Hunter X Hunter - Reviewers Rage
Togiri, once a ruthless critic feared for his scathing reviews, never imagined his sharp tongue would earn the attention of beings beyond comprehension.
Amused by his judgmental nature, these gods granted his deepest wish—transmigration into a world of his choosing.
But there was a catch. Train. Fight. Entertain.
Every time he failed, his memories were erased, and he was thrown back into the cycle—until his value as entertainment ran dry.
This time, he was granted one advantage: the authority to forge his own system.
A system designed to help him grow, conquer, and break free from the gods’ cruel grasp. But the moment he arrived, his mind was shattered—billions of memories from past failures flooded in.
His friends’ screams, his lovers’ dying breaths, his children's mutilated bodies—scenes of tragedy, loss, and helplessness seared into his very soul.
Enraged beyond reason, Togiri’s body broke under the weight of grief. He punched the ground relentlessly, his bones shattering, flesh torn, consumed by his own hatred.
@Master, your memories have been sealed to prevent total collapse. The system is now restricted@
Two-thirds of his pain locked away, but at a price—99% of the system’s functions sealed. Only by earning Existence Points, Shop Points, and Reviewer Points could he restore his power and reclaim what was lost.
Togiri donned a mask, hiding his pain behind a smirk, deceiving the world as he walked the fine line between hero, villain, and something else entirely.
By night, he became the Blue Demon, a faceless terror preying on criminals for his own gain. By day, he built his foundation—training, forging, fighting, growing stronger.
But as he chased power, he found himself entangled in deeper mysteries. His past self, Tetsura—why had he sacrificed his own friends for strength? Why had he cried despite his overwhelming power? Why did he name Togiri after his long-dead companion? And what was “The Order” he had feared so much?
In search of answers, Togiri dissected his Nen ability—Phantom Book & Phantom Pages—seeking ways to refine it, to make it his own rather than the remnant of another’s will. He knew his talent was meager, but talent could be replaced with strategy, with adaptability, with absolute ruthlessness.
Meanwhile, Fang, his adoptive brother, walked his own path. Under Master Yu, a man whose strength defied reason, he witnessed the impossible—a tree withering, blooming, and dissolving into water at a mere gesture.
"They think they know the rules of Nen," Master Yu spoke, "but they have merely imitated someone else's understanding. Even Netero, that young man, is mistaken."
Fang watched in awe as the very laws of Nen were rewritten before his eyes. If even the strongest were blind to Nen’s true nature… what did that mean for the world itself?
With Shura No Kōrin—The Descent of the Asura—approaching, Nen users from across the world would gather, seeking glory, power, and blood. Togiri had 54 days left to prepare.
Would he rise? Would he break?
Would he finally be free?
Togiri's current Nen type: Conjuration
Nen ability: Phantom Book & Phantom Pages.
Body Cultivation: First Layer of Marrow Refinement.
I am doing a slow rewrite, the first dozen or two dozen chapters aren't that enjoyable, but it gets better later on.
