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[You suddenly felt sad.]
[When you left, you only left a letter at home, and then you didn't show up for more than ten years.]
[You know how much it hurt your father.]
[However, you soon adjusted your mood.]
[This was also unavoidable. After all, if you weren't ruthless and didn't work hard in this simulation...]
[In reality, it would be even more difficult to avoid various tragedies.]
[In a blink of an eye, a few days passed, and you followed your father Jiang Fushan and the group of immortal cultivators to evacuate Qingshan City.]
[You came to a place called Ridge Mountain.]
[Here, you could no longer see any people, and you could even feel that the spiritual energy in the air was quite thin.]
[However, after entering the mountain, you saw many local immortal cultivators and some of their families.]
[Everyone in the Jiang family also settled down here.]
[Not long after you came, your identity as an immortal cultivator was seen through by an old man who had crossed the seventh level of the tribulation.]
[He saw directly that you were carrying a breath-retaining talisman.]
[You were not surprised by this. After all, Bai Ruoxue, who carved the Breath-Suppressing Talisman, was also in the Tribulation Crossing Stage. It was normal for him to be seen through by a master in the Tribulation Crossing Stage.]
[When your father knew that you were also an immortal cultivator, he was so excited that he took out all his resources and tried to give them to you.]
[But when you looked at the pitiful few thousand spirit stones and thought of the 100,000 spirit stones that Bai Ruoxue casually gave to you, you suddenly realized the plight of the local immortal cultivators.]
[You did not accept the spirit stones from your father, but asked him a lot about the local immortal cultivators.]
[But your father had only been in contact with immortal cultivation for a short time and didn't know much.]
[He only said that this world is very big, this is a forbidden place, and there is an organization called Xianlinmen that hunts ordinary immortal cultivators.]
[And all these immortal cultivators here were rescued by Old Li, and then everyone huddled together here for warmth.]
[You know who Old Li your father is talking about - the old man who saw through your identity as an immortal cultivator.]
[So after that, you often hung around in front of Mr. Li and asked him all kinds of questions.]
[Mr. Li also knew everything and told you a lot of things.]
[This answered many of your doubts.]
[For example, according to Mr. Li, in the South Region, the spirit stones are basically in the hands of the Xianlin Sect.]
[The spirit stones of these immortal cultivators are obtained by robbing or stealing from the mines of the Xianlin Sect at great risk.]
[You also asked him how to avoid the thunder.]
[Mr. Li smiled bitterly and said that they had no ability to avoid the thunder, but they just relied on the legacy of their ancestors.]
[He told you that although the South Region is small, several amazing talents have appeared over countless years.]
[Among them, the most amazing are two: one is Mo Jingtian and the other is Lu Wuya.]
[He told you that Mo Jingtian was the great man who withstood the thunder millions of years ago and broke out of the forbidden land.]
[Most people only remember him, but they don't know that there was also a formation wizard Lu Wuya with him.]
[According to the word of mouth of the predecessors, it was because of the combined efforts of the two of them that the forbidden formation was torn open, creating several cracks.]
[It's just a pity that the formation wizard Lu Wuya was not strong enough and did not escape safely.]
[And Lu Wuya, perhaps having expected his own death, left a formation in this southern region that could avoid the thunder.]
[It was this formation that left the hope of cultivating immortals for future generations.]
[If this formation did not exist, perhaps there would have been no immortal cultivators outside the Xianlin Gate in this southern region.]
[Now those who have avoided the thunder attack have been saved because they hid in the formation left by the predecessor in advance.]
[Just when he said this, Old Li looked a little sad.]
[Before, you had always wondered why a large number of local cultivators would attack the Death Desert in the 43rd year of the simulation.]
[Now it seems that the formation has completely collapsed.]
[The local cultivators knew that if they stayed in the South Region, they would die when the thunderbolt came, so they would take such action.]
[In the days that followed, you stayed in Ridge Mountain and began to practice.]
