The clanking of spears on shields echoed through the streets, a rhythmic, primal beat that swelled like an oncoming storm.
"Gahkar Daenys! Gahkar Daenys! Gahkar Daenys!"
The chant burst forth in waves, bouncing off the stone walls of the city. It grew louder with each repetition, a cacophony that rang like thunder. Spears slammed against shields in defiance, the sound reverberating high into the air. The warriors of Estil raised their voices, their cries resounding with raw desperation and fervor.
On a nearby tower, Tasha raised herself above the chaos, her sickle catching the dim light of the overcast sky. Her voice cut through the uproar, clear and commanding.
"Fight for the birth of a new Gahkar!" she shouted. "Rise and join her! Stand and fight!"
Daenys's jaw clenched. Damn Tasha. She hadn't asked for this title, and certainly not here, not now. But it was too late to stop it. The warriors had latched onto the idea with the fervor of zealots. In their eyes, she was already Gahkar, a beacon to rally around in the growing storm of the enemy's approach.
Her fingers tightened on her bow. She had no choice but to carry their faith now, even if it weighed on her shoulders like iron chains.
The rumble of hooves grew louder. The Astad cavalry had finally arrived.
The sound thundered through the city, a relentless drumbeat that seemed to shake the very cobblestones beneath their feet. It began as a distant murmur, but now it swelled into a deafening roar, the rhythm steady and unyielding. Horses' hooves struck stone like a hammer against an anvil, echoing through the streets until it consumed all other sounds.
At the head of the formation, a knight rode tall atop a chestnut mare, the animal's powerful legs propelling it forward with deadly grace. His polished white-scalemail shimmered in the pale sunlight, marred only by streaks of dirt and blood. A crimson plume crowned his helm, and his pauldrons jutted out, making his already imposing frame appear monstrous. The sigil of Astad—a black crescent moon slashed with five jagged lines—was etched boldly across his chest.
He raised his voice, projecting over the noise of the charge.
"The foundation of your so-called civilization is nothing but flesh and bone—fragile, breakable! We of Astad are beyond such weakness!"
Daenys's stomach churned at his words, but she refused to show it. Instead, she barked orders, her voice sharp and unyielding.
"Form up! Cover the weak points in the line—pair up and protect each other! Archers, stay at the rear! Fire only when I loose the first arrow!"
"Aye!" came the response, loud and unified. "The spears of Estil are ready!"
She raised her bow, the string taut beneath her fingers. The tremor in her hands betrayed the nerves she fought to suppress.
Tasha stepped closer to the frontlines, her voice defiant as the ground beneath them trembled. "Reavers will handle the wyvern when it shows its face! Keep those arrows flying!"
Behind her, Tengri stood calm and composed, his blade raised. "None shall pass this line, Gahkar," he said with quiet conviction. "Silence will take them before they ever reach you."
The tension in the air was thick enough to choke on. The white-scaled cavalry of Astad thundered closer, their halberds glinting in the light. The black crescent moons carved into their armor seemed to pulse, an ominous reminder of their strength.
Daenys's mind raced. Nirme's lessons came rushing back, his voice clear in her memory: The first ten beats of a battle decide its fate.
Ten.
The warriors around her tightened their grips—on spears, swords, even crude farming tools turned weapons of war. Daenys's own hands began to tremble. The arrow wavered as she pulled it back, her knuckles whitening with strain. She forced herself to steady, exhaling slowly.
Nine.
A few arrows and stones were loosed too early, sailing uselessly into the air. Behind her, the line broke in places as a handful of warriors fled. Desertion. Daenys clenched her teeth but couldn't bring herself to blame them. This was suicide. No. Stay firm. Hold.
Eight.
Murmured prayers rose from the ranks of Estil warriors. Daenys caught snatches of words carried on the wind. "Drema guide us. Drema protect us." Beside her, Tasha whispered, "Forgive me, Laila. I wish I could see you grow into a strong woman." Her hand flexed on her sickle, the blade flashing as she prepared herself.
Seven.
A guttural roar erupted above them, shaking the air. The wyvern descended, its massive wings blotting out the light as its scaled body landed with an earth-shaking crash. The emerald sheen of its hide was almost mesmerizing, if not for the rows of razor-sharp teeth bared in a guttural snarl.
Six.
