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In a world where Ether determines one’s fate, Alf was deemed talentless—an outcast in his own clan. Yet, beneath his supposed weakness lies a secret even he doesn’t understand. His journey begins in struggle, but fate has far greater plans for him. Through relentless training and sheer will, he carves a path no one has ever walked before. From a nameless boy to a warrior, a leader, and beyond—his story is one of growth, challenge, and an unshakable spirit. Read more to know. Note: My first time ever attempting to write and it will surely be a disaster and I know it. why am I posting it? Hoping to get some feedback. if you are actually reading this, consider not being invested in this story as I am just trying to write for the first time, I am not making a commitment. I am a busy student with a tight schedule.

"Kaius, a Calonian spy, is unexpectedly transported to a war-torn realm where celestial and demonic forces clash in an eternal battle. Stranded and unable to return home, he must learn to survive, witnessing the cosmic conflict and gaining powerful abilities. When he finally finds a way back to Calonia, he discovers his homeland ravaged by war and betrayal. Changed by his experiences, Kaius must choose between seeking revenge and rebuilding what was lost, using his newfound powers to shape the destiny of his shattered kingdom." The time for peace is over. The storm has begun. -------------------------------------------- Tags : Action, Transmigration, Adventure, Magic, Betrayal, Overpowered. Release : Daily release upto 1500 words unless I get sick so no worries of me get an update. Feel free to give a feedbacks

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

Second Awakening? A System? Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again. Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin. Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him. Ding! [The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!] [You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!] [Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!] [Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!] Damien's only option is to evolve! ____________________ A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks. ____________________ ____________________ Update Schedule: 00:30 GMT (+8) 12:30 GMT (+8)

A world of empires and faith, conquest and betrayal—Solmora: Ascent is more than just a game. It is a battlefield where the ambitious carve their legacy and the forgotten are erased from history. For Rael Voss, it was supposed to be just another MMO. No grand ambitions, no dreams of glory—just a casual dive into a world brimming with possibilities. But as kingdoms rise and factions wage war, the game’s stakes grow far beyond what anyone expected. The deeper he plays, the more he realizes: Ascent is not just a game. And when the first true war begins, only those who understand its nature will stand above all. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey everyone! Author here—this is my first time writing, and I’d love to hear your feedback. Your thoughts will help me improve, so feel free to share! Thanks for reading, and enjoy the story!

"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

Welcome to my corner of the literary world! I'll keep this short and sweet-sometimes, I have the wildest dreams that spark my imagination. One day, I decided to take those dreams and transform them into captivating stories. So far, you'll find just one story published, but I promise there's more on the way! I'm dedicated to consistently sharing my work and improving along the way. Your feedback is invaluable to me, so please don't hesitate to leave a comment with any pointers or suggestions. Currently, I'm pouring my heart and soul into one specific book, but I have a treasure trove of ideas waiting to come to life. Join me on this exciting journey, and let's explore the magic of storytelling together. After all, what's more fun than dreaming? Writing about those dreams!

What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

The background is set in a small, quiet town on the outskirts of Seoul. In this town, people were friendly, except for one particular neighbourhood. In this neighbourhood, everybody lived their lives as if treading on eggshells, all because of one particular household: the Lees. People surnamed Lee were a dime a dozen, but these particular set of Lees were unique. Dysfunctional. The family consisted of four people; the father and breadwinner Lee Do Joon, the delinquent son Lee Hyuk, the top student Lee Gun, and the town's most beautiful girl Lee Yeo Ri. Lee Yeo Ri was regarded as a saving grace, but before anybody knew it, the saving grace was slowly disintegrating from within. Hidden underneath her perfect, angelic smile, was a girl who was slowly being crushed and torn apart. This is her story. — TRIGGER WARNING — This story contains depictions of rape, violence, and other traumatic scenes. — Cover art by Ren (Twitter: @ikinashi_ren) — Please consider commenting or reviewing; any and all feedback are appreciated! :D

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

In a world shrouded in shadows, a young, ordinary boy named Axel discovers an extraordinary destiny. A world of ancient secrets, forbidden knowledge, and terrifying creatures, it's a place where reality is a fragile illusion "Darkness is the absence of light, not an element in itself," he was told, but he created it nonetheless. With Anya by his side, he vows "You and me against the world," as they embark on a quest to become the greatest elementalist the world has ever known. Witness the journey of a monarch in the making NOTE:"As we embark on this journey to write "Elemental Chaos", we invite you to visit the original story and share your valuable insights. Your feedback will play a crucial role in shaping the future of this tale. By taking the time to read and provide your thoughts, you'll be an integral part of this creative process. Let's work together to create a truly extraordinary reading experience"

In a post-apocalyptic fantasy world layered into multiple realms, humanity faces extinction due to their endangerment of the main realm. Forced to merge all realms back into one, a deity grants humans a leveling system to empower them, lest they become extinct when facing the mythical creatures. Noah, our protagonist, embraces the role of a monster tamer, trading his humanity for strength and eventually transforming into a monster himself. As Noah struggles with his evolving identity, he must navigate a world where the line between human and monster becomes increasingly blurred. Feedback is definitely appreciated, good or bad, lets make the story good together. I will like to note that the main character isn’t completely ruthless like some of you may want. There’s a lot of stories out there with ruthless, bloodthirsty, cold hearted main characters so if that’s what your interest in then I’m sorry to disappoint you. Release chapters will only be one chapter a day on weekdays. The releases will become more consistent depending on how well the story does.

This novel is inspired by novels where heroines can hear the villain's inner voice, but the main character is the protagonist in the original story not the villain whose voice audible to the heroines. No NTR ---- Chen Fan descends from the mountain after learning from his master for 10 years. The purpose? Of course, to enjoy life and reach the pinnacle of greatness. But there’s something strange about the girls he meets… ---- A/N : This is my first novel, and since English isn't my native language, I kindly ask for your understanding regarding any awkward phrasing or grammatical errors. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Mo Qing, the feared Demon Lord, meets his end at the hands of the Celestial Emperor and the Six Realms' mightiest cultivators. But death is not the end - it's a new beginning. Reborn as Lin Fei, the once-prodigious young master of the Lin Clan, Mo Qing finds himself trapped in a weakened body, his past cultivation sealed away. Betrayed and stripped of his cultivation, he's now seen as nothing more than a fallen genius and a disgrace to his clan. But Mo Qing is not so easily defeated. Armed with millennia of knowledge and a ruthless determination, Mo Qing begins his climb back to the top. In a world of cultivation, immortal sects, and ancient secrets, he'll use every trick and scheme to reclaim his power and take revenge on those who banished him. [2 Daily chapters + Extra releases] [Open to feedback

Khan is alone in a world where the weak are prey. With no talent for cultivation, his dream of greatness seems impossible. Yet, Khan refuses to let that stop him. Through The Record of Khan, a tome chronicling his extraordinary past, his descendant unveils a story of relentless struggle—against the world, his own limitations, and the odds stacked against him. On this journey, Khan discovers an unconventional cultivation method, carving a path to greatness that transforms not only himself but the world around him. From an ordinary man to a legend, his actions reshape the future and inspire generations to come. Will Khan’s determination be enough to overcome a fate written in weakness and achieve greatness? What to expect: -MC is not a good person, though he may appear to be at first. -MC does not have a harem, though future subordinates, nobles, etc., may have them. -A Cultivator World, Unfiltered: There is no equality, and morality bends to power -MC is not a wuss or overly deferential. -Eventual kingdom building, though expect to wait a while. -Business building (you don't have to wait that long). -MC has actual relationships with people. -Legacy building. - Mix between Cultivator world and Medieval world -MC transitions from slightly nice to cold-hearted and jaded over time. Expect a journey of self-discovery, where Khan faces not only external challenges but also the transformation of his own values and identity. Release: Tuesdays/Wednesdays at 3:00 PM EST (12:00 PM PST, 8:00 PM GMT, 4:00 AM CST) Note: The tags and content warnings are there to give me freedom as I develop the light novel. Please feel free to share as much feedback as you can. Your feedback is invaluable! If something feels off or a character seems inconsistent, let me know—it’s your feedback that helps make this story the best it can be.

This is not for you to read! But if you still want to take a look, which I don't, give me some feedback.

When war finally ended, the Arcadians sought retribution from the nightmares they had suffered from demonkind. A noble Princess had taken her mother's mantle in order to uphold peace between the two races so humanity could co-exist with their fellow demons in a kingdom without strife, but war paved the road to peace in blood and such path is but a fragile thread awaiting to be ignited by the flames of hatred. Another great war awaits, but will she be able to avert it? Second iteration of the Knight's Fate saga chronologically speaking. Yes I'm starting from the second because the first was an utter failure when I tried to write it, it just didn't fit the mood of a fantasy novel unlike this one. Though don't worry this doesn't mean you can't enjoy this one before I write the first. This is the first story I've actually published so I appreciate any feedback, be it good or bad just let me know what you think.

They consume us, and we devour them. For three hundred years, humanity has struggled to survive against vicious demonic creatures known to them as Terrors. Resources are scarce, security and safety is fleeting, and still no progress towards their eradication or origins has been made. However, with the sudden arrival of a young boy with a shattered past becoming a cadet, along with help from a mysterious power granted from a sickly cause, it appeared as though the course of fate began to change... - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Blood Eater- is a dark fantasy novel mainly focused on characters and plot, with a notable effort put into the world itself. If you like mystery, action and violence, you should read this book. With inspiration from various sources, such as Shadow Slave here on WebNovel or Attack On Titan, I tried my best to create something that was both fun to write and hopefully fun to read, while staying in my comfort zone and trying to maximize my writing potential. Of course, any feedback/suggestions/questions, etc., etc. are welcome and I’ll do my best to respond :) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Minimum of 800 words/chapter (though usually around 1000)

In the town of Benton Harbor, a teenager named Alex wakes up on the autumn equinox—a day that marks the start of fall. On his way to school with his friends, they’re suddenly transported to Terra, a world overrun by monsters, demons, and vampires. Lost and unprepared, they’re attacked by a demon. Just when it seems like there’s no escape, a mysterious woman named Vespera appears, saving them with her silver sword. Trapped in this strange world, Alex and his friends quickly learn survival won’t be easy. They’ll need to train, study, and fight to stay alive. Take lessons in the arts of Terra while looking for a way home. Join Alex as he uncovers ancient secrets, faces terrifying creatures, and begins his journey in a place where survival itself is a test. This is my first time writing a story so please understand that I'm learning. If you would like to give feedback, I would love that.

The Darkness Birth is a story of the embodiment of darkness itself—Primordial Darkness, representing every form of darkness that exists. Known as Mysterieux, this mysterious figure embarks on a journey to uncover the truth of his identity and understand his own nature. Filled with mystery, self-discovery, and encounters with forces beyond comprehension, Mysterieux’s path is one that delves into the depths of darkness, exploring its power and meaning in the universe. main plot: Self-discovery. Note: "The Darkness Birth is still in development. The first chapter is just a preview, and your valuable feedback is greatly appreciated!"

Yin Kai eats something his chickens seem to enjoy... From then on, he's cast into a bigger role for himself, his family, and his world. Using the Ancestral Origin Transformation Art, he merges with one of his chickens. Getting cultivation feedback from his chicken's progeny alongside his own, Yin Kai begins to take the cultivation world by storm with only one task: Do the thing nobody else wants to do, ever will do, and cultivate perfectly through each realm by cultivating 1380 small stages per realm instead of 3. He doesn't want to, but he might as well. Join the discord! https://discord.gg/XKHa52XFQm

One day, a light covered the world, ushering in a new era with the awakening of the Epsilon Gene. Follow Aelyra’s journey as she discovers that the world she knows is not what it seems and navigates her more than complicated family relationships. This story is inspired by My Hero Academia and similar tales. I gladly welcome any feedback or suggestions. English is not my first language.

The journey of a young man who lost everything finding a new reason to live and let go of the past. _______________________ Deep in the darkness a ruined palace made of stone adorned with scars from wars of old. Inside a regal throne of bones atop sat a figure lurking in the darkness. Tic Tic Tic... Flipping open his pocketwatch he smiled "It's almost time" Looking up with his purple orbs he leaned back waiting once more. "Tick Tock Tick Tock... Are you ready?" In the darkness, seven figures stood awaiting his orders. ______________________ I am a new author so any feedback would be great I would like to be able to improve and make this story the best as possible so don't be afraid to correct me on stuff I get wrong or tell me if I worded things badly.

