Page 1 – "What the Hell is Happening?"Panel 1: Black Screen (First Person View)
A faint ringing in Atom's ears. The sensation of weight, of breath—things he shouldn't be feeling anymore.
Atom (thoughts): "Didn't I… die?"
Panel 2: Blurred Vision, Unsteady Stance
Atom opens his eyes, vision unfocused. He's standing in a dimly lit alleyway, but his legs feel shaky, unfamiliar. He stumbles, catching himself against a damp brick wall. His breath is ragged.
Atom (thoughts): "Why does everything feel... real?"
Panel 3: Reality Hits
He looks down at his hands—stronger than before, unfamiliar. His clothes are different, his fingers twitching as he processes what's happening.
Atom (thoughts): "Wait… these aren't my hands. This isn't my body. What the hell is going on?!"
Panel 4: The Ambush
Before he can think further, footsteps echo behind him. Three men step into the alley, eyes scanning him like a predator would prey. One smirks, flipping a knife in his hand.
Thug #1: "Looks like we got a lost one."
Thug #2: "You new around here, pal? Might wanna hand over your valuables."
Panel 5: Fear Creeps In
Atom stiffens. His heart pounds—too loud, too fast. His mind races. He's never been in a fight before. Hell, he's never even been outside alone at night before.
Atom (thoughts): "Shit. Shit. Shit."
Panel 6: First Contact
The thug with the knife lunges. Atom flinches, instinctively raising his hands to block—
Panel 7: Explosion of Light and Dark
A shockwave bursts from Atom's body—light flashes from his left hand, darkness erupts from his right. The sheer force sends the thug flying into the alley wall, his knife clattering to the ground
Panel 8: Instant RegretAtom stares at his hands in horror, but then—pain. A searing, unbearable ache shoots through his body. His knees buckle, and he collapses to the ground, clutching his arms.
Atom (thoughts): "Agh—!! What the hell is this?!"
Panel 9: The Toll of PowerHis muscles feel like they're tearing apart from the inside. His breath is ragged, his vision blurry. He tries to lift his hands again, but his body refuses to move.
Atom (thoughts): "I… I can't move…!"
Panel 10: Fleeing ShadowsThe remaining thugs, terrified, don't stick around. They scramble away, dragging their unconscious friend. But Atom barely registers it—his mind is clouded by pain.
Panel 11: Closing ShotLying on the cold pavement, he struggles to breathe, his body wracked with exhaustion. For the first time, he truly realizes that this power isn't just some gift—it comes with a price.
Atom (thoughts): "What the Hell (whence in pain) is going on, this hurts, my body feels like it's going to explode"
Page 2 – "Where the Hell Am I?"Panel 1: The Struggle to Stand
Atom groans, gritting his teeth as he forces himself onto his hands and knees. His entire body is screaming in protest, his arms feeling like they're on fire. His breath comes in short gasps.
Atom (thoughts): "I… I can't stay here. I need to move… need to—"
Panel 2: First Step, First Mistake
He tries to push himself up, but his legs buckle. He slams back onto the cold pavement, pain flaring through his body.
Atom (thoughts): "Okay. Ow. Bad idea."
Panel 3: Desperate to Get Out
Using the alley wall, he drags himself up, wobbling unsteadily. He doesn't feel in control of his own body—it's too strong, yet too fragile at the same time. His hands are still trembling.
Atom (thoughts): "Focus. Just… get out of here. Find help. Wherever 'here' even is."
Panel 4: The Shock of Daylight
He stumbles out of the alley, expecting the cool night air—but instead, he's blinded by a wave of daylight. He flinches hard, squinting against the brightness.
Atom (thoughts): "What the—?! No. No, no, no. It was night a second ago. Wasn't it?"
Panel 5: Sensory Overload
As his vision adjusts, he takes in the street before him—and it's too much. The world feels wrong. Cobbled roads, wooden storefronts, people walking in strange outfits, no cars, but somehow still futuristic. Neon-lit signs on old-fashioned buildings. Vendors shouting. Market stalls packed with glowing objects.
Atom (thoughts): "What the hell is this place?! This doesn't look like any city I've ever seen!"
Panel 6: He's Completely Lost
Atom stares, heart pounding. He grips his hoodie like it's the only thing anchoring him. His thoughts race, struggling to process what he's seeing.
Atom (thoughts): "This… this isn't Earth, is it?"
Panel 7: The Green-Haired Stranger Appears
A figure with green hair steps into his vision. Atom stumbles back, startled, but they just eye him up and down with a raised brow.
Stranger: "You look like you just saw a ghost."
Atom (panicked): "I don't— I don't even know what I'm looking at!"
Panel 8: A Shaky Conversation
The stranger sighs, stepping closer, but Atom instinctively flinches away, still not trusting anything around him. The stranger kneels and places a glowing hand near Atom's arms, causing a faint warmth to spread.
