Tenfold Feedback

The newly rebirthed Nora does not want the love of the man she had given her life. What she wants is to reach a position where she could look down at others and take her revenge from those who had hurt her and killed her. Even in her death, they have proved that she was a fake. “I will return everything tenfold!” this time she did not run behind her hero, her sister can have him. She would be wealthy instead. Alric Mccoy had never looked down from where he was, for him life only meant perfection. Yet, he found himself attracted to a woman who made mistakes like breathing. He took a fancy to her but she avoided him. “I am teaching you romance!” he frowned when she did not cooperate with his first kiss. “Ha, i need you to teach me how to take over your business.” her chest heaved with anger but she was sure she felt something strange there too. “Ah, that. It is very simple. Marry me, and be the owner of it.” “.........”

“What made you decide to grow up? You are tired of what life has given to you?” Darifa asks with a bit of sacarsm. “You have been so naive.” "Naive," Ella shook her head dejected after another disappointment. She had been on the run for as long as she could remember, not sure of what chased after her. Sometimes she feels that the first thirteen years of her life was a dream, a house to call her own, family, wealth, and influence all disappeared like they never existed. “I am tired of running, it is time to go back and get answers,"She nods. “I have decided to give life what it has given to me too.” “How do you intend on paying back?” Asma asks out of curiosity. “I will pay back in tenfolds, be it pain or happiness. I will pay it back in the folds.”

What would life be like if you never had one? Being a young boy artificially created by the System, he's tasked with the lofty requirement of assisting it in its goals or being punished with his own death. Determined to hang on to his new-found life, he's effectively a slave to his own power source. Will he succeed in his goals, perish in the face of failure, or perhaps find a way out of this fated contract? Written for WSA 25. Any support/feedback would be great!

A world where humanity is but a legend told to children. Where new species thrive and settle down to create kingdoms and prosper. Those not strong enough to protect themselves, or don't work hard enough to live their lives normally, forced to slave away at any task deemed fit. A fleeting dream, a tale of continuous challenges and growth. Welcome to the future, dear readers. ---------------------- This idea came to me by accidentally drawing something, and it stemmed into the idea for this story. I hope you enjoy, and please leave any feedback and reviews along the way. I'd love to grow better as a reader for everyone here.

A soul from Earth transmigrated into a world of cultivation. The original body was not only a member of a small, insignificant cultivation family, but also possessed a bad talent for cultivation. Most importantly, he was a simp! Ye Chen swore that he would never be a simp. Wait, it seemed he had activated a system. As long as he gave gifts to female cultivators, he would receive rewards tenfold, a hundredfold, or even a thousandfold! Ye Chen firmly declared that he was not a simp. He was simply making an investment!

In a world where extraordinary beings reign supreme, the hard-working Eric finds himself struggling, feeling that his efforts yield no rewards. However, he awakens the ability for tenfold critical hits. As long as he puts in the effort, he will reap the rewards, and he will surely trigger a tenfold critical hit! From that moment on: "Ding! You practiced magic once, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" "Ding! You practiced swordsmanship once, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" "Ding! You forged a weapon, triggered a tenfold critical hit, and gained tenfold insight!" Gradually, the once ridiculed and underestimated Eric transforms into the versatile Eric! Through sheer hard work and determination, with no innate talent whatsoever, he stands above all the prodigies! And so, he ascends step by step to the pinnacle of the world!

A world of empires and faith, conquest and betrayal—Solmora: Ascent is more than just a game. It is a battlefield where the ambitious carve their legacy and the forgotten are erased from history. For Rael Voss, it was supposed to be just another MMO. No grand ambitions, no dreams of glory—just a casual dive into a world brimming with possibilities. But as kingdoms rise and factions wage war, the game’s stakes grow far beyond what anyone expected. The deeper he plays, the more he realizes: Ascent is not just a game. And when the first true war begins, only those who understand its nature will stand above all. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hey everyone! Author here—this is my first time writing, and I’d love to hear your feedback. Your thoughts will help me improve, so feel free to share! Thanks for reading, and enjoy the story!

