Evil Young Master Is A Villain

Mo Chou is the no.1 ranking female assassin in an illusive organization. One day on the way to the organization after completing a mission, she dies. She is shocked when reincarnates into her favorite novel but as a villainess who is the protagonist's step sister and dies a miserable death. She just wants to live a cushy and comfortable life so she decides to completely avoid the red flags aka the main characters and live like a saint (well a saint who is an assassin) But why does she keep stumbling into the main characters especially that infuriating villain and why the heck are they clinging onto her?

When the crazy dangerous criminal code named Chaos was caught by the special organization, she willingly allowed them to arrest her without a fuss. Just like her code name suggested, she had caused havoc in different parts of the country and the world. Chaos had already guessed that she would go to prison soon. As long as there was food and clothing, she had decided why not stay in prison for some time until it got boring. And so, Chaos spent the rest of her years behind bars. Apart from eating, sleeping, weekly interrogations and fighting with other prison mates, Chaos who had been curious about life in prison found it to be very boring. But…she liked the peace that came with it. Unfortunately, her peaceful days did not last after she ingested poison from her food and she was very much aware. Did chaos die a sad death like that? No, Of course not. She dragged the person who poisoned her to her destination in the afterlife, hell. Unexpectedly, the hell for chaos was very different because she had transmigrated into a character in a novel that she stole from a prison guard. After understanding her pitiful situation, what was the next thing Chaos decided to do as an unfortunate character? Of course! She acted like her code name suggested, and caused chaos in her new life. She wrecked the entire plot! ****** WARNING: This book is not for the weak! Blood, and violence is heavily included!

[WSA 2025 Entry!] I got transmigrated into a game—but not as the hero. Nope, I’m stuck as a third-rate villain, one destined to die at the hands of the protagonist. And to make things worse? I don’t even have a system to help me. Meanwhile, the hero has one that makes him nearly invincible. F*ck that. I’m not just going to roll over and die. If the game is rigged, then I’ll rewrite the rules. And maybe—No, definitely, I’ll find a way to outsmart the so-called hero who thinks he’s going to kill me. ---- No NTR | No Yuri

Kai befalls a tragic death and wakes up to find that he has reincarnated into the body of the most villainous noble from a novel he last read. The power is now in Kai's hands to either accept his inevitable fate as the villain or to alter the threads of fate to carve out of his own destiny.

He was the crown of the most feared mafia organization. Having his parents killed at young age, he was left alone to inherit the legacy left behind, that was being the mafia lord. Having only ambition to avenge his parents, in his journey enters a girl who is mysterious yet sweet, kind yet mischievous. Slowly, she made her way to his cold heart, warming it, but the truth about past and in the process of his revenge, he lost her. After her departure, he lived alone for many years blaming himself.But one day he came across a girl with same face, same personality but completely different identity. In her presence, his once dead heart started beating again. Is this sin, falling for another girl despite promising his beloved a lifetime or a sign to indicate, it is not just anyone but her. 3 years later Yang mei was in university talking with a boy when she was abruptly pulled into a strong arm in front of everyone. "I finally found you" the man murmured. "You are mistaken sir" she told him. " I know, it's you. Don't ever deceive me again" he tightly hugged her in his arm not even letting air pass between them. "Sir, you really got the wrong person" she tried to break free from his arm but everytime she his hold will tighten. "I know, you are angry. I promise to not let you down again. Just don't leave me again, okay" he pressed her even more kissing her hair almost pleading her.

A Hero or Villain? Let Fate Decide. Embark on the treacherous journey of Ye Feng, a manipulative, narcissistic, and cunning protagonist whose only goal is to see his desires fulfilled, regardless of the cost. From humble beginnings, he sets out to carve a path to power, relentlessly eliminating anyone who dares to stand in his way. Driven by ambition, Ye Feng's ruthless pursuit of the top pushes him to question whether he is a hero striving for greatness or a villain consumed by darkness. As he rises, the line between right and wrong blurs, and only fate will determine the legacy he leaves behind. _______________ Warning: Strong violence and mature content. -->Some scenes may not be liked by all people so just take those as air and move to main story. -->Love is just a waste of time so, no time wasted on those things to develop deep relationship with every female character. -->Our protagonist is an evil so don't consider it as a joke tag. Warning: This work is purely fiction, and it does not promote any kind of violence against any living being. Please read with caution. _______ Support and enjoy the Journey................................

