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"So... well... I died as it seems? Then I woke up as a character from an online science fiction game... And the craziest thing was that I was in my personal spaceship... Aside from that, I have this weird gaming system bugging me with missions and stuff... So... finally, something interesting happened in my life at last. At least now, I am unbound by anything and can do as I wish." - Acturus Al-Yesod Crawford "In the grim darkness of the endless space, there is only one sole constant that has ruled the space since immemorial, that dictated the life and death, the order and chaos of every single living being. Power. This is the story of one of the most controversial people in the history of the Known Universe, Arcturus Al-Yesod Crawford, the Star Mercenary, Bounty Hunter, Trader and many other titles..." - Prologue Chronicles of the Known Universe: Chapter Star Citizen, Star Date: Unknown *** Tags: Aliens, Androids, Army, Army Building, Automatons, Assassins, Artificial Intelligence, Cosmic Wars, Fleet Battles, Futuristic Setting, Male Protagonist, Mercenaries, Monsters, Outer Space, Nobles, Late Romance, Slow Romance, Money Grubber, Supernatural Powers, Psychic Powers, System, Game Elements, Strategic Battles, Strong to Stronger, Transported into a Game World, Wars, Evolution, Genetic Modifications, Industrialization, Military, Politics, Poor to Rich, Strength-Based Social Hierarchy, Time Skip

A young village boy is thrust into a hidden realm of magic and intrigue, a side of the world far beyond his wildest imaginings. Watch as he transforms from a simple child to a qualified mage in his quest for power... his quest for truths. Patreon (3 Advanced Chapters): patreon.com/TaleDrifter No romance or harem (99.99% sure this will not change). The first 2 or 3 chapters don't contain any action. They mainly serve to introduce MC and some of the backstory of the world. The cover image was AI-generated. Editing of chapters was carried out with assistance from ChatGPT.

Mysterious occurrences loom; the entire world dramatically changes. The fate of individuals and nations becomes bound to AnalogHorror (rule kaidan), and once the chosen of destiny fail, it means countless people in their corresponding nation will be slaughtered by the strange phenomena. The entire world falls into unrest, panic, and despair. Until an absolutely unexpected individual joins the AnalogHorror game. Xiao Yiwang glanced at the weird world before him and then at the examination admission ticket in his hand. "Have middle school entrance exams always been this complicated? Well, it does prove my intelligence!" "I am retarded, but selected to join the analoghorror game?!"

When Seo Bo-Hwa’s sister requires a tutor to take the college admission test, not wanting to disturb her brother, she asks her friends for help. One for her close friends asks her sister who is a 3rd year in the reputed K. College. She immediately refers, Ki Chul-Mu, another 2nd year student and junior. The complications start after Chul-Mu accepts the offer to tutor her. Handsome and manly as he was, he had many admirers, both male and female. One of them was Bo-Hwa, his classmate. But Bo-Hwa’s feelings were a little more than just admiration. Bo-Hwa doesnt know Chul-Mu’s heart and tries his best to pursue the uncertain path of love that may or may not yield results. Read to find out if these two find their destiny or not.

Hector Johanson, a resourceful university student, wakes up to a world overrun by flesh-eating zombies. As the world crumbles all around him. Hector stumbles upon an extraordinary system embedded in his mind: The Survival Shop, a store that can provide anything he needs—food, weapons, medicine, or even absurdly powerful artifacts. The only catch? He has to pay with life points—earned by battling the undead and surviving the apocalypse. The shop offers ranges from the most menial items to being able to field an army and reclaim the world. The only question is: Will he be able to afford the price tag for it? Author's note: this is my first time publishing a story all feedback is welcome. The story is meant to be grim and although the shop offers a vast selection of services the issue is mainly in their price tag.

Piper spent most of her young life climbing the ranks of her nation's military with one goal in mind: Become an Aeronaut in the Skyfleet - the most renowned and technologically advanced force in human history; however, a fatal mistake across an international border results in her immediate transfer to the last place she ever expected to be. This story has been edited by Dunham Documents. Editing requests available at dunhamdocumentservices@gmail.com

A young, ostracized orphan named Lin Wei stumbles upon a hidden system that grants him incredible power, thrusting him into a world of ancient martial arts, celestial cultivation, and a destiny he never imagined. To be edited and revise.

