Mickey Milkovich Ian Gallagher

Synopsis In the twilight-veiled world of Eryndale, where ancient secrets linger in misty forests, Lyra, a headstrong herbalist, has always sought a quiet life. But her world is upended when Kieran, a wounded stranger clad in shadowy armor, emerges from the woods, naming her the "Keeper," a figure of prophecy destined to hold the power to protect their realm from encroaching darkness. As malevolent creatures known as Duskwraiths stir from the shadows, Lyra discovers a latent power within herself that could tip the balance between light and dark. Reluctant to embrace her destiny, she is drawn into an unraveling mystery of forgotten legends, forbidden magic, and an ancient adversary determined to claim her newfound power. With Kieran as her unlikely ally, Lyra must confront a realm-wide conspiracy, a past she never knew, and the weight of a choice that could either save or doom Eryndale forever. The deeper she delves into her role as Keeper, the more she realizes that the cost of victory may be more than she’s willing to pay.

``` *Romance Histórico de Queima Lenta* Lady Elise estava prestes a trocar pelo vestido que estava jogado no canto da sua cama quando ouviu uma batida suave vindo de sua porta. Curiosa, ela girou a maçaneta e viu um homem alto se impondo à sua frente. “Mestre Ian!” Ela chamou. Ian sorriu com o sorriso maroto de sempre que ele sempre usava. Seus olhos carmesins percorreram o quarto dela e avistaram o vestido preto sobre a sua cama e direcionaram o olhar para a mulher à sua frente. Ele deu um passo à frente e falou. “Onde você conseguiu esse vestido?” “O Sr. Harland me deu.” Lady Elise respondeu e esticou o pescoço para ver as sobrancelhas de Ian se unindo em sua elegância. “Você sabe por que um homem adoraria dar um vestido a uma mulher?” Ele fez um enigma que ela sempre tinha que pensar duas vezes antes de responder. Mas dessa vez, ela não encontrou resposta e, em vez disso, balançou a cabeça. “Não sei.” Seu sorriso se tornou encantador como se algo tivesse despertado no profundo dos olhos escarlates que ele tinha. Ele lentamente deslizou sua mão pela gola do vestido dela, enviando um arrepio frio que a assustou por um momento devido a sua temperatura congelante. Depois de desabotoar os dois primeiros botões na gola, ele inclinou sua cabeça para baixo, sussurrando em seu ouvido. “Porque eles querem ser os primeiros a despir o tecido.” Ele pausou e beijou seu pescoço, tornando a pele pálida em vermelho antes de retrair seu movimento para arrumar o olhar sobre ela e respondeu de forma despreocupada. “Infelizmente, você não pode vestir o vestido ali com isso.” Ele riu e passou uma caixa para as mãos dela. “E a notícia boa é que preparei um vestido para você.” Lady Elise era uma garota amaldiçoada que podia ver fantasmas. Sua família a odiava e a jogava de uma família adotiva para outra. No entanto, a desgraça não agia sozinha. Quando ela foi criada por sua tia, foi vendida como escrava. Quando pensou que se tornaria nada mais do que um sacrifício ao feiticeiro, foi salva por um homem cuja identidade era muito diferente de um ser mitológico normal. *** Este livro é ORIGINAL e não é uma Tradução Junte-se ao discord do Autor(a): https://discord.gg/YPKueb4 ```

*Novel Fantasi Sejarah Slow Burn* Elise hendak berganti pakaian dengan gaun yang tergeletak di pojok tempat tidurnya ketika ia mendengar ketukan ringan dari pintunya. Penasaran, ia memutar gagang pintu hanya untuk mendapati seorang pria tinggi menjulang di hadapannya. “Tuan Ian!” Serunya. Ian tersenyum dengan tatapan nakal yang selalu dia gunakan. Matanya yang berwarna krimson melintas sejenak di atas ruangannya dan melihat gaun hitam di atas tempat tidurnya lalu memindahkan pandangannya ke wanita di hadapannya. Ia maju selangkah dan bertanya, "Darimana kamu mendapatkan gaun itu?" “Tuan Harland yang memberikannya padaku.” Jawab Elise dan merentangkan lehernya untuk melihat alis Ian yang terlipat dalam keanggunannya. “Tahukah kamu mengapa seorang pria ingin memberi wanita sebuah gaun?” Ia memberikan teka-teki yang selalu