[Will reupload for WSA 2025] After sacrificing his first body to seal the newborn Tier-6 Tenma, Kurobane Ryuji was determined to live an ordinary life with his new identity. Now as a high school student in his last year, his plan for the future couldn’t be any more simpler and mundane: And that was to graduate from school, get into a decent university, obtain a stable job as a white-collared worker, marry a virtuous and obedient wife, and build a small and happy family of his own. But, fate seemed to have something else in mind. When a certain quack exorcist barged into his seemingly ordinary life, he found himself once again drawn closer and closer to the world of the supernatural. And then, there was the voice; its whispers clamoring in his head and its presence lurking under his skin. What would he do when the demon he had thought to have sealed in the past had instead followed him into this lifetime and shared his soul? Can he eliminate the demon within him before his secret was found out? After all, for an unordinary person with an unordinary destiny to attempt to be ordinary, how can it be so easy as dying once and starting anew in another body? === Tags: #Demons #Exorcists #Ghosts&Spirits #Strongactingweak #Action #Sliceoflife #UrbanFantasy Updates: -

Jumping From World to the world: Intergalactic or Urban, World of Cultivation or Continent of Magic, Fighting other protagonists, hooking with beautiful heroines, plundering treasures, and suppressing a myriad of people, Our Protagonist(Villain) can do it all. After living an ordinary life for years, a man finally got transmigrated to another world. He woke up in the body of a boy named Jun Tianyun. " A world which got its own protagonists and villains, am I just a side character?" Jun Tianyun mumbled. Thankfully, he activated Heaven's Fortune System. " Jun Tianyun! You crippled my power and stole my wife! You villain! You will be punished by heaven!" A protagonist screamed as he coughed a mouthful of blood. " I didn't do anything. It was your fate!" Jun Tianyun explained kindly. " Brother Jun! Because of you, I am still alive and living a normal life with my wife and two children. You are a saint!" A villain spoke with an emotional voice. " I didn't do anything. You earned your chance of redemption." Jun Tianyun sighed. [ Ding! A female with high Destiny Point is detected! Whether Host wants to steal her destiny or conquer the heroine?] " This..." Jun Tianyun fell in dillema. " Sigh, Changing the fate, So burdensome." Jun Tianyun sighed as he saw a bunch of heroines fighting for him. .....................................................................................................................................

He was an absolute evil — he wiped half of humanity off the face of the earth, subjugated demons and plunged the world into the flames of chaos. But in the end, he was killed by a hero. It would seem that this is the end of the story... But fate decided otherwise. Reinhard Deira is the second son of the grand ducal family. Reborn in another world, he will not repeat the same mistakes. This time he will finish what he started. This world will be destroyed.

Let her shout out: "Oh handsome and sweet-talking Tokyo gentleman, I must have you. You are mine!" This is the story of how a boy from Iwate Prefecture became a Tokyo gentleman.

[Manis, memuaskan, memanjakan, banyak tamparan muka.] Era Zhang Caishen telah berakhir dan dia tidak akan bisa bangkit lagi, begitu kata mereka. Tapi mengapa dia tampak menjadi lebih kaya dan lebih berkuasa meski kini dia cacat dan ditinggalkan tunangannya? Mengapa dia tiba-tiba menjadi sangat beruntung secara tidak wajar? Jawabannya sederhana; istri barunya!! Lin Alix tidak beruntung dalam hal keluarga. Dia adalah yang lebih tua, kurang disayangi, dan kurang berbakat dibandingkan adik perempuannya yang merebut segalanya darinya. Tapi takdir berpihak dan dia beruntung dalam hal suami, tidak hanya dia kaya tapi dia juga suka memanjakannya. Atas saran dari sistem permainan keberuntungan tak terbatasnya, Alix menikahi suami cacat yang tidak diinginkan adiknya dan melangkah di jalan pemenang dalam hidup. Dia menyapu bersih penghargaan musik, mendapat pengakuan internasional, dan mendapat balas dendam pada keluarganya yang kejam sambil menjadi istri yang paling dicemburui di Beijing. "Kamu gila, kamu dengan sukarela menikahi pria cacat?" teman-temannya bertanya. "Ya, tapi sudahkah kamu melihat betapa dia memanjakanku?" tanyanya balik. "Dia pasti akan selingkuh darinya, dia cacat dan dia tidak bisa melaksanakan tugas suami." yang lain bergosip. Alix melihat pria yang disebut cacat itu yang naik ke ranjangnya malam demi malam dan tertawa. Maaf, dia lebih dari mampu. "Sayang, aku di sini untuk melaksanakan tugas suamiku." dia selalu berkata genit saat dia membalikkannya. Buku ini berpartisipasi dalam WSA dan penulis akan merasa terhormat atas semua dukungan Anda. Penafian: Ini adalah karya fiksi, tidak ada yang harus dibandingkan dengan dunia nyata tidak peduli seberapa miripnya. Anda juga bisa cek karya-karya saya lainnya di sini di Web novel.

