Desolation Thesaurus

“Trick, my most pri—zed gift.” A woman shakily muttered as she tried to evade the grim hands of death just long enough to bid her farewells. “You’re kind, just like your father even. But in all your kindness as your father did, please do not —” The conversation blurred into a cloud of obscurity as Trick found himself rescued from the innards of a monster by a strange Machiavellian man, a trickster of sorts. He is soon made to realize that the life his newfound master leads him into is far from ordinary. For centuries humanity has been plagued with the curse from the void, where void beasts; dreadful man eating monsters have tried to sink humanity deeper and deeper into absolute desolation. However this curse is battled by special kinds of humans known as artifact hunters, Wielders of relics that sometimes seem to possess a celestial origin and great power. One of these celestial artifacts lies in the hands of his master and after being passed down to Trick, he becomes the 10th wielder of the mystical “Trickster’s Hat.” He must now use this new found power to try to do what humanity has failed at for thousands of years, attempt to end the curse of the void. Yet in doing so his life is troubled by a series of conflicts as he embraces the harsh reality, that he too might have vestiges of the dark bloodline of the void. “Trick, you have your own curse to break.”

In the depths of the cosmos, a desolate planet—21,000 kilometers in diameter—suspended like a barren gem. Its surface glowed with sapphire veins of Star Tears Gold, a mineral coveted across galaxies.There, Luo Feng, his complexion pale from injuries, knelt atop a drifting meteorite. His gaze pierced through interstellar dust, fixated on the lifeless world below. Absorbing this planet would restore 80% of my peak strength. The thought ignited a primal hunger within him. Yet what appeared as a divine boon concealed a lethal game: ancient interstellar marauders schemed nearby, while cosmic guardians watched from afar. This was no mere scramble for resources—it was a battle against the very fabric of universal law.This wasn’t an ordinary interstellar quest. It was a desperate warrior’s duel with oblivion, a clash between flesh-and-blood defiance and the immutable rules governing existence itself. When Luo Feng’s fingertips brushed against the Star Tears veins, he triggered a chain reaction. Countless eyes—ranging from shadowy AI overlords to extinct civilizations reborn in digital form—peered through the void, hungry for the chaos this devouring would unleash. And the ultimate truth hidden within the star map… it would shatter his understanding of power, life, and the cosmic origin itself.

All Time Top Ten Webnovel Bestseller! --- An Apocalypse descends as awakened humans rise to defend their world! In the blooming chaotic Era, Mana reigns supreme. But even the strongest beings...have limited reserves of Mana. A weak F Rank Hunter awakens with the lowest tier [Fireball] skill in a desolate City as he finds out...Mana is not a limitation for him! Have you seen countless fireballs stretch across the blue skies? Have you seen endless dwarf stars and black holes conjured against insurmountable Dragons and other mythical creatures?! With Infinite Mana, anything is possible! --- "What you are is a blip on a glorious path. An extra that isn't even all that well developed. You'll appear and make some inconsequential waves, and then you'll disappear just as quickly. Only to be forgotten a few pages later."- Noah Osmont, Chapter 2188 --- The concepts appearing in this story are those of pure fantasy and fiction, they are not reflective of the real world. Everything is based on pure imagination. Discord server is with illustrations and Status Panel is here! -https://discord.gg/KwatGcE

Space.... A vast area that withhold endless possibilities. It's a endless frontier containing everything. Wonders, tragedies, beauty, crudeness, fantasy, despair, all existed within this plane of reality. Infinite possibilities coincides as the world brims with the light of life, Born deep within the confines of isolation and despair, A lone girl trundles with pure survival in mind until one day she discovered salvation. 2 Siblings from another plane within this reality pulled her from the desolate world she knows. What awaits them in the future ? friends, enemies, joys, sorrows all will await these 3 misfits as they went on a journey of discovery aboard the starship Nebula III.

