him. sorry for the inconveniences but I will only publishing 2 chapter for now pls read and give some feedbacks for me to correct my mistakes please i really need it. Thank you

Death is an enigma. It leaves people asking questions while offering no replies. And I just got transmigrated. In a new world… well, calling it a new world is incorrect. It's more like a parallel version of the Earth I used to live on. ---------------------------------------- Hello, Law_of_luck here. I just want to clear up a few things before you start reading: • First, I’ve kept the synopsis to a bare minimum to avoid spoilers, so you can discover the new place the main character is in along with him. • Second, this is my first time properly writing a novel, so please feel free to offer any advice or feedback about my writing. • And third, please enjoy reading.

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my 1st story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedbacks are welcomed.

In a world shrouded in shadows, a young, ordinary boy named Axel discovers an extraordinary destiny. A world of ancient secrets, forbidden knowledge, and terrifying creatures, it's a place where reality is a fragile illusion "Darkness is the absence of light, not an element in itself," he was told, but he created it nonetheless. With Anya by his side, he vows "You and me against the world," as they embark on a quest to become the greatest elementalist the world has ever known. NOTE:"As we embark on this journey to write "Elemental Chaos", we invite you to visit the original story and share your valuable insights. Your feedback will play a crucial role in shaping the future of this tale. By taking the time to read and provide your thoughts, you'll be an integral part of this creative process. Let's work together to create a truly extraordinary reading experience"

## Kingdom Building LitRPG [You have been chosen as a Lord of the Intergalactic Lord Project.] [Your reward: A floating island to call your own.] [Your mission: Build your kingdom, summon legendary allies, and dominate the worlds!] [Your advantage: An SSS-grade Ultimate Gacha System.] Atlas Blackthorn, the newly chosen Lord of a floating island, wields the power to summon legendary warriors, powerful artifacts, and, of course, waifus. With boundless ambition and the Ultimate Gacha System at his side, Atlas sets out to become the strongest Lord in all worlds. How far will his ambition take him? Tags: Action, Kingdom Building, LitRPG, Fantasy, Gacha System, Post-Apocalyptic, Adventure, Power Progression, Strong Protagonist, Strategic Battles, Epic Worldbuilding, Romance *** Discord Server: https://tinyurl.com/galanteodiscord Note to Readers: This is a trial read. I'll be uploading at a slower chapter rate as I explore the direction of the story. If all goes well, I plan to focus on this project and republish it in early 2025. I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback along the way!

This is the story of an earthling named Lubius who died after drowning because the boat he was on had an accident. He was just a little lucky to wake up in his own alternate body in another world. —------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ My first story so please be kind and I hope you comment if you see something weird and other stuff. English is not my first language and most of this work is done by DeepL. I try my best to upload every two days with 1500 words per chapter. What to expect: 1. Slow-pace story. 2. Harem-oriented story with some Echi, but at the moment I don't think I will write any +18stuff. It's already a lot of smut or +18 in this kind of genre after all. 3. Weak to Strong, but it will be a long ride. 4. No OP MC. 5. No system and stuff. This is my first time writing. Feedback is welcome, I'd love to hear what you readers like and where you think I could have done better. Is there some idea and stuff just say it too. Anything welcome...

A collection of stories, places, concepts, and objects that exist in this Universe. =============================== I apologize to anyone offended, and please forgive the vast difference between chapter lengths as some will only be one paragraphs and other will be several pages long. =============================== Additionally, any feedback and criticism is appreciated as I am a ignorant and inexperienced writer

Chen Feng, transmigrated to a parallel world after a fatal accident, finds himself in an orphan's body with a seemingly useless talent. However, he receives a mysterious Cheat System, granting him: - Attribute Points allocation - Skill enhancements - Quest notifications - System-assisted learning With the Cheat System's support, Chen Feng navigates this unforgiving world, mastering skills, forging alliances, and uncovering secrets. _Themes:_ Overcoming adversity, self-discovery, ambition --- Author's Note:* This is my debut novel, and I'm excited to share it with you! As a first-time author, I'm eager to learn and improve. Please feel free to leave comments, corrections, and guidance – your feedback is invaluable! Thank you for reading Reborn Ascension!

When war finally ended, the Arcadians sought retribution from the nightmares they had suffered from demonkind. A noble Princess had taken her mother's mantle in order to uphold peace between the two races so humanity could co-exist with their fellow demons in a kingdom without strife, but war paved the road to peace in blood and such path is but a fragile thread awaiting to be ignited by the flames of hatred. Another great war awaits, but will she be able to avert it? Second iteration of the Knight's Fate saga chronologically speaking. Yes I'm starting from the second because the first was an utter failure when I tried to write it, it just didn't fit the mood of a fantasy novel unlike this one. Though don't worry this doesn't mean you can't enjoy this one before I write the first. This is the first story I've actually published so I appreciate any feedback, be it good or bad just let me know what you think.

Hallo zusammen, ich bin leider nicht gut darin Klappentexte zu schreiben. Ich hoffe aber trotzdem, dass ihr das hier lest. Es geht um eine der stärksten Magierinnen der Ebene 706, ihr Name ist Loki Esyia Woods. Gepeinigt von dem Schicksal auf der bösen Seite der Magier geboren worden zu sein, versucht sie ihren Weg als Magierin zu finden und aufzusteigen zu einer mächtigen Heldin der guten Seite der Magie. In dieser Geschichte geht es um ihre Kindheit und Jugend, nicht zu vergessen ihren Aufstieg zur hohen Magierin Nummer 1. Das alles sollen euch aber Feder und Loki selbst etwas genauer erzählen. Habt viel Spaß und gebt mir bitte Feedback :-)

NPC GLITCH! EVIL MC! FAST PACED STORY! SYSTEMS AND LEVELING! WRITING FOR FUN BUTT OPEN TO FEEDBACK!