“You’re an actor, so why can you leap across rooftops?” “Scaling a thousand-meter sheer cliff with your bare hands? Are you some kind of demon?” Faced with the astonished cries of scandal-ridden starlets, Du Sheng remained calm, casting a glance at the extraordinary skills he had acquired from films: [Dragon Elephant Prajna Skill (Purple): Tenfold power of dragons and elephants, Prajna Golden Body, Invulnerable Vajra!] “It’s just my ten-layer cultivation manifesting in golden radiance. A stronger physique seems perfectly reasonable, doesn’t it?” --- From The Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils, Infernal Affairs, Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, Kung Fu Hustle, to The Matrix, follow Du Sheng as he rises in the entertainment industry and beyond, wielding legendary skills extracted from movies

In a world filled with dangers and monsters, follow the MC who wishes to become powerful, not to overpower others, but to protect his family and the people he loves and cares from the dangers they have to face. I had to stop my first story due to my sickness. Support me, your comments and feedback is welcomed.

Trinity Grove has everything you want. From rich parents to parties to very expensive things. She literally has everything money can buy, but still she feels empty inside. it's almost like something is missing, but what? After her parents divorce, when she was 7, she moves in permanently with her mother, and stepfather. The last thing she remembered of her birth father was him telling her this would happen. She finds out shes a human-dragon hybrid, and things start to seem normal, but that's when she finds herself between a war; a war between dragons and knights and humans. what will happen? will she survive? This is my 1st novel. I hope you like it. I'm looking forward to your feedback.

When war finally ended, the Arcadians sought retribution from the nightmares they had suffered from demonkind. A noble Princess had taken her mother's mantle in order to uphold peace between the two races so humanity could co-exist with their fellow demons in a kingdom without strife, but war paved the road to peace in blood and such path is but a fragile thread awaiting to be ignited by the flames of hatred. Another great war awaits, but will she be able to avert it? Second iteration of the Knight's Fate saga chronologically speaking. Yes I'm starting from the second because the first was an utter failure when I tried to write it, it just didn't fit the mood of a fantasy novel unlike this one. Though don't worry this doesn't mean you can't enjoy this one before I write the first. This is the first story I've actually published so I appreciate any feedback, be it good or bad just let me know what you think.

Megumi Fujiboma, a boy who met an untimely end, awakens to find himself reincarnated as the head of the prestigious Fujiboma household, a branch family of the revered Boma clan. From the moment of his birth, everyone eagerly anticipated the growth of this remarkable heir. However, their enthusiasm quickly faded when Megumi was revealed to lack external abilities, and was declared unfit to become an exorcist—one of those destined to drive the world away from darkness. Yet, Megumi was not one to be easily defeated. He possessed a powerful binding system that equipped him to transform his circumstances far sooner than expected. [Target successfully bound] ******** [Talent has successfully awakened: Grade One Fire Talent] [Receiving tenfold the rewards] ******** With each stride he took, however, a new challenge emerged: his inferiority in external energy. "If one cannot harness the profound forces of light and darkness, then their latent talent is rendered completely useless."

Male MC| No-Harem| No Yuri| No Yaoi| No NTR A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks. ____________________ ____________________ Update Schedule: Every Saturday 11:00 PM GMT (+6) 01:00 AM GMT (+8) Per Chapter Length: 1300-2000 words.

Catastrophic Necromancer / National Transfer: Necromancer! I Am A Disaster / Necromancer! I Am the Calamity The game descends upon reality, world rules are overturned, and humanity enters an era of universal career change. Magical beasts run rampant! Secret realms, dungeons, and abysses are countless! Terror and treasures coexist! Danger and opportunity go hand in hand! Only by becoming a career changer, leveling up, and growing stronger can one stand at the pinnacle of the world! On the day of career change, Lin Moyu becomes the sole hidden profession: Necromancer. He obtains a god-level talent, with just level 1 talent enhancing all skills tenfold. He gains a god-level passive skill, transferring all damage to his summons. From now on, as long as his summons don't perish, Lin Moyu won't die. "Endless god-level skeleton warriors!" "Billions of lich mages!" "Countless undead bone dragons!" "Can you withstand it?" Under the curse, even gods turn to bones. Corpses explode, the sky falls and the earth shatters, the world collapses. "I sit high upon the throne of bones, walking between life and death." "I am the calamity!"