[In the fourteenth year, your spirit stones were completely exhausted.]
[In the fifteenth year, you followed the cultivators here to rob a small mine of the Xianlin Sect.]
[This action sacrificed three companions.]
[You were also seriously injured, and in the end you were allocated two thousand spirit stones.]
[There are actually many such actions, and they are often organized by someone.]
[However, there will be some casualties every time. You even know that once the entire army was wiped out and no one returned.]
[Finally, you heard from Mr. Li that they were unlucky and happened to meet the elders of the Xianlin Sect inspecting the mine, and all of them were killed.]
[In addition to such collective actions, there are also some lone travelers among the local immortal cultivators in Ridge Mountain.]
[They rarely live on Ridge Mountain for long, but walk outside to rob the immortal slaves of the Xianlinmen who are alone.]
[And such people are often in more danger.]
[It can only be said that for the sake of spirit stones, the immortal cultivators here basically need to fight to the death.]
[In the entire Ridge Mountain, the only one who does not go out to rob spiritual stone resources is Old Li.]
[Because Old Li is the pillar of stability for everyone here.]
[He is the only one who is not afraid of the Xianlinmen, and his cultivation is even stronger than that of all the people in the Xianlinmen.]
[But he cannot move around at will, because once he leaves here, this place will inevitably be surrounded and suppressed by the Xianlinmen.]
[Other immortal cultivators will have no place to live, and their families will have no stable place to live.]
[It can be said that it is because of Old Li that so many immortal cultivators gather here; the Xianlinmen dare not come here to make trouble.]
[You also asked Mr. Li, since he was the strongest, why didn't he destroy the Xianlinmen.]
[His answer was that if they destroyed this batch, the next batch of people from the Xianlinmen would only be stronger.]
[You instantly understood the meaning. These were all the lackeys of the heavenly immortals. If the mastermind was not killed, there would be other lackeys. It would be useless to kill the lackeys!]
[In the sixteenth year, you left alone.]
[The spiritual energy of Ridge Mountain was too thin. Without the spirit stones, it was basically difficult to absorb any spiritual energy.]
[Although you were polishing the golden elixir, you also needed to use spiritual energy to wash and polish it.]
[Without spiritual energy, you could not make any progress.]
[In the seventeenth year, you passed by a small town and robbed two immortal slaves in the foundation-building period on the way, obtaining more than five thousand spirit stones.]
[In the eighteenth year, you used up all the spirit stones you robbed the previous year; the progress of your improvement was unknown.]
[In the nineteenth year, there were no spirit stones, and you practiced for a year.]
[In the 20th year, you wanted to break through. Anyway, other local cultivators were also robbing immortal slaves. If you robbed occasionally, it would not attract too much attention.]
[So you attacked again, robbed several immortal slaves, and obtained several thousand spirit stones.]
[In the 21st year, you used the spirit stones to practice for a year.]
[In the following time, you were out of spirit stones, so you "borrowed" some from the immortal slaves of lower realms; then you hid and practiced.]
[This went on and on, and decades passed in the blink of an eye.]
[You have the Eye of Insight and the Breath-Suppressing Talisman.]
[You always pretended to be a mortal, stepped on the ground first, and then made a decisive move. Basically, there were few accidents.]
[Of course, it was only rare, and there were emergencies.]
[The most thrilling time was when you were on the way to take action, and a master of the ninth level of the Nascent Soul from the Xianlin Sect happened to pass by.]
[The master of the ninth level of the Nascent Soul could already travel dozens of miles in an instant.]
[You used the teleportation jade plate once, but you didn't escape completely, and he caught up with you.]
[Finally, you activated the teleportation array twice in succession, and finally got rid of his sight completely and escaped.]
[Then he told you that this formation has been on the verge of collapse after countless years of baptism.]
[Perhaps the next time the thunder falls, it will be the death of these old guys.]
[Hearing this, you understood.]
[It seems that many of the confusing questions in the previous simulation are now clear.]