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Ray, a young man content with his simple life finds himself facing death due to unknown reason But he was given a chance to get resurrected by completing a mission given to him by a system During this mission he got to know about the reason behind death

A story about a traveler who crossed into a parallel universe, relying on his Proficiency ability to continuously grind experience and become stronger.

After years of hard work Jiro, an overworked university student working 2 part-time jobs. Suffering with being in a struggle all his life, one day Jiro is tempted by a strange notification in his inbox that offers him a chance to make his life easier with no cost what else could he possible lose? Story's Purpose My Goal with this story is to have a fun story that's interactive with the audience in a more feedback-controlled environment that would help stray away from bad ideas but not just write fanservice either. -_- Most Characters and Abilities will standard start based on the dnd background as a rough character guide so that there will be a future implementation of allowing readers to make NPCs that also interact with the world although as this would not be till way later so for now you could treat it like 2 friends talking when given feedback and ill improve it. ;D

The once peaceful world was brought to ruin after the cataclysm. Strange rifts opened up all over the world, releasing vile creatures. Only a few settlements remain, fighting back against the beasts with their newly awakened powers. Ash, a survivor of the cataclysm, begins to awaken and must fight for humanity while also taking care of his niece, his last remaining family.. --------------------------- Cover art not mine Hope you enjoy :) Any feedback is appreciated

Have you ever imagined what would happen if you died, but some powerful being decided to reincarnate you and offer you the freedom to choose any world and powers you wanted? What would you choose, to be reborn in a sci-fi world with your own ship to explore the stars, to become a god in a godless world, to be reincarnated surrounded by hot girls, to become the most powerful person? All good choices but not the choices I made. My name is Jackson. I was chosen by one of the Primordials, Brakos, the Primordial Spirit of Time, Stories, and Knowledge, and given this exact choice. We talked, and he offered me any world and powers. I gave him my views and wants for my new life, and one was that I wanted to become powerful, but I wanted to work for it, or else I felt I wouldn't deserve it. Brakos agreed and we started to plan. As I don't like to waste opportunities I did ask for 3 powers. 1: to be reborn with a system-like ability stored inside of 3 books. 2: to be given the power to converse with Spirits forge contracts with them and ask them for help. 3: to be given the power to create a new race of my own creation and become one of them. Brakos liked my plan and selected a very special world. The first world to ever exist. Primus is the world of the Primordials and Primogneitors. Follow me through my adventures as I make friends, run from my village being destroyed, fall in love, take over a school, dismantle criminal organizations, destroy an entire kingdom, fight against the gods and establish a home for myself and my new race, the Dragonians. _____________ Additional tags: BL, Supernatural, High IQ, Werewolf, Academy, Kingdom Building, the strong acting weak, Evolution, Mystery, Non-Human _____________ Not a harem or romance novel. Will be a BL eventually but will not be the focus of the story. Just want to build up the world right now. I'm not an experienced writer, this is my first time writing something longer than a 3-page story from high school. Please excuse any mistakes or spelling errors, and feel free to correct me in the comments. I’d really appreciate any feedback on how the story is going. Also, I might take a few days' breaks now and then due to work or personal reasons, so if a new chapter doesn't come out for a few days, don't worry! _____________ I will also post this story on RoyalRoad if you prefer that website. I also have a Patreon with early access to chapters. please have a look. patreon.com/Drake_Flame11 I have a discord too, take a look https://discord.gg/magrW74Wvx _____________ The story updates 3 times a week, every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday at 8:15 AM (GMT-5) Currently taking a break from uploading. uploads will resume on March 24th

Jid, the son of the Demon King, as he navigates the aftermath of his father's betrayal and assassination by the Holy Church. The story revolves around Jid's journey as he rises to power in the Abyss, leading the demon race while grappling with the trauma of his past and the loss of his parents. Jid struggles between the peaceful ideals of his father, King Micheal, and the harsh realities of leadership in a world full of conflict. Along the way, Jid forms bonds with other characters, including Iroha, a non-verbal girl with a mysterious past, and several other key figures such as Queen Theresa, the Vampire Queen, and Graxx, a strict and loyal fallen angel. The novel also delves into themes of loyalty, strength, sacrifice, and survival as Jid attempts to rebuild his father's legacy, face the threats from the Holy Church, and protect his people from various external and internal dangers. The story is filled with political intrigue, action-packed moments, and emotional depth, all while exploring Jid's inner struggle with his past and his responsibilities as the new ruler of the Abyss.

If someone is given the ability to grant others superpowers, How will they act? Good or evil Sinful or rightful Bad or... Joshua Oliver, Was given such an ability. Will he succeed in doing what he deemed good for others or fail horribly?

