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"Kaiton, Hokage-sama and Hashirama-sama have invited you over. They asked me to tell you that everything is ready."
After delivering the message, the mysterious figure disappeared in an instant.
Kaiton, slightly startled by the young voice, noticed the messenger's mysterious demeanor. The figure, clad in an animal mask, exuded secrecy. Despite his curiosity, Kaiton didn't linger on the messenger's identity.
Hearing the news, Kaiton quickly made his way toward the Senju clan grounds, his heart racing with anticipation. He had a vague idea of the purpose behind the summons, and his face lit with excitement.
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When Kaiton arrived at Shinzuru's house, he entered the living room with familiarity. There, he saw Hashirama and Tobirama seated, their expressions a mix of pride and satisfaction.
Kaiton stepped forward eagerly, his excitement evident as he asked:
"Grandpa Hashirama, Grandpa Tobirama, has that ninjutsu really worked?"
Seeing Kaiton's enthusiasm, Hashirama laughed heartily and clapped him on the shoulder. "Kaiton, your idea turned out to be a truly remarkable one!"
Kaiton scratched the back of his head sheepishly, a grin spreading across his face.
After Kaiton shared his idea months ago, Tobirama immediately dragged Hashirama away from his usual gambling to discuss the concept in detail. The two brothers agreed it was worth pursuing, and they retreated to Tobirama's secret experimental lab to begin the research.
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Half a Year of Research
For six grueling months, they worked tirelessly, using Hashirama's cells as the foundation. Tobirama conducted thousands of experiments, fine-tuning the process. Eventually, they succeeded in creating a special type of chakra that could enhance cellular vitality.
This chakra was pale gold in color, created by mixing physical and spiritual energy in a unique ratio. However, it wasn't without limitations:
1. It couldn't be used for normal ninjutsu or elemental techniques.
2. It required a high level of chakra control, akin to what a skilled medic-nin could achieve.
3. Most importantly, the chakra was non-transferable. Each person could only use the chakra they created.
Despite these challenges, the technique showed promise. Tobirama and Hashirama personally tested it, confirming that while it increased cellular vitality, the improvement was modest—about 1% at most.
This seemingly minor enhancement, however, had profound effects on Hashirama. The technique slowed his biological clock, extending his lifespan slightly, though it couldn't completely heal him.
Hashirama, ever optimistic, shrugged off the results. "Tobirama, don't worry about me. Death comes for us all. It's better to live happily and cherish the time we have."
Tobirama, pragmatic as ever, set aside his disappointment and promptly summoned Kaiton to share the results.
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Kaiton's Experiment
Under Hashirama and Tobirama's watchful eyes, Kaiton began the experiment. Following Tobirama's instructions, he carefully mixed his physical and spiritual energy in the prescribed ratio.
Sweat beaded on Kaiton's forehead as he concentrated, his chakra control stretched to its limits. Slowly, a pale golden chakra began to coalesce within him, forming into a glowing sphere.
Kaiton guided the sphere throughout his body. As it passed through his cells, they seemed to awaken, eagerly absorbing the golden chakra. A wave of unprecedented comfort and vitality surged through him.
When the sphere finally disappeared, Kaiton felt as though his entire body had undergone a transformation. His strength had increased noticeably.
Excited, he immediately refined his normal chakra and was stunned to discover a significant change: his chakra reserves had grown by 1%. The implications were staggering—if this growth was consistent, he could potentially double his chakra reserves within days!
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A New Discovery
Kaiton eagerly shared the news with Hashirama and Tobirama, who were equally astonished.
After examining Kaiton, Hashirama raised a hypothesis: "Could it be that this chakra is more effective on younger individuals like Kaiton?"
Tobirama agreed. While the results were limited for adults, they seemed miraculous for someone Kaiton's age. This discovery reignited Tobirama's research spirit. He proposed monitoring Kaiton's progress over time to better understand the chakra's potential.
Kaiton, ever eager to help, readily agreed.
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Recognition and Reward
Hashirama, smiling warmly, turned to Kaiton. "Since we're decided, I'll ensure this technique is recorded in the Sealed Scroll of Forbidden Jutsu. Kaiton, as one of its co-creators, you'll have the right to teach it as you see fit."
Kaiton hesitated, feeling undeserving of such recognition. "Grandpa Hashirama, I only provided the idea. You and Grandpa Tobirama did all the hard work."
Hashirama waved off his protest. "Don't be so modest, Kaiton. By the way..." His expression turned sheepish as he scratched his head. "Do you remember the bet we made when this all started? I just remembered it now!"
Kaiton blinked in surprise. "A bet?"
Hashirama chuckled. "I promised you a reward if this ninjutsu worked. So, tell me—what do you want? Name it, and it's yours!"
Kaiton tried to decline, insisting that the successful development of the technique was reward enough. But Hashirama was adamant.
After some thought, Hashirama had an idea. "Wait here!"
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The Summoning Scroll
Biting his thumb, Hashirama performed a series of hand seals before slamming his palm onto the ground. A puff of white smoke filled the room, and when it cleared, a large slug stood before them.
"Meet Katsuyu," Hashirama said with a grin. "Katsuyu, bring out the Summoning Scroll."
"Yes, Lord Hashirama."
The slug opened its mouth, producing a massive scroll. Hashirama unrolled it and beckoned Kaiton forward.
"Kaiton, sign your name here. From now on, you'll be able to summon Katsuyu to aid you in battle."
Though surprised, Kaiton followed Hashirama's instructions, biting his finger and writing his name at the bottom of the scroll. Katsuyu bowed slightly.
"It is an honor to work with you, Lord Kaiton," the slug said.
"Please take care of me, Katsuyu," Kaiton replied, his heart swelling with gratitude.
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A New Path
With the cell enhancement technique mastered and a powerful new ally by his side, Kaiton felt a renewed sense of purpose. He vowed to continue honing his skills and pushing the boundaries of what was possible.
As he left the Senju grounds that day, Kaiton couldn't help but smile. The future was bright, and he was ready to face it head-on.
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