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Second Awakening? A System? Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again. Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin. Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him. Ding! [The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!] [You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!] [Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!] [Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!] Damien's only option is to evolve! ____________________ A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks. ____________________ ____________________ Update Schedule: 00:30 GMT (+8) 12:30 GMT (+8)

All of a sudden, various watches appeared out of nowhere in different parts of the world. These locations were quickly controlled by various organizations, and then the marketing of the watches was strictly controlled. Why was this? Because these watches gave access to a unique world: Eternity! In this world, it was possible to increase physical strength, unlock new classes and acquire various skills and talents! Joining it also allowed you to awaken your unique talent! And above all, there was the meagre possibility of increasing one's life expectancy! It was with the aim of changing his destiny that Maxime trained his whole life in swordplay, and for many years saved his meagre salary to obtain one of these famous watches! Watch his rise in the real world thanks to Eternity! Chapter release: 1 chs/day. To find out more, to discuss, to give feedback, if you want to add certain things in the story, everything is possible here : https://discord.gg/mkbF4WtMp7

[WSA 2025 ENTRY] “Seriously? Of all the people I could’ve become, I get stuck as him?” Damien was nobody special a shut-in who spent his days reading webnovels and cursing their authors for every bad plot twist. That is, until a knife to the back ended his uneventful life. But instead of dying, he woke up in the world of his favorite novel. Sounds like a dream, right? Wrong. Damien wasn’t the Hero destined for glory, nor the Villain wielding power. He was just an Extra, a throwaway character with a meaningless death written into the story. Armed with knowledge of the plot, Damien swears he won’t let the world chew him up and spit him out. “If this story thinks it can control me, it’s in for a surprise.” 'Can Damien change his fate? or Will he be consumed by plot?' ----------------------------------------------------- Update Frequency - 10 to 14 chapter per week If this story made you smile (or cringe), leave a review! Your feedback fuels the chaos and keeps the adventure going strong! ---------------------------------------------------

Follow the beginning of a new era for humanity... Or rather, the continuation of an era long lost and hidden from everyone for millennia... ------ I don't know what you expect by coming here, but give it a chance and please give me feedback on the chapters, especially the first one. That will tell me whether I should continue or not. It's quite discouraging not to see people commenting and giving ideas. I tried three other books, for which I even got the opportunity to be contracted after just a few chapters, but the lack of feedback was really discouraging. I want to do my best and be recognized for it, so I hope for your help and a little push to get started. I'm kind of stuck. And one more thing, my native language is Portuguese, not English. So there may be a lot of mistakes when switching to English, I'm sorry for anything and I really hope to fix this soon, I'm not very fluent in English either.

## Kingdom Building LitRPG [You have been chosen as a Lord of the Intergalactic Lord Project.] [Your reward: A floating island to call your own.] [Your mission: Build your kingdom, summon legendary allies, and dominate the worlds!] [Your advantage: An SSS-grade Ultimate Gacha System.] Atlas Blackthorn, the newly chosen Lord of a floating island, wields the power to summon legendary warriors, powerful artifacts, and, of course, waifus. With boundless ambition and the Ultimate Gacha System at his side, Atlas sets out to become the strongest Lord in all worlds. How far will his ambition take him? Tags: Action, Kingdom Building, LitRPG, Fantasy, Gacha System, Post-Apocalyptic, Adventure, Power Progression, Strong Protagonist, Strategic Battles, Epic Worldbuilding, Romance *** Discord Server: https://tinyurl.com/galanteodiscord Note to Readers: This is a trial read. I'll be uploading at a slower chapter rate as I explore the direction of the story. If all goes well, I plan to focus on this project and republish it in early 2025. I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback along the way!

Adele was just about to start her life when chaos broke out. Earth and the surrounding star systems were included into the territory of the Spiritual World in the Grand Awakening. Imprisoned in this initial awakening, she and many others were near death. Taking her chance when she found a mysterious necklace floating in the sea of consciousness, she saved herself and fell into a deep sleep. Years later, Adele woke up with the witch inheritance in her hand, ready to take upon the path of a witch and recreating the Witch Coven on Earth. ... - Large world with many facets, not only magic, but also cultivation, divine, spirits, etc. - Single female lead, no romance, strong character - A lot of world building in the initial chapters I hope you enjoy reading my novel! Feel free to comment and give feedback!

"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

This is my first time writing so any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks and I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how far I'll take this story because I'm only writing for fun but I have a lot of ideas that I can make into "hopefully" a great story. Follow the adventures of Jake a young boy from the same age group as Ash Ketchum as he travels through this new world he finds himself in.

