Papelon_Biswas

Bangladesh

<p>Sorry guys.. I wrote nearly 100 Chapters but got rejected by Web Novel authority.. </p>

<p>Good Bye... Thank you all for reading.</p>

ummm...I think you need to put the quotation marks at the dialogue to make it become clearer, and also...try to make the story a show rather then a tell, if you can... but overall, it's the writing the problem, if you managed to correct it, then it will be improved.

I liked this book as it has a good way to take you through a fantastic journey... Keep adding the chapters...

The Black Shadow Soul Hunter

Table of contents

Volume 1

Chapter 1 - Farewell