Atom (startled): "What are you—?!"
Stranger: "Relax. You're about two seconds from collapsing. I'm just making sure you don't drop dead in the street."
Panel 9: Still Not Trusting It
Atom glances at his arms, feeling the pain dull slightly, but his mind is still screaming at him that this shouldn't be happening. He's still shaking.
Atom (thoughts): "lean this old dude just tell me what he is doing before he just starts moving"
Panel 10: Directions to Safety
The stranger stands, pointing toward a small, well-kept building down the street.
Stranger: "There's a clinic that way. They'll fix you up properly."
Atom (still overwhelmed): "...Clinic? Right. Yeah. Okay."
Panel 11: Stumbling Toward the Clinic
Atom staggers through the clinic doors, still unsteady. The receptionist takes one look at him and immediately calls for assistance. He barely processes the movement around him as two staff members grab his arms, guiding him toward a bed.
Receptionist: "Sir, can you walk?"
Atom (dazed): "I don't even know anymore…"
Panel 12: After Treatment, Still Scarred
Later, Atom sits on the clinic bed, arms wrapped in fresh bandages. He flexes his fingers—still aching, but at least functional. He glances at his forearms, now lined with faint scars.
Atom (thoughts): "this still doesn't feel right, I can move my arms but it feels foreign"
Panel 13: Stepping Into the World for Real
As he exits the clinic, he takes a deep breath and finally sees the city in full. The streets bustle with activity—people in a mix of traditional and futuristic outfits, open markets, glowing artifacts, but no cars, no skyscrapers, no phones. It's overwhelming.
Atom (thoughts): "I have no idea where I am or have an idea what I'm supposed to do."
Panel 14: Final Thought
He pulls his hood up, blending into the crowd as best he can. One step forward, then another. The fear is still there, but for now, all he can do is move.
Atom (thoughts): "One problem at a time…"
Page 3 – "The Tavern"Atom, still reeling from his abrupt arrival in this unfamiliar world, seeks solace in a nearby tavern. The establishment, a blend of rustic charm and modern technology, offers a brief respite from the overwhelming environment outside.
Panel 1: Entering the Tavern
Atom pushes open the heavy wooden door, the soft hum of conversation and the clinking of glasses greeting him. The interior is dimly lit, with patrons scattered across wooden tables, some engaged in animated discussions, others lost in their own thoughts.
Atom (thoughts): "Maybe a drink will help me make sense of all this."
Panel 2: Approaching the Bar
He approaches the bar, where a burly bartender polishes a glass. The bartender raises an eyebrow at Atom's attire but says nothing.
Bartender: "What'll it be?"
Atom: "Just water, thanks."
Panel 3: Noticing the Bounty Board
As Atom sips his water, his gaze drifts to a large board on the wall, cluttered with various notices and posters. Bold headlines like "Wanted: Dead or Alive" and "Seeking Brave Adventurers" catch his eye.
Atom (thoughts): "A bounty board? Like in old westerns?"
Panel 4: Examining the Bounties
Curiosity piqued, Atom approaches the board. The posters depict various individuals, creatures, and tasks, each with a reward listed at the bottom.
Poster 1: "Wanted: 'Bonecrusher' – Orc Chieftain terrorizing the southern villages. Reward: 500 gold pieces."
Poster 2: "Seeking adventurers to escort a merchant caravan through the Whispering Woods. Reward: 200 gold pieces."
Panel 5: Discovering the Leaderboard
Beside the bounty board, a glowing leaderboard displays names alongside various stats: fastest, strongest, highest mana reserves.
Leaderboard:
Fastest:
Lyria Swiftfoot – 9.8 seconds
Garrick the Fleet – 10.1 seconds
Strongest:
Garret the bored one – 1200 lbs per square inch
Brakka the Mighty – 1150 lbs per square inch
Highest Mana:
Eldra Moonshadow – 950 MP
Sorrel the Wise – 920 MP
Panel 6: Reflecting on His Abilities
Atom's eyes widen as he reads the stats, realizing the potential of his own unique abilities.
Atom (thoughts): "Light and dark manipulation... Could I make it onto this board?"
Panel 7: A Spark of Determination
Clenching his fist, Atom feels a surge of determination. The idea of becoming a bounty hunter, using his powers for good, begins to take root.
Atom (thoughts): "Maybe this is my chance to do somthing with my life, no more hiding in my room."
Panel 8: Setting a Goal
He takes a deep breath, his path becoming clearer.
Atom (thoughts): "I'll do whatever it takes to understand my abilities."
Panel 9: Leaving the Tavern with Purpose
With renewed resolve, Atom exits the tavern, ready to embrace the challenges ahead.
Atom (thoughts): "Time to see what this world has in store for me."