Dragged Kicking and Screaming into Immortality
Abel should have broken long ago.
Trapped in a suffocating, lightless prison, time grinds against him like a dull blade.
There were no answers, no way out, only the quiet torment of waiting. When desperation pushed him to consider death, the system was more than willing to oblige.
The countdown had already begun before he begged it to stop.
So he trains, fights, tears himself apart, and watches his body stitch itself back together, stronger each time.
The agony should have stopped him. Instead, it becomes his purpose.
Over a year later, the system activates.
Mocking achievements. Cryptic titles. And a simple, world-shattering message:
[ Would You Like To Leave? ]
The choice should be obvious. But after what Abel's become, after what Abel's done, what kind of world is waiting for him on the other side?
Abel was never intended to be a monster. But, trapped in the dark, stripped of choices that didn't lead to death, and left with nothing but time, what else could he become?
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I don't plan on doing much more after this.
I just need another perspective on how I could improve.
