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Qin Hao crossed into a parallel world and unexpectedly inherited the position of the current Celestial Master of the Qingyun Mountain Celestial Master's Mansion. Draped in purple robes, holding the authority of the Xuanmen sect. Bound to the Super Celestial Master System, he could earn different rewards every day by completing designated tasks. Organizing Taoist scriptures, he received the reward [Taiping Qi Technique]! Cleaning the main hall, he received the reward [Innate Golden Light Curse]! Sweeping the mountain gate, he received the reward [Soaring Immortal Step]! Pruning flowers and plants, he received the reward [Innate Yimu Qi Capture Technique]! Wiping the statues of the Three Pure Ones, he received the reward [Righteous Thunder Law]! ... He thought he could live peacefully without trouble, but unexpectedly, a photo that went viral online pushed him into the spotlight. A self-proclaimed fighting champion and male live streamer entered Qingyun Mountain, claiming to seek a man in purple robes for a challenge. A match of martial arts. The live stream was filled with over a million enthusiastic viewers. They supported the male live streamer in exposing a fraud, wondering whether the rumored Celestial Master in purple was truly as powerful as said. Under the watchful eyes of the public, Qin Hao reluctantly accepted the challenge. Qin Hao asked, 'Fellow practitioner, what shall we compare?' The male live streamer smiled confidently: 'I've heard the Celestial Master in purple is unmatched in martial arts; I have practiced free combat since I was young and have specifically come to learn something from you!' Qin Hao shook his head: 'Martial arts, I do not know.' 'What do you know then?' the male live streamer asked. Qin Hao unleashed a palm strike into the air, condensing the five thunders within his palm, and with a mighty slash. Golden thunder transformed into a blade of qi, slicing directly at the challenger. The thunder left in its wake split the 'Challenge the Celestial Master' plaque that the male live streamer had brought, right in front of the mountain gate, into two halves. Qin Hao said with a smile: 'I know thunder spell!!'

Matthew found himself transported to a game world. He realized that there seemed to be something wrong with his system. [Class: Necromancer Quest: Planting Trees Goal: 1000 trees Reward: Summoning 'Skeleton Dragon' & a large amount of EXP] From then on, a Necromancer who believed in balance even more than a Druid was born.

Be an Uber driver, one Pagani Zonda rewarded. Be a university lecturer, 10 buildings rewarded. Be a landlord, 1billion dollars rewarded. Be… Lin Yi was fired by his company and his girlfriend cheated on him. After all that had happened, he suddenly awakened the professional experience system. He could keep receiving awards as long as he kept trying and experiencing new professions? There is no job that Lin Yi isn’t familiar with! If there is, that means that the reward isn’t enticing enough!

Jiang Xiaobai reincarnated to another world and was forced to marry a dragon. Moreover, it was a hot-tempered female dragon. Jiang Xiaobai was in despair when he thought of his future of being tortured by his wife. He could not choose his fate of being reincarnated, but he could choose to be a faithful man even though he had to marry an irascible dragon maiden! [Ding! God-tier Option System has been activated after sensing your earnest summon.] [Option 1: Marry her. Reward: Dragon Essence and Tiger Bone Pills] [Option 2: Reject her. Reward: Demigod level cultivation] [Option 3: Boldly speak your mind about her. Reward: Innate Body of the Way and God-level martial arts technique.] Jiang Xiaobai wondered, “Should I marry her or should I reject her?”

When 21-year-old cynic Aizen dies in a laughably cliché truck accident, he awakens not as a hero, prince, or even a sidekick—but as the butler to Seraphina von Eldoria, the doomed villainess of a popular otome game novel. In a world where magic academies breed cutthroat politics and love interests are pre-scripted by fate, Aizen quickly realizes his role is less "romantic lead" and more "expendable mob character." Armed with nothing but his sardonic wit, a mysterious System interface, and the uncanny ability to fade into the background (literally), he navigates a labyrinth of aristocratic schemes, magical duels, and heroines who won’t stick to their damn storylines. But when Aizen discovers his "Mob Camouflage" skill lets him manipulate events unnoticed, he turns the game’s rules upside down. Why should he watch Seraphina march toward her scripted downfall? Why let the bland protagonist hoard all the power? And why are the story’s female leads—the ice-cold villainess, the sunshine-haired heroine, a rogue mercenary princess, and a witch with too many secrets—suddenly noticing him? As Aizen’s defiance of the plot unlocks hidden routes and stirs chaos in the Arcane Academy, he becomes the wild card in a battle for control of the narrative. But the System isn’t just a tool—it’s a prison. And the more Aizen rebels, the clearer it becomes: someone wanted him here. Someone who knows his real-world past. Someone pulling strings even the villainess can’t see…

