I'm coming back here just to hammer the point home again: I was rereading this story and it didn't satisfy me, I think I could rewrite it better. So by tomorrow morning, I'll go for one of two options:
1) I'll delete all the chapters and re-release new, updated chapters with changes to the story and script.
Or
2) I'll divide it between "Old version" and "New version" in 2 different volumes! Choose 1 of the options, because regardless of this, I'll redo this story because I don't like it that much.