Synopsis: Banished from his prestigious family, Ace Lionheart awakens to a seemingly useless class. Armed with hidden potential and a thirst for redemption, he dives into a world of dungeons, bloodlines, and betrayal. With the odds stacked against him, Ace must rise above the ridicule and prove that even the most unlikely path can lead to greatness. Warning! My first webnovel just for fun lets see where it goes! Good feedback welcomed

In a brutal and lawless slum, 16-year-old Aizen awakens in the body of a boy with his name, no family, and no future. But his despair turns to surprise when he discovers a mysterious cheat ability: the power to bring fictional characters to life. Bound by strict limitations— Feature: -Automatic 100% loyalty to summoner. -Get feedback from the summons. Restrictions: -Stories without any form of influence of MC. -Need a medium (books, manga, etc...) -Needs the number of souls to bring a fictional character to life. The number of souls needed depends on the strength of the fictional character. -Collected souls must have died under the MC or his summons' hand. With such a cheat in hand, Aizen's ultimate goal was to summon fictional characters that could destroy buildings with bare hands, summon demons and gods, and even summon villains, mad scientists and superheroes that would help him build his own kingdom!

Synopsis: In a world where humanity is at the bottom of the food pyramid, a young boy raises his fists to bring justice for his people and judgment against his enemies. This novel will be blending lots of concepts. It will represent the complexity of human emotions and decisions. Have fun reading along, I'm open to feedback.

Tragedy strikes when Alex's parents are brutally killed, and his clan is destroyed. Consumed by grief and guilt, Alex blames himself for their deaths and vows revenge. Abandoning his former life, he immerses himself in the shadows, plotting to destroy those responsible. As he delves deeper into his quest for vengeance, he begins to lose himself, driven solely by the desire for retribution against the nobles who wronged him and his family. From the Author: Hello, dear readers! This is my first time writing, and I am excited to share my story with you. Writing this book has been a journey of passion and hard work. I humbly ask for your support and encouragement. Please read my book and share your thoughts. Your feedback is invaluable and will help me grow as a writer. Thank you for giving my story a chance. I hope it captivates and entertains you.

é a minha primeira historia espero que me possam dar algum feedback. book cover não é minha

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"you are dead" says the god of original story's Bragi. "and for your sins you will be reincarnated into your own plagiarized novel, try to entertain us." this is my first novel, feedback is appreciated and so is comments, i will try to reply to every one, regardless of it is constructive or not Im also on scribble hub and applying for royal road.

One day, a light covered the world, ushering in a new era with the awakening of the Epsilon Gene. Follow Aelyra’s journey as she discovers that the world she knows is not what it seems and navigates her more than complicated family relationships. This story is inspired by My Hero Academia and similar tales. I gladly welcome any feedback or suggestions. English is not my first language.

This novel consists of a man named Issac, his world was invaded by monsters and he became the last surviving human on Earth. Well here’s the funny part, Issac lost his life and somehow regressed back to the start. So what will Issac do different? (P.S there is only two chapters for now so please read, depending on the readers feedback I may continue this project otherwise I’ll just stick to reading novels not writing them. Please be honest with the feedback.)

In a world where the sea is both a blessing and a curse, Dorian Crimsonvale finds himself struggling for survival amidst treacherous waters and cutthroat enemies. As the last scion of the fallen Crimsonvale family, Dorian is determined to reclaim his birthright and unravel the dark secrets that have led to his family's destruction. Dorian, a transmigrant, gains supernatural powers through his connection to the Celestial Compass. He must navigate the volatile seas, facing enemies and uncovering secrets, to carve his path and fulfill his destiny. Can he rise above the shadows of the past and claim his place among legends? --------------------------------------------------------------- Expect 2 chapters a day, 14 chapters a week. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Author's Note: This is my first novel, and I hope you like it. English is not my first language, and I am using many tools to correct my vocabulary and grammar, so I hope you drop your honest reviews. I will decide whether to continue or quit based on your feedback.

The background is set in a small, quiet town on the outskirts of Seoul. In this town, people were friendly, except for one particular neighbourhood. In this neighbourhood, everybody lived their lives as if treading on eggshells, all because of one particular household: the Lees. People surnamed Lee were a dime a dozen, but these particular set of Lees were unique. Dysfunctional. The family consisted of four people; the father and breadwinner Lee Do Joon, the delinquent son Lee Hyuk, the top student Lee Gun, and the town's most beautiful girl Lee Yeo Ri. Lee Yeo Ri was regarded as a saving grace, but before anybody knew it, the saving grace was slowly disintegrating from within. Hidden underneath her perfect, angelic smile, was a girl who was slowly being crushed and torn apart. This is her story. — TRIGGER WARNING — This story contains depictions of rape, violence, and other traumatic scenes. — Cover art by Ren (Twitter: @ikinashi_ren) — Please consider commenting or reviewing; any and all feedback are appreciated! :D

This is the story of a boy who meets with the infamous Truck-kun, Only to be reborn as a prince in a world brimming with cultivation.....!!! Reincarnation with the power of Spirit Stone Generation in the world of cultivation? Watch as he got his ultimate golden finger of generating wealth. But in a land where strength reigns supreme, Will he find a way with his power? With the power of money will he become the next king? _________________________________________________ This is my first novel, and English is not my first language, so please forgive any mistakes. I’d appreciate any help and feedback to make the story better and to know if I’m heading in the right direction.