Lin Beifan traveled through the world composed of countless urban web articles and became a villain. He has a wishing system and can make a wish every day. With the ability of the system and his own rude operations, he broke all the protagonists, and the world line was chaotic. So, Tiandao repeated the plot and cursed Lin Beifan. For whatever wish he made, the enemy would get double! Lin Beifan chuckled: “That’s it?” “I make a wish to keep my body temperature at 36.8 degrees!” The first protagonist’s brain burned to 73.6 degrees, died! “I make a wish to sleep 12 hours a day!” The 2nd protagonist becomes a vegetative person, die! “I make a wish that I will be crushed to death by a 120-pound beauty!” The third protagonist was crushed into a piece of paper by a 240-pound fat girl, pawn! Just like that, the plot is messed up again! For Access To Upto 100 Chapters Before Anyone Else, Visit — Patreon.com/itsyourstorypage

A festive day, a week have the kingdom of Polestin celebrated for their victory with the crimson general leading their army. The soldiers who served have been guaranteed a spot inside a local bar of the capital city. Clank! "The Crimson General despite being a woman is a talented warrior! Three cheers for the general!" "That woman saved me when I needed it! All hail the general!" "She's like a sister to all the soldier! All hail our general!" Every warrior kept on drinking as the news reached them that the war with their neighboring kingdom was over, the ruler raised their white flag as they asked for mercy- being beneath the crimson general. "General! Come drink with us!" "..." The Crimson General, for how she got her name is because of her crimson hair that became the trademark of her legendary name already spreading across the many kingdoms. "I don't drink." she denies the invitation her comrades and just sat down on the table watching the others enjoy themselves. "Enjoy, general! You might even find a man here that suits to your liking! You know... your type I think...! The general would love a soft-spoken man!" "...No." "Hah! That's a shame! In any case I heard that you'll be receiving a reward for helping win the war!" "A reward... I wonder what could it be." ... The reward: "You can choose any of my children to marry you. I have the finest royal princes for you to choose. That is my reward." The King motions to his left side showing his sons who smiles, sitting in their throne meeting her gaze.. "Eh?" "My liege, forgive me but this is..." "Are my children not good enough for you? General, I applaud your accomplishment. Isn't marrying into the royal family a good enough reward for the general?" The King asked the general who swallowed the lump in her throat looking at the princes in display. "I choose-!" Everyone stopped and waiting for the girl to continue. "I choose the princess instead!"

—〔WSA 2025 ENTRY〕— What happens when fate twists reality itself? What if someone finally obtains the one thing they've longed for since birth? Arvian got reincarnated into a horrible novel after performing a ritual to claim mysterious rewards offered by Webnovel—the Webnovel System and an Exclusive reward. Waking up in a cave surrounded by a villainous organisation, Arvian found himself; luckily, he was reincarnated with his own body. He sees cruel people, bloodlines, demons, reapers, monsters, and elves, and unfortunately gets dragged by UNHUMAN MISSIONS. Follow Arvian as he finds himself stuck with unhuman missions after failing a mission. Ding!] [System Initializing...] ... [All Activation Conditions met] [Webnovel System Activated!] Congratulations! The Webnovel System has been successfully activated! [Webnovel System]: 「Gain 3x rewards for completing quests, missions, or eliminating enemies.」 「Access the Novel Store, where you can purchase any item or ability of your choice from the novels you have read.」 .. [NOTE:MC will not turn directly into a pure villain as he is not a villain from past, so the MC turning into a pure villain will take time, so if you are excepting that MC will be a pure villain from the start then do not feel home here. ____________ Art by- @arkenzie14[Discord] My Discord- @auvalen Join My Discord server. https://discord.gg/djNAmGxJZ5

He was supposed to transmigrate to a magic world, but due to an accident, he ended up trapped in a massive library. The system assigned him a task: for every book he read, he would be rewarded with mana stones, until he finished reading all the books. A trillion years later, Daniel finally finished the last book! [Ding, detecting that the host has finished the final book. Calculating system rewards.] [Ding, reward calculation complete. Dispatching rewards. The total number of mana stones the host has accumulated: 99999999...9999.] "Damn, am I that rich now?" [Ding, detecting that the host has completed the task. Loading world...] ... Goddess of Fate: "Daniel, my divine realm needs expansion. Could you sponsor me with some mana stones?" God of Storm: "Daniel, the divine punishment is about to descend. Could you lend me some power to help me get through it?"

