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When war finally ended, the Arcadians sought retribution from the nightmares they had suffered from demonkind. A noble Princess had taken her mother's mantle in order to uphold peace between the two races so humanity could co-exist with their fellow demons in a kingdom without strife, but war paved the road to peace in blood and such path is but a fragile thread awaiting to be ignited by the flames of hatred. Another great war awaits, but will she be able to avert it? Second iteration of the Knight's Fate saga chronologically speaking. Yes I'm starting from the second because the first was an utter failure when I tried to write it, it just didn't fit the mood of a fantasy novel unlike this one. Though don't worry this doesn't mean you can't enjoy this one before I write the first. This is the first story I've actually published so I appreciate any feedback, be it good or bad just let me know what you think.

Shiva was a 28-years old ordinary man who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

*Will be back from Hiatus in September!* When Travis's life has hit bottom and he accidently falls down below the bridge, Travis is sent to the Abyss, a place between places. And he meets Arael, The Goddess of death. She provides him a second chance at life in a new world filled with magic, under her advice That she guides him to have a powerful life there. He reluctantly agrees and finds that He is then reincarnated to a new family as Kota Detrut. Author note: First novel I’ve done, Really wanted to make my own take on that Isekai trope some of those anime do, but I wanted to do it in a way where it doesn’t melt into the power trip fantasy. There will still be updates to older chapters or auxiliary chapters to be up to date. Feedback on chapters or giving a reviews would be appreciated!

Between two dimensions, I stand. I, the one who hold the most powerful and terrifying force, stand against the world to protect my beliefs. I, the immortal, have lost everything—and died countless times. Yet still, I remain. ------------------------------------------------------ Azure Hunter, a quiet and introverted 21-year-old university student, lived a simple life of novels and video games—Until he was transported to an unknown world and bound to an ancient, otherworldly power known only as the Devourer of Desires. This cursed force grants him unimaginable power—but at a devastating cost: it feeds on everything—memories, emotions, desires, abilities and entire worlds. As Azure battles enemies from outside and temptations from within, trying to protect not just himself but everyone he care about a question haunts him: Can he remain himself… or will he be consumed by the very thing that empowers him? --------------------------------------------------------- This is my first novel, so I apologize in advance for any mistakes. I’d be grateful for your feedback and support. I hope you enjoy it.

Pixel Dreams, Real Code In a world where digital entertainment reigns supreme, college freshman **Ethan** dreams of making games that resonate, that truly connect with players on a deeper level. But as a lone indie developer in his cramped dorm room, armed with a clunky old PC and a mountain of student debt, his ambitions seem like an impossible fantasy. That is, until he stumbles upon the **ADJ System**, an enigmatic that promises to be his ultimate partner in creation. The ADJ System isn't magic; it doesn't write code or conjure art from thin air. Instead, it's a meticulously crafted **Assistant for Development and Gaming**, offering unparalleled **insight into player trends**, pinpointing **hidden inefficiencies in his code and design**, and even identifying **undiscovered talent** among his peers. With the ADJ's analytical prowess, Ethan gains a powerful edge, allowing him to see the hidden potential in forgotten genres, optimize his development process with surgical precision, and understand player feedback like no one else. From humble beginnings designing charmingly buggy simulation games, Ethan faces the real-world grind: debugging lines of spaghetti code, wrestling with stubborn texture exports, battling frustrating lag, and striving for pixel-perfect optimization. Each crash, every piece of critical feedback, and every late-night coding session becomes a vital lesson. With every challenge, the ADJ guides him, not by giving answers, but by illuminating the path to his own solutions. This isn't a tale of an overnight sensation or a chosen hero. It's the raw, authentic journey of a regular student pouring his heart and soul into his passion. It's about the quiet grind, the thrill of discovery, and the profound satisfaction of transforming digital dreams into tangible experiences. Can Ethan, armed with his fierce dedication and a system built on insight, truly forge a path to greatness and leave his mark on the vast landscape of gaming?

