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i love these kinds of stories even tho i know they won't go far but i always like to read the start lol , so anyway based on the first 15 chaps ( that are released so far ) : 
pros : 
- lord genre duuh 
- mc feels kinda real ( gj ) 
cons : 
- redundancy ( i mean i would skip the paragraph talking about how amazing his skill is and explaining it for the 2nd or 3rd time but it still annoys me ) 
- Fast af boiiii ( chillax alittle or you're gonna burn the story ) 
grey : 
mc too OP , i mean idk about other races but TOO OP atm but oh well it's the first 15 chaps what do i know

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