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A normal man dies while bravely fighting terrorists, only to wake up in a mysterious world filled with glowing balls of different colours, strange dungeons, and white beings. This story is packed with comedy, thrilling adventures, and unforgettable moments. What to expect: - A unique world - A smart protagonist - Aliens, gods, angels, and demons - Cute animals, mysterious dungeons, and magical powers - Betrayal, character growth, and Crazy hot GF. - Tower climbing, kingdom building, and world exploration - Sci-fi elements, academy life, and video game-like thing's Etc. Every tag in this is true, and you'll uncover them in the story. Feedback and suggestions are always welcome!

Second Awakening? A System? Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again. Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin. Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him. Ding! [The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!] [You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!] [Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!] [Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!] Damien's only option is to evolve! ____________________ A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks. ____________________ ____________________ Update Schedule: 00:30 GMT (+8) 12:30 GMT (+8)

This is my first time writing so any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks and I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how far I'll take this story because I'm only writing for fun but I have a lot of ideas that I can make into "hopefully" a great story. Follow the adventures of Jake a young boy from the same age group as Ash Ketchum as he travels through this new world he finds himself in.

Have you ever imagined what would happen if you died, but some powerful being decided to reincarnate you and offer you the freedom to choose any world and powers you wanted? What would you choose, to be reborn in a sci-fi world with your own ship to explore the stars, to become a god in a godless world, to be reincarnated surrounded by hot girls, to become the most powerful person? All good choices but not the choices I made. My name is Jackson. I was chosen by one of the Primordials, Brakos, the Primordial Spirit of Time, Stories, and Knowledge, and given this exact choice. We talked, and he offered me any world and powers. I gave him my views and wants for my new life, and one was that I wanted to become powerful, but I wanted to work for it, or else I felt I wouldn't deserve it. Brakos agreed and we started to plan. As I don't like to waste opportunities I did ask for 3 powers. 1: to be reborn with a system-like ability stored inside of 3 books. 2: to be given the power to converse with Spirits forge contracts with them and ask them for help. 3: to be given the power to create a new race of my own creation and become one of them. Brakos liked my plan and selected a very special world. The first world to ever exist. Primus is the world of the Primordials and Primogneitors. Follow me through my adventures as I make friends, run from my village being destroyed, fall in love, take over a school, dismantle criminal organizations, destroy an entire kingdom, fight against the gods and establish a home for myself and my new race, the Dragonians. _____________ Additional tags: BL, Supernatural, High IQ, Werewolf, Academy, Kingdom Building, the strong acting weak, Evolution, Mystery, Non-Human _____________ Not a harem or romance novel. Will be a BL eventually but will not be the focus of the story. Just want to build up the world right now. I'm not an experienced writer, this is my first time writing something longer than a 3-page story from high school. Please excuse any mistakes or spelling errors, and feel free to correct me in the comments. I’d really appreciate any feedback on how the story is going. Also, I might take a few days' breaks now and then due to work or personal reasons, so if a new chapter doesn't come out for a few days, don't worry! _____________ The story updates 3 times a week, every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday at 8:15 AM (GMT-5)

When old gamer, constantly unlucky, Theodore 'Ted' Moore starts playing the new VR game, he understands the luck can be a double edged sword. Will he prevail against the world to secure his place or will he break and become a servant? Can a single man truly stand against rich and powerful? Entry for Contest. Please give your valuable feedback to make the story better.

To power, he just had to die. Zane was an ordinary, middle-class boy grieving over his failed love life when he died in a car accident. That was all he remembered. When he opened his eyes, broke free of the coffin, and emerged from death, the earth he remembered had changed forever. Towers rose into the sky as far as his eyes could see, and super humans known as Climbers ruled the entire world. Ancient races, disappeared in long river of time reappeared, with smartness even overshadowing humans. Power spoke above laws. His dreams of living peacefully somewhere shattered when a behemoth appeared before his eyes and stamped him into a meat paste with its huge feet. [Congratulations for being the first one to die after death.] [Attuning your deck element: Endless Death.] [Endless Death: Every death of yours grants you a card. The more gruesome and unique your death is, the higher the grade of the card.]

MC is given a system and shortly after finds out there is going to be a apocalypse.

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

Alaric, an orphan from a quiet village, lived an ordinary life. Strange things often happened around him, like freezing a charging boar with a gesture. One day, he healed an injured stranger with glowing hands. “You’re a Gifter,” the man said, leaving Alaric questioning his power and his identity. #READATYOUROWNRISK I’m a new writer, so there will be mistakes. By receiving feedback and support, I can improve my work and do my best.