Trinity Grove has everything you want. From rich parents to parties to very expensive things. She literally has everything money can buy, but still she feels empty inside. it's almost like something is missing, but what? After her parents divorce, when she was 7, she moves in permanently with her mother, and stepfather. The last thing she remembered of her birth father was him telling her this would happen. She finds out shes a human-dragon hybrid, and things start to seem normal, but that's when she finds herself between a war; a war between dragons and knights and humans. what will happen? will she survive? This is my 1st novel. I hope you like it. I'm looking forward to your feedback.

Having lost all his memories after being sent into a new world, a young boy is pushed to the end of his rope. Only when a man — dressed to the brim in adorned jewelry and fine silk — promised him a new life is when everything changed. If you like Fantasy stories with action, mystery, and hints of slice-of-life, then you've come to the right place! -------- Any support or feedback means a lot to me and helps me grow as a writer, so please comment or leave a review of your thoughts! at minimum 600 words per chapter (Newer chapters typically above 800), at minimum three chapters a week.

How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. As he travels through dangerous lands and faces formidable challenges, he uncovers the hidden truths of his past and the mysterious forces shaping his destiny. Surrounded by powerful rivals, enigmatic figures, and the watchful eyes, Rui must navigate a world where strength is everything and the path to supremacy is filled with both allies and enemies. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

Lucian Ashford transmigrates to become the Son of the marquis but is betrayed, banished to the Darkwood Vale, and left to die there because of a political strike which was led by his family. Lucian Ashford isn't dejected, He has brought a sign-in system with him when he transmigrated and he would receive rewards when he signs in. Before the Cold Palace’s gates, he signs in and receives the Invincible Cultivation! Author's Note: Hey everyone! This is my first time writing a novel, and honestly, I’m both excited and a little nervous to share it with you. If you spot any mistakes or think there’s something I could do better, please let me know! I’m still learning, and your feedback will really help me improve. Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. It means a lot to me, and I hope you’ll enjoy the adventure!

_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated. Check my profile for more work She was not the heiress, the eldest, or the youngest. She just existed in the family, keeping her head down and letting herself wash away until she could leave. "I tried standing out, staying quiet, and even voicing my thoughts. But no matter what I do, I am never acknowledged. Does my existence even matter? After all, it's not like anyone in this family even likes me." Rika Goodwill was the shame of her family. Born the middle 'beta' child of a prominent Alpha-Omega couple, it was natural for her to be neglected compared to her perfect Alpha brother and sweet Omega sister. Her situation outside of her family was no better. People avoided her because of her mafia family and judged her nature without a second thought. Her only friends were the 'sweetheart couple of the century'. But Rika had somehow become a third wheel between their bickering and frequent breakups. Over the course of her 17-year-old life, Rika had come to accept her fate and move on. After all, no amount of complaining would ever change her situation of being a third wheel. Collage was supposed to be her big break. It was supposed to be the time Rika had for herself, where she could feel like herself, so she applied for a place where no one knew her. This was supposed to be her lucky break! Rika was supposed to get away from her worsening life. But neither her family nor her 'friends' were ready to let her go, and it did not take long for her peaceful life to turn sour. ____________ This story will have a straight pairing as well as Yuri and is an omegaverse as well. Female Alphas are Futas. If it's not your cup of tea, leave before you enter. Leave a lot of feedback for me

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

Emperor Titus, ruler of a vast and powerful empire, is the proud father of three daughters (and two sons) — each as distinct and radiant as the stars in the night sky. After a several hundred years, the Emperor has decreed a Royal Selection, where suitors will compete for the hands of his daughters. However, the stakes are far greater than love alone. Each princess will ultimately ascend as the queen of her own kingdom, granted by her father upon the completion of the selection. With power, prestige, and a royal future at stake, the contenders not only vie for the princesses’ hearts but for the coveted title of King Consort. Let the Royal Selection begin. --- - 3 main characters - A diverse set of characters - 6 games, various ML contenders (one reverse harem hehe) - short to long chapters, depending on how I feel - no schedule as of yet, will do 3 chapters a day till 30 though - if you have any feedback or suggestions, let me know in the comments. I’m always lurking lol

Kris Alex de Nayale, a germaphobic, stoic, and loner straight girl, was just a normal girl with a normal college life. ... Or that should have been the case ... "Kris, let's go out?" "Alex! I found a c*ck-shaped rock!" "F*ck you. You're coming with me." "Miss De Nayale, come to the office with me now." However, these girls who suddenly entered her dull life ruined her thoughts of a peaceful campus life ... "Really, I just want to graduate in peace!" _______________________________________________ Author: Hi! New author here! Hope you will like this story and please bear with me. Any constructive feedback is welcome! Edit: Decided to changed the synopsis to make it less misleading.