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In 2179, Earth is unrecognizable. After a global outbreak in 2019 killed 10% of humanity and triggered spontaneous supernatural abilities, the Great Expansion (2077) reshaped the planet: landmasses grew tenfold, new moons appeared, and mythical races emerged. The World Peace Accords (2103) forged a fragile truce between gods, demons, sentient races, and empowered humans. Ikaros, a Coffeshop worker in Zurich, receives a letter to the Hephaestus Institute, where he discovers he possesses two rare powers: Energy Manipulation and Runic Philology. His abilities make him a target for The Ascendancy—human extremists seeking to purge the powerless and overthrow divine rule—and The Supremacy, zealots enforcing godly dominion. As Ikaros uncovers the truth behind the history that birthed humanity’s powers, he must navigate a war where survival hinges on mastering his gifts… or becoming a pawn in someone else’s game.

What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

This is a story of a mortal form the modern era, reborn in the time of the Hellenic(Greek) gods as a new one, one not told in our version of the myths. let us watch as this man out of time and form navigates the world of the gods and how he conquers all challenges. This is my first story ever. so it might not be that good but I hope you all like it and please give me feedback and your opinions.

"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends. Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the body of a woman who had recently passed away. Jotou comes to realize that she's no longer in her world and now is in some sort of fantasy world. The rampant problems in this world soon find themselves surrounding Jotou, from the magics to the monsters to the wars between kingdoms and cities. Jotou sets out to uncover how she got here, why is she here, is she stuck here? Alongside the companions she finds in her way. _ Join the Discord Community for extra info about spells, magic, the world, announcements and more! : https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz _ Here's the map of the world!: https://imgur.com/a/krMRCCX Follow along on her journey through this new world, an isekai anime style story written the way I would love to read myself. It's set in an industrial revolution-esque era with magics and inconsistent technologies as a result. From slice of life moments to dark moments; comedy, fantasy, darkness, romance, mystery and reincarnation all rolled up into one adventure and I do hope anyone reading this has fun and enjoys the journey that's crafted! I intend to go by arcs and chapters much like a light novel. If you would like to give me any feedback about my writing or just want to appreciate my work, you can always leave a comment, a review or a power stone or leave feedback in the Discord! Any support is appreciated. My Links: Email: eletro104@gmail.com Reddit: u/Eletro_101 Twitter: @eletro101 Discord Community for this Book: https://discord.gg/NPxPJZKamz

This novel is inspired by novels where heroines can hear the villain's inner voice, but the main character is the protagonist in the original story not the villain whose voice audible to the heroines. No NTR ---- Chen Fan descends from the mountain after learning from his master for 10 years. The purpose? Of course, to enjoy life and reach the pinnacle of greatness. But there’s something strange about the girls he meets… ---- A/N : This is my first novel, and since English isn't my native language, I kindly ask for your understanding regarding any awkward phrasing or grammatical errors. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.

" Di Balik Bayangan Dunia dan Takdir" mengisahkan perjalanan seorang gadis muda, Clara, yang secara tidak sengaja membuka Gerbang 1000 Dunia, sebuah portal misteri yang menghubungkan dunia yang berbeza. Tanpa disedari, tindakannya itu melepaskan ancaman legendaris yang berpotensi merosakkan dunia mereka. Dalam usahanya untuk mencari penyelesaian, Clara berkelana dan menemui sekutu-sekutunya yang setia, menghadapi cabaran hebat, serta belajar menguasai kuasa yang terpendam dalam dirinya. Namun, perjalanan Clara bukan sekadar mencari cara untuk menutup Gerbang 1000 Dunia, tetapi juga untuk memahami takdirnya sendiri yang lebih besar daripada yang dia bayangkan. Dalam menghadapi ancaman dari musuh, entiti misterius yang muncul dari Gerbang, dan kekuatan gelap yang mengancam semua dunia, Clara harus mengungkapkan rahsia-rahsia tersembunyi mengenai dirinya, masa lalu, serta dunia yang terancam. Dengan kekuatan yang semakin berkembang dan pengetahuan yang diperoleh sepanjang pengembaraannya, Clara harus menghadapi keputusan yang sukar-adakah dia sanggup mengorbankan segala-galanya untuk menyelamatkan dunia, atau adakah takdir yang lebih besar menunggunya di ambang Gerbang? ( Silakan komen, jika terdapat kesilapan atau apa-apa feedback untuk panduan saya pada masa akan datang. Saya sangat mengharapkan feedback anda semua. Terima kasih! )

When old gamer, constantly unlucky, Theodore 'Ted' Moore starts playing the new VR game, he understands the luck can be a double edged sword. Will he prevail against the world to secure his place or will he break and become a servant? Can a single man truly stand against rich and powerful? Entry for Contest. Please give your valuable feedback to make the story better.

