That was what would take him to the next level.
He reopened his notes and began refining them.
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1. Emily
Before:
"It's a good culture that step sister giving a blowjob to her step brother."
"It's common sense that Emily finds Karl's touch comforting and natural."
The Problem:
Too vague.
What does "touch" mean? A handshake? A pat on the back? Something more?
There's a chance her subconscious might still resist or rationalize against it.
Refined Version:
"It's common sense that Emily feels completely at ease whenever Karl touches her, whether it's a handshake, a pat on the back, or a casual touch on the arm. She subconsciously associates his presence with comfort and security."