In a post-apocalyptic fantasy world layered into multiple realms, humanity faces extinction due to their endangerment of the main realm. Forced to merge all realms back into one, a deity grants humans a leveling system to empower them, lest they become extinct when facing the mythical creatures. Noah, our protagonist, embraces the role of a monster tamer, trading his humanity for strength and eventually transforming into a monster himself. As Noah struggles with his evolving identity, he must navigate a world where the line between human and monster becomes increasingly blurred. Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together. I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you. Release chapters will only be one chapter a day on weekdays. The releases will become more consistent depending on how well the story does.

When old gamer, constantly unlucky, Theodore 'Ted' Moore starts playing the new VR game, he understands the luck can be a double edged sword. Will he prevail against the world to secure his place or will he break and become a servant? Can a single man truly stand against rich and powerful? Entry for Contest. Please give your valuable feedback to make the story better.

if you reading or start the novel then give feedback which will help me to know if you had like it or I have to stop this novel very interesting chapters are upcoming which were legendary don't miss it it is full of comedy and laughter. so get ready and support this story.please provide *power stones* to inspire me. I WILL TELL ONLY ONE THING BY MISTAKELY THE MAIN CHARACTER OF THIS STORY BE A MASTER OF A LEGENDARY ARTIFACT FAMOUS FOR IT SEA OF LUCK , THIS NOVEL FOR THEM WHO ARE FINDING A OVERPOWERED MAIN CHARACTER SUPREME FROM EVERY ONE ELSE. SO, GO! ENJOY THIS NOVEL FROM YOUR CORE OF HEART

I do not own the picture that was used for the cover. Neo Muendo is a very intelligent and cunning individual, he will step on, use, manipulate any and all than could be used. But luck wasn’t on his side, he accidentally tried to manipulate Princess Alurra into making him a royal. The royal tutor uncovered his plot……wait I’m telling too much. In this book we have Battleships, magic, skills, levels, gods, and many more. My first publication so I hope for your feedback. The first few chapters will be slow, gotta set the mood, but after that it will speed up significantly…….i hope. I’m in college and have a job so the chapters will be all over the place but I will try to give you guys 5-7 chapters a week. Thank you for the read and leave a comment or criticism for me please. Skip the first 8 chapters, they are a flashback.

I only wanted to change my life around from my shut-in ways but only led to the beginning of my hell. Join royan as he tries to find his way to happiness will he find what he seeks? or will he find something else? The picture does not belong to me if asked i will remove it just contact me at elixirdemon@gmail.com This is my first time writing a novel so any feedback is welcomed and anything you would like to see i will take into account

Johan thought he knew monotony—long hours at work, nights spent solo gaming. But when he's summoned to Eosdadalon, a world of magic, his friends are hailed as the Heroes of Prophecy, while Johan is cast aside, deemed unworthy. Stumbling upon the mysterious Sanity System, a power unlike anything the heroes possess, Johan's path veers into the unknown. Meanwhile, the Penumbra—a pitch-black fog consuming everything in its path—creeps across the land, threatening to engulf the world. Outside the prophecy, with no place in its story, Johan must carve out his own path, unlocking the full potential of the Sanity System to help save a world that may never accept him. His journey is no longer about being a hero but about survival. ------------------------------------------------------------------ I'm currently updating In-Sanity System weekly with multiple chapters, but if this story gains more traction, I'll happily update more. Your support makes all the difference—so please don't forget to leave comments and reviews, give power stones, and let me know what you think! Every bit of feedback helps this story grow!

When war finally ended, the Arcadians sought retribution from the nightmares they had suffered from demonkind. A noble Princess had taken her mother's mantle in order to uphold peace between the two races so humanity could co-exist with their fellow demons in a kingdom without strife, but war paved the road to peace in blood and such path is but a fragile thread awaiting to be ignited by the flames of hatred. Another great war awaits, but will she be able to avert it? Second iteration of the Knight's Fate saga chronologically speaking. Yes I'm starting from the second because the first was an utter failure when I tried to write it, it just didn't fit the mood of a fantasy novel unlike this one. Though don't worry this doesn't mean you can't enjoy this one before I write the first. This is the first story I've actually published so I appreciate any feedback, be it good or bad just let me know what you think.