One day, a light covered the world, ushering in a new era with the awakening of the Epsilon Gene. Follow Aelyra’s journey as she discovers that the world she knows is not what it seems and navigates her more than complicated family relationships. This story is inspired by My Hero Academia and similar tales. I gladly welcome any feedback or suggestions. English is not my first language.

A story about the Demon Queen who hs to marry the celestial king to save the other races from genocide by him ad the humans. I'm actually writing a prequel and current with H.E.M so check out both giving feedback.

Synopsis: This is a story of how a single person can change the future of the people surrounding him whether in a good way or a bad way. ********************************** I know synopsis is not good and quite vague but I am writing this for my own wish fulfilment and just to tick the box of one of my new year resolutions. If there's anything wrong with grammar or have any constructive feedback, please do tell me. Disclaimer: The world in my story is an AU of our world. The characters in my story are not related to any real life personality whatsoever. Wanna learn accurate history, find somewhere else.

Shiva was a 28-year-old teenager who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world. . . . Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.

This is a new concept on marvel lore. This book flip flops the roles of Thor and Loki. In this book you will be taken on a journey with lady Julianna who is to be future queen of amadora. She is put into an arrange marriage, but ends up facing a tough choice of which path to choose. I am new to ths writing thing. I hope to be able to express how much I enjoyed creating this as you do reading it. Constructive feedback is welcomed. Thank you and enjoy my Take on this world of Asgard.

Jay Riemman , disappointed in the oppressive reality of the 22nd century is given a chance to destroy the society of the rich and powerful when Rifts begin to appear on Earth. [This is my effort in creating a somewhat of a "villain" protagonist who is not supported by a super system designed for him nor an immense plot armor, but who survives by using logical thinking, relying on strong teammates, and using underhanded methods] [A lot of my inspiration comes from other novels that deal with the concept of portals to other worlds, but I am trying to make this work differentiate as much as possible by mixing various other concepts and some of my original ideas] [Oh this is already too long but closing, I need to emphasize that this novel is something I do for fun and every possible feedback will be very helpful] (The cover picture doesn't belong to me, if you are the artist that created it please message me or leave a comment if you want it removed)

“I will let you be on top from tonight, please don’t divorce me, darling!” ----- Evelyn’s fairytale life shattered when a stranger stormed in, claiming to be the real daughter of the Wright family with proof. Her enviable privileges? Stripped away. Her spotless reputation? Tarnished. Her four-year engagement? Abruptly annulled. But the worst betrayal came from her once-loving father, all set to marry her off to settle a business score—with a man twice her age! Everyone in the circle attended this scandalous wedding, eager to witness the downfall of the supposed fake heiress. Yet, the climax was not what even Evelyn had anticipated! Zevian Reign, the nation’s richest tycoon, known for being every woman’s fantasy and the nightmare of all his rivals, made a dramatic entrance. His arrival stunned the guests, but his brazen wish was even more startling! He casually demanded to replace the groom and marry the beautiful bride. No one dared to challenge, nor did anyone have the guts to disobey him. They were left with no choice but to watch the wedding unfold. And it was Evelyn’s time to smirk, for she was now the devil’s wife. And all those who had ruined her, they would pay back in tenfold! ++++ [Excerpt] "Why would I ditch my husband for a loser?" Evelyn chuckled, crossing her arms defiantly. "He is better than him in all the aspects." Her gaze drifted to her ex-fiancé nearby, and she continued with a smirk, "Actually, a lot better in bed." As Annabelle’s face flushed with disdain, Evelyn patted her back and leaned in to deliver another slap. "So, good luck with licking my leftovers, dear step-sister. He's a perfect match for you."

The world awakens, dungeons form, animals and plants mutate, the gods spectate the world's happenings and find people they think are interesting, and humans gain powers and systems that are tailored to them (They're all the same thing, just with different designs). The usual stuff. It just so happens that our main character's version of the system is, for better or lack of words...flawed. --- Disclaimer: NSFW content will be marked accordingly: N+ for 18+, N- for darker themes, and N for a mix of both. Updates will aim for a chapter every week, with the potential for more depending on my schedule. Your feedback and ideas are greatly appreciated, even if it's just a "good job" or complete negativity. Questions are also welcome.