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Chapter 4 - Chapter 4 - The Walking Ruins

The silence after their escape was unnatural.

The ruins, ever-shifting and hostile, had stilled. The air felt thicker, heavier with something Kaelith couldn't name. A presence? A lingering curse? Whatever it was, it clung to their skin like damp cloth, suffocating and watchful.

No one spoke. No one had the strength to.

Veym sat hunched, forearms resting against his knees as he caught his breath. His sharp claws dug absently into the cracked stone beneath him. Edrin, normally composed, was staring at his hands—tracing the veins as if expecting them to disappear. Solrin stood nearby, his usual glow flickering erratically, like a candle in a storm.

And Orin…

Orin hadn't moved.

He stood at the very edge of their makeshift refuge, staring into the dark like he could still see the thing that had chased them.

Kaelith forced his breathing to slow. His heart still thundered against his ribs, but he needed to think.

They had encountered two different entities now. The first had spoken in fragments, warning them. The second…

Kaelith clenched his jaw. The second had moved reality itself.

What were they dealing with? What kind of world had they woken into?

Finally, he spoke. "We need to keep moving."

No one argued.

The Path Beyond

They walked in silence, their bodies on edge.

The ruins seemed different. Whether it was a trick of the mind or something else entirely, Kaelith wasn't sure—but the once-dilapidated structures now felt inhabited. The broken arches stretched taller, their weathered edges looking more like teeth in the dim light. Walls that had crumbled now whispered with unseen voices.

Shapes flickered at the edges of their vision. Never fully there. Never fully gone.

Kaelith tightened his grip. Something was changing.

Edrin broke the silence. "That thing—what did it want?"

No one answered.

Because none of them knew.

Finally, Orin murmured, "It wasn't hunting us."

Kaelith glanced at him. "You sure about that? It chased us down like prey."

Orin didn't look away from the ruins. "No. It moved differently. It wasn't trying to kill us. It was… testing us."

The words settled uneasily in the air.

Veym scoffed. "Well, we failed that test, didn't we?"

Solrin exhaled. "Or maybe… we passed."

Kaelith wasn't sure which option scared him more.

Then—

The ground shuddered.

A deep, resonant sound rolled through the ruins, vibrating through the very stone beneath them. It wasn't an earthquake. It was something waking up.

They weren't alone.

Kaelith spun toward the sound—

And froze.

At the far end of the ruins, where the crumbling pathways gave way to endless darkness, a figure stood.

It was human.

Or, at least, it looked human.

A tall, thin shape wrapped in blackened cloth and pale, shifting armor. Its face was obscured beneath a veil of shadows, but Kaelith could feel its gaze. Cold. Calculating. Unreadable.

For the first time since arriving in this world—

Someone else was here.

And they had been waiting.

The Watcher

No one moved.

The figure did not advance. Did not speak.

It simply stood, watching.

Kaelith's pulse quickened. "Who are you?"

The figure tilted its head slightly. The movement was… wrong. Slow, deliberate, like it was remembering how to move.

Then, a voice slithered through the air.

"…You walk where the veil is thinnest."

It wasn't a greeting. It was an observation.

Solrin stepped forward, the glow beneath his skin pulsing. "Are you the one watching us?"

The figure shifted. "Many things watch. Many things wait."

Kaelith clenched his fists. "Are you one of them?"

Silence.

Then—

"No."

The word was soft. Empty.

Orin narrowed his eyes. "Then what are you?"

The figure finally moved. A slow step forward. A shift in the shadows.

"I am a remnant."

The words didn't just reach their ears. They reached through them. They echoed in the marrow of their bones, in the very air itself.

A remnant.

A piece of something that had once been whole.

Kaelith exhaled slowly. "A remnant of what?"

The figure was silent.

Then, it raised an arm. A single, gloved hand extended toward them—beckoning.

"Come."

A single word. A command.

And before anyone could stop themselves—

They stepped forward.

Crossing the Veil

It didn't feel like walking.

It felt like falling.

One moment, they were standing in the ruins. The next, the world fractured.

The sky tore. The ground shattered.

They were somewhere else.

Kaelith's breath caught. The ruins had vanished. In their place stood a vast, endless landscape of mirrors.

No sky. No ground. Just reflection.

Solrin cursed. "Where the hell—"

The figure—the remnant—stood ahead of them, its form perfectly still.