Kael awakens amid the desolation of ancient ruins, his memory shattered into fleeting fragments of war, forgotten power, and a name that does not quite belong. Clutching a mysterious artifact etched with cryptic symbols, he soon discovers that his very existence is an anomaly—one that powerful, shadowy figures are determined to erase. As masked hunters close in with a chilling command to “erase him before he awakens,” Kael’s latent abilities surge to life, propelling him into a deadly confrontation that sets the stage for a destiny he never chose. Haunted by questions of identity and driven by a ruthless survival instinct, Kael embarks on a perilous journey into the sprawling, enigmatic city that looms on the horizon. In a world where the mystical Veil weaves unseen forces into the fabric of reality, he must navigate ancient secrets, clandestine organizations, and the ever-present threat of erasure. With each step, Kael's transformation from a bewildered survivor to a determined, antiheroic warrior unfolds, as he vows to reclaim his lost past and defy the dark destiny that seeks to consign him to oblivion.

The Sleeper's Odyssey– Kang Eunseo was just an ordinary high school student—quiet, reserved, and barely noticeable in the grand scheme of life. Between school, his part-time job, and taking care of his mother, his world was small but stable. That was, until the night everything changed. A holographic system window appeared before him, counting down to an unknown fate. And when the timer hit zero, he was no longer in his bedroom. Each night, the moment he falls asleep, Eunseo is forcibly transported into a different world, each more unpredictable than the last. From futuristic cities to medieval kingdoms, from desolate wastelands to war-torn lands, he is thrust into missions that push him to his limits. The system grants him a power he needs rather than one he wants, but failure is not an option. If he cannot complete the assigned task before time runs out, he cannot wake up—and the punishments grow harsher with each mistake. But what terrifies him most is the truth lurking beneath it all. Who created this system? Why was he chosen? And why does it feel eerily connected to the father who disappeared from his life years ago? With 100 worlds to explore, 100 missions to complete, and the weight of an unseen destiny pressing upon him, Kang Eunseo must fight to return to the life he once knew—or uncover the truth behind the Sleeper’s Odyssey. Will he survive the journey? Or will he become just another forgotten dream?

In a world devastated by an unforgiving apocalypse, Qing Xia struggles against a life filled with despair. Surrounded by the suffocating remnants of society—polluted air, barren land, and the haunted expressions of humanity—he often envies those who have found peace in death, escaping the relentless suffering of existence. Yet, the memory of his family's sacrifice fuels his determination to endure, making him one of the last survivors in a landscape of desolation. But fate has other plans. During a routine mission, Qing Xia’s life abruptly ends, or so he believes. To his shock, he awakens reborn as an idol on the brink of obscurity, a mere shadow in a vibrant world. Eager for a second chance, he seeks solace in a newfound identity, yearning for a life filled with simple pleasures. However, tranquility slips through his fingers as he is thrust into an unexpected chaos—a variety show that pulls him into the heart of danger, where secret agents, ruthless hitmen, and shadowy figures lurk. With every step, the weight of his dreams collides with a reality he never wished to face. As he grapples with relentless uncertainty, Sian realizes that the struggle for peace may lead him deeper into turmoil. In this haunting journey, can he carve out a destiny in a world that seems determined to tear him apart? The winds of fate do not blow as one wishes, and with shadows closing in, every moment counts. ---------------------------- Black box: Someone: "Darling, help me deal with these people." Sian: "Stay away from me. I have nothing to do with you or them." Someone, with fake tears: "Darling, I’m hurt. Come kiss me here, and the pain will go away." Sian, holding a military knife: "Does it hurt there? How about I just cut it off for you?" Someone, stripping Sian’s clothes: "Darling, you look so beautiful when you’re angry. I can’t take it anymore." Sian: "Go to hell! Ah—ahh! Stop it—stop! That hurts! Quit biting me, you damn dog!" --------------------------------------- COVER by my Sensei : Aurimas_Pazikas ---------------------------------------     Dear readers, welcome to an exciting adventure! This is a captivating BL novel filled with +18 scenes that add a spark of joy and love and some sadness. If you’re open to exploring vibrant stories and vibrant connections, dive right in to accompany our Angel, the MC " Sian," on his journey in this new world.

