Amna_Talha2424

Pakistan

I like the Mc's personality but I know that too much kindness might be a thorn on his side🙁hope he gets to do what he really wants without getting betrayed🫡

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Totally something different.....but loving it ...Keep it up... The read is so easy and gooood....[img=update]

Honestly I just got hooked from the very first chapter I love everything about it highly recommend

I think the story is well written and has good Aesthetics.
The author is really, very good at Painting a vivid atmosphere with them words. They make you feel interested in how the character Act and interact with each other. 
And the story is really good, too. The kind you'd want to read in one go and not miss a single word.
Like It a lot and I do recommend reading this. 

As far as I can read, story is well writing and has a quite a bit future potential. The concept is very interesting, keep up the great work

"An excellent novel with a meticulously crafted world and vivid, immersive descriptions.

Very interesting concept with a dark and intense atmosphere. The story explores deep themes of oppression, power, and resistance. The writing quality is good, and the world-building is engaging. Keep up the great work.

Cracked Foundations is a dystopian novel exploring power struggles between the privileged Nobles and the oppressed Needies in a post-nuclear world. The protagonist, Keith Janes, begins questioning his society’s brutal traditions, leading to rebellion and mystery. The story blends class conflict, suspense, and dark world-building.

very interested you have a good quality writing, keep up the good work

really enjoyed this! It’s fun to read, The story has great potential and will likely attract more readers soon. With consistent updates, it’s bound to do really well!

and I’m eagerly waiting for more chapters. Keep it up, Author! 😊👍

This family is wild! Love it and can’t wait for more 💜💜

okay first of the synopsis is fire 🔥, the plot is gold, the main character is very Captivating, I like the ☺️the world you've built here I'm actually really interested in it and I feel it will inspire me ☺️good work.

Wow, this is an amazing novel. Kudos to the writer.

great story writing I've only been reading the first chapter and it already got me hooked

Interesting world building, your MC is actually one of a kind. Keep it up

Keith is interesting character in this story. He is soft hearted but he is not clingy as he is not afraid of losing his family ties based on doing something his mind agrees. He does not care what others say and these kind of personalities are rare to see in this world. I am seeing the future of this novel in which any fan reader can predict that keith is going to become a manipulator and his mind games are soon going to get all monsters trapped in their web! Good story 👍🏼 Waiting for the next chapters! It gives an epic feeling how Keith belongs to the Nobles but he’s soft hearted towards the Needies at the same time 

This is so interesting story 🤔 and I'm excited for next chapter leader of this u made it so nice I love it and I'm waiting for next and I'm so speechless that who made such an creative story this Novel I don't know what to say it's so so creative I want more novel of this it is so good leader  u made my day ❤️ 

I am giving 5 star... the author storytelling ability is exceptional.... each chapter left me wanting more.. the writing quality, story development and character design is captivating 🥰

Okay, so I have been unable to read the next chapter of this story. And the reason is, no matter how I try to view it, it is showing that you have zero chapters uploaded. More then likely it is an issue with the site at the current moment. But, I just figured that I would let you know about it.