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

I, Eve Moonstone, have never been healthy since birth. By the age of eight, I was already hospitalized and rarely went outside. That is, until one day, I woke up in the world of a novel, surrounded by handsome men who all claimed to be my husbands—complete with legal stamps. In this new world, the ratio of females to males is shockingly small, making women incredibly precious to the government, with rights that surpass everyone else’s. I glanced at the list of marriage contracts in my hands: 9 legal husbands, 10 male concubines, 15 personal male servants, and 20 little boyfriends. This... this is far too much for a virgin heart like mine, especially since I never even had a man in my previous life!

This novel is inspired by novels where heroines can hear the villain's inner voice, but the main character is the protagonist in the original story not the villain whose voice audible to the heroines. No NTR ---- Chen Fan descends from the mountain after learning from his master for 10 years. The purpose? Of course, to enjoy life and reach the pinnacle of greatness. But there’s something strange about the girls he meets… ---- A/N : This is my first novel, and since English isn't my native language, I kindly ask for your understanding regarding any awkward phrasing or grammatical errors. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

This is a story about the day in the Life of a Futanari named Anglea. She is a loner that has no Friends. Her entire life, she has been segregated due to her Herophrodite status. After years of verbal bullying, she has decided to end the meek facade. Her natural personality decided to take over. Something happens, and her plans move forward faster than she ever planned. This is for advertisement purposes. Amazon link: https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B096QTS87W/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=Life+of+a+dominant+Futanari&qid=1623005605&sr=8-1 Support me at Patreon.com/Madjic

Hi everyone, Comrade here This is the collection of short stories I'm gonna write. It will be short so read it and give your honest reactions and feedback. . . . Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing

Follow the beginning of a new era for humanity... Or rather, the continuation of an era long lost and hidden from everyone for millennia... ------ I don't know what you expect by coming here, but give it a chance and please give me feedback on the chapters, especially the first one. That will tell me whether I should continue or not. It's quite discouraging not to see people commenting and giving ideas. I tried three other books, for which I even got the opportunity to be contracted after just a few chapters, but the lack of feedback was really discouraging. I want to do my best and be recognized for it, so I hope for your help and a little push to get started. I'm kind of stuck. And one more thing, my native language is Portuguese, not English. So there may be a lot of mistakes when switching to English, I'm sorry for anything and I really hope to fix this soon, I'm not very fluent in English either.

After getting hit by a truck meant for someone else, Nico is compensated by transmigrating into the body of the illegitimate and only son of billionaire, Logan Voss. To keep this new life, he's given a single mission. Climb over his seven step sisters and inherit his father's wealth. So, why in the heavens does this involve collecting the stamps of 99 different ladies? [Ding! 10x cashback system activated.] [Ding! Stamp holder detected.] [Collect stamp to gain 10 times the stamp holder's wealth.] "Fun isn't something one considers when trying to save his own life. But this does put a smile on my face."

Kyle Novak [deceased] ~ Married with two children *boys* Child molester Slept with secretary after secretary Verbally, physically, and emotionally abusive It's men like these that we…how do you say…?”take care of”. Men that have no respect for the people who care for them and their families. Men who can't keep their hands off of others they supposedly love. Men who can't hold back hurtful words that may potentially scar their children or partner for life. Men...we take care of the men who think they are superior. ~this book was created by yours truly and KookieNeedsHisTae~ I wrote this book a few months ago. So if there’s any mistakes or anything you’d like to see within these chapters, just let me know. Enjoy:)

A man from earth dies in a truck accident and wakes up as the 4th son of the Zorneas family with the authority of sleep. follow the journey of Hector Zorneas in this new world. ------ I like writing as a hobby, So don't expect a Master-Piece from me, just enjoy it and give me feedback and even suggestion for plot and character development. I am an anime fan, so you will find a lot of similarities in it from the animes that I like.