In a shocking turn of events, our protagonist finds himself transmigrated into the body of Wudi Egun, the Holy Son of a second-rate powerhouse in the Desolate Territory. This unexpected twist sets the stage for an epic adventure. Upon arrival, our protagonist discovers that he has activated the enigmatic Court Death System. This mysterious system presents a unique opportunity: the more he courts death, the more Death Points he earns. These points can be exchanged for extraordinary powers, abilities, and talents. However, our protagonist soon realizes that he is not alone in this world. Other transmigrators have also arrived, adding an extra layer of complexity to the story. Undaunted by this revelation, our protagonist embraces the chaos that is to come. With his quick wit and determination, he is ready to take on whatever challenges await him. As the world teeters on the brink of chaos, one thing is certain: the banter will continue, and our protagonist will be at the forefront of the action. Genre: Fantasy, Anti-hero, System, Immortal Cultivation, Action, Transmigration

A little wolf born on a desolate continent in a forest where the weak are prey and the strong are still prey struggles to rise to the top of the food chain in its pursuit of perfection, but how can one be perfect without achieving eternity?

After the moon vanished, humanity plunged into a catastrophic downfall, causing the world as we know it to collapse. Alucard, a boy born at the heart of this devastating event, lives in a dark and desolate world where life clings to the remnants of scattered colonies. In this grim reality, many questions arise: How has humanity changed? What strange creatures emerged from the chaos of this disaster? As time passes, Alucard’s questions about his own fate grow ever more pressing. Torn between escaping his destiny or confronting the truth about himself and the world that existed before the moon's departure, he finds himself at the edge of a revelation that could change everything.

Roen Kast was an architect crushed by his own blueprints—until he woke up in the Crack Void Era, a fractured world of floating islands and ruthless lords. Exiled as a waste by his noble family to the desolate Gray Mist Island, he’s got 72 hours before the rock collapses under his feet. Armed with a crumbling watchtower and a mysterious SSS-Grade Castle Evolution System, Roen vows to turn his exile into an empire. Absorbing island cores to evolve his castle, converting enemies into loyal guards at the cost of his own will, he’ll claw his way up from nothing. With a bug-phobic mercenary, a snarky noblewoman, and a cunning ex-saintess by his side, Roen faces wolves, knights, and a god pulling strings from the void. In a world where power is built brick by brick, he’ll either rise as the Crack Void’s master—or crumble with it.

Lin Jichen, a Dao Comprehension Realm expert and the number one spell cultivator in "Eight Desolations", was once revered by countless followers, capable of commanding the winds and rain, with limitless potential on his path to immortality. However, he was betrayed by both his lover and his sworn brother, deceived into entering the cave of Dengxian Realms boss, Zhu Jiuyin, where he ultimately met his demise, devoured by the beast, his soul extinguished. But fate was not yet done with him. Lin Jichen is reborn—one day before the launch of "Eight Desolations". Given a second chance at life, he resolutely abandons spell cultivation and takes up the sword, carving out his own future and rewriting his destiny! Before the game merges with reality, he will seize every possible advantage—leaving everyone else in the dust! 3 Chapters per week \\\\ This novel is an translation of the original work "全职剑修" by the author 清酒半壶. All rights to the original work belong to its creator. I really enjoyed this story, and that’s why I’m translating it so others can experience it too. If the original author wishes for the translation to be removed, I will gladly comply.

Shuangwen+Invincible+Dedicated to the Son of Destiny+Acting Without Worries] Chen Wen fell into a deadly situation as soon as he crossed through, awakening his strongest physique Chaos Sequence Body with a backhand and, plus the Golden Finger Destiny Furnace. Are you the Holy Eucharist of Desolation, from the Tianming Emperor Clan? Jie Jie Jie, melt him for me! Are you a reincarnation from the First Emperor clan? Jie Jie Jie, I melted him down again! Are you the owner of the system, from the Araki family? Jie Jie Jie, come on, come on, it's all from me... No matter what power you come from, no matter what golden fingers you have, they must all become nourishment for me to become stronger. Compared to personal strength, I'm sorry, but Chen Wen is invincible. Compared to the background? That's even more embarrassing. My father's clan is the Tianming Emperor Clan, and my mother's clan is still the Tianming Emperor Clan. From this moment on, I, Chen Wen, will step by step reach the highest level!

"In the aftermath of the Rapture, a desolate world is left behind, overrun by demons and devoid of hope. But one man emerges with a message of redemption: God offers a final chance for salvation through the Anointed, chosen individuals imbued with supernatural gifts from biblical legends. Imagine wielding the strength of Samson, controlling the animal kingdom like Noah, or harnessing the diverse abilities of Moses. In Shadowlandz, the boundaries between heaven and hell are blurred, and the Anointed must navigate this treacherous landscape to fulfill their destinies. Will they succumb to the darkness or rise as beacons of light in a world gone mad? Dive into Shadowlandz, where the remnants of humanity cling to their last chance for redemption, and the Anointed must confront the ultimate question: what does it mean to be chosen by God?"

