"Strip."he ordered with his bass voice and without any hesitation I did.
I took of my clothes and he smirked with satisfactory and lust. I could feel his crispy eyes piercing through me.
"Get on the bed and Lay on your stomach. "He ordered and I got on the bed and closed my eyes.
He then took off his clothes and climbed on the bed and he thrusted deeply and I shrieked in pain.
He then deepened his d**k as he fastened his pace.
"Mhhhhmmmm aahhhh?!!" I moaned as he thrusted. Each thrust was like a needle and I felt like hitting him.
He then stopped and started trailing kisses on my back and his d**k was still in me.
"YOU ARE NOW MINE!"he smirked
"Mmmh. "I moaned and he smirked .
"I'll make sure you moan my name."he said his voice deep and he thrusted harder and harder.
"Ahhhhh, devil
"Ouch!??
"Please sto..p please."I begged ,I felt sweat and he was still going and I fell unconscious.
He then looked at him with a mischievous smirk and he removed his d..k .
It's the first ever a woman made him c...um and he loved it.
He called a maid to change her clothes and he sent the money to her using her phone
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5 YEARS LATER
Here's a rewritten version of the passage with some suggestions for improvement:
Ava's eyes lingered on her mother's picture, the pain of the past still etched in her memory. Her hopes of saving her mother had been shattered, leaving an unhealable wound. But when Jordan was born, Ava's hopes were rekindled. She gazed at her son's peaceful face as he slept.
Jordan stirred, sitting up straight as he looked at Ava. "Mom, when are we going to see Daddy? I want to see my father," he asked, his innocent eyes sparkling with curiosity.
Ava's heart skipped a beat as she struggled to find the right words. "We'll meet him soon, honey," she muttered, trying to sound reassuring.
Jordan pouted, his lower lip jutting out. "Mom, when are we going to see him? Every day, I dream of having a father."
Ava felt a surge of guilt wash over her. How could she deny her son the chance to know his father? But the truth was, Jordan's father was no ordinary man. He was a monster, a devil who had shattered Ava's world.
His name was whispered in fear: DEATH.