-Op Mc? Yes! -Daughter? Yes! -Multiple worlds? Yes! -Vast Lore? Yes! -Fastpace? Yes! ... "You either Die a Villain or Live long enough to see yourself as a Hero." ~Probably Spark --------------------------------------- Spark, the lofty young master of the Dwight family, had always been a mystery. His true abilities were never known until the day he stepped onto the frontlines. In one awe-inspiring exhibition of power, Spark shocked the world and sent the coalition army of the five emperors into a chaotic retreat. Now, with the eyes of the world on him, each faction lusted to uncover the secrets behind his unparalleled strength. Still, in spite of the rampant curiosity and greed, nobody had the guts to confront him directly. And with every rumor spread of his feats, a question burned in every mind: was Spark this powerful all this time, or was he casting an illusion of strength before everybody's eyes?

"Devil's Heart," a tragic romance novel that caught my [Eian Roger] attention, after a long time. If you ask what's so great about it, the only answer I can give is—the green-eyed guy, Eron De Vilan, my villain. I loved that guy so much I could call myself crazy. Seriously, who else would pray for a fictional character to have a happy ending? But that scum author, broke my all hope and gave him the worst fate. As I wandered the streets, heartbroken, I met my end while trying to save a stray cat. Really... even now, I can't believe I did such a stupid thing. It's so frustrating... But what's even more nerve-wracking is the fact that I transmigrated into the novel I cherished—only to end up as the antagonist who tortures my favorite character. The only relief I had was the timeline. It’s still too early for the original story to unfold. That meant there was still time. This time, the extra would seize control of the narrative. I will rewrite the story for my villain. No matter what happens… Eron De Vilan will have his happy ending.

In a vast universe where countless energies float, life exists in harmony. Heaven, the core, and hell are clearly divided, creating an ideal order — or so it seemed. Then, the Nine Monarchs, filled with the corrupt power of Evil Authority, began to wreak havoc. Their quest to annihilate life and stop a delusional prophecy sparked chaos across the realms. As the universe spirals into destruction, a great war erupts, shattering the once-peaceful existence. But amidst the chaos, hope arises. A soul is reincarnated into a new world, destined to end the madness. Though reluctant to bear this burden, he is left with no choice. His name is Garret.

Julie Thompson just moved into the suburban town to live with her aunt's family and hopes to not have or make any friends at all because she disliked people but maybe liking just one won't hurt. She falls for Uche, her cousin brother's best friend, without even knowing. Follow Julie through her first attempt at love. ... I watched him as he stood there, leaning on the bridge's railing and eating ice cream. The breeze wasn't disturbing his hair today because he had parked it all backwards, he looked cute, I smiled drawing in some breath, satisfied with how today was going. "What?" I heard him ask taking me off my thoughts. "Huh?" "You were smiling." "Oh. I was...." "Can I kiss you?" He asked looking at my lips. "Here?" I asked now, my heart beating hard against my chest, our first kiss could happen now. "Yeah?" He nodded, I could see his Adam's apple go up and down as he swallowed, I bit my lips, nervously. I smiled approvingly, almost getting up from the bench where I sat. "No sit." He said coming closer to sit next to me. The bench was quite small so we were so close to each other. He leaned in and I could smell him more the closer he got to my face. His lips were now inches away from mine and the moment they touched I closed my eyes, I didn't know why but I did. He didn't put his tongue in my mouth, it was as simple as it could get, just a warm kiss and I as glad he didn't. When he lips left mine, I opened my eyes licking my lips. He was smiling, I hadn't yet told him how much I loved his smile. "You lied." I told him. "About what?" He stopped smiling. "You said you were a bad kisser." He laughed now with his teeth showing, those beautiful set. Read more... #genka3na