harus dipikirkan dua kali sebelum dijawab. Namun kali ini, ia tidak menemukan jawaban dan malah menggelengkan kepala. “Saya tidak tahu.” Senyumannya bertambah memikat seolah sesuatu tergerak di dalam dari mata merah menyala yang ia miliki. Ia perlahan menggeser tangannya melewati kerah gaunnya, mengirimkan rasa dingin yang membuatnya terperanjat sesaat karena suhu yang beku. Setelah membuka dua kancing pertama di kerahnya, ia menundukkan kepalanya, berbisik ke telinganya, “Karena mereka ingin menjadi orang yang melepas pakaian tersebut.” Ia berhenti dan mencium lehernya, mengubah kulit pucat menjadi merah sebelum menarik gerakannya untuk memperbaiki tatapannya pada Elise dan menjawab dengan santai. “Sayangnya, kamu tidak bisa memakai gaun itu di sana dengan ini.” Ia tertawa kecil dan menyerahkan sebuah kotak ke tangan Elise. “Dan kabar baiknya adalah saya telah menyiapkan sebuah gaun untukmu.” Elise adalah gadis kecil terkutuk yang bisa melihat hantu. Keluarganya membencinya dan melemparnya dari satu keluarga angkat ke keluarga angkat lain. Namun, kesialan tidak berjalan sendirian. Ketika ia dibesarkan oleh bibinya, ia dijual sebagai budak. Ketika ia mengira bahwa ia tidak akan menjadi apa-apa selain korban bagi penyihir, ia diselamatkan oleh seorang pria yang identitasnya jauh berbeda dari makhluk mitos biasa. *** Buku ini ASLI dan bukan Terjemahan Bergabunglah dengan diskord Penulis: https://discord.gg/YPKueb4

"You lied to me, after you promised you wouldn't" Gaeun parents are forcing her into an arranged marriage. What happens when all the couple does is argue and barely talk to each other. Will love seem to spark between them or will it dim by the lies and dark past of Gaeun mysterious husband...Ian . Was his intentions for her something she would've never expected?

Transmigrated into the novel you read and became the heir of the Duke, only to be trampled under the protagonist's foot? Passerby villain? Appeared in only one chapter? "Who are you looking down on?" Ian cursed his destiny and vowed to change everything. [Ding!] [A new quest has been activated.] 'Oh? Do I have a system? Even better.' [Basic Quest 1: Don't let your flower slip through your fingers.] 'Nice, I won't let go of her anyway.' ... [Basic Destiny Quest 1: Can You Finish What You Have Started?] 'Bring it on!' ... [Ding!] [You are at an important fork in your fate.] [Unique Destiny Quest: Fight with all you have.] 'Heh? Who are you looking down on?' As Ian completed one quest after another, he also inadvertently began to fall into a vortex of the unknown. He discovered there was more to this world than described in the novel. 'Damn it! These suspense and twists, one after another, are killing me!' --- Tags: Smut, 18+, Harem, no incest, weak to strong, Romance, Wizard, Magic, Knight, System, Multiple Planes, Elf, Demons, Monsters

Silver and Shadows In a world where supernatural beings are hunted without mercy, Armand Cain, a dedicated witch hunter, is dispatched to the misty town of Blackthorn to investigate a series of mysterious disappearances. Renowned for his unwavering dedication, Armand anticipates a straightforward mission. Instead, he encounters Celeste, a centuries-old vampire with a haunting beauty and a mysterious tie to Blackthorn’s enigmatic past. When Armand is ambushed by rogue vampires, Celeste intervenes, saving his life and forcing him to question the beliefs that have defined his purpose. Bound by a reluctant alliance, the hunter and the hunted join forces to unravel the dark forces behind the town’s turmoil. As they delve deeper, an undeniable connection blossoms, challenging their loyalties and blurring the line between duty and desire. Caught in a web of intrigue and danger, Armand grapples with his oath to destroy beings like Celeste, while she battles her own instincts to protect him. As a shadowy power threatens to destroy their fragile trust and the peace of Blackthorn, they must confront their deepest fears and decide whether their love is worth defying everything they’ve ever known or if it is doomed to end in tragedy.