Khan is alone in a world where the weak are prey. With no talent for cultivation, his dream of greatness seems impossible. Yet, Khan refuses to let that stop him. Through The Record of Khan, a tome chronicling his extraordinary past, his descendant unveils a story of relentless struggle—against the world, his own limitations, and the odds stacked against him. On this journey, Khan discovers an unconventional cultivation method, carving a path to greatness that transforms not only himself but the world around him. From an ordinary man to a legend, his actions reshape the future and inspire generations to come. Will Khan’s determination be enough to overcome a fate written in weakness and achieve greatness? What to expect: -MC is not a good person, though he may appear to be at first. -MC does not have a harem, though future subordinates, nobles, etc., may have them. -A Cultivator World, Unfiltered: There is no equality, and morality bends to power -MC is not a wuss or overly deferential. -Eventual kingdom building, though expect to wait a while. -Business building (you don't have to wait that long). -MC has actual relationships with people. -Legacy building. - Mix between Cultivator world and Medieval world -MC transitions from slightly nice to cold-hearted and jaded over time. Expect a journey of self-discovery, where Khan faces not only external challenges but also the transformation of his own values and identity. Release: Tuesdays/Wednesdays at 3:00 PM EST (12:00 PM PST, 8:00 PM GMT, 4:00 AM CST) Note: The tags and content warnings are there to give me freedom as I develop the light novel. Please feel free to share as much feedback as you can. Your feedback is invaluable! If something feels off or a character seems inconsistent, let me know—it’s your feedback that helps make this story the best it can be.

"This is the Story of Ratsujin, a pure soul born in hell...." The Narrator spoke. "He was given many names throughout his journey, " the Narrator continued after a pause. Some called him The Black Sun King." "Prophet of the End." "The Hidden Ruler of Death." "The Angel of Endless Night." "These names were not given to him by his allies." The Narrator continued with a heavy voice, "These names were not given to him by his allies......." "These Names Were Given To Him By His Enemies!" The Narrator stated. The Narrator continued, "But there was a name given to him since the day he was born. A name that suited him the most. A name that sent terror through the spines of his enemies and his allies." "And that name is Ratsujin, The Son Of Devil!" "He was Destined to destroy everything or get destroyed by everything. His story began the second after he was brought into the world." "This is the story of Ratsujin, The Son Of Devil.."

Meet Tsuyu Hanawari. Tsuyu was a boy who got bullied for asking his crush out, which resulted in him becoming the schools toy to pick on. Being beat up, spit on, and various things even being abused verbally. Once he graduated, he immediately became an shut in. Thought, this ended shortly when he went outside after quite while, he saw the girl he had an crush on in highschool— the one who caused his bullying. He froze, and next thing he knew he saved her from dying. The present, he is now reincarnated but will this be his only time being reincarnated?

In the underbelly of a lawless place, Chameli’s beauty becomes her curse and her weapon. Sold into a world of glittering danger and brutal power, she dances on the edge of survival, where every step could be her last. But beneath the smoke, a fire burns, and her secrets may bring lords to their knees. If you have any ideas or feedback please share it on my discord server: https://discord.gg/wXa2cefX

I am a genius, the true owner of this palace. I will annihilate each one of you for your act of disrespect. No, kneeling in front of me wouldn't work, just die already. This is the story about a person, who will eventually become the benevolent king for ones, and the violent tyrant for others. You better be in his good books. This is my first story, so, any comments, or constructive feedback will be appreciated. But remember, this is the story of characters, and we are just spectators of it.

Yin Kai eats something his chickens seem to enjoy... From then on, he's cast into a bigger role for himself, his family, and his world. Using the Ancestral Origin Transformation Art, he merges with one of his chickens. Getting cultivation feedback from his chicken's progeny alongside his own, Yin Kai begins to take the cultivation world by storm with only one task: Do the thing nobody else wants to do, ever will do, and cultivate perfectly through each realm by cultivating 1380 small stages per realm instead of 3. He doesn't want to, but he might as well. Join the discord! https://discord.gg/XKHa52XFQm

Raven hadn’t been lucky since birth. In this world parisites have taken over the world. Gates opened letting these parasites attack human civilization. The parasite eventually infected most if not all people on earth killing over half of them. This parasite also helped humans. It used gates to send Humans into different dimensions where after completing a challenge they could become strong enough to fight back against the parasite. Raven was of the these unlucky people. Somehow someway Raven stumbled upon a dying god. This god who supposedly hated humans was forced to inhabit Raven.

