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Second Awakening? A System? Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again. Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin. Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him. Ding! [The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!] [You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!] [Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!] [Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!] Damien's only option is to evolve! ____________________ A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks. ____________________ ____________________ Update Schedule: 00:30 GMT (+8) 12:30 GMT (+8)

After getting hit by a truck meant for someone else, Nico is compensated by transmigrating into the body of the illegitimate and only son of billionaire, Logan Voss. To keep this new life, he's given a single mission. Climb over his seven step sisters and inherit his father's wealth. So, why in the heavens does this involve collecting the stamps of 99 different ladies? [Ding! 10x cashback system activated.] [Ding! Stamp holder detected.] [Collect stamp to gain 10 times the stamp holder's wealth.] "Fun isn't something one considers when trying to save his own life. But this does put a smile on my face."

How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. Rui has now found himself in a mystical world filled with extraordinarily powerful cultivators who can destroy mountains with a single punch, and split seas in half with a single slash of a sword! Rui himself wants this power but he isn't sure how, luckily for him, he somehow has his past memories, experience, and intelligence! Follow Rui as he devotes himself to being the most powerful being in existence! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

Disappointment of the Yi clan, Yi Tian was treated like trash by everyone except for his mother. Expected to be the next heir to the clan, his birth revealed that he was missing the Yi clan's spiritual roots and the ability to accumulate qi in his dantian. However, his world turned upside down when he awakened his Dual Cultivation System which had been dormant in his body since he was born. Follow along as Yi Tian strengthens through the system, acquires multiple wives, has dozens of children, and conquers the world. —————————— Tags: Netori (NO NETORARE), Revenge, R18+, Harem, Dual Cultivation, System, Slavery, Murder, Ruthless MC (Doesn't Spare His Enemies), Weakest to Strongest

Alaric, an orphan from a quiet village, lived an ordinary life. Strange things often happened around him, like freezing a charging boar with a gesture. One day, he healed an injured stranger with glowing hands. “You’re a Gifter,” the man said, leaving Alaric questioning his power and his identity. #READATYOUROWNRISK I’m a new writer, so there will be mistakes. By receiving feedback and support, I can improve my work and do my best.

a man that is as strong as an army. the one that the demons feared the most. has fallen while trying to protect his blood brother. he was given another chance by someone he saved many years ago and was given the gift to go back in time.

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

if you reading or start the novel then give feedback which will help me to know if you had like it or I have to stop this novel very interesting chapters are upcoming which were legendary don't miss it it is full of comedy and laughter. so get ready and support this story.please provide *power stones* to inspire me. I WILL TELL ONLY ONE THING BY MISTAKELY THE MAIN CHARACTER OF THIS STORY BE A MASTER OF A LEGENDARY ARTIFACT FAMOUS FOR IT SEA OF LUCK , THIS NOVEL FOR THEM WHO ARE FINDING A OVERPOWERED MAIN CHARACTER SUPREME FROM EVERY ONE ELSE. SO, GO! ENJOY THIS NOVEL FROM YOUR CORE OF HEART

First sport novel i am ever writing so please give me feedback :D Also do expect some grammar or spelling errors since english isn´t my first language

How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. Rui has now found himself in a mystical world filled with extraordinarily powerful cultivators who can destroy mountains with a single punch, and split seas in half with a single slash of a sword! Rui himself wants this power but he isn't sure how, luckily for him, he somehow has his past memories, experience, and intelligence! Follow Rui as he devotes himself to being the most powerful being in existence! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

This is a story about the day in the Life of a Futanari named Anglea. She is a loner that has no Friends. Her entire life, she has been segregated due to her Herophrodite status. After years of verbal bullying, she has decided to end the meek facade. Her natural personality decided to take over. Something happens, and her plans move forward faster than she ever planned. This is for advertisement purposes. Amazon link: https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B096QTS87W/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=Life+of+a+dominant+Futanari&qid=1623005605&sr=8-1 Support me at Patreon.com/Madjic

After a night at the bar, a 22 year old college graduate is murdered and given a second chance at life born as a baby into a new magical world. What secrets will be uncover? What adventures will he go on?