At Crestwood Academy, twin sisters Elena and Claire Bennett share a bond that’s deeper than most siblings. Known for their inseparable closeness, they’re content living in their own little world until Naomi Walker, a mysterious transfer student, enters their lives. When Elena begins spending time with Naomi, Claire’s jealousy spirals out of control, leading her to distance herself from her sister. Misunderstandings and unspoken feelings threaten to shatter their relationship, but Naomi’s unexpected confession changes everything. Caught in a web of emotions and a budding love triangle, the sisters must navigate their insecurities, confront their true feelings, and find a way to preserve their special connection while embracing the possibility of change. Bonds Unbroken is a heartfelt story of love, jealousy, and the unyielding strength of family ties.

[#lovesosweet] [WARNING: Mature content 18+] [WPC #AUG2023Entry] « Is it not enough that I have been 'sold off' as a catalogue bride but also have to compete with a dead woman for favour? » Shelby looks like she has it all. The perfect family and all the perks that come with it. But she must go through a 'forced contract marriage' and also compete for the attention of the man she had been unwillingly tied to... Ian lost the love of his life so suddenly that his mind still refuses to accept that reality. He gave up everything and secluded himself until his mother found him a bride. His one task was to give the family an heir but how can Ian do this when the air he breathes all revolves around the one woman he can never have. However, he finds himself in a predicament and dilema when the new contracted bride is thrust into his life unwittingly... especially, when he finds out that she is more than meets the eye. Image: Image generated from starryai.com, cover completed by me. This is an original story of mine. Copyright Loctovia 2023 Update schedule: 5 chapters per week

Hi, Please this book would be deleted and reuploaded later next year. I want to focus on my other book, "The Alpha's Twins Have Different Fathers" first. Thank You. ********* Darragh Gallagher, the first son of the president, has heard a number of hush-hush rumours about his wife, so he disguised himself as a substitute bodyguard to see what he could find out, only for the dumb younger sister to lay a false claim on him as the one responsible for her pregnancy, making him lose his job on the first day. But what happens when both he and his mother could hear the girl's thoughts and both of them end up doing everything that she wanted? What happens then when they find out the truth about the real father of her babies through her thoughts? What are they going to do then? Just what are the odds? *************************** Kenia's mother-in-law threatened to bring another wife for her son because she has been unable to give her a grandchild. After several trying but still failing to conceive for her husband of three years, Kenia tricked her teenage sister into becoming a surrogate mother for her husband in secret. But after she too became pregnant weeks later, she decided to get rid of her sister and the bastard in her womb altogether. * 1524 In an attempt to help her sister, Catriona Byrne became the catalyst that sent her to an early death.  At the gallows for her own dismemberment after avenging her, Catriona smiled as she happily awaited the swift death.  But being reincarnated into the pregnant body of her sister in a new world was something that Cat could never imagine. So, not wanting to face the same fate as the host body, she decided to find a new father for her baby. And that was why she pointed to her father's new bodyguard as the one responsible for her pregnancy. ******************** Note: This author would not give warnings for any scene in the book. So please make sure that you're in the right frame of mind before you start reading.  Thank you and sorry in advance.

Emperor Ian Veroshion, the first noble mage, was betrayed and executed. Cursed to never be reborn, he awakens a century later as the illegitimate son of a disgraced ducal line, destined to be a hostage in a barbaric land. Stripped of his magic and his throne, he must navigate a world vastly different from the one he ruled, facing political machinations and a resurgent monster threat. But the embers of his past life still burn, and Ian will not surrender his legacy. He will reclaim his name, his magic, and perhaps, even his empire.

Once a promising gymnast, Sora Hoshino's world shatters when a devastating injury forces her to leave her dreams of Olympic glory behind. Searching for purpose and an outlet for her restless energy, Sora turns to the underground world of street fighting. There, her unmatched agility, acrobatic precision, and sheer power make her a force to be reckoned with. But with every fight, she sinks deeper into the chaos, her soul becoming more consumed by the violent adrenaline that now defines her existence. Haunted by her past and driven by a thirst for violence, Sora struggles to find meaning beyond the ring. Yet, as she rises through the ranks, she faces enemies who threaten to expose the darkness within her. Old allies from her gymnastics days resurface, and Sora is forced to confront the very emotions and fears she’s been running from. With rivals gunning for her, a mysterious figure seeking vengeance, and her own inner turmoil, Sora must decide how far she’s willing to go to keep her violent edge or if there’s a chance to rebuild the life she once thought was lost forever.