This is a novel about a girl named Akame Vermillion or what government officials call her, Fenrir. Akame is a government super weapon, she is a hybrid of a human, wolf, and the DNA of other things that scientist found within the Earth. She is designed for war and nothing else...or so they thought. Hello everyone! this is my first time writing so please don't say anything hurtful to me but I would love feedback and advice on my writing! please and thank you! .................................................................................. sorry...I had to drop this project because of school and family issues...I'm very sorry..but let's be honest...it was not that good anyways...bye!

The last thing Tom remembers is being in school when everything went dark around him. When he could see again he found himself in a void with a bright light before. The entity made of light explained to him that his life was unfairly taken from him by his own mother. Because of the circumstances of his death he's going to be reborn on a new world. When Tom is given the choice of one ability he have, he chose luck. The entity of light gave him infinite luck to help him on his journey to becoming strong.

Hey guys this is my first time trying a novel you may find changes in the plot, Or in the writing, Give feedback by all means whether that be in my writing, As i may have ups and downs if you find my work imaginative, you my support me however, I don't find that necessary. Added note: (there may be grammatical mistakes but I'll try my best to prevent them)

Entry for the WSA 2025 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- One moment, Seiito was living an ordinary life. The next, he appeared in a world he didn’t recognize. A land of magic, monsters, and ancient ruins that seem to whisper his name. Guided by fleeting dreams and shadowed by unseen forces, Seiito sets out in search of answers. But in this world, nothing is as it seems. Fate is a labyrinth, and every step forward may only lead him deeper into the unknown. If he wants to survive, he’ll need to uncover the truth—before it consumes him. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I hope you, dear readers, enjoy this story, Please give me some feedback; I appreciate it. Much Love~ LeFattyBoi

Shiva was a 28-years old ordinary man who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

Mark finds himself in the middle of a street fight between two weird-looking dudes on his way from work. Gets killed Gets isekied Gets stuck in one pressuring situation after another that pushes him to his limits Author's Notes: This is my first work, and I tend to experiment with writing styles here and there, so your feedback would be nice

This is a story about the day in the Life of a Futanari named Anglea. She is a loner that has no Friends. Her entire life, she has been segregated due to her Herophrodite status. After years of verbal bullying, she has decided to end the meek facade. Her natural personality decided to take over. Something happens, and her plans move forward faster than she ever planned. This is for advertisement purposes. Amazon link: https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B096QTS87W/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=Life+of+a+dominant+Futanari&qid=1623005605&sr=8-1 Support me at Patreon.com/Madjic

Disclaimer This is not a web novel series. This is just a prologue for a novel I'm currently working. I posted it here just to get some feedback if you guys don't mind. The survey below is for the people who only wants to answer it. From scale of 1 to 5 where 1 is least likely and 5 is the most likely. Do you like Sci-Fi? Did the prologue pique your interest? Are you interested on what's gonna happen next?

after being assassinated while reading his favorite manga an ex special forces opp is reborn into a poor village and a poor family, read about his journey to become the strongest. ____________________________________________________________ Author's note The plot may sound a little cliche but give it a chance u may enjoy it NB/ This is my first time writing so be patient with me, also give lots of feedback, feedback helps just don't hate on the story plus I am in school so one chapter per week.

Vanessa highschooler navigating through her life and past. A novel about a villain, but the question is will she become one? A temptating offer made by two spirits who are witches from the past! Offer her the deal! Explore more and check if she would ever be a villain or turn away from it. (This is my first time writing so please be paitent with me and do give me feedbacks!)

Life can be really cruel when it doesn't go the way you want. My life took an unexpected turn when my father passed away due to illness that had made him have sleepless days and nights for almost 7 years. So this is a story about my struggles and the love I receive from my loved ones. Let's read how my life is relatable in the present in different ways: LOVE, COLLEGE AND DRAMAS!!!!!

[note that this creation is a work in progress] (it is told similar to a recording) this story is about an experiment now a relic guardian from the peak of an advanced civilization. now in near ruins, it was given freedom and was given a name of sarmarilat (nick; sarn). although sarn was given freedom, it came at a price that left sarn stuck with a problem and barbaric solution. which lead to many things that destroyed what is left of the civilization including its mad createors. clues about what is the original names of the divine creatures. the four names are hidden, one per story. (I will mark each story) () [read the basic information for more]

This is my first time writing so any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks and I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how far I'll take this story because I'm only writing for fun but I have a lot of ideas that I can make into "hopefully" a great story. Follow the adventures of Jake a young boy from the same age group as Ash Ketchum as he travels through this new world he finds himself in.

If you we're given a the power to travel across timelines, How would you use the power given to you, Would you change your life, How will you act knowing whatever you do, Will change the course of history?

Space Pirate sci-fi.