1.Is the Story a little to fast paced
2.Where should wake up
I think Central City is a good place, but Gotham is a great start point.
3.Who should be the female Lead
The Romance is going to be quite a bit later in the story, but I still want to ask for your opinion.
I think Raven is a good choice, but who would be your choice.
4.Why is it so difficult to write a Villain.
I want him to work for the Villains, but I can't Image him doing that.