Tang Chun Xi has been reborn into a world where the strong rule and the weak perish. Once the last survivor of a doomed universe, she wields a unique physique forged in the flames of desolation and a lunar umbrella that holds secrets of untold power. In her search for answers, she will face deadly enemies, cultivate strength to protect those she loves, and battle the fears that threaten to consume her. Amidst conspiracies and unexpected passions, Tang Chun Xi will tread an uncertain path toward legend—or destruction.

Reincarnated into a cultivation world, Tian Ye quickly realized he had no systems, no divine artifacts, and no unparalleled talent. His only fortune was being born on a desolate island, far from the clashes of great immortals, giving him a rare chance to grow in peace. In a world where strength dictates fate, will he carve a path to immortality, or will he vanish like countless mortals before him?

Undefeated Soldier King In the field of war, there is a legendary figure, the “Undefeated King of Soldiers”. He has traveled through countless battlefields, each of which is a test of his will. From the desolate deserts to the steep mountains, his footsteps have left indelible marks. This king of warriors not only possesses extraordinary physical strength, but also has a sharp strategic thinking. In the heat of battle, he was able to remain calm and collected, making quick and accurate decisions to turn the tide of battle. His swordsmanship is unrivaled and his fighting skills are the envy of all. He has faced countless foes and has never been defeated. His unshakable determination and indomitable spirit are the driving force behind his victories. He did not fight for personal glory, but to protect his home and people. The story of the invincible King of Fighters has been widely told and has inspired generations of people. He is a symbol of courage, strength and perseverance in the face of adversity. Translated with DeepL.com (free version)

Beneath a razor-edged winter, Barrowham bleeds. Doctor Watters, a scientist unprepared for nightmares, is plunged into a world overrun by monstrous, mutated Lycans. His guide: Grimm, a hunter of terrifying competence and chilling secrets. Pursued through desolate lands by relentless beasts, Watters clings to Grimm, their uneasy alliance forged in fear and necessity. Driven by Watters' yearning for answers and Grimm's grim certainty of peril, the Immortal Grimm: Lycan, is a visceral dark fantasy horror story where monstrous threats are both flesh and shadow. Prepare for a descent into chilling suspense, where survival demands more than science, and the greatest horrors may wear a deceptively inviting face.

A Failed score in the National Examinations was enough to make many youths desolate. Such a score should be the end of any Protagonist. With Parents who didn't love him, and a brother who was hellbent on using him as a stepping Stone, Levon's life was already colorful. Many waited for his Fall. However, there was a saying, that for a few, failure wasn't the end—but the beginning of something darker. "Mr. And Mrs. Belmont, My academy is interested in your son. Don't worry, we have just the place for him." "Alright. Please, take the troublemaker away!" Levon watched in eerie calm, putting up no resistance. Soon, he thrust into a world completely unfamiliar to him. There was danger, chaos, and the promise of death looming in each corner. "Blood ACADEMY..." It was an odd place… an odd but interesting one. Discord: https://discord.gg/5Fk75rXXRj Posting times will be 2 chapters a Day, staring from February 8th, 2025.

In a future, alternate timeline, the Gods have been reawakened with a fury, and with that fury, they take control of the world and reshape it to their collective liking, and reignite the power of magic, changing the way the world functioned as we knew it. With the concept of magic now introduced to humanity, they went wild with it in this new world, creating new things and people that eventually restructured the system of the Gods themselves, changing everything once again. Time has passed since then, and in a remote city in the largest desert two beings encounter one another and create an unlikely spawn, the mother dies shortly after giving birth due to a curse inflicted upon her by mysterious forces. The was then father left to take care of his child on his own and does his best, but is forced to return to his home realm in hell, due to the same reasons he was allowed in the mortal plane in the first place. Left alone with only her friend, the two young serpentines venture off on many adventures together, developing a strong bond for one another that quickly grows into something more. Then on one of these adventures, they find themselves trapped inside a hidden and desolate place. They searched for a way out, but in the end, only one escaped Now alone the little serpent girl has to survive this world without anyone by her side, struggling to cope with all of the losses she's suffered over her life. Will she be able to survive? Or will she fall into an endless spiral of despair and loneliness? __________ Current Upload shedule, whenever it’s ready. Discord Link: https://discord.gg/mHUVRgCdna Cover Art made by devilbeez, you can find them on instagram. WARNING! This novel contains fetish content such as Futanari and Vore, you have been warned. It also contains some descriptive and gory scenes that some may not like, chapters with such content have a note at the beginning of them. Any and all of this text is subject to change whenever I like.

