As i reread what i wrote i have come to a conclusion that I rushed things things that in my mind are the foundation for mc motives
Like I wrote that he is mad he is telling not showing witch I think it's my fault for my lack of creativity and complexity and for the fact that I did not have any end gol for this no road map I wrote what I was thinking and that's it .Why am I saying all of this its because I will remake it .
Thanks for reading .