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"So... well... I died as it seems? Then I woke up as a character from an online science fiction game... And the craziest thing was that I was in my personal spaceship... Aside from that, I have this weird gaming system bugging me with missions and stuff... So... finally, something interesting happened in my life at last. At least now, I am unbound by anything and can do as I wish." - Acturus Al-Yesod Crawford "In the grim darkness of the endless space, there is only one sole constant that has ruled the space since immemorial, that dictated the life and death, the order and chaos of every single living being. Power. This is the story of one of the most controversial people in the history of the Known Universe, Arcturus Al-Yesod Crawford, the Star Mercenary, Bounty Hunter, Trader and many other titles..." - Prologue Chronicles of the Known Universe: Chapter Star Citizen, Star Date: Unknown *** Tags: Aliens, Androids, Army, Army Building, Automatons, Assassins, Artificial Intelligence, Cosmic Wars, Fleet Battles, Futuristic Setting, Male Protagonist, Mercenaries, Monsters, Outer Space, Nobles, Late Romance, Slow Romance, Money Grubber, Supernatural Powers, Psychic Powers, System, Game Elements, Strategic Battles, Strong to Stronger, Transported into a Game World, Wars, Evolution, Genetic Modifications, Industrialization, Military, Politics, Poor to Rich, Strength-Based Social Hierarchy, Time Skip

A young village boy is thrust into a hidden realm of magic and intrigue, a side of the world far beyond his wildest imaginings. Watch as he transforms from a simple child to a qualified mage in his quest for power... his quest for truths. Patreon (3 Advanced Chapters): patreon.com/Perma_Frost No romance or harem (99.99% sure this will not change). The first 2 or 3 chapters don't contain any action. They mainly serve to introduce MC and some of the backstory of the world. The cover image was AI-generated. Editing was carried out with assistance from ChatGPT.

Conrad barely scraped through high school and ended up with grades too low to secure a college admission. And for a reject like him, a bleak future was already a possibility. So, he turned to the one thing he knew best, pickpocketing. A heist gone seemingly right thrusted him in the hidden world of assassins and magic. Now a Diviner Marked by the Arcane Master, The Devil, Conrad is blackmailed into working as an assassin in a world where fate is written in the cards.

In the city of Neonvista, a semi-developed city with a mix of advanced technology and stark social inequality, lives a girl named Lana Veil, 17 years old, the only daughter of an old mechanic. Since childhood, Lana dreamed of becoming a professional racer, inspired by her late mother who was a legendary racer before an accident took her life. However, Lana's dream feels impossible. The only vehicle he owns is the Falcon-X, an old car left to him by his father, which is barely roadworthy. In a city filled with plasma energy-powered cars and drivers with advanced AI technology, it is considered impossible for Lana to compete. With steely determination and the help of her father who understands every bolt and engine of the Falcon-X, Lana begins her journey to the professional racing arena. Along her journey, Lana faces discrimination, sabotage and psychological pressure. However, with courage and honed skills, he proved that true speed lies not only in machines, but also in human spirit and determination. ~~~ Novel by : HanifM12 ~~~

Di kota Neonvista, sebuah kota setengah maju dengan perpaduan teknologi canggih dan kesenjangan sosial yang mencolok, hidup seorang gadis bernama Lana Veil, 17 tahun, anak perempuan tunggal dari seorang mekanik tua. Sejak kecil, Lana bermimpi menjadi pembalap profesional, terinspirasi oleh mendiang ibunya yang dulunya adalah pembalap legendaris sebelum kecelakaan merenggut nyawanya. Namun, mimpi Lana terasa mustahil. Satu-satunya kendaraan yang ia miliki hanyalah Falcon-X, mobil tua peninggalan ayahnya, yang hampir tidak layak jalan. Di tengah kota yang dipenuhi mobil-mobil bertenaga energi plasma dan pengemudi dengan teknologi AI canggih, Lana dianggap mustahil bersaing. Dengan tekad baja dan bantuan ayahnya yang memahami setiap baut dan mesin Falcon-X, Lana memulai perjalanan menuju arena balapan profesional. Dalam perjalanannya, Lana menghadapi diskriminasi, sabotase, dan tekanan psikologis. Namun, dengan keberanian dan keahlian yang diasah, ia membuktikan bahwa kecepatan sejati tidak hanya ada pada mesin, tetapi juga dalam semangat dan tekad manusia. ~~~ novel by HanifM12