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

Updates: Tue, Thu, Sat. 3:00PM CAT Klyde was testing on a robot with his best friend and others until they lost control of it and it killed everyone there. He was then reincarnated by Interstellar(God) and given a game like system. Everything seemed fine until he opened the Quests tab to see that he was given the quest of conquer the country of Erina in 2 months. Now he spends his time leveling up to get stronger on his way to complete this odd quest he was given by god.

Dillon Grendel, a poor college student who worked as a delivery guy for a big delivery company found his girlfriend cheating on him during one of his deliveries. She broke up with him there and he was beaten up by her new boyfriend's friends. That same day, he lost his job due to the bad feedback given by this same group of people. Dillon found his way to a lake where he planned to end his life, but instead, caught some guys trying to molest a female. He tried to save her, but ended up being beaten up by them as well. Life was leaving him, but when he glanced towards the direction of the girl who was curled up in a corner, shaking from fear, a sudden burst of rage erupted through him and he had no idea what happened next. The next thing he saw was him standing over a group of boys groaning in pain as a firm voice sounded behind him, "Young Master!"

Ian who woke up from his past highschool life , happily wanted to change the way he lived not knowing the world already change for him but what hurdles comes before him. sorry for the inconveniences but I will only publishing 2 chapter for now pls read and give some feedbacks for me to correct my mistakes please i really need it. Thank you

A collection of stories, places, concepts, and objects that exist in this Universe. =============================== I apologize to anyone offended, and please forgive the vast difference between chapter lengths as some will only be one paragraphs and other will be several pages long. =============================== Additionally, any feedback and criticism is appreciated as I am a ignorant and inexperienced writer

NPC GLITCH! EVIL MC! FAST PACED STORY! SYSTEMS AND LEVELING! WRITING FOR FUN BUTT OPEN TO FEEDBACK!

Synopsis: Banished from his prestigious family, Ace Lionheart awakens to a seemingly useless class. Armed with hidden potential and a thirst for redemption, he dives into a world of dungeons, bloodlines, and betrayal. With the odds stacked against him, Ace must rise above the ridicule and prove that even the most unlikely path can lead to greatness. Warning! My first webnovel just for fun lets see where it goes! Good feedback welcomed

Synopsis: In a world where humanity is at the bottom of the food pyramid, a young boy raises his fists to bring justice for his people and judgment against his enemies. This novel will be blending lots of concepts. It will represent the complexity of human emotions and decisions. Have fun reading along, I'm open to feedback.

é a minha primeira historia espero que me possam dar algum feedback. book cover não é minha

Vipera, gadis yang dibesarkan oleh ibu tirinya sejak kecil. Sering mengalami kekerasan secara fisik maupun verbal sejak kecil dan diperlakukan dengan buruk bahkan oleh ayah kandungnya sendiri. Nama Vipera yang disematkan padanya juga sering menjadi bahan olokan, adik tirinya mengatakan ia diberi nama seperti itu karena ibunya yang merupakan ular betina karena tidak memiliki keluarga. Ibu Vipera meninggal di hari ia melahirkan Vipera tapi jasadnya tak pernah ditemukan, banyak yang mengatakan saat meninggal ibunya berubah jadi ular. Bahkan ada yang dengan kejam mengatakan bahwa ibunya adalah siluman ular, dan Vipera selalu dianggap sebagai pembawa sial di keluarga besar ayahnya.

"you are dead" says the god of original story's Bragi. "and for your sins you will be reincarnated into your own plagiarized novel, try to entertain us." this is my first novel, feedback is appreciated and so is comments, i will try to reply to every one, regardless of it is constructive or not Im also on scribble hub and applying for royal road.

One day, a light covered the world, ushering in a new era with the awakening of the Epsilon Gene. Follow Aelyra’s journey as she discovers that the world she knows is not what it seems and navigates her more than complicated family relationships. This story is inspired by My Hero Academia and similar tales. I gladly welcome any feedback or suggestions. English is not my first language.