Vivid Days follows the vibrant lives of four high school boys as they navigate the ups and downs of friendship, romance, and self-discovery. Nathan Harper, a hopeless romantic, dreams of finding true love but gets his heart broken on Christmas Eve. Just when he thinks his holiday is ruined, a kind girl in a Santa suit, Anna Bowman, offers him tissues, and he instantly falls for her. To his surprise, Anna attends the same school, giving him the perfect chance to pursue her. Meanwhile, Nathan's eccentric group of friends adds both chaos and charm to his journey. Tom Maxwell, a suave playboy, juggles his many girlfriends while grappling with what love really means. Keith Carter, a quirky thrill-seeker with a penchant for mischief, keeps everyone on their toes. And Tyler North, a quiet otaku with a cosplaying girlfriend, tries to balance his passions with the realities of high school life. As Nathan works to win Anna’s heart, his friends’ meddling and their own romantic escapades turn everyday moments into colorful adventures. Together, they learn that love, friendship, and growing up are never as simple—or as predictable—as they seem.

Stella always had feeling towards Ian, but since her departure, their relationship started to split ways too. Throughout her encounter with others, she couldn't help but compare and seek pictures of him in them. When, he suddenly appeared again...but what will happen with their encounter?

Ian was an ordinary guy on his way to work when he suddenly found himself in a strange and dangerous world ruled by dark races like vampires, werewolves, and demons. Transmigrated into the body of a lesser vampire, Ian must quickly adapt to his new reality where survival is a constant struggle. Just when all hope seems lost, Ian discovers he has a unique advantage: The Strongest Body Customization System, which allows him to modify and customize his body by consuming biomass. With this golden finger, Ian starts to turn the tables, designing bone claws and other enhancements to give him an edge against the terrifying werewolves and other supernatural threats. But as Ian learns more about the Curtained Imperium and the rigid hierarchies of the vampire race, he realizes that defeating his enemies is only the first step. To survive and thrive in this dark and brutal world, Ian must rise through the ranks, uncover the power of his system. Need to fly? Customize a pair of angel wings! The body is small? Add hundreds meters of height and become bigger than Godzilla! Need a weapon? Customize bone claws and kagune on the spot!

At just 24, Ian Fletcher has built a thriving fashion empire, earning respect and admiration as one of the youngest CEOs in the industry. But his life takes an unexpected turn when he meets Luna Pierce, a retired fashion designer whose name once dominated the runway. Despite the 16-year age gap between them, Ian is captivated by Luna's grace, intelligence, and untold story. As their relationship deepens, Ian uncovers haunting secrets from Luna's past—secrets tied to the downfall of her career and the dark actions of his own family. Faced with an impossible choice, Ian must navigate the conflict between loyalty to his family and his growing love for Luna. Can their bond withstand the truth, or will the weight of the past tear them apart? In When Age Doesn’t Matter, love and betrayal collide in a story of passion, redemption, and the courage to fight for what truly matters.

'These guys are worse, Ivory. They want to destroy the earth'. Ivory Irvine is an orphan brought up by Ian Deville, the patriarch of a top secret agency. When she decides to resign after years of working, the new heads of the agency- Ian's grandchildren- give her a condition; Undergo one more task, or remain. She chooses the former. The result is to tackle a group of people she never knew existed on this earth... Ivory had been trained in warfare ever since she was little by Ryan Deville. Now that she's ready to leave that life, his grandchildren make it hard for her. To leave means death. They'll have pity on her, but on one condition.

After Generations of war between Gorisimo and Lotisana,The current rulers decided to bury the hatchet and sue for peace. The princess of Gorisimo,Aeris and the Grand Duke of lotisana,Carlos got married as a symbol of the treaty Aeris expected it to be a loveless marriage but was surprised with how caring and gentle her new husband was,she never expected it, Carlos had been poisoning her all along. He betrayed, killed her and her entire family. Now she can't rest in peace,her ghost wanders until she decides to get revenge. Eric Leighton Crown Prince of Gallagher, heir to the throne,goes hunting and finds a mysterious girl,drawn to her,He takes her back with him. How will their fates intertwine?

