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The days before Kaelthar's departure felt like fleeting moments, each one slipping through his fingers like grains of sand. He had always known this day would come, yet now that it was here, he found himself clinging to every second, every laugh, every warm glance shared with his family and friends.
His home, the village of Eldoria, nestled in the valley of the Ordos mountains, was a place of peace and resilience. The streets were cobbled and well-worn by the footsteps of generations. The marketplace bustled with merchants selling fresh produce and finely crafted goods, while blacksmiths toiled in their forges, shaping weapons and tools that would serve warriors and farmers alike. It was a village where every face was familiar, every path well-trodden, and every home carried the echoes of shared history.
But Kaelthar knew that soon, he would no longer walk these streets as he once did. His path was leading him beyond Eldoria, toward a future filled with uncertainty, hardship, and—he hoped—greatness.
Day One: The Roots That Hold
The first morning dawned with the scent of dew-drenched earth and the crisp mountain air that Eldoria was known for. The sky was a brilliant blue, streaked with the soft glow of the rising sun. Birds flitted between the rooftops, singing melodies that blended with the distant hammering of a blacksmith at work.
Kaelthar spent the morning in the garden with his parents, Kaelen and Eryndor. The soil was rich beneath his fingers as he worked beside them, planting herbs and vegetables in neat rows.
"You were just a boy when you first tried to help us out here," Kaelen said, smiling fondly as she pressed a seed into the earth. "You barely managed to dig a hole without getting covered in dirt."
Eryndor chuckled, his deep voice carrying over the garden. "And let's not forget how he thought pulling up weeds meant uprooting the entire garden."
Kaelthar laughed, shaking his head. "In my defense, I was trying to help."
His mother patted his arm, her touch warm and reassuring. "And look at you now, ready to embark on a journey far greater than any of us ever imagined."
Eryndor nodded, his gaze steady. "You carry the strength of your ancestors, Kaelthar. Never forget that."
As they worked, the weight of what lay ahead pressed on Kaelthar's mind. This garden, these simple moments—they had been his life for so long. He had dreamed of adventure, of proving himself, but now that it was within reach, he felt the bittersweet sting of departure.
That evening, Myrael and Renvar arrived for dinner, their presence a welcome comfort. The table was overflowing with dishes Kaelen had prepared—roasted meats, spiced vegetables, warm bread fresh from the oven. The scent filled the house, mingling with the soft glow of candlelight.
Renvar, as always, was the life of the gathering, cracking jokes that had everyone laughing. "Kaelthar, do you think they'll let you keep that serious face of yours in the Ordos Hall? You might scare off the instructors."
Kaelthar smirked. "I think they'll appreciate someone who actually listens instead of spending all his time causing trouble."
"Hey, trouble is an art form," Renvar shot back, grinning.
Myrael, ever the composed one, rolled her eyes. "And an art form you've perfected, Renvar."
The conversation drifted into tales of their academy days, of training sessions that had left them bruised but stronger, of victories and failures alike. Myrael spoke of the lessons they had learned, her laughter light and infectious as she recalled the more embarrassing moments they had endured.
As the fire crackled in the hearth, Kaelthar found himself wishing the night would never end.
Day Two
The second day passed in a flurry of preparations. Kaelthar gathered his belongings—clothing, provisions, and a few keepsakes from home. Every item he packed felt like a piece of his old life, a tether to the place he was leaving behind.
Eryndor spent the day in his forge, the rhythmic clang of his hammer against steel echoing through the village. It was a sound Kaelthar had grown up with, a constant presence in his life. He had always admired his father's craftsmanship, the way he could shape metal into something both beautiful and deadly.
By late afternoon, Eryndor emerged from the forge, carrying a longsword wrapped in cloth. His expression was solemn as he unwrapped the blade, revealing a masterpiece of dark steel. Intricate runes ran along the fuller, glowing faintly as if they held a power of their own. The hilt was wrapped in deep blue leather, the pommel shaped like a wolf's head.
"This," Eryndor said, "is Umbrafang."
Kaelthar reached out, his fingers brushing against the cold steel. The sword was perfectly balanced, its weight settling naturally in his grasp. He could feel the craftsmanship in every inch of it, the time and dedication his father had poured into its creation.
"This blade is more than just a weapon," Eryndor continued. "It's a symbol of your strength, your courage, and the unyielding spirit that defines you. Wield it with honor, my son."
Kaelthar swallowed hard, emotion tightening his throat. "I will, Father. I promise."
That night, as they sat by the fire, the conversation grew quieter, more reflective. Myrael and Renvar stayed until late, their presence a silent reassurance that Kaelthar would never be alone in this journey.
When he finally retreated to his room, he sat on the edge of his bed, gazing out at the stars. They seemed brighter than ever, scattered across the sky like tiny beacons guiding him forward.
He clenched his fist. "Whatever comes, I won't give up."
Day Three
Dawn broke over Eldoria, painting the sky in hues of gold and crimson. The village stirred awake, but for Kaelthar, this morning was different from any before.
His pack was secured over his shoulders, Umbrafang resting at his side. His parents stood before him, their expressions a mix of pride and sorrow.
Kaelen pulled him into a tight embrace. "Stay true to yourself, my son."
Eryndor clasped his shoulder. "And remember, strength is not just in the sword, but in the heart that wields it."
Renvar clapped him on the back, grinning. "Don't let those Ordos knights knock the fun out of you."
Myrael, ever composed, simply met his gaze. "You've got this."
A knock at the door signaled the arrival of the Ordos royal guard. The armored figure stood tall, his presence commanding. "Kaelthar, it's time."
Kaelthar turned to his family one last time. "I'll make you proud."
The journey to Ordos Hall passed in a blur. The towering fortress loomed ahead, its banners rippling in the wind.
Inside, the hall was vast, its stone walls adorned with the crests of warriors who had come before him. The air was thick with discipline and purpose. Kaelthar's footsteps echoed as he walked forward, his grip tightening on Umbrafang.
Nerves threatened to creep in, but he forced them down. He had made a promise—to himself, to his family, to everyone who believed in him.
His voice was firm as he whispered, "I will never give up."
And so, with the first step taken, Kaelthar's training with the Ordos began. The journey ahead would test him in ways he could not yet fathom, but he would face it all with an unyielding will.
For this was only the beginning.