In a world shrouded in shadows, a young, ordinary boy named Axel discovers an extraordinary destiny. A world of ancient secrets, forbidden knowledge, and terrifying creatures, it's a place where reality is a fragile illusion "Darkness is the absence of light, not an element in itself," he was told, but he created it nonetheless. With Anya by his side, he vows "You and me against the world," as they embark on a quest to become the greatest elementalist the world has ever known. Witness the journey of a monarch in the making NOTE:"As we embark on this journey to write "Elemental Chaos", we invite you to visit the original story and share your valuable insights. Your feedback will play a crucial role in shaping the future of this tale. By taking the time to read and provide your thoughts, you'll be an integral part of this creative process. Let's work together to create a truly extraordinary reading experience"

The journey of a young man who lost everything finding a new reason to live and let go of the past. _______________________ Deep in the darkness a ruined palace made of stone adorned with scars from wars of old. Inside a regal throne of bones atop sat a figure lurking in the darkness. Tic Tic Tic... Flipping open his pocketwatch he smiled "It's almost time" Looking up with his purple orbs he leaned back waiting once more. "Tick Tock Tick Tock... Are you ready?" In the darkness, seven figures stood awaiting his orders. ______________________ I am a new author so any feedback would be great I would like to be able to improve and make this story the best as possible so don't be afraid to correct me on stuff I get wrong or tell me if I worded things badly.

Alaric, an orphan from a quiet village, lived an ordinary life. Strange things often happened around him, like freezing a charging boar with a gesture. One day, he healed an injured stranger with glowing hands. “You’re a Gifter,” the man said, leaving Alaric questioning his power and his identity. #READATYOUROWNRISK I’m a new writer, so there will be mistakes. By receiving feedback and support, I can improve my work and do my best.

"Caden Mort awakens after an incident that led to his death in a strange and unfamiliar place. Nevertheless, he moves forward, determined to survive and live in this forgotten world." Hello, I am the author of this book. I am a new writer, so if you have any feedback or notice any mistakes in the novel, please write them in the comments. **Update schedule:** - Sunday: 1 chapter - Monday: 2 chapters - Tuesday: 1 chapter - Wednesday: 2 chapters - Thursday: 1 chapter - Friday: 3 chapters - Saturday: 1 chapter Feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions!

They say some things happen for a reason. Maybe it's true or it's jusThey say some things happen for a reason. Maybe it's true or it's just one of those things people say when they don't want to face the truth of the matter or to deal with the fact that things have changed. That said, if anyone told you that in just a day everything would change drastically and I do mean it literally, you would probably laugh your head off at how ridiculous it sounded. And yet, with everything shrouded in mystery, is everything purely cliché or mere stereotype? And what's more is everyone friend or foe? Dangerous Love is entirely a work of fiction. Any coincidences in names or actions in this story are just those coincidences. This story might contain some graphic scenes either sexual or violent, well as much as my brain can conjure them. As I said this draft is entirely a work of fiction, I came up with in between high school and still a work in progress. And while I'm open to feedback and appreciate it, I might not incorporate it all. **Cover is not mine. Courtesy of original owner. **

Liam, a very rare male Dryad, lives in a world filled with humans, angels, demons, fallen angels, vampires, gods, and many other races. The story follows Liam's adventures as he goes to humans to learn about them and adapt. Liam: "Hello, I'm Liam, a male Dryad. Isn't that interesting? Come, let's go on an adventure together." English is not my first language, and this is my first story, so expect plenty of mistakes, hahahah. Thank you for reading and commenting. I don’t want stones or anything like that, I’m open to both positive and negative feedback, just be a bit gentle, hahaha, I can be quite emotional.

Rein was walking home after finishing his part-time job, his thoughts drifting as he strolled through the quiet streets. Unbeknownst to him, he passed through an invisible gate—one that neither the eye could see nor the senses could detect. Was this an accidental misstep, or was it something beyond his control? To find out, you’ll need to read the novel and uncover the truth. Please note that the cover image is not my own; I found it on Google, where it was labeled as free to use. If you are the original creator and wish for me to remove it, please contact me. Additionally, English is not my first language, so there may be some grammatical errors in the text. Lastly, this is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I’m still learning the craft. I would greatly appreciate any constructive criticism or feedback you can offer. Please feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions!