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As they try to make sense of their new environment, Logan and Rayna face their own trials, struggling to stay alive and adapt to the unfamiliar world. Meanwhile, Rein and Hailey, who are also separated, start to uncover more about the magical forces at work, discovering powerful phenomena that seem to defy the laws of their previous world. Each character is forced to confront their fears, deal with internal conflicts, and learn to adapt to the challenges posed by the new world. The group’s eventual reunion sparks a series of revelations about their role in this strange land and the forces that brought them here. Together, they must navigate the mysteries of their surroundings, forge new bonds, and face the unknown future that awaits them in a world that blends technology, magic, and danger.

A normal man dies while bravely fighting terrorists, only to wake up in a mysterious world filled with glowing balls of different colours, strange dungeons, and white beings. This story is packed with comedy, thrilling adventures, and unforgettable moments. What to expect: - A unique world - A clever protagonist - Aliens, gods, angels, and demons - Cute animals, mysterious dungeons, and magical powers - Betrayal, character growth, and Crazy hot GF. - Tower climbing, kingdom building, and world exploration - Sci-fi elements, academy life, and video game-like thing's Etc. Every tag in this is true, and you'll uncover them in the story. Feedback and suggestions are always welcome!

The world awakens, dungeons form, animals and plants mutate, the gods spectate the world's happenings and find people they think are interesting, and humans gain powers and systems that are tailored to them (They're all the same thing, just with different designs). The usual stuff. It just so happens that our main character's version of the system is, for better or lack of words...flawed. --- Disclaimer: NSFW content will be marked accordingly: N+ for 18+, N- for darker themes, and N for a mix of both. Updates will aim for a chapter every week, with the potential for more depending on my schedule. Your feedback and ideas are greatly appreciated, even if it's just a "good job" or complete negativity. Questions are also welcome.

Seven years ago, due to a misunderstanding ,Cate despaired and went abroad. Seven years later ,an accident brought her back and she designed a reunion. ''Jael Sweeny, I want to give birth to a monkey for you!" She seized every opportunity regardless of occasion,place,or time,just to have a child. Originally just a transaction with no love or hate involved ,she found herself deeply involved again. Past events,new loves,and old loves ,the secrets buried by time will once again cause waves. ''Jael Sweeny, I lost again!"The truth surfaced ,but Cate didn't know where to go. she prepared to escape with her bag,but was held in someone's arms. ''You said you wanted to give birth to child for me,and now you want to leave after provoking me?" If you want to escape ,then give birth to another son for me!"

One day at a high school reunion, I was transported to another world and became an angel. What happened to my friends? Did they come here as well? In this new world, everything was unknown. Why did we come here, and what will happen to us now? To find the truth, my old friends from high school met again. Behind our smiles, we have undergone changes, not only in our physical selves but also in our inner beings. Note:This book contains elements, including Earth and religions. Please do not draw parallels with real-world counterparts

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

A reunion of old friends turns into a drunken plea for help as a suddenly homeless and helpless Sarah begs for shelter, and says she will do anything....which leads to the signing of a strange contract. Genre: Romance | Lesbian Fiction | UPDATE: Early release chapters on Patreon. EBook: https://a.co/d/04fe0ssb Patreon: https://patreon.com/NightKitten

This is my first time writing so any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks and I hope you enjoy. I'm not sure how far I'll take this story because I'm only writing for fun but I have a lot of ideas that I can make into "hopefully" a great story. Follow the adventures of Jake a young boy from the same age group as Ash Ketchum as he travels through this new world he finds himself in.

Arian van Elod, rightful heir to the Elodian empire has lost everything. With his honor and pride stripped away, his father, the emperor, exiles him to the very edges of the empire. There, in a desert, far away from any civilization a crumbling beast-academy is located- the last hope for the empire's scum to receive some form of education. Arian has already given up all hope... for the students, as well as for himself, as he tumbles closer and closer to despair. And yet, somewhere in his heart, there is still the whish to regain everything he had lost...

When old gamer, constantly unlucky, Theodore 'Ted' Moore starts playing the new VR game, he understands the luck can be a double edged sword. Will he prevail against the world to secure his place or will he break and become a servant? Can a single man truly stand against rich and powerful? Entry for Contest. Please give your valuable feedback to make the story better.

This story follows a boy becoming a man named William. Join William on his adventure to overcome adversity, loss and betrayal. This story as of right now is very new and I don’t want to spoil the beginning chapters before I write them. So my apologies for the short synopsis for now. I know where I want this story to go and I’ve kinda sorta mapped a path to get there. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for reading and feedback is greatly appreciated. Please point spelling errors or anything grammatically incorrect, my eyes seem to go blind after reading and rewriting a paragraph too many times.

Hector Johanson, a resourceful university student, wakes up to a world overrun by flesh-eating zombies. As the world crumbles all around him. Hector stumbles upon an extraordinary system embedded in his mind: The Survival Shop, a store that can provide anything he needs—food, weapons, medicine, or even absurdly powerful artifacts. The only catch? He has to pay with life points—earned by battling the undead and surviving the apocalypse. The shop offers ranges from the most menial items to being able to field an army and reclaim the world. The only question is: Will he be able to afford the price tag for it? Author's note: this is my first time publishing a story all feedback is welcome. The story is meant to be grim and although the shop offers a vast selection of services the issue is mainly in their price tag.

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

Artists often face various challenges when creating content. Difficulties artists encounter are numerous in number while not infinite it would write and essay The common ones are ;Creative block, Time management, Self doubt, Financial constraints ,Pressure to conform ,Technical know how and skills ,*ORIGINALITY* These challenges can vary depending on the individual artist, their medium, and their goals. But !, the most important one to note is,…. Cri…Criticism and lack of feedback . "But are all just excuses of lazy and unprofessional creators " That one person Y-Yes…, while that is true for some it doesn't change the fact that it's a problem. But I guess you'd have to see for yourself Let me know if you fall into the category of any of— [Zzttt…] "Adedejiii !!!!.. come here rigHT NOW!!!"

Eira's life takes a dramatic turn when she discovers she has the unpredictable power to time-travel to the past. But there's a catch - she can't control it. Her life becomes entwined with Keith, a mysterious stranger who possesses the ability to see the future and travel back in time. However, after sharing a passionate kiss with Eira, Keith loses his power to manipulate time. Desperate to regain his ability and prevent his impending death, Keith searches for Eira. But their reunion comes with a complication: Keith's powers can only be restored if he kisses Eira without emotional attachment. The challenge? Eira has fallen deeply in love with him. As they navigate their forbidden feelings, Eira and Keith must confront the danger lurking in Keith's future. Will Eira find the strength to let go of her love, or will their emotions seal Keith's fate?

This novel is inspired by novels where heroines can hear the villain's inner voice, but the main character is the protagonist in the original story not the villain whose voice audible to the heroines. No NTR ---- Chen Fan descends from the mountain after learning from his master for 10 years. The purpose? Of course, to enjoy life and reach the pinnacle of greatness. But there’s something strange about the girls he meets… ---- A/N : This is my first novel, and since English isn't my native language, I kindly ask for your understanding regarding any awkward phrasing or grammatical errors. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Hi everyone, Comrade here This is the collection of short stories I'm gonna write. It will be short so read it and give your honest reactions and feedback. . . . Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing

Follow the beginning of a new era for humanity... Or rather, the continuation of an era long lost and hidden from everyone for millennia... ------ I don't know what you expect by coming here, but give it a chance and please give me feedback on the chapters, especially the first one. That will tell me whether I should continue or not. It's quite discouraging not to see people commenting and giving ideas. I tried three other books, for which I even got the opportunity to be contracted after just a few chapters, but the lack of feedback was really discouraging. I want to do my best and be recognized for it, so I hope for your help and a little push to get started. I'm kind of stuck. And one more thing, my native language is Portuguese, not English. So there may be a lot of mistakes when switching to English, I'm sorry for anything and I really hope to fix this soon, I'm not very fluent in English either.

Those of us who remember the days of the writer's workshop in Iowa. Classmates, hearts involved in creative writing. Featured in books written by themselves ten years after graduation from Iowa. Best-selling Novels, Poetry books, and classroom texts, to teachers of the art of writing themselves. The Reunion will be at a Cabin resort just off Lake McBride Lake. Plenty of Fishing, boat rentals, and swimming. Lots of hiking trails, and picnic spots to grill out at. Picturesque views to paint, and write a novel about. The class of 1979, will meet at the resort cabin rental check-in. What to expect is unlimited points of view and get-togethers from June till September. What happens next is the phenomena to unfold come join us and read along as a friend. Sit back and enjoy a book serial. The greatness of these is a good Romance and the writer who writes it. Author DeeAnn Gorman.

Jack, a boy in his early twenties, had a reunion party at their friends house. But suddenly, the phone rings. The police department issues a warning that a criminal is on the loose. Not giving attention, they continued to move around the neighbourhood. Unfortunately, the criminal has a new target, that is Jack. Can they survive from the criminal?

A reunion with an old friend can spark many feelings, often conflicting with one another. Yet when that old friend happens to have been more than just a friend, what should you expect? "Meeting her again would be the last thing I'd ever want... Yet it's the first that comes to mind if you ask me to make a wish."

A man from earth dies in a truck accident and wakes up as the 4th son of the Zorneas family with the authority of sleep. follow the journey of Hector Zorneas in this new world. ------ I like writing as a hobby, So don't expect a Master-Piece from me, just enjoy it and give me feedback and even suggestion for plot and character development. I am an anime fan, so you will find a lot of similarities in it from the animes that I like.

How does one control the world? Power & Strength. That's all Rui cares about. As he travels through dangerous lands and faces formidable challenges, he uncovers the hidden truths of his past and the mysterious forces shaping his destiny. Surrounded by powerful rivals, enigmatic figures, and the watchful eyes, Rui must navigate a world where strength is everything and the path to supremacy is filled with both allies and enemies. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- First time ever writing a novel, feedback and criticism are wanted, please!

Synopsis: Reclaiming Love Alicia Carter’s life is a storm of survival—raising her younger sister, Emma, while drowning in debt. A glimmer of hope emerges when she lands a job at a powerful company, only to discover it belongs to Stephen Grant, her wealthy ex who disappeared years ago. Their reunion is charged with unresolved passion and old wounds, but as Stephen fights to reclaim her love, Alicia must decide if her heart can survive the risk. Meanwhile, Emma falls for Stephen’s reckless cousin, Daniel, only to face betrayal that shatters her trust. Will Alicia and Emma find redemption in love, or will their hearts remain guarded forever? In Reclaiming Love, passion ignites, trust is tested, and second chances take center stage.

Having lost all his memories after being sent into a new world, a young boy is pushed to the end of his rope. Only when a man — dressed to the brim in adorned jewelry and fine silk — promised him a new life is when everything changed. If you like Fantasy stories with action, mystery, and hints of slice-of-life, then you've come to the right place! -------- Any support or feedback means a lot to me and helps me grow as a writer, so please comment or leave a review of your thoughts! at minimum 600 words per chapter (Newer chapters typically above 800), at minimum three chapters a week.

Seven years ago, the royal families of Helios and Anemoi were inseparable—until tragedy struck. After the death of Anemoi’s queen, Crown Princess Lyra Belle de Anemoi and her sister Astrid withdrew from public life, disappearing into obscurity. Now, their faces are forgotten, their presence a distant memory, and Lyra has refused to claim her rightful place as queen. When Dylan de Helios, the youngest prince of Helios, arrives in Anemoi on a diplomatic mission, he is determined to uncover the truth. Once close to Lyra, he longs to understand why she suddenly severed all ties, abandoning their cherished childhood bond. But as Dylan’s path intertwines with Lyra’s once more, long-buried secrets begin to surface. What happened during those lost years? Can Dylan and Lyra rebuild what was broken—or will their reunion spark something entirely unexpected? Step into a tale of loss, love, and the search for redemption in Rise of the Crown Princess.

The Crown Prince of Jing City, Rong Nian, was reputed to be cold and abstinent, indifferent to the charms of women, a thorny aloof person. Until someone captured a photo of him passionately kissing a woman in a car. His eyes reddening at the edges, he struggled to control his emotion, "Baby, could you love me once more?" Later, the usually low-key and never-showy Rong Nian walked through all of the high society families in Jing City with his delicate wife in his arms and his son, sporting a tuft of silly hair, in hand. Jiang Xi had always thought it was her first encounter with Rong Nian, only to realize it was a painstakingly orchestrated reunion!

Kris Alex de Nayale, a germaphobic, stoic, and loner straight girl, was just a normal girl with a normal college life. ... Or that should have been the case ... "Kris, let's go out?" "Alex! I found a c*ck-shaped rock!" "F*ck you. You're coming with me." "Miss De Nayale, come to the office with me now." However, these girls who suddenly entered her dull life ruined her thoughts of a peaceful campus life ... "Really, I just want to graduate in peace!" _______________________________________________ Author: Hi! New author here! Hope you will like this story and please bear with me. Any constructive feedback is welcome! Edit: Decided to changed the synopsis to make it less misleading.

Book One in the "The Reunion" series The class of 2023 has graduated. What seems to be the most memorable time of their lives is quickly destroyed by a secret. Unable to forgive and forget the teens go separate ways, becoming strangers to one another. Now, five years later, the reunion is on, and some hope to put the past behind them and rebuild the friendship they once had. A night in the city, hopes to bring the once old friends closer. But they all harbour a deathly secret, one that wants to be resurrected and be reborn, once again. As the moon rises, and the night is in full effect, the group will be hunted by an old memory, one that bonds them for life, regardless if they want it to or not. The hunt is on in the city. But, will anyone be left to tell the tale by morning?

Alpha Damon, the unmated Alpha of the largest pack in North America, is facing reality where Elders are pressuring him to marry a bride of their choice. A marriage of convenience. A marriage for power. Damon is aware that Elders want to use him in their schemes, and he is determined to show them that he is no one's pawn. No one can force him into marriage, not even the Moon Goddess. “I don’t need a woman in my life to obstruct me. A girlfriend is a nuisance, a wife would be a problem, and a mate would be a disaster.” Will he give in? Which one will he choose? Will he have a choice once he finds his mate? Join Damon on his journey during which he will broaden his horizons and change in the most unexpected ways when the right woman enters his life. --- Note: the main storyline ends with chapter 986. --- Connect with me. Discord: https://discord.gg/cFaejHB Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/RedSonia.Novels Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/redsonia_novels/ --- I own the cover. --- Give my other novels a try! - Amara - Reunion - The Supreme Alpha - Is this Destiny? - Accident Prone