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Jin Mo took a steady breath, tightening his grip on his sword. The pack of dire wolves encircled him, their glowing red eyes locked onto him with predatory focus. Their sharp fangs gleamed under the moonlight, low growls reverberating through the clearing.
A few paces away, the Dire Wolf King watched in silence, its intelligent golden gaze analyzing him like a seasoned hunter.
Behind Jin Mo, his father stood with his arms crossed, his expression unreadable.
"Survive," his father commanded, his voice calm yet firm. "Prove yourself."
Jin Mo exhaled slowly.
Twenty wolves.
They weren't attacking recklessly. They were testing him, their instincts warning them that this human was different.
His eyes flickered as he summoned his status window.
User Info
Name: Jin Mo
Level: 15 [1,100/15,000 EXP]
Race: High Human
Class: Death Apostle
Titles: The Rebirth of the Death Apostle, Blessed by the Five Gods, The Unyielding Sovereign
Nyx Coins: 1,100 NC
Health: 15,000/15,000
Qi: 500/500
Stats Stamina: 49
Qi: 50
Strength: 48
Agility: 46
Vitality: 50
Intelligence: 38
Perception: 34
Luck: 16
Stat Points Available: 95
Jin Mo swiftly allocated his points.
+10 Perception
+10 Agility
+10 Strength
+10 Stamina
Power surged through his body, his muscles tightening as his senses sharpened. His heartbeat steadied, his breathing controlled.
For the first time since arriving in this world, he was unleashing his potential.
A deep growl rumbled through the pack.
An alpha wolf lunged.
Jin Mo reacted instantly.
He sidestepped, pivoting on his heel as his sword flashed. A clean strike severed the wolf's throat, a spray of crimson painting the ground.
Another beast pounced from his left—he ducked low, rolling forward before driving his blade into its ribs. A sharp yelp, then silence.
The remaining wolves hesitated.
But instinct overruled caution.
They lunged.
Jin Mo dashed toward an opening, his sword carving through flesh as another wolf fell. Blood splattered his clothes, but he ignored it, his focus razor-sharp.
The fight was relentless.
White Tiger Blade (3 Stars)
White Tiger Steps (2 Stars)
His father watched, an eyebrow lifting in approval.
Three wolves attacked in unison.
Jin Mo twisted, narrowly avoiding a set of snapping jaws. He slashed at the second wolf, but the third managed to rake its claws across his shoulder.
Ding!
-500 Health
[14,500/15,000]
Pain flared through his body, but he gritted his teeth.
He couldn't afford to falter.
Another attack.
Ding!
-500 Health
[14,000/15,000]
His movements grew sharper, more precise. His past life's experience merged seamlessly with his honed instincts.
Wolves fell, one after another.
Then, a deep, guttural growl rumbled through the battlefield.
Jin Mo looked up.
The Dire Wolf King stood, its golden eyes locked onto him, flanked by two massive Alpha Dire Wolves.
The real battle was about to begin.
Blood dripped from Jin Mo's blade. His breath was heavy, his body aching from accumulated wounds.
But instead of fear, a smirk played at his lips.
"Bring it on."
He activated his final set of skills.
Hunter's Instinct (2 Stars)
Beast Slayer Arts (1 Star)
His aura sharpened, his mind attuned to the rhythm of battle. He could sense the wolves' movements before they even happened.
The final wave of wolves surged forward.
Jin Mo met them head-on.
His blade cut through flesh, his footwork perfect, his strikes lethal. He danced between the enemies like a phantom of death.
One by one, they collapsed.
As the last wolf fell lifelessly to the ground, Jin Mo staggered slightly. His chest rose and fell with each breath, exhaustion setting in. His body was covered in cuts and bruises, his energy drained.
But he had survived.
The Dire Wolf King took a step forward, its massive frame casting a shadow over him.
Jin Mo tightened his grip on his sword.
The real fight was just beginning.