"This is the place between," it murmured. "The space where the forgotten remain."

Edrin turned, eyes wide. "This is a prison, isn't it?"

The remnant did not deny it.

Kaelith felt a chill creep down his spine.

"Why bring us here?"

The remnant finally moved.

To Kaelith's horror, it lifted a hand—

And touched its own face.

The shadows parted.

And beneath them—

There was nothing.

A hollow void. A face that had once existed, now gone.

"You do not belong," the remnant whispered.

And the mirrors cracked.

The world collapsed.

And Kaelith fell.

Not through air, not through space, but through something far worse.

The shattered mirrors became rivers of reflection, pulling him downward, swallowing him whole. He tried to move, to resist, but his body felt weightless. He wasn't just falling—he was being unmade.

A sharp pain lanced through his skull. Memories flickered.

His name. His purpose. His very existence—slipping.

"No—!"

A voice—distant, distorted—called his name.

Then, hands grabbed him.

A sudden force yanked him out of the abyss, the world snapping into focus as he collided with solid ground.

Pain bloomed across his body. Cold stone beneath him. The sharp scent of dust and damp air.

He was alive.

"Kaelith!"

He blinked. Solrin's face hovered above him, his usually radiant glow dimmed by exhaustion. Around him, the others lay sprawled, disoriented but breathing.

They had all fallen.

And yet—

The remnant was gone.

Kaelith struggled to sit up, heart still hammering. The landscape around them was… wrong. No longer the ruins, no longer the endless mirrors.

They were somewhere else.

A vast, open chamber stretched around them, its walls impossibly high. Monolithic structures loomed in the distance, their surfaces engraved with symbols that pulsed faintly with blue light. The ceiling was shrouded in mist, and from it, faint echoes of whispers drifted down like dying embers.

Edrin swore. "Where the hell are we now?"

Orin rose to his feet, gaze scanning the surroundings. "Not the ruins. Not the veil." He exhaled slowly. "We're deeper."

Kaelith wiped a hand across his face, suppressing the shiver that ran down his spine. Deeper.

Whatever that meant—it wasn't good.

Veym clicked his claws together, irritated. "Well, great. We escaped one nightmare just to get dropped into another. What's next? More things that don't bleed?"

Solrin inhaled sharply. "I don't think we're alone."

They turned.

Something moved in the mist.

Not one thing—many.

Shadows flitted between the monoliths, their shapes obscured, their movements too fluid, too silent. They weren't attacking. Not yet.

But they were watching.

Waiting.

Kaelith clenched his jaw. "We need to move."

No one argued.

The Path of Echoes

They advanced cautiously, every step sending soft echoes through the chamber. The mist curled around their feet, shifting unnaturally. It felt like a presence. Like it was listening.

As they moved, the architecture grew stranger. The monoliths twisted, their inscriptions shifting when unobserved. The floor beneath them pulsed faintly, the symbols beneath their feet flaring with soft light as if reacting to their presence.

Then—

They reached the first archway.

A towering gate stood before them, constructed from the same obsidian-like material as the monoliths. Unlike the ruins above, this structure was pristine. Untouched by time.

Edrin ran a hand along the smooth surface. "This was built. Not abandoned."

Orin studied the intricate carvings. "Built for what?"

Kaelith exhaled. He had a feeling they would find out soon enough.

The whispers grew louder.

Then—

The archway opened.

Not like a door. Not like anything built by human hands.

The space within it simply… ceased to be.

A void replaced it, swirling with fragmented reflections, distorting the chamber around it.

Kaelith's stomach twisted. This wasn't just a portal. It was a wound. A tear in reality itself.

And it was inviting them in.

Veym growled. "If you say we have to go through that thing, I swear—"

Before he could finish, the shadows that had been watching them moved.

Not toward them—away.

Fleeing.

Kaelith's blood ran cold.

If the things in this place—things that had been watching them—were retreating…

What did that say about what lay ahead?

Then, a voice—

Soft. Ancient.

"You seek answers."

It came from everywhere. From within the archway, from the whispers in the mist, from the very walls of this place.

Kaelith's breath hitched. This wasn't the remnant. This was something else.

Something older.

"Then step forward… and remember."

A command. A promise. A threat.

No one moved.

Then—

Orin took the first step.

Without hesitation, he vanished into the void.

Kaelith cursed under his breath.

Then he followed.