[Editing and Proofreading currently going on] Message dated -29/11/2024 Jin, a guy with no direction in life, through an unfortunate event gets his hands on a Hitman System. What transpired then was a struggle to escape the eyes of the cops while trying to complete the system's missions. However, through a series of coincidences, he soon finds out that his parents' death was not an accident. Read how he uncovers the veil that has obscured the truth from his eyes since childhood and finds out the darkness that hides under this veil. Discord:- https://discord.gg/64JD86pQKh

For centuries, portals have appeared across the world, linking Earth to the treacherous domain of dungeons. Monsters pour forth, threatening humanity’s existence. To combat them, individuals known as Hunters awaken special abilities, allowing them to enter dungeons, slay beasts, and grow stronger. Discord: https://discord.gg/H9ZWm2R7 (Disclaimer: I don't use ai for editing or making the story, this is my third novel, so that is why it will be a little bit perfect)

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///Author note this is my first time writing a web novel so I apologize for my writing. However I will do best to improve and I would like to say I not against making small changes to the certain character if necessary. //// This is a story about how a young boy who receives information about, the future from advice called the 'Apuls '.Which helped strengthen his mind, giving him an edge over others, watch him use his future knowledge and devilish good looks to take over the world.As he take the responsibility of taking his family and friends out of the slamps and to a life of wealth and luxury. What as he conquers the film, music, gaming fashion industry and tech industry by strom with the help of his family and friends. This story is similar to novel such as I in Hollywood but, don't focus to much of movies making heavily. But, the entertainment and business world as a whole. #No harem,

Ryu and Tony Kaisen, two determined brothers, win a marathon to secure their admission to the prestigious EX Agency, where they train alongside friends Kai, Jin, and the enigmatic Wei. As they delve into their training, they uncover rumors of a legendary weapon hidden within a mysterious cave, igniting their curiosity and sense of adventure. However, their excitement quickly turns to dread when dark forces and monstrous creatures emerge, threatening their lives and the safety of the agency. When Wei mysteriously disappears into the cave, Ryu, Tony, Kai, and Jin must band together to harness their newfound weapon powers and rescue him. As they confront ancient evils and unravel the secrets of their weapons, they learn that true strength lies not just in their abilities but in their unbreakable bond of friendship. United in purpose, they rise to become the legendary Sevpons, determined to protect their world from impending destruction.

[Warning! this story was written with AI. i re-read the chapter and edit it from there. i dont need your stones but more recommendations at the end of the chapter about the direction the story should move in.]

[Under editing!] [Recommended to read after the editing is done] The mighty heavens exist, ruling over all things. Those favored by its will are granted power and fortune, while those who dared to oppose it perished, leaving none behind. This is the tale of a man who once defied the heavens, underwent multiple reincarnations, and returned once more to the cultivation world. But here’s the twist. This young man remembers nothing of his past lives and is simply a teenager from Earth. How will he who has no knowledge of cultivation and experience in fighting, survive this grim world while being an inner disciple of a lower realm force—or so Xiao chen, the teenager thought till he heard a systematic sound in his mind. [Ding! Host has awakened the heaven's destined villain system!]

Genius Made a mistake and pays for it. The gods bring her into their game for entertainment Join us in Watching the game of the gods. EDITING IN PROCESS!! Any errors are in line with the Editing Process. Thank you for your understanding. The image is the first-ever work I had done of Chelsea. Enjoy Support me and my works at www.Patreon.com/Madjic

Following the world's greatest catastrophe, which nearly led to the apocalypse, the revelation of the ability to utilize magic was brought to light. With the globe entering a new era, an Academy specializing and entirely for ability users was established. At the academy, abilities are evaluated and ranked based on how they influence the world. Gleren, an F-rank student, covertly works for an organization that preserves global harmony and balance. A peace lover who would rather watch anime and play games than to do anything bothersome. But one day, with the arrival of Maria, the vampire princess, his peaceful life came crashing down. Maria the Last Vampire is a special existence for which she was constantly sought after. With danger always lurking about the Vampire Princess, Gleren Stasis—the F-ranked student at Saint Stella Academy—was tasked with protecting her at all costs without disclosing the truth about himself.

I was a fire, and he was my fuel. The chapters have not been edited so I'm sorry if there are any errors. Thank you!