'Hmmmm...so I just have to witness the skill being used to copy it...then I can evolve this skill ten times it's initial power?' Nox was skeptical as he looked at the screen flickering on his retina. I mean, how was something so insane even possible? Copying a skill itself was very bad-assed, and you mean to say he could evolved the copied Skill ten times it's initial power, exponentially surpassing the original owner? Why would the gods let such broken talent even exist? 'Well it's just one way to find out...' Luckily just then, he saw two powerfull beings fighting mid air. Their fight sent shockwaves billowing in all directions, causing Nox to take a couple of Steps back. At that moment, he activated his talent... [Mimicry activated!] [Target: Cosmic Entity Arkea - Successfully copied Skill "Gravity Manipulation"!] [Description: Gravity Manipulation Creates a localized gravity field, slowing enemies within a 5-meter radius by 20% for 5 seconds.] [Upgrading Gravity Manipulation 10x!] [Ding! You have Awaken Gravitational Singularity!] [Description: Gravitational Singularity Creates a singularity that pulls in enemies within a 20-meter radius, dealing 5,000 damage and stunning them for 5 seconds. Allies within the area gain a 30% damage boost for 10 seconds.] [Do you wish to keep this skill or bestow it to your Pet?] "No fucking way!" Nox exclaimed in shock. "I-its real!"

Raised by an abusive father, bullied by his tyrant classmate, and grew up without a mother and friends, Kaiju was chosen by the Tower as a player to participate in the trial. However, how could the Tower blundered about overchoosing its participants? Kaiju didn't have a choice but to participate on the Hellish Trial, the difficult there is. Without much preparations, Kaiju had to rely on luck to survive. [You have survived through a fortuitous encounter. You have obtained 10 Luck Points! Your 10 Luck Points are multiplied ten times… Congratulations! You have been rewarded with 100 Luck Points!] When Ladyluck decided to help him, can he survive the Hellish Trial and possibly complete it, when, in the history of the Tower, no one haven't yet? [You have formed a master and pet bond with the Savage Beast. You have obtained the title, Beastmaster!] With the beasts accompanying him, will he soar and conquer the Tower?

After being hit by a car, Oliver wakes up only to find himself reincarnated as the 4th young master in one of the most powerful clans in the world. However, just after his birth, he is declared to be useless by his mother. Devastated, he later realizes that he has been born into the world of a novel that he used to read. This world is plagued by war between exorcists and demons, where only the strong survive while the weak are devoured. In such a cruel world where death is only a mile away, he, born without talent, is expected to only suffer his whole life until he hears it... [Ding! Conditions met. Binding System has been activated.] A system that guarantees a 10x reward... [Ding! Target has awakened one of the 4 special eyes!] [Obtaining 10 times the reward....] [Host has awakened the...] It is not only a matter of time before he can reach the top of the world and live comfortably! _____________________________ Patreon: https://tinyurl.com/winterdragon573 Discord server: https://discord.gg/YXHmERu2mH

•••Before starting to read. This is a casual novel for fun. There's no unique story. at the beginning MC is very powerful and system is also powerful••• "Excuse me, what is your dream?" "To be a philanthropist!" "Okay! As a philanthropist, if you have one million, will you donate it?" "Yes!" "What about ten million?" "Yes!" "Don't even mention ten million, I'll donate one hundred million." The interview ended. That night. "Ding! Your bank card has been credited with one hundred million!" "Ding! If you use 100 million for charity to help those in need, you can permanently obtain S-level return rights" ... Many years later. "He is a legend. He is worth one trillion, rich enough to rival a country. He is known as the God of Movies, God of Investment, God of Songs, God of Cooking, God of Chess, God of Cars, God of Fighting..." " Let's welcome Mr. Hu Yibao!" "Mr. Hu, what is your dream now?" "To be a philanthropist!" Arthur: 今晚必须肝 Translator: Axon46

Detective Thorn (the detective who kills) has solved 74 cases in a row but his 75th proves to be a challenge as he chases a serial killer who leaves no evidence of their existence. As he chases a criminal he has zero leads on, a murder causes mob families to vie for control of the city as death after death consumes the city in a flame of chaos with Detective Thorn’s reputation on the line.