There was a boy who lived a normal life like any other child his age. He had a loving family and younger siblings to take care of. He went to school like any other normal child and lived a peaceful and beautiful life. until he was ten years old and discovered a truth that was unknown to him. But along with this truth, he acquired a mysterious system that multiplies everything he does 100 times. Now, with the help of this mysterious system and the truth he learned, this boy will begin to live a new life, completely different from the life he had ever known. Hello, this is the author of this book. This novel may contain some elements that some may not like, so I'm warning you now. Enjoy reading this book and don't forget to always give me your feedback through comments and reviews.

Trinity Grove has everything you want. From rich parents to parties to very expensive things. She literally has everything money can buy, but still she feels empty inside. it's almost like something is missing, but what? After her parents divorce, when she was 7, she moves in permanently with her mother, and stepfather. The last thing she remembered of her birth father was him telling her this would happen. She finds out shes a human-dragon hybrid, and things start to seem normal, but that's when she finds herself between a war; a war between dragons and knights and humans. what will happen? will she survive? This is my 1st novel. I hope you like it. I'm looking forward to your feedback.

--- She died unloved, unprotected, and falsely accused. Libertia—the “villainess”—was cast aside by her own family, betrayed by the girl they brought into their home, and burned by the empire she once called hers. Her only crime? Being in the way. But death was not the end. When fate rewinds time, it’s not just Libertia who returns. This time, her family remembers everything. The cold crown prince. The distant military brother. The distracted emperor. The ever-busy empress. Each of them haunted by the memory of the daughter they lost… and the price they paid for turning their backs. Now, given a second chance, they will rewrite the ending. This time, they’ll fight for her. This time, they’ll protect their daughter before it’s too late. Even if it means facing the same girl who destroyed them before—Lily, the one they once trusted. In this life, Libertia won’t stand alone. --- this is my first time writing please read and give feedback

Khan is alone in a world where the weak are prey. With no talent for cultivation, his dream of greatness seems impossible. Yet, Khan refuses to let that stop him. Through The Record of Khan, a tome chronicling his extraordinary past, his descendant unveils a story of relentless struggle—against the world, his own limitations, and the odds stacked against him. On this journey, Khan discovers an unconventional cultivation method, carving a path to greatness that transforms not only himself but the world around him. From an ordinary man to a legend, his actions reshape the future and inspire generations to come. Will Khan’s determination be enough to overcome a fate written in weakness and achieve greatness? What to expect: -MC is not a good person, though he may appear to be at first. -MC does not have a harem, though future subordinates, nobles, etc., may have them. -A Cultivator World, Unfiltered: There is no equality, and morality bends to power -MC is not a wuss or overly deferential. -Eventual kingdom building, though expect to wait a while. -Business building (you don't have to wait that long). -MC has actual relationships with people. -Legacy building. - Mix between Cultivator world and Medieval world -MC transitions from slightly nice to cold-hearted and jaded over time. Expect a journey of self-discovery, where Khan faces not only external challenges but also the transformation of his own values and identity. Release: "I'll be posting on Fridays and Saturdays at 9:01 PM Gulf Standard Time (GST) / UTC+4." "9:01 PM UTC+4" Note: The tags and content warnings are there to give me freedom as I develop the light novel. Please feel free to share as much feedback as you can. Your feedback is invaluable! If something feels off or a character seems inconsistent, let me know.

"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

Seth McCauley, a "Marvel" nerd that was an ordinary person who hadn't done anything other than just live his life, never doing anything to make him stand out is given a chance to finally do something amazing. He is reincarnated in the MCU with all of his favorite characters with three wishes to change his fate and finally be someone that the world will remember forever NOTICE: I do not own Marvel or any of it's elements only the MC and my fanfic elements P.S. This is my first time writing a novel so I'd appreciate some feedback to how I can make it better

Meruem was born with boundless talent, praised by many and hailed as the chosen one by all who knew him. Yet to him, his journey has been tainted by failure. While the world sees his success, he sees nothing but endless loss. Thrown into the chaos of a forsaken, bleeding world, Meruem must face the tragic truths hidden beneath its surface. From being hailed as the strongest to falling to the weakest, he is forced to rebuild himself—enduring sacrifice, torture, and unimaginable pain along the way. As he learns more about this broken world and about himself, Meruem uncovers that the road to redemption is far more harrowing than anyone ever told him. (All character personalities are inspired by real people. If you see yourself in the pages, don’t be surprised.) Criticism and feedback are welcome. Please leave any thoughts you wish.

