TheAngelLives

Evangeline, The Angle Who was about to enter the Gate of Connection between heaven and hell  but before she could do so, she saw a couple of Warrior Angels flying towards her and can reach her in just a monent and seeing them flying, Evangeline too felt an urge to fly and just then beautiful white wings came out of her spine and she reached the Gate of Connection by flying but not before getting hit by an arrow on her right leg below her ass although she had seen who it was that harmed her but she had already entered the gate of connection.

"AND THE SWEET LITTLE ANGLE COULDN'T KEEP HER EYES OFF THE DEVIL"

India

I like that it's fast paced but it's too fast paced?
For example, in chapter 1 she is just walking in 'heaven' then suddenly her friends are mentioned without a transitional portion.

Then when Liza answered for Ava, the latter was mentioned to be angry but the outcome of that line was skipped.

Chapter 2 & 3 was generally okay compared to 1, imo

But I get a massive whiplash with the lack of punctuation marks (or maybe I'm just used to seeing it).
Though technically your paragraph-like sentences are connected, the vibe of the writing seems off.

But ngl I do like the story. I'm a sucker for devil x angel stories! Ohohoho when he kissed her hand~ 😌

(I'm sorry for giving a detailed review... if it's bothersome please delete it 😥)

This is a good novel about an angel and devil while it may be too fast phased but it is good as well because now I don't have to wait for 50 or so chapters to see them married or even kiss haha but I hope the author will upload more regularly from now on because I can see potential in it!! thank you.

Shamelessly gave myself 5 stars becuase I think my novel is good and plus its angel x devil revenge story which I love!  I love Lucifer too hopefully others will see what a gem my novel is.......bye

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