Chapter 2 - chapter one: remake

So I thought for a while and because the first chapter one was too rushed I will remake it.

Chapter one:to stop male domination?

The after rain scene was beautiful. The city lights illuminated everywhere the sound of cars,the beautiful tall buildings. Everything made it beautiful. Su meng however was busy listening to music to care about the world around her. A peaceful smile on her face.

But her moment of peace was cut shortly;by loud yelling in the ally she was passing by.

She immediately took out her earpiece to listen.

She saw some people yelling at an elderly woman. Her hair was messy,her clothes stinky.and from the the words that came from her mouth,one would think she was crazy. Yelling something about female domination, and novels. Su meng didn't pay attention to her, turned around and left. "Just an elderly mad woman". She thought and walked away.

About an hour later she arrived at her house.

She cooked for herself,took a bath. and layed on her bed to sleep.she thought about how lonely the house felt. She was thirty two and still single. Sometimes she thought to her self."if I lost my virginity to a stranger,got

Pregnant. And he doesn't want the kids,I can still raise them!".

She fell asleep shortly after thinking for a while. However when she woke up,it was not in her room. She found her self standing at a lake. The scenery was full of trees, with petals falling everywhere.

In front of her was the mad woman she had seen. To her shock,the madwoman instantly changed her appearance. To a young and beautiful girl. But her next words shocked her more.

"Su meng,so not be afraid. For am a goddess. I have chosen you to go and save us. By rewriting the destiny novels. And make females dominant again. Remember do not make it visible that no are not the original. This doesn't mean you can't act out of character. I will send guide system 1110 to accompany you." Su meng couldn't even ask a question or speak. She felt like she was falling, before everything went black