After dying from betrayal, Thomas reincarnates as Jolthar Kaelzhar, the neglected son of a powerful clan, just after his brothers kill him. With Jolthar's memories and the blessing of Qalena, Thomas vows to rise from his lowly position and claim power in his new life. [My Twitter id : https://x.com/8Lucifer69972]

Set against the neon hum of modern life, this is a story of tangled lies, bruised hearts, and the messy collision of love and redemption. Enter Su Shangzhi, who had always been overlooked by her own family and her biological parents. She was nothing more than a stain in the Su household. But nothing else mattered to her, not the mockery or the disdain, as she had already fallen deeply into the cruel game of love~ On the other hand, no one knew that Mo Yexuan who won the best actor award title for three consecutive years was also unable to move past the shackles of his own demons. Two heart and two soul; Can love really heal everything and force Mo Yexuan to truly let go of their past and start over? Can Su Shangzhi really break through the walls guarding Mo Yexuan’s frozen heart, or will she have to herself in the end? And all that will be remain are shattered glass that can never be mend forever~~ ps: Picture taken from Pinterest.

What boy doesn't dream of adventure? Especially if you have to master the most real magic? So Tim, a very ordinary twelve-year-old boy, didn't take long to accept the offer to enter a school of sorcery. He was not deceived: he actually ended up in the school. Which was located on the planet Jelshakh, perhaps on the other side of the universe. A whole crowd of boys and girls arrived at the school at the same time, but what a crowd! Elves, drowes, orcs, anzimars, peyrots... and not a single Earthling but him. That, however, did not prevent him from making friends, and together they go to meet the real dangers and amazing discoveries! A true friend stays with you, even if he has something you don't. Tim is the only one at school who doesn't have an innate gift for magic. And he'll have to work hard to prove that he can do magic, too.

Ruan Ji, the once best athlete within the C city of the great China kingdom suddenly gets into an accident and becomes a waste, scorned by society. Her best friend hooks up with her boyfriend, her adoptive sister schemes against her, while her cousin attempts to steal her fiance. Her family succession fight starts, tearing others apart. Despite all that, when everyone can't wait to see her reaction; they discover that something was wrong! When everyone was busy scheming against her, Ruan Ji sips her tea calmly while enjoying nature's beauty. Her best friend hooks up with her boyfriend, but she signs the break up agreement and cleans her hand with a tissue? Her cousin wants to snatch her fiance, but she doesn’t even feel a little bit threatened? Her family is on the verge of bankruptcy, yet she just plays, sleeps all day long and buys stocks? Where is the reaction expected? Where is the great sense of peril?! Little did they know that the Ruan Ji they once knew had died long ago. And now, she was a vengeful spirit crawling back from hell to take revenge on those bitch and scumbugs who betrayed her. This time, she will take revenge on every single one of them, paying them back tenfolds of the suffering she went through! And to do so, she was going to steal the villain from her past life. This time, she will use him bit by bit to lay the groundwork of her master plan for revenge. However, why was the villain she knew actually so sweet? Where is that King of Hell that made her life hellish? Where did he go? Or, was it that she was the one who didn’t know better… regarding the only person who helped her as a villain? If so, then in this life, why not take the villain for herself?

[Warning: Mature Content] Raiden von Heliosbane is a young master from a prestigious family of sorcerers in an evolved Modern world. Initially, he was an ordinary corporate slave on Earth until the infamous Truck-kun arrived and transported him to a new world as a baby. Raised with excessive love and attention, Raiden grew into a carefree and mischievous young man. Despite his upbringing, he faced a significant challenge—he was unable to awaken the magical potential within him. However, on his 20th birthday, he unexpectedly awakened two unique skills that propelled him to become the strongest and most notorious young master with a mischievous flair. (Content Advisory: This narrative contains mature themes, including intense violence, incest, and yuri elements. It is crafted specifically for readers who are comfortable with and can appreciate such complex themes. If you are under the legal age or find these elements unsettling, it is advised to discontinue reading.) (Cover Image: Ai-Generated)

Keith Rovan, a crazy guy who got transmigrated inside a novel as an extra named Eric Jonas. In the novel, Eric was a child who never received any kind of love or affection from his family because of that, the struggle he had to face are numerous. However, the silent endurance of his hardship, slowly leads him to the edge of suicide as an escape from the cruel world. Who wants to live and die like that character, especially Keith who had an polar opposite character of weak Eric. So eventually, he decides to change the original plot. Not by acting as an angel, instead a devil who lives for his own desires without concerning anything. He never hesitates to dominate over others or eliminate the ones that dare to cross his path. However, his path dramatically leads him towards the future ultimate villain, Abaddon Mir. They are born enemies because of their families, rivals in name, but what crazier is… with time, the rivals are turning into toxic lovers.