After the Creator Dragon's death, chaos spreads in the divine world, but the mortal realm remains calm. On the strongest continent, Ye Xiaotian, a peerless cultivation genius and husband to the Celestial Phoenix Sect's master, is betrayed. Ambushed at an ancient relic, he is crippled and abandoned by his wife, who divorces him publicly and exiles him to the Desolate Extreme Continent. There, Ye Xiaotian discovers the black rock that he found in the relic containing the spirit of an ancient expert. The expert, from beyond the mortal world, grants Ye Xiaotian his body, sealed cultivation, and a mysterious egg, telling him to feed it his blood every month for twelve month. With newfound strength, Ye Xiaotian begins his journey to reclaim his power, dominate the mortal and divine worlds, and confront those who wronged him. Will Ye Xiaotian rise to greatness, and will his ex-wife regret he decision?What is this egg for. A tale of revenge, rebirth, and boundless destiny unfolds. All rights reserved.

"Level up? Dragons?" Eighteen. The age of Awakening. An important moment where every human in the desolate maga-cities unlocks their Talent, a unique ability to carve a path in this monster-plagued apocalyptic world. Alister Hazenworth, a graduating student, and a rising star at the prestigious Aegis Academy, was destined for greatness. His exceptional athleticism and magical aptitude promise a powerful Talent – a guarantee for a secure life and social status. But fate had different plans. During Alister's Awakening ceremony, it's revealed that he's a Summoner. Instead of admiration, he faces mockery. His once bright future turns bleak as his "friends" desert him for Talents they see as more "useful." left alone, Alister awakens a system. [Host found, system binding...] [System binded successfully.] [Congrats, you have gain the status of 'player'.] [Ding!! Congrats to the player for awakening The Dragonforge - an overlord system.] [Ding!! it has been detected that the player possesses a latent draconic aspect, and as such will only be able to summon dragons!!] [Will the player like to proceed with their first summoning?] Cast aside and underestimated, Alister becomes a force to be reckoned with. He embarks on a journey, building his own dragon army – a crew of majestic wyverns, fearsome drakes, and ancient wyrms. He raids the wastelands, reclaims lost resources, and dismantles the prejudice against summoners. Every day, his power grows, his bond with his dragons deepens, and his legend spreads like wildfire. Discord server: https://discord.gg/zbQwWCSCrn [A/N: This is a slow paced novel, don't expect the protagonist to suddenly start out overpowered and start dominating left and right, he will become an overlord of dragons, yes, but it will take time. (⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)] Cover made by me /⁠ᐠ⁠｡⁠ꞈ⁠｡⁠ᐟ⁠\

The Eryndor Star System is on the brink of collapse and Its dying star, Solara Eryndra, is slowly losing the ability to sustain the worlds that orbit it. Amid this crisis, Solara Concordium launches Project Skylar—a desperate mission to unlock the secrets of Nexus Gate and restore balance but at greater costs. As fate wills it, Skylar Sunforge, a member of the Concordium’s Vanguard, chances upon Nexus Star—a powerful and ancient artifact—on a mission to the desolate world of Oblivion’s Verge. The artifact fuses with him and grants him extraordinary powers while burdening him with its immense will. With Solara Eryndra dying fast, Skylar is left with only two choices: Unite the factions to complete Project Skylar and save the system, or Forge his own path at the risk of plunging Eryndor into eternal darkness.