This novel consists of a man named Issac, his world was invaded by monsters and he became the last surviving human on Earth. Well here’s the funny part, Issac lost his life and somehow regressed back to the start. So what will Issac do different? (P.S there is only two chapters for now so please read, depending on the readers feedback I may continue this project otherwise I’ll just stick to reading novels not writing them. Please be honest with the feedback.)

This is the story of a boy who meets with the infamous Truck-kun, Only to be reborn as a prince in a world brimming with cultivation.....!!! Reincarnation with the power of Spirit Stone Generation in the world of cultivation? Watch as he got his ultimate golden finger of generating wealth. But in a land where strength reigns supreme, Will he find a way with his power? With the power of money will he become the next king? _________________________________________________ This is my first novel, and English is not my first language, so please forgive any mistakes. I’d appreciate any help and feedback to make the story better and to know if I’m heading in the right direction.

_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated Perhaps everyone was right, but Lisa Grace was cursed. How else would you explain what happened to her life and her dream of living an Ordinary Life? ——— ‘This will not work out, so we should break up now. It’s not you, it’s me! I recently found my soul mate and want to be with them.” Lisa was not shocked when her boyfriend told her this. She did not even have enough energy to be angry or demand answers. Perhaps she would have said something if this was the first time this happened. However, after being broken up for the 24th time, Lisa had no hope of ever having a meaningful relationship again. After all, Lisa was an ordinary girl with an extraordinary rumor - if you dated her, you would find your soul mate. So, when a stranger approached Lisa with red eyes, a charming smile, and a beautiful face, she expected it to be a quick relationship for her. But little did she know she was stepping into a world she could never escape. Would the flash of gold she saved become her salvation? Or would that beautiful temptation make her forget her world? …… “All I ever wanted was an ordinary life with someone who cared! It would have made my mother’s neglect and my father’s absence much easier for me to bear!” Lisa wanted this in her life—to be ordinary and never worry about her place in the world. However, just because ‘SHE’ wanted to be left alone did not mean that the ‘World’ would let her be alone. She had made these two fall for her, and now she would be stuck with a vampire’s obsession and a werewolf’s possessiveness. ______ This story will have a straight pairing as well as Yuri and will have abo themes as well as fantasy themes. Female Alphas are Futas. If it's not your cup of tea, leave before you enter. MXFXF relationship, age gap, and unbalanced relationships. Please read the note, add it to the collection, and support me. All feedback will be appreciated. Leave a lot of feedback for me.

The protagonist, once an enthusiastic observer of celestial phenomena, experiences a catastrophic event when a meteorite strikes her. Although she dies, she is given a second chance at life as a primordial dragon. Watch as she grapples with her new identity and the reality of being a dragon. Determined to grow stronger, she aims to fulfill her destiny of becoming a true god. However, the world around her is not what she expected. Are the Heavenly Dao of another world reading cultivation novels and using their scripts to run this reality? All she wants is to cultivate and fulfill her mission, but they always seem to disturb her. Perhaps she should change the script of the world; only then can she enjoy her fun and entertainment with peace of mind—no, cultivate with peace of mind. // --// English is not my native language, so please be lenient with my writing. There will be very less action in initial life of the protagonist as she is overpowered with low level people as her enemy so it will be like planning to watch the show by directing it from behind the scenes or directly killing in one shot or a show off of her powers. In the future there will be fight scenes. This is my first novel, so I welcome any suggestions or feedback you may have. The cover was created using AI. Available on Scribble Hub and Royalroad and WebNovel ??.

[PLAYER XSHI47 HAS BEEN REGISTERED] [PLAYER XLOV392 HAS BEEN REGISTERED] [PLAYER XLA1004 HAS BEEN REGISTERED] [PLAYER LSKO47 HAS BEEN REGISTERED] [THE FIRST STAGE HAS BEEN SET] [welcome players to fate] 1v1 pairing unlimited flow, horror game, bl, yoai Authors note: Lov here; I'm a first-time author, so I hope you guys understand if it takes me a bit longer to churn out chapters! criticism and feedback much appreciated. ^_^