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This is my first novel. If you are seeing similarities to Shadow Slave, it is because of the novel I had begun writing. Some of the stuff may come off as an info dump, but please be patient with me.
I will continue to expand the worldbuilding as I have a goal in mind for the main character.
I will try to update once a week, or just upload a chapter I had in a draft if I am swamped with school.
I would appreciate some criticism as this would allow me to grow as a writer. (The pacing is too slow, expand on more side characters or just in general. Things like that would be appreciated.)
Things like if the main character is too naive will be kept the same. He is growing and will continue to do so.
The Dark Hollows arc will serve as an introduction, spanning from chapters 3-18.
Then from there, I will slowly build up the main character.
The main character is seen as a weak coward and I want to make him as relatable as possible. I don't want to make him overpowered with no way of explaining how he got there. This will be a weak-to-strong progression, with dark fantasy elements, including gods and crime.
Thank you very much.