"Leave, you're free. Don't ever come back here again." She said, hoping he wouldn't return and she'll get to live Hael was shocked, "Are you abandoning me, My Lady?" Corvina Cory lived her first life like a typical villainess and the consequences of her actions were pretty obvious. She died at the hands of the person she was in love with. Yet she gets a second chance at her first life even though she didn't want it. She didn't want to face the man she was madly in love with again and she definitely didn't want to get killed again by him as well.

For 40 years, Li Tianhai was nothing but a nameless corporate slave, breaking his back for a ruthless business empire. No promotions, no power, no family—just endless work for a company that treated him like trash. After a mysterious accident, he should have died a nobody. But when he wakes up, everything has changed. Now, he is Li Feng, the fourth-generation heir of the wealthiest and most powerful family in the entire country! At just 19 years old, he has everything a man could desire: A Perfect Young Body – Handsome, tall, and exuding an aura that makes women weak. Wealth Beyond Imagination – Private jets, elite clubs, and a family fortune worth trillions. Knowledge of the Next 30 Years: He knows which businesses will rise, which will collapse, and where hidden treasures lie. A World of Stunning Beauties – Heiresses, married noblewomen, celebrity queens, and ambitious young vixens—all waiting to be conquered. However, in this world of wealth and power, enemies lurk everywhere. His rival cousins want him destroyed, greedy executives see him as a weak target, and beautiful but dangerous women try to manipulate him. But they have no idea—this is not the same Li Feng from before. This time, he plays to win. Business? He’ll control the markets and build his own empire. Women? He’ll dominate and make them crave him. Power? He will become the true ruler of the elite, controlling everything from the shadows. They think he’s just another spoilt young master? They have no idea who they’re dealing with.

In a world where the strong rule, Ben is mistreated and humiliated. What happens when someone weak has the opportunity to gain power by doing bad deeds? (Revenge, action,sexo, violence)

"Mr. Xu, are you really a Heavenly Master?" "As genuine as they come, more real than gold!" "I've heard that your reputation in the supernatural circle is really bad, even to the point where a ghost once called the police saying you were threatening him?" "Impossible!" "It wasn't me!" "Don't talk nonsense!" Xu Yang clenched the Thousand-Year Peachwood Sword in his hand, and said, "What's the name of that ghost? Would you dare to let him confront me face to face?" (PS: This book is also known as 'This Heavenly Master is too Vicious', 'Scaring Ghosts Makes You Stronger'.)

【Absurd】【Unprincipled】【Unpredictable】 ...... The majestic mortal realm encompasses the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands. A world bursting with myriad colors, brimming with joyous cultivation. When Chu Liang opened his eyes and discovered that he had become a disciple of the Shu Mountain Sect and possessed a strange pagoda… from that moment on, he embarked on a path he never imagined. The morning mist rises from the Thirty-Sixth Peaks, and thousands of miles away, a dragon was slain! ...... "Please, Young Master, Slay the Demon!"

Dying after getting bitten by a zombie, the main character finds himself in the world of fantasy. Reincarnating as the mid-rank villain, he decided to live differently and avoid the main cast. After all who would like to live as an arrogant brat only to die like a dog? However, just as he resolved to live a better life, [Ding!] [This world is not the same as the host knows. Because of the tragic ends, the God of Fortune has reversed the time and has allowed the main heroines to retain their memories.] Yeah, he is done for. ****** Additional tags: Possessive characters, no Yaoi, no Yuri, no ntr. ***** A/N:- The main character would be overpowered but not to the point where he could defeat his enemies with a snap of his fingers. This novel would be more focused on character development, slice of life, and romance.

