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9 Stages of Hell

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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: Limbo

The vast deep cycle of hell.. dante's 9 Stages of HELL.. called Limbo, Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Wrath, Heresy, Fraud and Treachery.. with different parts of cycle of it.. deeper you go.. the cirlce shrinks..

Limbo the first circle, where all souls that are not baptized.. or people in the old testament that had commited common sins.. are driven to god's love and light.

Suddenly a random Teenager fell into Limbo, Blackish-Grey Hair.. Black eyes.. and wears a Jacket.. named..

VEROCIUS TERGIA

"What the..?--"

He was surprised when he fell because it was very sudden.

Verocius fell very hard with a large thud, making him stumble in the ground, his legs shaking.

"Ouch.. ouch.. it hurts.."

He said with immense pain while laying on the ground.

"That fall was brutal.. any normal person would die from it.."

He spoke while still trembling, struggling to get back up from his feet.

Verocius didn't know where he was, because he suddenly fell into the new world that awaits him..

"Gosh.. good thing i didn't break my ankle or my feet.."

He said getting up while his legs still shaking from the impact.

"Where am i anyays..?, this isn't earth.."

He questioned in his mind, while he looks around..

Tall big mountains that arrange very high like the great Alps, and the sky being darkish-red.. and so does the clouds.. Verocius looked around with caution, seeing many old people around in the old testament..

"Huh..? This is a weird place.. i fell down here.. was it a accident..?"

He questioned in his mind again, trying to know what happened before he fell suddenly in the new world.

"It looks like hell to me.. because of the red clouds and sky.."

He already figured it out in his mind, but hes still confused.

He walks through Limbo, he looked around while scratching his back.. he sees many people he doesn't know that on the Old testament..

"Maybe i should go ask some people on where am i..?"

He said on his thoughts.. thinking on asking the people on where he really is he.

He walks through the roads of Limbo, dirt with small stones being the paveway..

"Anyways.. I'm just going to ask a person or so..!, i need to get out of here!.."

He said wanting to get out of the world, but he doesn't know... that this world was now going to be his OWN hell..

He spoke to every single person and they all replied..

"I don't know." In hebrew language, greek language, persian language, Egyptian language..

Verocius didn't know what they we're saying so he just sat down, while looking up in the red sky with red clouds..

"This is going to be rough.."

He said that he knows that it's going to be rough knowing on how to understand their language..

Verocius stands up with determination after minutes of sitting on the rock, and he clenches his fists..

"I'll just be brave and determined!, i will never give up!.."

He stood straight, determined on to escape the place on where he is standing on now..

He walked through limbo, asking the same questions..

"How to get out of here..?"

He spoke towards every person..

But they keep saying..

"I don't know." In every language in the middle east, on the old times.

Then he walks towards a man.. that has horns.. and has deep red eyes.. that looks like a devil.. and is working as a digger.

"He has horns.. wait.. is he.. a demon..?"

He clarified the man in the distance while sweating slightly, because it was the first time Verocius saw a demon in his own eyes..

"Man!, flip this!, I'm going to risk it!!.."

He walked towards the man bravely..

"Uhm.. excuse me sir.. do you know how to get out of here..?"

The man tilts his head towards Verocius, and his red glare scares Verocius..

"Why.. are you destined.. to know..?"

The man said with a devilish tone towards Verocius..

Verocius was sweating profusely and keeping some distance towards the man as the man glares at him, Verocius getting terrified in the mans appearance..

"I.. just wanted the answer.. on how do i get--"

PENETRATE

Verocius suddenly got penetrated into the brain of a sudden Tenticle.. which is called..

TENTICLE OF HELL..

Verocius was still alive after getting penetrated into the brain..

"Wh.. what the.."

Many Demon eyes glares at Verocius, mocking him.. saying..

"YOU'LL NEVER GET OUT."

And the Tenticles of Hell pointing at Verocius ready to strike.. and brutally end his life..

AAARRRGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Verocius screamed in pain.. helpless.. just wanted to know on how to get out.. but the demons clarified.. that there is no out of HELL.