_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated. Check my profile for more work She was not the heiress, the eldest, or the youngest. She just existed in the family, keeping her head down and letting herself wash away until she could leave. "I tried standing out, staying quiet, and even voicing my thoughts. But no matter what I do, I am never acknowledged. Does my existence even matter? After all, it's not like anyone in this family even likes me." Rika Goodwill was the shame of her family. Born the middle 'beta' child of a prominent Alpha-Omega couple, it was natural for her to be neglected compared to her perfect Alpha brother and sweet Omega sister. Her situation outside of her family was no better. People avoided her because of her mafia family and judged her nature without a second thought. Her only friends were the 'sweetheart couple of the century'. But Rika had somehow become a third wheel between their bickering and frequent breakups. Over the course of her 17-year-old life, Rika had come to accept her fate and move on. After all, no amount of complaining would ever change her situation of being a third wheel. Collage was supposed to be her big break. It was supposed to be the time Rika had for herself, where she could feel like herself, so she applied for a place where no one knew her. This was supposed to be her lucky break! Rika was supposed to get away from her worsening life. But neither her family nor her 'friends' were ready to let her go, and it did not take long for her peaceful life to turn sour. ____________ This story will have a straight pairing as well as Yuri and is an omegaverse as well. Female Alphas are Futas. If it's not your cup of tea, leave before you enter. Leave a lot of feedback for me

Join Thomas and witness how he saves the world a punch at time. hey it's me the author, I'll try to keep writing this nov nov. also leave some feedback anything is appreciated. Chau chauuu

1. _Practice self-reflection_: Regularly reflect on your thoughts, feelings, and behaviors, and identify areas for improvement. 2. _Focus on your strengths_: Identify your positive qualities and abilities, and use them to your advantage. 3. _Challenge negative self-talk_: Notice when you are engaging in negative self-talk, and challenge those thoughts by reframing them in a more positive and realistic way. 4. _Take calculated risks_: Step outside of your comfort zone and take calculated risks to challenge yourself and build confidence. 5. _Seek feedback from others_: Ask for feedback from trusted friends, family, or colleagues, and use it to identify areas for improvement.

A long forgotten being of chaos sealed itself and decided to live in the most primitive universe in existence as a human being, James Carter. When his only reason to remain as such, his adoptive daughter, was murdered, his primal desires and nature resurfaced. What else can reality do when faced with its greatest enemy, but perish without a fight? ******* This is may or may not evolve into an actual story later on. For now, I'm just exploring this concept to see how it goes. The updates may be little to nonexistent since I focus more on my fanfic when I have free time. Feel free to give me feedback, but keep in mind I'm doing this for fun and to try something new.

Author Here: First time trying out fantasy like this! reviews & feedbacks are appreciated! In a world where monstrous serpents roam the land, Hera and his friends live by the thrill of the hunt. Together with Drago, the fearless warrior; Izak, the sharp-witted strategist; and Freia, the gifted sorceress, they track and slay these beasts, selling their remains for gold while protecting their homeland from looming threats. Life as a hunter isn’t easy, but with his closest friends by his side—and their feisty pet cat, Qu—Hera finds purpose in the chaos. Through battle and laughter, victories and hardships, they carve out a life worth fighting for. But war is unpredictable, and fate is cruel. When tragedy strikes, Hera is forced to face a painful truth: nothing lasts forever. With his world shaken and his heart tested, he must push forward, not just for revenge, but for the future they all dreamed of. Because as long as he keeps fighting, their story isn’t over yet.

What would life be like if you never had one? Being a young boy artificially created by the System, he's tasked with the lofty requirement of assisting it in its goals or being punished with his own death. Determined to hang on to his new-found life, he's effectively a slave to his own power source. Will he succeed in his goals, perish in the face of failure, or perhaps find a way out of this fated contract? Written for WSA 25. Any support/feedback would be great!

A world where humanity is but a legend told to children. Where new species thrive and settle down to create kingdoms and prosper. Those not strong enough to protect themselves, or don't work hard enough to live their lives normally, forced to slave away at any task deemed fit. A fleeting dream, a tale of continuous challenges and growth. Welcome to the future, dear readers. ---------------------- This idea came to me by accidentally drawing something, and it stemmed into the idea for this story. I hope you enjoy, and please leave any feedback and reviews along the way. I'd love to grow better as a reader for everyone here.