Ive got some feedback, which means I have to go back to the drawing board! Although I'm very happy with the book, new opinions is always greatly appreciated. Lmk if you are interested by commenting! :)
Exert!
Alex sank beneath the sprawling branches of a massive oak, its gnarled roots grounding him to the present. He pulled out his phone with trembling hands, the weight of his second chance pressing down on him. Opening his notes, he began to jot down his plan, each item a step toward ensuring this life would be different. [Resources Needed - Initial Plan]Wood, Stone, Iron, Coal, Thatch [Food Resources - List]Meat, Vegetables, Salt, Vitamin Pills [Weapon, Armor, etc.]Swords, Hatchets, Plate Armor, Chain Mail [Auxiliary]Medicines This time, Alex vowed, nothing would be left to chance. Every decision, every resource, would be carefully calculated. Yet as he stared at his plan, an uneasy feeling crept in. He could almost hear the clock ticking, his window to prepare was closing fast.