She had always been obedient and docile in their three years of hidden marriage, watching as he surrounded himself with women and was mired with endless scandals. On the day the subject of his unrequited love returned to the country, she quietly handed him a divorce agreement. “What, you have someone you like?” he asked coldly. She smiled nonchalantly. “Yes. You may not acknowledge me as your wife, but someone will acknowledge me as their lover.” Later, as the Thompson family acknowledged their connection, she became a rich daughter who was out of his reach. As men flocked around her, Michael Gallagher realized that in those three years, she had planted the seeds of love that had now grown into a towering tree, binding him for life.

After Earth is destroyed from a meteor impact, humans travel to a new world where they gain new powers. How will the story of Lucas J. Adams unfold? Thus story is inspired by MHA and Ian Boggs; the youtuber

In 2036 More games were introduced around the world and One of them is the game called "The Game of Survival" Its the popular FPS zombie game That its so popular around the world. But there was a secret from the game that no one knows. Andre, Jake, Ljay, and Eman are one of the players of this game. They just play peacefully and without any problems. Until the one fateful moment, They realized that they were inside the game. Almost 12,000 players were trapped inside the game including them. "If you die or become a zombie on this game you cannot go back to the real world." "To Beat the game, You must find the Golden Arc and proceed to 100th floor to get out from this world". These words starting their new adventure inside the game. Are they Going to survive or Are they going to be a Zombies on this world?

In a bustling city where dreams collide, jewel a free spirited and innocent girl working as a waitress gets entangled with the cold, narcissist and egoistic Ian wayatt. their worlds collide when jewel slapped him mistakenly in the restaurant she's working for this ignites a spark of creativity and romance. Soon after, Ian makes jewel work in his company. as they collaborate as emoloyer and employee, CEO and secretary their connection deepens, revealing shared dreams and vulnerabilities. In this seemingly light, fun, comedy romance faces challenges. Ian's family challenges and jewel's fear of being tied down threaten to tear them apart. What happens when Ian is met with an accident and loses his memories? what about the struggles jewel has to face? the heartbreak and pain seeing Ian doesn't remember her. with the city as their canvas can they learn to embrace each other passions or will they become a distant memory? In a heartfelt journey of love and self discovery, Ian and jewel must decide what it means to be each other precious jewel.

Spending His Life being belittled by others cause of his goals of a peaceful life of gaming, Ian finally decides to prove others wrong and make his father proud, with the help of some mysterious, powerful allies of course.

Doomed to die! Facing such a fate, Ian Cloud, the crippled genius, has to make a choice… Either to wait for his impending death while decaying slowly, or to run into its embrace head-first for a chance to struggle and live on! Follow Ian as he enters the astonishing world of ‘The Lost Realm’, a super realistic VR game where danger lurks everywhere and getting logged out equals death. Will he manage to survive now that he is no longer restricted by his physical flaw? Or will he lose his last chance to fix his broken reality? ~~~-~~~ Disclaimer: This is purely a work of fiction and its events are completely made up. ~~~-~~~ - Check out my other novels: = Only I Am A Reader = My Plot Armor System (Current Release Rate: 7Ch/Week) (Current Gift Event: 1 Castle = +2 Extra chapters) - Discord: https://discord.gg/E7kYDhB

Ian Scott, an eighteen-year old "ordinary high schooler" was anything but ordinary. Caught up in a murder case he lends his thoughts and helps Lance Venson, the captain of the Criminal Unit solve the case. Were they fated to meet? Would they bring each other to their dooms or become each other's salvation?

"Did he touch you?," he asked as his blood red eyes looked intensely into her purple ones. "Y-yes, b-but it w-was unintentional," she said nervously. "Still defending him, are we, huh? Intentional or unintentional, I don't want anyone touching what's mine, do you understand?," he whispered the last sentence in her ears, while running his thumb on her lips. She nodded, looking into his eyes that had become a shade darker. "Words.....snow," he said pressing her against the closet behind her, before leaning in towards her, "I need words." "Y-yes, I-i understand." "Good," he said, before leaning in completely and capturing her lips with his in an intense kiss. ********* Hazel Snow had never thought she would fall in love with the devilishly beautiful senior, during her first year at the University. She had just lost both her parents in an unfortunate accident and had moved to stay with her only relative. Not wanting to be a burden to her Aunt, her dad's younger sister, she accepted the admission letter from the best University in the country. She had decided to stay away from people, but her resolve only started to crumble after her very first encounter with the beautiful senior who was able to make her turn red. Ian knew that his black heart had been stolen by the little human with the glasses, who was able to make his dead heart come to life. Ian, who was not able to love, found himself craving the love and attention of the little human with the glasses. She was not only able to make his dead heart skip beats, she is also able to bring out his darkest side. She fell first, but he fell harder. She was his light, but he was her darkness.