[Warning]: This book is so interesting that you’ll fall in love with it. So, read at your own risk. Ars Segrain was an ordinary boy until he gets an admission in an elite school. Except for him, everyone in that school was the son of an aristocrat. He got admission there because one day he saved a man’s life, and that man was the chairman of the elite school. The chairman offered him a place at the school, and Ars accepted the opportunity to become the best. Ars’s only goal was to surpass everyone in the world in terms of knowledge, which is quite funny because Ars was only 16 years old. In this world, there are many unknown geniuses with a lot of experience. But that’s not a difficult objective for Ars Segrain because he has a cheat skill that can: MAKE A COPY OF ANOTHER PERSON’S KNOWLEDGE AND TRANSFER IT INTO HIS OWN BRAIN. That’s all his cheat skill does, but in the view of Ars Segrain, that’s quite enough to turn the whole world upside down. ---------------- ---------------- Read my novel. I promise you’ll love it.

The Daemons await their feast, but in the unforgiving world of Farabane, Aurin's fate was meant to be short-lived. Yet, the greed of the people had other plans. Condemning him to endure the cruelties inflicted by blood-bound smugglers who traversed the land. All he wished was to be free, even if it were to be temporary. - I might be editing this story quite a bit, so over time some wording and dialogue might change a little. (Only a little though, nothing that will change the story.)  This story is also being published on Royal Road, and Wattpad. Copyright | All Rights Reserved ©

Jeong-Ho was deeply engrossed in writing an essay about Earth when a package arrived, which he initially assumed was sent by his brother. He placed it in the living room and returned to his work , after a week passed and summer break started Curiosity piqued, he eventually opened the box to discover a video game inside. Intrigued, he read the game’s description and quickly logged in to explore its features, immersing himself in the rules and mechanics. Before long, he found himself captivated by the gameplay, which revolved around a realistic simulation where players assume the role of a scientist tasked with saving the world from a perilous fungus outbreak. During his adventure, he encountered an abandoned experiment known as 560, a rare specimen believed to be a potential weapon against the fungus king, although previous attempts to utilize it had failed miserably. Determined to assist 560 in its quest for survival, Jeong-Ho formed a bond with the creature, but their journey took a dramatic turn following a catastrophic incident that changed everything. *This novel is inspired by a Chinese novel titled "Raising Little Monster" which i recommend you read it. *

A collection of horror stories set during Christmas, where the warmth and cheer of the holiday season are overshadowed by dark, sinister forces. Each tale explores the eerie and unexpected side of the holidays, blending traditional Christmas elements with terrifying twists. The stories evoke a sense of dread, turning familiar Christmas symbols into harbingers of fear and uncertainty, leaving the characters—and the readers—wondering what horrors lurk behind the festive facade. The collection weaves together suspense, mystery, and terror, all set against the backdrop of the most wonderful time of the year.

Just an ordinary high school student, Shuu Suzumura, is currently facing a dilemma. It's because he keeps hearing voices announcing that he has acquired new skills, even though he has no recollection of doing anything to earn them. "You have acquired a skill. You have acquired a skill. You have acquired a skill. Etc..." In other words, it's extremely annoying. ** This story will be going through heavy editing, and even a rewrite. Please stay tuned.

Teens find themselves scooped up in a bizarre plot. Editer: Doom291

A very short story about a CIA agent. NOTE TO READER: I wrote this short story (idea and editing) in only a hour. So the quality is going to be pretty bad.

Elizabeth Belvoir is over the moon when she opens an admission letter from Duelcrest, the Royal Academy of Magic. Finally she has a chance to escape her boring, mundane life to follow in the footsteps of her idol Aldric, the most powerful mage in the kingdom. But what seemed like an exciting dream soon turns into a terrible waking nightmare. Trapped in a deadly game, Elizabeth will experience fear, doubts and regrets, but also a new feeling, unknown to her. Can love blossom even in a field of death? And is it strong enough to defy a terrible fate?