******** (WARNING: This novel’s MC is Laurence’s disciple, since both of them love to cuss at everyone’s faces…. Just kidding! xD xD. Just like my other work that has a warning at the top… So, please read at your own risk! ^_^) (Note: This novel will undergo revisions from the start. Thank you! ^_^) ********* Not all villains are evil. Sometimes, their experiences and how others treated them shaped them into what they are today. ********* “How amusing! Do you really think that being labeled as a [tyrant], a [bully], and a [villain] would be that outstanding?! Why don’t you come here right now and let me punch you in the face so that you can wake up from your f*cking delusional sh*t!” ********* In his first life, for some unknown reason, he was betrayed, framed, and stripped of his status as a noble and labeled him as a “traitor” or in the worst case, a “villain”. Now, as he faced execution and prepared to die when suddenly an unknown entity called [system] offered him a chance to be a dimensional traveler, a being who transverse through the stars and space to countless worldlines in order to complete various tasks that was assigned to them. The system also promised him to grant his greatest desire should he ever consent to be bound by the [system]. With no other choice, he accepted the entity’s offer and after millennium years’ worth of transmigration, for some unknown reason, the system prompted him to be reincarnated back to his first life that he had forsaken…. As the “villainous” Third Young Master of Marquis Chevalier Household from Stellarus Empire. ********* Photo not mine. Credits to the owner.

Li Wei lived a dull, overworked life—until destiny (or a rogue truck) intervened, catapulting him into a world of mystical cultivators and deadly power struggles. Waking up in the body of Li Wei, the infamous and lazy heir of the Immortal Ice Sect, he finds himself in a precarious position: surrounded by enemies, burdened by a reputation for arrogance, and targeted for assassination. The only thing worse than inheriting this life? Realizing his new body’s cultivation potential is off the charts... if only the previous owner hadn’t been an idle narcissist. With the sect matriarch as his coldly disappointed mother, a stoic yet dangerously competent protector in the ice-cold beauty Leng Yue, and a mysterious "Young Master System" pushing him toward reckless behavior, Li Wei must balance survival with ambition. Every quest forces him to embrace the absurdities of an over-the-top cultivation world—whether humiliating enemies or accumulating riches—while concealing his true identity as a transmigrator. But as he’s exiled from the safety of his sect and thrown into the chaotic world below, Li Wei quickly learns that charisma, cunning, and a knack for manipulation might be even deadlier than swordsmanship. After all, why fight fair when you can command, deceive, and dominate? With ancient relics, feuding clans, and dangerous beauties complicating his journey, Li Wei's rise through the cultivation ranks is anything but conventional. What starts as a quest for survival may just become a path to unstoppable power... assuming his outrageous system quests don’t get him killed first. Will Li Wei overcome his past’s shameful legacy, outsmart his enemies, and become the true master of his destiny—or will his laziness, scheming rivals, and shameless arrogance bring him to ruin?

[If you are looking for a slow romance, you can give it a check if not, you'll be disappointed] Aera, a young 28-year-old was about to make her dream debut by opening her own floral shop that could be shipped in and around. Nevertheless, things didn't go as she planned. One would say that transmigrating to a book sound like a fantasy, however to Aera, it became a nightmare when she woke up in an unknown world even when she hasn't died yet. With an unexpected turnout, her life was hanging by a thin thread. Aera was presented with an option-either she goes back to her world with her memory erased or enter the other world, and comes back with the memory intact to have her revenge. Never did she expect of choosing the worst villain of all. A character in a book where she killed the Empress and her unborn child. Worst, the male lead was reborn time after time with his memory intact. His grudge still hung on torturing the villainess. Even more worst, the ML was a split image of her long-time crush. ----- "Do you hate me that much?" As soon as the question was raised, a table lamp flew past through the said person, smashing against the wall behind him. "More than enough to kill you right now." The female figure responded with nothing but hatred and disgust in her tone. Her jewel eyes that glow under the dark never left her gaze on the other male person who was sitting on her opposite. ----- The male lead wasn't the only one Aera had to put a guard on but even other characters when one after the other began to make an appearance. The more the flow gets out of the plot the more twisted it gets. Her only goal was to survive so she could go back home.  P.S:- English is not my first language and I am weak in grammar. I'll be happy to receive either a critics or feedback or comments...^-^ Please do give it a read till chapter 3 or above to get the clear picture.