With a snap of his fingers, they dance to his tune. With the quirk of his lips, they turn numb. With the tap of his toe, they kneel to him. He can control their every thought, emotion, and movement. Manipulate their very lives. None can escape his grasp. *** Ian woke up one day confused to see the unfamiliar yet familiar surroundings. Once this was his home, when it was no more he got lost. He lost everything. Now everything is back. A burning starlight lit in his cold eyes, promising to burn all his enemies. He would never allow his home to be destroyed again. Not this time. He was back. And this time, he would control their lives just like they controlled his.

Ella (Rosabella) is being treated like a slave in her father's house, but when Emperor Carl comes to her father's house for a visit, her stepmother poisons his current Queen because she wants one of her daughters to be with him. But Ella (Rosabella) has no idea that she is going to find out who she really is and who her birth parents are, as well as be with Emperor Carl instead of her stepsisters. Ella (Rosabella) also found out that her stepmother had never divorced from her first husband. Therefore, she is no longer her stepmother and her stepsisters are no longer her stepsisters. Her stepmother comes up with different plans but Emperor Carl, Luke (Ella (Rosabella)'s adopted father), Ian and his sons. Paige, Ella (Rosabella)'s stepmother's first husband and sons. They come up with a plan which allows Emperor Carl to finish his stay at Luke's house and make love with Ella (Rosabella). Ella (Rosabella) goes to the Royal Palace thrice, once to save Emperor Carl's first wife, second to break the spell that was placed over Emperor Carl, and third time to be with Emperor Carl for the rest of her life. Her stepmother and stepsisters get banished to another kingdom. They ended up in a Royal family and never set foot back in their home kingdom. Ella (Rosabella)'s adopted father ends up with the woman he had loved before his second ex-wife forced him to marry her instead. Ella (Rosabella) goes from a servant to a princess to a Empress and proves her fake ex-stepmother and stepsisters wrong.

Ian Carter was an ordinary university student struggling to make ends meet, until an accident brought his mundane life to an abrupt end—or so he thought. Awakening in a mysterious void, he is confronted by the remnants of a dying god who bestows upon him a powerful yet dangerous gift: the System. Now marked as the "Chosen," Ian inherits the god’s legacy and finds himself thrust into a deadly competition where otherworldly beings and powerful enemies seek his destruction. Armed with a mysterious System that grants him abilities, quests, and the potential for limitless growth, Ian must navigate an unfamiliar world brimming with danger, betrayal, and mystery. But the System is not merely a tool—it has its own rules, its own agenda, and its own price. As Ian uncovers the truth behind the god’s demise and the true nature of the System, he realizes that survival is not enough. To ascend, he must defy the gods themselves. In a tale of growth, struggle, and defiance, System of the Lost God explores the journey of a reluctant hero who must rise from nothing to challenge the divine and carve his name among the stars.

Ian Calvinde never believed in fate, until he stumbled upon an ancient, enchanted deck of cards that had the power to change it all. Each card represents a fragment of destiny, capable of influencing not just the present, but the future itself. With a single draw, he can alter lives, events, and even outcomes — but at what cost? As Ian Calvinde begins to unravel the mysteries behind the deck, he soon realizes that the cards are more than mere tools. They are living forces that shape the world, and with each use, their power grows stronger — and their consequences more unpredictable. From minor tweaks in daily life to grand, world-altering events, Ian Calvinde faces choices that will test his morals, his sanity, and his very sense of self. But as the deck's true nature is revealed, Ian Calvinde finds himself trapped in a dangerous game where he’s not just the player — but also the pawn. With a powerful secret organization hunting him for the cards and forces of fate closing in, he must navigate a web of lies, betray

Ian who woke up from his past highschool life , happily wanted to change the way he lived not knowing the world already change for him but what hurdles comes before him. sorry for the inconveniences but I will only publishing 2 chapter for now pls read and give some feedbacks for me to correct my mistakes please i really need it. Thank you