Mu An has traveled to a world composed of multiple urban fantasy novels. Despite having top-notch looks, immense wealth, and great power, he is destined to become a stepping stone for numerous protagonists to show off and ultimately end up in a situation where his family is destroyed and he is left with nothing. Fortunately, the Great Villain System has successfully loaded; as long as he causes emotional fluctuations in the female lead, he can earn countless rewards, including insights into future plot developments! Protagonists: Damn it! How could he know our next move every time? Is there a traitor among us!? Mu An, however, smiles slightly. Sorry, but as a villain, I am a professional! ................................................................. Disclaimer: All rights to the original content belong to their respective creators. For advance chapters: p@treon.com/ShinningNovelTranslations (replace @ with a) Translated Original Name: 反派：我在女主身边捡奖励 Author: 蓝凉

Noah, a highschooler was struggling due to his family's poverty and his father's declining health. Despite that, he was content with his life... Until he visited his girl, trying to surprise her with a gift. "~~~" Muffled sounds came out of her room as he stood at the door. "She is... cheating on me?" Just as Noah is about to confront her, a mysterious robotic voice echoes in his mind: [Ding! Congratulations to the host binding the Ultimate Choice System!] Option 1: Enter the room. [$100 Reward and a green hat] Option 2: Leave the house and break up later. [Rolls Royce Phantom and Basic-Driving Skill Reward] Option 3: Marry her mother. [Lamborghini Aventador SVJ, Intermediate-Driving Skill and $10,000 Reward] "Naturally, option 3." He grinned. ________ Disclaimer: 'Ultimate Choice System: I Became The Richest!' is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, locales, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental. This book may reference real companies and organizations, but these references are for narrative purposes only and are not intended to depict the actual conduct or involvement of these entities. The use of these names and references is not meant to harm, defame, or discredit these companies or organizations.

Randy, an ordinary guy from earth, reincarnated in other world as Randolph Victor, the son of a viscount. He trained himself seriously because he wants to live a fulfilling life. But, a certain incident made him realized that this world was a Girl’s Romance Game (Otome) Moreover, Randy is nothing more than a mob character with no name in the game. And he has zero knowledge about the future. He also accidentally save the villainess who was supposed to be exiled from the country… Randy, the mob. Elizabeth, the exiled young lady. And a witch, who was actually the original game’s final boss…. And standing before them is, The protagonist who has perfect knowledge of the games. The group of guys she has seduced. And the backing of a whole country. The story unfold in unexpected ways…. ——- Advanced chapters: patreon.com/Medblare

Betrayed by his own gang, 30-year-old ex-hitman Tony is left for dead—until the 10×Rebate Crime System awakens. [Ding!] [10×Rebate Crime System] Spend money on crime, get cashback in power. Rebates apply based on crime level. Tony is granted a $10,000 starter bonus—but only if he accepts exclusive missions. Each crime brings rewards: weapons, skills, and luck boosts. As he rises back into the underworld, every illegal deal or hit job earns him power. But with enemies around every corner, Tony’s thirst for vengeance will be the ultimate test. Will he rise and reclaim everything—or will his past destroy him completely?

After getting hit by a truck meant for someone else, Nico is compensated by transmigrating into the body of the illegitimate and only son of billionaire, Logan Voss. To keep this new life, he's given a single mission. Climb over his seven step sisters and inherit his father's wealth. So, why in the heavens does this involve collecting the stamps of 99 different ladies? [Ding! 10x cashback system activated.] [Ding! Stamp holder detected.] [Collect stamp to gain 10 times the stamp holder's wealth.] "Fun isn't something one considers when trying to save his own life. But this does put a smile on my face."