How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. As he travels through dangerous lands and faces formidable challenges, he uncovers the hidden truths of his past and the mysterious forces shaping his destiny. Surrounded by powerful rivals, enigmatic figures, and the watchful eyes, Rui must navigate a world where strength is everything and the path to supremacy is filled with both allies and enemies. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

There was once a being revered as a god in a universe with a trillion stars. How many of these stars could sustain life was unknown, but this universe no longer exists. When that universe disappeared, another took its place. It sprouted many new stars, and after a long time, life also followed. Many stars that established civilization still feel the echoes from the old universe. There was a legend that if an individual whispered a particular god's name and wished dearly, offering the most precious thing they had in return, it would grant them one wish. These wishes could be as simple as having food and shelter for a day or as outlandish as making someone fall in love with them or disappear from existence. This legend can be traced back to when sentient life forms developed ways of passing down verbal and non-verbal knowledge. The story comes in different versions, but the main message remains: one wish, one sacrifice, by one life. Strangely enough, this particular god received a series of peculiar wishes from different individuals across various stars in the new universe. Nameless god: “What is your wish?” Lucy: “To be reborn in a fantasy world with you as my father who loves me dearly until the end of my natural life.” Nameless god: ┬─┬ノ(ಠ_ಠノ) Mike: “To relive my life with you as my lovely little sister.” Nameless god: (╯°□°)╯( ┻━┻) Gabby: “Mom.” Nameless god: ┻━┻ ︵ ¯_(ᴼل͜ᴼ)_/¯ ︵ ┻━┻ Nameless god: “Who is whispering my name to these people across the universe, spreading it like a common cabbage on the roadside!? Come out, and I promise I will not do anything ungodly. Let's talk about life, hmmm!!!” Unbeknownst to this god, there was more to his myth than he knew. +++++ Schedule: Sorry, everyone. I've been really busy, so I'll be putting this novel on hiatus for now. +++++ Please do leave a paragraph or chapter comment in any form before you go. Stay Safe and Healthy! Thank You for Dropping By! +++++ Main Tags: #ACTION #ADVENTURE #MYSTERY #OVERPOWERED #TRANSMIGRATION #REINCARNATION #ISEKAI #COUNTERATTACK Additional Tags: (It only sometimes appears here and there.) #DARK #MATURE #R18 #GORE #PSYCHOLOGICAL #CULTIVATION #SUPERNATURAL #POST_APOCALYPSE #APOCALYPSE #SCI_FI #SLICE_OF_LIFE

a man that is as strong as an army. the one that the demons feared the most. has fallen while trying to protect his blood brother. he was given another chance by someone he saved many years ago and was given the gift to go back in time.

if you reading or start the novel then give feedback which will help me to know if you had like it or I have to stop this novel very interesting chapters are upcoming which were legendary don't miss it it is full of comedy and laughter. so get ready and support this story.please provide *power stones* to inspire me. I WILL TELL ONLY ONE THING BY MISTAKELY THE MAIN CHARACTER OF THIS STORY BE A MASTER OF A LEGENDARY ARTIFACT FAMOUS FOR IT SEA OF LUCK , THIS NOVEL FOR THEM WHO ARE FINDING A OVERPOWERED MAIN CHARACTER SUPREME FROM EVERY ONE ELSE. SO, GO! ENJOY THIS NOVEL FROM YOUR CORE OF HEART

I only wanted to change my life around from my shut-in ways but only led to the beginning of my hell. Join royan as he tries to find his way to happiness will he find what he seeks? or will he find something else? The picture does not belong to me if asked i will remove it just contact me at elixirdemon@gmail.com This is my first time writing a novel so any feedback is welcomed and anything you would like to see i will take into account

"On the very first day of our marriage, I told him that if he ever betrayed me, I would disappear from his life forever." "Hello, I’d like to apply for immigration!" Shen Xinyan stood at the counter and handed over all the prepared documents to the staff on the other side of the window. The staff quickly stamped the submitted documents and then pulled out another sheet, handing it back to her. "Ma’am, the process will be completed in fifteen days. Please wait patiently." Zhou Yushen, fifteen days from now, I'll be waiting for your madness.

Kara William died in a car accident and was given a second chance by God, to bring back all the people she had mislead in the past. Lucifer annoyed by God's proposal, decided to make sure that Kara wastes the chance given to her. What will happen to Kara?Will she utilize the second chance given to her or will she be deceived by Lucifer.

"Caden Mort awakens after an incident that led to his death in a strange and unfamiliar place. Nevertheless, he moves forward, determined to survive and live in this forgotten world." Hello, I am the author of this book. I am a new writer, so if you have any feedback or notice any mistakes in the novel, please write them in the comments. **Update schedule:** - Sunday: 1 chapter - Monday: 2 chapters - Tuesday: 1 chapter - Wednesday: 2 chapters - Thursday: 1 chapter - Friday: 3 chapters - Saturday: 1 chapter Feel free to share your thoughts and suggestions!

After a night at the bar, a 22 year old college graduate is murdered and given a second chance at life born as a baby into a new magical world. What secrets will be uncover? What adventures will he go on?