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After dying for the 7th time Wu Liang Hui is brought back to life in the body of a young mage who passed away in his sleep. The reason : he must find where the body he had in his 1st life is being kept and reunite it with his soul. new link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-legendary-mage-and-his-4-husbands_31713508708576205

What will happen, if you get suddenly thrown into an unknown era of time due to a simple glitch in the passage of 'Time'? What if you find yourself in an era of the past, of a place which you even don't belong to? Time has been playing games, but Things, almost everything- happen for a reason. -A 'reason', which we humans can't 'reason' on! . . Rishabh Paul, a History student from India, finds himself transmigrated from the 21st century to the 1st Millenium Jin Dynasty under some mysterious circumstances. He wakes up in the body of 'Ruo Yun Jin'- the second prince of the Caizhou Jins; and a person who can foresee the future. But, Things became worse when the conflicts of the court and country, engulfed Rishabh in the historical conflict between the Mongols and Jin Dynasty. The next is for your buddies to read and find out! . . . THIS NOVEL IS UNDER EDITS! PLEASE WAIT FOR THE AUTHOR TO EDIT THE NOVEL! ____________________________________________ Cover BACKGROUND CREDITS for the respective owners, Kindly contact for removal/credit. (BG was taken from Pinterest and edited on PicsArt) . . [Note- Most of the story is written 'on the go', it's unabridged in many chapters, it will be very kind if the reader can point out the mistakes in the text; So, it can be easier for the Author to eradicate them and correct them.] YOUR SUGGESTIONS= MY STORY!

Currently, this novel is unavailable. As a "beginner" author, I’ve spent the past four months improving my skills, and looking back, I find what I’ve written before to be, well... not great. Over the next month or so, I’ll be editing and reworking this book to make it better. Completed: 4 / 116 chapters.

The only word to discribe him gorgeous. Why, why me , why us , why so many mysteries. I wish this was all a dream if I could wake up one day to be in his arms just the two of us together. To live in happiness . I will protect her even if it will cost my life. I will do everything to support and protect her that was a promise and I am not going to break it. But there seem to be something ouside that leaves the inside untouchable. Is all this just real or was it or was it not PLANNED??? This book would be under heavy editing, so It is recommended to not read until further notice. Thank you

I am shyam, a ordinary guy with some video editing skills. I used to edit videos for clients at day and pass my time watching vtubers at night. I was doing the same at an ordinary night but — it did not go as usual, somehow I felt like I was getting deeply connected to that vtuber whom I watched. I felt in love with her, i tried to escape that feeling telling myself she deserves someone better, but my heart and soul has already decided to be hers. and so was her ---- ---- book [ version refined timed 3rd ] changed 3rd version polished ---

A sickly boy meets an untimely end, dying alone and cold. As he stares up at the moon, his final wish is to help the protagonist of his favorite novel find a happier ending. Miraculously, his wish is granted, and he’s reborn with the chance to change the fate of the world he once adored. But will everything unfold according to plan, or will he have to adapt his strategy to navigate a path filled with unexpected twists? Trigger Warnings: This novel contains themes that may not be suitable for younger readers, including but not limited to violence, descriptive gore, profanity, and mature content. Reader discretion is advised. Note from the Author: This is a passion project that I started years ago on a whim, without much experience in writing outside of essays. Please bear with me as the story may contain errors—typos, awkward phrasing, and occasionally confusing or overcomplicated descriptions. I am continuously editing and improving older chapters, but corrections may take time. Some chapters might be deleted or revised if I feel they no longer serve the overall narrative. Genres & Tags: Genres: Action Adventure Comedy Drama Fantasy Romance School-Life War Sub-tags: Reincarnation Handsome Protagonist Genius Protagonist Weak-to-Strong Strong-to-Stronger Leveling System Gods, Demons, Elves, Hybrids Magic, Mana Undercover Protagonist Tragedy Harem Unrequited Love Nobility, Companions BL/Possibly BL Content Warning: This story may contain profanity, suggestive content, and graphic violence. Please proceed with caution, as the themes may be intense or disturbing for some readers. Why You Should Read: If you’re a fan of epic fantasy adventures, character growth, and unexpected twists, this story will take you on a rollercoaster ride through thrilling battles, deep emotions, and complex relationships. Follow a protagonist determined to rewrite his fate, protect his loved ones, and carve his own path in a world of gods and monsters. But beware—nothing is ever as simple as it seems, and the journey ahead will be anything but predictable.