"I may just be a mob character, but with this system, I’ll survive no matter what!" Ralph Cliffscar, a part-time worker, dies and wakes up in the world of Arventia, a fantasy series he watched. Now he’s Nicodeim Thorne, the duke’s eldest son. But there’s a big problem: in the story, Nicodeim is supposed to be killed by the villain, Livius Sarrafort, who he used to bully as a child. With the help of a strange system that shows critical events, Ralph must stop Livius from turning evil and find a way to change both their fates. Can he survive, or will the story end just like before?

Generic Rpg World [✓] Black haired Main Protagonist [✓] Isekai [✓] System [✓] A story that is more to slice-of-life [✓] Lemons and other spices [Only starts at Volume 3] A little action [✓] A plot that almost no one can understand on the first read because the author failed to learn from previous mistakes.[✓] Harem [✓] More Harem [???] Romance [???] Incest [???] Milf [✓] Mobs are stealing girls from the main protagonist [X] Main Protagonist Stealing Girls from Mobs [???] Comedy [Debatable] A good story in the beginning. [Debatable] Alex Hambell became a shop owner in another world. Using his system, he is about to begin his new life! . . . . VGhlIHN0b3J5IGlzIGFib3V0IGEgbW90aGVyJ3MgbG92ZSBhbmQgcmVncmV0IGZvciBhIGxvdmVyLiA= . . . . (All character photos are AI generated, including the cover.) (Ongoing Revision. Current Chapter: 9)

Gods and Myths rule over the lands on Earth. They give their citizens food, security, abundance, and most of all…Immortality. In exchange, humans went over the 4th Dimension and killed Canzers, the monsters that threaten the sanctity of the God's dimension. They are called Saviors. At 18yrs old, Atlan finally gained a chance to become a Savior. But…he inadvertently gained the powers of the God of Death. Was it useful in a world of immortality? Yes. Nobody knew that when Atlan overthrew the Grim Reaper, an apocalypse would doom the world. Humanity lost its immortality. Ordinary people, Saviors, and even Gods could die now. [You have witnessed the extinction of Angels] [10-star rarity Angelic Genus acquired!] [Your Bloodline has evolved to Angelic Reaper of Gods] [You have reaped the deaths of 10,000 Angels] [You have gained 1,000,000 Upgrade Points] [You have gained 10,000 experience] [Lightspeed Angel Wings body mutation acquired!] [You have reaped the death of the First Savior] [10x Level Booster trait acquired!] [SSS class Apocalyptic Hellfire acquired]

“SAY… HOW ABOUT YOU FORGET THOSE BASTARDS AND RUNAWAY WITH ME??” • • • Dying from an accident on her way home, Amera was given a second chance in life. Reincarnating into a new life, she was reborn into a lavish lifestyle as the daughter of a wealthy household. Amera, distracted by the lavishes around her, hadn't realized something quite sooner. She wasn't simply reborn into any little wealthy girl's household. Except for one of a Mafia. Not just any Mafia, but one of the five biggest terrifying Mob organizations in a BL (Boys' Love) tragic R-18 novel she's perusing. Where the main leads must face horrific events to stay alive throughout the remaining story. However, now she has possessed Roselyn Bleubellé De Lobélia. The worst character to possess in her eyes. • • • “LYING JERK! WE AGREED I’D BE SURROUNDED BY HANDSOME, LOVING MEN IN MY NEXT LIFE! NOT THE COMPLETE OPPOSITE OF THAT!!” —————————————————— » AN ORIGINAL STORY. » COVER EDITED BY ME. @BUBBEE0_0

Worker Codi obtained a self-discipline challenge system. Never drink Coke again. Be self-disciplined for one day, and get a reward of $50. Never fall in love again, be self-disciplined for one day, and get a reward of $100. The reward will double after one natural month. Codi was overjoyed and prepared to resign and go home to lie down, but he soon found that it was not so easy to get this reward. Various temptations and tests began to appear in his life. "Learn about Coke chicken wings." "No," codi said with a straight face. One day, the cold female president said to him, "I have a relationship that I want to talk to you about." Codi: Don't ruin my heart, do you know how much money I can make in a day?