Terra II, a world divided into seven vast plates by the mirror, where endless deserts and black zones carve through the land. It is a place haunted by horrors from beyond existence and nightmares birthed from within. Year 1635 of the Common Era, an age where the very idea of happiness has been left behind. Here, no story begins with joy, and none end with peace. One mistake—a wrong word, a fleeting gesture—can seal your fate before you even realize it. At the heart of this desolate world is Sera, a woman whose life has been defined by loss. Her parents, ones she knew little of, were replaced by strangers in the aftermath of tragedy—only to lose them too. In a world so unrelenting, where trust is a fragile illusion and loyalty is a fleeting dream, how long can one endure before breaking? Seraniti fights not because she wants to, but because there is no other choice. Every decision she makes chips away at what remains of her conscious, yet the alternative is worse: surrendering to the darkness that threatens to consume her and everything she holds dear. Terra II offers no promises, only pain—but even in the face of an inevitable end, Seraniti stands, battered and unyielding, daring to face the horrors and make her choice, if only to survive one more day.

When Gu Xuejiao woke up, she found herself in the body of the arrogant and willful stepsister of the male lead in a novel. Her sole purpose in the story seemed to be ruining the relationship between the male and female leads. In short, she was just another minor antagonist. Recalling her character’s tragic ending—a desolate and miserable demise—Gu Xuejiao decided to take a different path. Instead of meddling in others’ affairs, she chose to focus on the Wu San workbooks she had diligently practiced in her previous life. The Cheng family, however, was stunned. The rebellious girl who used to be a constant source of worry suddenly asked, with a calm and serious expression, “Do you think I should apply to Tsinghua University or Beijing University?” The Cheng family: … For advanced chapters: patreon.com/Maggie329

Trapped in the ninth circle of hell with no memories of his past, Elias is forced to survive in a desolate wasteland where even reality seems untrustworthy. A cryptic System whispers guidance, yet its motives remain unclear. As he fights through hell’s nightmarish horrors, he begins to question everything—the nature of his existence, the truth behind his death, and the forces that have condemned him to this eternal torment. But the deeper he climbs, the more terrifying the revelations become. The universe is not what it seems. The gods are not what they claim to be. And Elias? He may not be the man he thinks he is. With every battle, every shattered illusion, and every glimpse into a past he was never meant to remember, Elias inches closer to the truth—one that could unravel the very fabric of reality itself. The pursuit begins.

Shen Chen starts living a life of unrestrained indulgence since marrying Shi Yu. The most beautiful lovers’ prattle she has ever heard is "I will punish those whom you have offended." Skit: “A handsome man delivered a parcel to your wife just now, Sir.” The young master acknowledged with a lazy “Mhm.” Half an hour later, all courier companies in the city go belly up. "Your wife has offended someone, Sir." "Mhm." Ten minutes later, that person is left to die in a desolate mountain.

In the shadow of Old Detroit’s neon-lit skyline, where rift scars tear the sky and monsters stalk the rain-slicked streets, Elias Voss hunts to survive. A stoic monster slayer forged by loss, he wields a rune-etched machete and a suppressed pistol against the horrors unleashed by The Breach—a cataclysm that cracked reality eighty years ago. When a routine contract spirals into a clash with The Shrike, a charismatic crime lord trafficking in monster parts, Elias finds himself entangled in a conspiracy that could reshape the world. Joined by Mira Kade, a fugitive sorceress with a sharp tongue and volatile magic, Elias navigates a city of corporate towers and desolate fringes, where every ally hides a blade and every shadow a threat. As whispers of a mythical rift key surface, pursued by the sinister scientist Dr. Leon Carver and the elusive Shrike, Elias must unravel the truth behind The Breach’s legacy—before an ancient force awakens to claim it all. In a world where technology and magic collide, survival demands more than skill—it demands sacrifice. The Rift Chronicles: The Neon Contract is a relentless, modern epic of hunters, monsters, and the thin line between hero and outcast. patreon.com/JosphKing

Simon finds himself mysteriously transported to a desolate island surrounded by a vast ocean. With no memory of how he got there, he discovers a glowing tree atop a mountain and sets out to investigate. However, his journey is interrupted by a terrifying earthquake and the emergence of a colossal serpent from the depths. The serpent transforms into a mysterious man who confronts Simon with a simple but chilling question: "Who are you?"

An ordinary man who on the way home after work finds himself in another world! Amazing wonders high and low! Even scenery so beautiful and desolate, humankind will never find them dull. However, there lay terrors lurking within these wonders. And so, how would an ordinary man survive this world? ... ... Please tell me, I’m not sure how I even got here! SOS! Disclaimer - My first work, first time trying, and I sure as heck don't know much about all. Please criticize so I know how to be better.