Explicitly, this is a collection of plays, essays, descriptions, poems, letters, biographies, blogs (stuff) I've written for school assessments over the recent years. Some of these may eventually become a standalone novel, but that is yet to be decided. And hence, the title "Precedence" is given to this novel.

///Author note this is my first time writing a web novel so I apologize for my writing. However I will do best to improve and I would like to say I not against making small changes to the certain character if necessary. //// This is a story about how a young boy who receives information about, the future from advice called the 'Apuls '.Which helped strengthen his mind, giving him an edge over others, watch him use his future knowledge and devilish good looks to take over the world.As he take the responsibility of taking his family and friends out of the slamps and to a life of wealth and luxury. What as he conquers the film, music, gaming fashion industry and tech industry by strom with the help of his family and friends. This story is similar to novel such as I in Hollywood but, don't focus to much of movies making heavily. But, the entertainment and business world as a whole. #No harem,

Genius Made a mistake and pays for it. The gods bring her into their game for entertainment Join us in Watching the game of the gods. EDITING IN PROCESS!! Any errors are in line with the Editing Process. Thank you for your understanding. The image is the first-ever work I had done of Chelsea. Enjoy Support me and my works at www.Patreon.com/Madjic

Leo and Keith come from completely different lifestyles: Leo, a rich student, and Keith, a rural laborer. The two learn they may have more in common than they think after meeting against Keith's better judgment one fateful night. Join the two new lovers in a story of new beginnings.

[a boy who transmigrates to another world and lets everything flow as he should, just knows that he has to remain strong in order not to be intimidated.] the image does not belong to me if you want to remove it just let me know. Just writing to see if I improve my writing and it doesn't go blank when writing. if you have tips thank you.

Artists often face various challenges when creating content. Difficulties artists encounter are numerous in number while not infinite it would write and essay The common ones are ;Creative block, Time management, Self doubt, Financial constraints ,Pressure to conform ,Technical know how and skills ,*ORIGINALITY* These challenges can vary depending on the individual artist, their medium, and their goals. But !, the most important one to note is,…. Cri…Criticism and lack of feedback . "But are all just excuses of lazy and unprofessional creators " That one person Y-Yes…, while that is true for some it doesn't change the fact that it's a problem. But I guess you'd have to see for yourself Let me know if you fall into the category of any of— [Zzttt…] "Adedejiii !!!!.. come here rigHT NOW!!!"

Elizabeth Belvoir is over the moon when she opens an admission letter from Duelcrest, the Royal Academy of Magic. Finally she has a chance to escape her boring, mundane life to follow in the footsteps of her idol Aldric, the most powerful mage in the kingdom. But what seemed like an exciting dream soon turns into a terrible waking nightmare. Trapped in a deadly game, Elizabeth will experience fear, doubts and regrets, but also a new feeling, unknown to her. Can love blossom even in a field of death? And is it strong enough to defy a terrible fate?

Professor Ramchandra Gaur is chased by a ruthless man, Tej Pratap Rana, who desperately wants something the professor possesses. Surrounded and under threat, Ramchandra refuses to hand over the mysterious object, knowing it could lead to widespread destruction if it falls into Rana’s hands. With his wife’s life also in danger, the professor chooses to jump into a ditch with her rather than surrender, seemingly sacrificing them both.Nine years later, a bright but poor student named Aadarsh gains admission to RH University, an elite institution. Despite being the top-ranked student, he faces hostility and bullying for surpassing Princess Riana, daughter of Maharana Dev Singh, in rank. Aadarsh, feeling out of place and targeted by the wealthy students, struggles to adjust. The connection between Aadarsh and Professor Gaur’s mysterious past is yet to be revealed, but both seem linked by a larger conspiracy, possibly involving a dangerous secret that could change everything.