Death, impotence, and suffering, after living through this would you take an offer of becoming a "hero"? Can broken souls create healthy times? when a Mexican soldier saw himself against this question he knew deep inside the answer as a world of beasts, magic, elves, and demons unfolded before him. Author notes: this is a personal project, I would love feedback but I am not good at writing nor have much free time to write hence time between chapters might vary. I am trying to pick the known trope of humans isekaid to a fantasy world where they would become heroes but I will give it my all to create a complex and mature story worth reading with this common trope.

The world awakens, dungeons form, animals and plants mutate, the gods spectate the world's happenings and find people they think are interesting, and humans gain powers and systems that are tailored to them (They're all the same thing, just with different designs). The usual stuff. It just so happens that our main character's version of the system is, for better or lack of words...flawed. --- Disclaimer: NSFW content will be marked accordingly: N+ for 18+, N- for darker themes, and N for a mix of both. Updates will aim for a chapter every week, with the potential for more depending on my schedule. Your feedback and ideas are greatly appreciated, even if it's just a "good job" or complete negativity. Questions are also welcome.

Leo Kael, a 16-year-old high school student, finds his life turned upside down the day a bolt of lightning strikes him. When he wakes up, a mysterious black bracelet has appeared on his wrist, and strange shadow powers begin to manifest themselves. As he tries to understand what's happening to him, Léo discovers that he's not the only one marked by the forces of darkness... Author's note: This is my very first book, so feel free to tell me what you think! All feedback is welcome - whether on the story, the writing or anything else. Thank you so much for taking the time to read me!

A regular guy finds himself inside a novel’s world. Not as the hero. Not as the villain. Just some extra doomed to obscurity. But he won’t accept that. He’ll fight, grow stronger, and carve out his own path. With a system in hand and countless opportunities ahead, he’s ready to flip the script. He would’ve become an unstoppable powerhouse. Except for the fact that he dies before the story even begins. It wasn’t fate. It wasn’t bad luck. Someone made sure he wouldn’t survive. But here’s the thing about stories, once they start, they don’t stop just because the main character is gone. And sometimes… the forgotten refuse to stay that way. "English is not my first language, so please excuse any mistakes. All characters, events, and places in this novel are purely fictional. Any similarities to real people, places, or events are purely coincidental." "I appreciate any feedback that helps improve the story!"

In 2029 , the Moon got destroyed and all the star disappear, which we called the event of Catastrophe . After the thirty years of Catastrophe , two gates appears . And with the Aseters ( the person who possessed inhuman ability ) also came . Gates fulfill the wish of the person but in return of some price . It is a power or curse . Note : This is the origin story of series , basically give me the feedback and I will give some thought about creating series or not

Amid a sea that swallows forgetfulness and a sky cracked with whispering truths, Asra Kafka was born upon an island of scars and hollow prayers, seeking answers that were never meant to be found. But after losing sight in one eye,and learning that some lies are heavier than silence,Asra must brave the waters of a world that never wished for his return. For in a world that denies him, it is not those who rise from the sea they fear, but those who walk upon it and breathe a blood that never forgets. — The cover was made using pics I found on Pinterest–I didn’t draw anything myself. — English isn’t my first language, so please be patient with me! If you spot any mistakes or have suggestions, feel free to drop a comment–I'd really appreciate the feedback.

Just read 1 chapter and you can not stop yourself.if you won't like give bad feedback.

Sakai Yuji found himself in a new world. A world where beasts could speak, humans could fly, and people who could live forever. A world where magic and cultivation exist.  However, he was faced with a unique problem. [ Eat grass – 20000 times ] [ Do head-butt – 200 times] [ Do Jump – 1500 times ] [ Run – 50000 steps ] He wasn’t born as a human, mighty dragon, nor as any mythical creature. But as a goat! A goat on a farm. One day who will be killed and served in a small inn on the roadside! _ _ _ _ _ _ What not to expect -Forgiving mc -Harem -Perfect mc Please note that I am not a native English speaker and I am using Quillbot to improve the quality of my writing. Your feedback is appreciated, and I will strive to improve my skills accordingly.    

this is my first time writing another so I hope you don't criticize me too much but please I need your feedbacks. A story About a Decendant of the Chen Family(Creators of Tai chi) ending up in an immortal cultivation world with all his knowledge.