"Gah!..--"

Verocius woke up in his exact spot on where he died.. with terror on his face.. traumatized.. and can fell his pain..

"Wh-what the hell just happened..? Did i die..?, thats insane pain!!.."

He spoke through his thoughts, the pain he went through was truely Hell..

He stands up his boots shaking as he stands up.. and he sits near a rock to chill himself with deep breaths..

But eventually.. he instantly realized that it really truely.. is HELL.. and the place.. was LIMBO...

"Gosh.. what the heck was that experience..?!"

As he takes slow breaths as he talks in his mind.. slightly afraid of the Hell hes going to get through..

"It hurts!!-- my Mentality!!.."

Every deaths he takes.. it breaks his mental state, he got revived because in hell.. everyone suffers.

After a couple of minutes he stood back up and he swifts off the dirt in his jacket, and still traumatized and not wanting to get over through it again.. because hes terrified.

He walks through the dirt road of Limbo.. still scared of whats going on.. many thoughts in his head..

"How did i fall here..?"

"I don't wanna die..!"

"Help me!!.."

He tilted his head on the left side.. seeing many people working and most of them are normal people from the old testament.. but he is still alarmed of the demon that killed him..

He bumped into a man, he was still scared so Verocius backed away..

The man.. with white beard.. and old clothes and wearing a robe.. named..

MOSES

With majestic appearance.. tall stature.. and dignified appearance.. he looked at Verocius..

"What shall you want..?"

Moses said with Expressive eyes.. and calm voice..

Verocius takes a deep breath.. and he gains confidence and is not afraid anymore.. and he walks up to moses..

"Who are you..?"

Verocius said curiously..

"I.. am Moses.. i am a righteous follower of god.. i came down here to see the people.."

Moses said calmly as he looks around the people that are un-baptized and doesn't have faith in Christ..

"I see.."

Verocius said also looking around calmly with moses..

"I guess my time is off.. i'll be seeing you soon child.."

Moses disspates like a shining star as he entered heaven..

Verocius waved goodbye at moses.. and now hes all by himself again.. and he walks around the dirt road of Limbo as he walks curiously and alerted..

He spots a house on a tall mountain.. and he looks up with the mountain ranging very high.. Verocius knocked on the door.. but no one answered..

So Verocius quietly opened the door to the house..

"Excuse me.."

He said respectfully even though there is no single person on the house..

The house was dark and only had some candles on the floor or in the rocks.. he grabbed a paper from his pocket.. as he stored it from his pocket before he fell..

BEFORE VEROCIUS FELL INTO LIMBO

"Yo bro!, you wanna hangout after school?"

Verocius said with his friend.

"Nah bro, i got something to do man.. probably next time i'll hangout!"

His friend said calmly.

"Aw man.. but alright! It's fine!!.."

Verocius said smiling towards his friend..

After school..

Verocius packed his bags.. and he was on his way home.. his paper was on his pocket.. and his ballpen was on his other pocket also.. but he dropped his bag to check if theres anything thats missing.. but suddenly..

Verocius fell into Limbo.

Current time

Verocius started writing his experience, as his hobby is writing and making novels.. and he puts a candle on the table and he keeps writing..

"Today, i suddenly fell in this hell.."

And Verocius wrote for an hour.. until he stops and puts his ballpen on the paper's side.. and feels something on his back..

Poke

Verocius was scared on to turn around.. and is sweating profusely again.. and doesn't wanna die again.. he just wanted to escape the hell already..

Many devil eyes in his back made Verocius have chills on his spine.. and the eyes telling him..

"Look back."

"Look behind you."

"Look on your back.."

Verocius didn't want to look back.. he puts his hands on his face and is getting chills everytime..

The suddenly..

Pfoof..

The candle is out.. and there was nothing but darkness around Verocius.. there was no hope..

TKSSHH..

Verocius was Penetrated on the back by the Tenticles of Hell.. and his cycle of hell begins right now..