The prologue is optional. Summary: ========================== 'If that is your decision, then I acknowledge your choice. But remember - Try to survive until the timer hit's zero. You are free to live it how you want to. But do not try to run away from your fate. It will come back to bite you eventually.' A hero was fate's favored child with all the riches and beauties in the land. He was an ideal person to admire. But he was also a trouble magnet with a set fate. I did not want that life. A villain was someone who had a lot going for him in the story. But this role had it's own hardships and obstacles. A villain was fated to die a tragic death. I did not want that either. A mob was what suited me. To sit back and make my own choice, be it life or death. That was what I wanted from my new life. I wanted was to be free and be able to choose my own death. I wanted to live my life making my own decisions. So when I was asked to choose who I wanted to be in my next life, I knew my choice. I wanted to be the mob character. Hardly ever showed up and doing nothing for the plot were my idea plan for my new life. But of course, had I finished my novel I would never have chosen this character as my next reincarnation. ========================== Tage: Action, Adventure, weak to strong, magic, slice-of-life, character building, op side characters, politic, mythology, isekai, transmigration, betrayal? Romance will be there but very late and very light. You can read it as friendship if you want to for now. ========================== The cover image is not mine. All feedback will be appreciated.

What? Which night was not a dream? Is the child mine or a boy-girl twin? ??? ??? System; Ding~ Reward host 64% of Tiandun Security shares Wife, let's have two more children! !!! !!

Orion is a man who in truth doesn't care about anyone apart from himself. He would probably consider helping or talking to someone if there is any benefit in doing so. But if there is no reward, they could consider themselves nonexistent. He prefers to stay alone and eat alone, but one day when he returned home he saw his home being ransacked by a group of people dressed in weird costumes. • • • A very normal world going through the routines as humans and animals usually do starts being invaded by creatures they have only seen or heard of in books and movies. They have to defend themselves to survive against supernatural monsters. The humans also get the opportunity to grow stronger, for there is a reward when they kill their first outer worldly beast. Synopsis End~

Pria yang terkirim tiba-tiba pada dunia game yang di favoritkan seketika menjadi karkater Mob yang tidak berwajah, dan secara perlahan dia mengetahui bahwa banyak Death Flag pada dunia game yang mengarah pada kehancuran dan jika dibiarkan maka semua dibiarkan maka semua orang yang ada disini akan menjadi akhir bagi dunia dan dirinya

Taurus Pendragon faked his death, stole the world's artifacts, and committed heinous crimes. All to achieve his goals and travel back in time so he could fix the past, save his lovers, family, and reshape the future. Right at the most important moment, his spirit devours the world artifacts, and time intervenes and fucks with his calculation, forcing him to travel back to his birth. Upon reincarnating, Taurus finds his talent mutated, his evaluation sky high, and most importantly: enough time to abuse the system, become overpowered, and guarantee a bright feature! [Notes: 1. The story is slow at the start, mostly a slice of life. 2. Taurus is extremely overpowered, you might as well envision him as invincible. ] ############################## Schedule: 1 ch/day until Feb Goals (January): -4 Reviews/Top 10 Power Ranking [Reward: +3 Chapters Mass Release] -6 Reviews/Top 5 Power Ranking [Reward: +5 Chapters Mass Release] -8 Reviews/Top 3 Power Ranking [Reward: +7 Chapters Mass Release] -10 Reviews/Top 1 Power Ranking [Reward: +10 Chapters Mass Release]

 Xu Yi came to a world of immortality Were All people Was Cultivator. At the age of eighteen, everyone began to contact the Chaotic world and entered countless large and small worlds to practice. When His Became Eighteen and Go to A Small World Xu Yi received a hundred times reward system.....      Hunt the first-level monsters and find a first-level magic core.     System reward (optional):     1: One hundred first-order magic cores.     Two: One second-order magic core.      Discovered a Gengjin elementary exercise.     System rewards (optional):     1: One hundred Gengjin primary exercises.     Two: One of the five element reincarnation exercises.      The one-week return time has come, get reward time.     System reward (optional):     1: Stay in this world for 700 days.     Two: Give Up Reward, And return immediately.      Oh my God, I have a hundred times more training time than others, Then I will Become A Invincible in the future!!!!     .... If u want To support Me and want to Read Some Chapter in Advance Plz Go to My Patreon Channel https://www.patreon.com/DragonNecromancer. ________________ Started Proof reading The Chapters, But Needed Some Time because Only I am Doing All the Things.If U Have Suggestions plz Comment. ... Done 1- 12 chapters for now....