"Booorghh!". Loren Charles left his last meal on the stone floor of Cie Lin's house. That wasn't quite what he expected when he realized that he took over the body of the twenty-five-year-old elder of the Clear Heaven Sect. Even though, Loren Charles lived his life like he always wanted and died in peace, he isn't going to say no to continue living. (A/N: Hey, I was a bit bored and just started writing for no apparent reason. You shouldn't have any good expectations for this novel, because I am no professional and I don't even know if I have the actual rights for this story...even though I am writing this. Just give some feedback and I'd be happy.)

Jay Riemman , disappointed in the oppressive reality of the 22nd century is given a chance to destroy the society of the rich and powerful when Rifts begin to appear on Earth. [This is my effort in creating a somewhat of a "villain" protagonist who is not supported by a super system designed for him nor an immense plot armor, but who survives by using logical thinking, relying on strong teammates, and using underhanded methods] [A lot of my inspiration comes from other novels that deal with the concept of portals to other worlds, but I am trying to make this work differentiate as much as possible by mixing various other concepts and some of my original ideas] [Oh this is already too long but closing, I need to emphasize that this novel is something I do for fun and every possible feedback will be very helpful] (The cover picture doesn't belong to me, if you are the artist that created it please message me or leave a comment if you want it removed)

Chris Parker reincarnates, after experiencing mysterious circumstances. In his new life, which is also full of mysteries, he looses many things, due to an attack of the ones he should be protected by. After that, he allows no one to get close to him and finds the path that is stated as evil by others, to get revenge on those who betrayed him. (P.s.: the real storyline begins with chapter 6, so if you don't want the background information just start reading from there on out) (P.p.s.:The chapters before chapter 6 are relatively short and not as good as the ones thereafter. I hope that if you don't like the beginning that you'll try reading the longer chapters. Thank you.) (The chapter release rate will depend on how much support I get, so if you want more chapters per week, give feedback, so I can improve my writing skills, and power stones to encourage me in publishing more frequently.)

Jack always loved Star Wars but never had enough time to enjoy it, due to School and Work. One of Jack's friends, Drags, took Jack to a game store to take a break from School and Work and have Fun. Jack decides to get the Newest Star Wars VRMMO game in order to have some fun and take a break from school and work. How will the Game Change Jack, and what will Jack do once he starts digging deeper into the Storyline and Game? Also, this is my First Story, so please be kind, and if you leave Comments, please give me Constructive Feedback on how to make it better. All Rights go to Lucasfilm and Disney.

James battles his brother, and remembers the scarring trauma of his family. As he dives deeper into the unknown reason of his brothers betrayal. New writer, I'm editing this for my brother! Also feedback is great as long as it's not to harsh, seeing as how my Brother(the writer) is only in middle school.

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

NPC GLITCH! EVIL MC! FAST PACED STORY! SYSTEMS AND LEVELING! WRITING FOR FUN BUTT OPEN TO FEEDBACK!

Dreammark Chronicles follows the parallel journeys of Aiden, a curious American teenager, and Lin Xi, a perceptive Chinese youth, who are unexpectedly drawn into a shared dream realm. Each midnight, they and twenty-one other adolescents from around the globe are summoned by an ancient “dream law” to solve a series of escalating trials set within a shifting city shrouded in mist. In this latent world, participants must cooperate to navigate memory mazes, logical battlegrounds, and simulated crises that mirror real-world threats. With each successful challenge they recover a fragment of a hidden “mind core,” but overuse of these dream-granted abilities risks triggering unpredictable temporal feedback into waking life. As Aiden applies his scientific ingenuity and Lin Xi draws on his ancestral Qi techniques, they forge an uneasy alliance that bridges cultural divides and resonates with universal themes of trust, sacrifice, and resilience. Their discoveries soon reveal a dire conspiracy.......

Creating a small community where authors (and readers!) read the first 5 chapters of one another’s books and leave genuine reviews and/or thoughtful comments — not just stars, but real feedback that helps improve the story. Comment to join! Everyone is welcome