"So, what do you want to do?" Audrey's voice was gentle yet probing, seeking a glimpse into the depths of my heart amidst the wreckage. "I want to forget it all," I replied, the words raw and desperate. "Forget our relationship, forget the lives I took." Fresh tears welled, blurring my vision. "Are you sure? Some memories are worth holding onto," she countered, her voice laced with worry, as if fearing I was making a choice I might regret. "Not when they hurt. Not when they're constant reminders of what could have been," I retorted, each word a painful admission. "I have a way," she said suddenly, a flicker of determination igniting her features. She headed upstairs, beckoning for me to follow. A small spark of curiosity flickered within me amidst my despair.

"Whispers in the Dark: A Collection of Seductive Secrets" is a tantalizing anthology that delves into the mysterious and alluring world of secrets and seduction. This collection of short stories, poems, and essays explores the hidden desires, forbidden passions, and unspoken truths that lie within the human heart. From the shadows of the past to the uncertainties of the future, these whispers reveal the complexities of human nature and the power of the unknown. With each page, readers are drawn into a realm where the boundaries of morality and desire blur, and the secrets that bind us together are laid bare.

[MATURE CONTENT] Enter the world of Lila Elara Forbes Montgrave, a rose with thorns, shaped by tragedy and reborn with vengeance. Betrayed by her lover and given a second shot at life, she uses her beauty as a weapon in a deadly game of love, hate, and power. But as her past and present meet, will she reshape her fate or succumb to the darkness within? Warning: Viewers discretion is advised. Read at your own risk.

The story focuses on two characters: Oga and Nuu. Journey with them on their path to Power using any and all means necessary to reach the Apex. Extra Tags: Clan-building, and Worldbuilding I OWN THIS IMAGE Art by, Weymaker, you can find him on Fiverr for art commission. https://www.fiverr.com/s2/ba79bd2eb4 Shout-Out to ChatGPT, saving me hours of editing (Original story). Slow Updates + If It's not your taste, drop it! You owe me nothing, no need to leave a dramatic comment! (Graphic Sex) (Not for the Faint of Heart)

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In the midst of academic pressures, personal struggles, and romantic entanglements, a tight-knit group of Nigerian friends navigate the ups and downs of secondary school and beyond. Iyiola, Enoch, Chris, and Amaka form an unbreakable bond as they prepare for their WAEC examinations, face university admissions, and embark on the challenges of higher education. As they transition from secondary school to university life, they encounter new experiences, struggles, and relationships. They must balance academic responsibilities, personal growth, and social pressures, all while staying true to themselves and their friendships. Through laughter, tears, and self-discovery, this heartwarming tale of young love, friendship, and perseverance explores the complexities of growing up, finding one's identity, and navigating the uncertainties of adulthood. Set against the vibrant backdrop of Nigerian culture, this story will resonate with anyone who's ever navigated the joys and struggles of young adulthood.

Opening his eyes, the protagonist finds himself back in 2016, the time when he was an United trainee on the verge of being eliminated from the team. Fortunately, he's blessed with a proficiency panel by his side. Starting with Strength LV1, he grinds his way up to Muscle Dominator LV10, capable of turning the tide with sheer power. From Running LV1, he trains relentlessly until he's an unstoppable force, achieving Lightning Speed LV10. From Long-range Shots LV1, he pushes through to unlock the Nuclear Shooter LV10! In an era where the likes of Messi and Ronaldo are set to become legends, he teams up with the legendary coach Jose Mourniho to forge a new football myth. Years later, when he looks back, he realizes he’s created an unshakable legacy, dominating every aspect of the game—his journey leading to an unmatched, all-conquering football career. His name? The Football God!