In the celestial realm of the Moon, a timeless entity known as the Watcher stands sentinel, gazing down upon the vast expanse of the universe with eyes that see beyond the veil of time and space. From this lofty perch, the Watcher bears witness to the unfolding drama of existence, observing the intricate interplay of gods and mortals across the seven realms of Eternivara and the mortal world of Earth. As the Watcher surveys the cosmos, they offer a guided tour through the realms of Eternivara, each one a world unto itself, governed by its own laws and inhabited by its own inhabitants. From the celestial splendor of Aethion to the fiery depths of Hellion, from the watery depths of Hydroxymos to the shadowy realm of Noxymos, each realm is a testament to the boundless creativity and imagination of the divine. In "Eternivara: Summary Edition [Moon Saga]," readers are invited to embark on a journey through the realms of Eternivara, guided by the omniscient perspective of the Watcher. Through vivid descriptions and captivating narratives, the Watcher recounts the key events and themes that shape the mythology of Eternivara, offering insights and reflections on the epic saga that spans the cosmos. In Aethion, the celestial realm of light and purity, readers witness the divine machinations of celestial beings and the eternal struggle between order and chaos. From the celestial palaces of the gods to the celestial gardens of the heavens, Aethion is a realm of transcendence and enlightenment, where mortal souls aspire to attain divine grace and ascend to higher planes of existence. In Hellion, the infernal realm of darkness and despair, readers are plunged into the fiery depths of damnation, where the souls of the damned suffer for their sins under the watchful eye of the fearsome deity Hellwroth. From the jagged mountains of obsidian to the rivers of molten lava, Hellion is a realm of punishment and torment, where the flames of damnation burn eternal. In Hydroxymos, the watery realm of mystery and wonder, readers explore the depths of the ocean floor and the hidden secrets that lie beneath the waves. Ruled by ancient sea gods and mystical creatures, Hydroxymos is a realm of fluidity and transformation, where the boundaries between land and sea blur and the secrets of the deep remain shrouded in mystery. In Ignitimos, the fiery realm of passion and ambition, readers witness the forging of souls in the crucible of fire, where the flames of creation and destruction burn eternal under the watchful gaze of the powerful deity Pyrothos. From the volcanic peaks to the lava fields, Ignitimos is a realm of forging and refining, where the trials of fire temper the souls of its inhabitants and forge them into beings of strength and resilience. In Nitromos, the realm of air and freedom, readers soar through the boundless skies and explore the floating islands and cloud cities that dot the horizon. Ruled by the enigmatic deity Aerion, Nitromos is a realm of exploration and discovery, where the winds of change carry the dreams and aspirations of its inhabitants to new horizons. In Noxymos, the shadowy realm of darkness and mystery, readers venture into the depths of the unknown, where shadows dance and whispers echo through the darkness. Ruled by the elusive deity Noctura, Noxymos is a realm of secrets and hidden truths, where the shadows of the past and the fears of the future converge to test the resolve of its inhabitants. And in Earth, the mortal realm of humanity, readers witness the struggles and triumphs of mortal beings as they navigate the complexities of life, love, and destiny. From the bustling cities to the remote wilderness areas, Earth is a world of diversity and contradiction, where the forces of good and evil wage an eternal struggle for supremacy. In the summary edition, readers experience the whole Eternivara cosmos from the perspective of the Watcher.

Our main Protagonist in this novel is Fila and Dilin is her lover.Her most nearst person is Hila her grandma and her brother spencer....She is tomboy type girl..She got admission in university where she hides her identity as a Thailand 1st richest person's daughter and heiress of EVE group and she is Queen in mafia world, there her name is phantom lord and her rival is bloody omega.....but bloody omega is one of her most nearest person and no one know about there true identities...wanna know there true identities just read my novel.....

Kyle travels through the world of magic and is bound to the Great Collector System. He will gain different rewards as long as he can collect magic items. "Congratulations to the host for obtaining the rare collectible [Hogwarts Admission Notice]; as a reward, obtain a drop of [Demon Blood]." "Congratulations to the host for obtaining the perfect collection [Yew Wand]; the reward is [Grandmaster-level wandless casting]." "Congratulations to the host for obtaining the legendary collection [Magic Stone] and the reward of [Grand Master Alchemy]." … Years later, the glory of Li Kai shone on the whole world of wizards. Hermione: "Kyle is the most outstanding wizard. I admired him a long time ago."

[MATURE CONTENT] Enter the world of Lila Elara Forbes Montgrave, a rose with thorns, shaped by tragedy and reborn with vengeance. Betrayed by her lover and given a second shot at life, she uses her beauty as a weapon in a deadly game of love, hate, and power. But as her past and present meet, will she reshape her fate or succumb to the darkness within? Warning: Viewers discretion is advised. Read at your own risk.

[PLEASE ADD THIS TO THE LIBRARY FIRST. I AM EDITING AND REWRITING THIS SERIES TO MAKE IT BETTER AS THIS IS MY FIRST CONTRACTED SERIES AND I ADMIT I MADE A LOT OF MISTAKES IN WRITING]