Rain began to fall, the heavens opening in a sudden deluge. The dust of the streets washed away, replaced by slippery, muddy pools. Daenys's gloves soaked through, the dampness biting against her skin as she held the bowstring.
Five.
Sweat dripped down her temple as she loosed the first arrow. It was not her finest shot, but it struck one of the charging knights, embedding itself in his shoulder. The signal had been given. A hail of arrows followed, darkening the sky as they arced toward the oncoming cavalry.
Four.
The wyvern smashed into the ground near the blockade. Its rider, clad in alabaster armor, wielded a spear that gleamed even through the rain. Arrows glanced off the beast's hide as its tail whipped through the air, scattering debris and men alike.
Three.
The cavalry met the blockade, steel slamming into steel. Spears pierced warhorses, sending them crashing to the ground, their riders thrown into the mud. Blades sheared through flesh and bone as the air filled with the sounds of carnage. Daenys fired another arrow, her hands trembling as blood and rain drenched the battlefield.
Two.
Tasha moved like a shadow, leaping between riders with fluid grace. Her sickle tore through armor and flesh, her one-eyed glare fierce and unrelenting. Tengri was a storm of efficiency, his seven-pronged blade cleaving through horses' legs and their riders with precise brutality. Beside him, Reman charged with his spear, a living battering ram smashing through the chaos.
One.
The line buckled under the relentless assault. The cavalry hacked and slashed, their strength and ferocity carving cracks into the Estil's defenses. Daenys's arrows found their marks, sinking into the flesh of riders and steeds alike, but it wasn't enough.
The battle dissolved into utter chaos.
Men and women who once stood tall were now locked in a desperate melee, fighting for their lives in the blood-soaked streets. Shields splintered, spears snapped, and swords clashed in a brutal symphony of war. Bodies fell, their lifeblood mingling with the mud as the rain washed over them.
Daenys loosed her final arrow, cursing as her quiver came up empty. She slung her bow over her shoulder and unsheathed her dagger.
"Out of arrows," she growled. "Looks like I'll be getting closer."
"Just don't die," Tengri muttered, still carving a path through the enemy with terrifying precision.
The wyvern rampaged, its tail smashing through barricades as Tasha climbed onto its back. The beast roared and thrashed, but Tasha held firm, her sickle sinking into its thick hide as she scaled its neck.
Daenys fought her way through the chaos, her dagger flashing as she blocked and struck. Each breath burned in her lungs, each motion a battle to stay alive. Blood ran freely from a gash in her side, reopened by a stray blade, but she pressed on.
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The fight spiraled further into chaos as men and women fell in droves. Those who had once sat proud on their horses were dragged to the ground, their mounts either slain or panicked. Shields and spears littered the streets, broken and discarded, while swords and halberds hacked through flesh and bone. The mud beneath them turned to thick sludge, soaked with the mingling of rain and blood.
Bodies sprawled in unnatural positions, their lifeless forms painting a grim portrait of the carnage. Men fell into the mud and did not rise again. The air stank of iron, sweat, and the sharp tang of fear.
Through it all, Tasha moved like a deadly shadow, weaving through the chaos with precision and purpose. Her sickle flashed as she carved through armored riders, slipping between shields and striking the weak points of her enemies. She used discarded weapons and even fallen corpses to shield her flanks as she pressed forward. Her steps were sure, soft, and deliberate, her singular eye burning with ruthless focus.
From her perch, Daenys loosed arrows into the fray, her fingers slick with rain and blood. Each shot found its target—an enemy soldier too close to Reman, a rider bearing down on an exposed spearman, or an archer raising his bow toward the Estil warriors. Yet even as her arrows struck true, she knew they were not enough to stem the tide.
Reman, with his intricate spear in hand, strode through the streets like a living fortress. His shield deflected blow after blow as he swung the spear in wide, devastating arcs, the tip glinting with rain and gore. Men fell before him as though they were nothing more than weeds to be cut down. One Astad rider charged him, but Reman grabbed the man with his free hand and threw him from his horse. The rider's body hit the ground with a sickening crunch.
Bodies began to pile at his feet, their blood staining the once-pristine streets. Even the rain, now falling steadily, could not wash away the crimson that clung to the stones.
"Your head will be hefted to the sky!" Reman roared, his voice carrying above the sounds of battle. "Let your gods weep as you stare back lifeless, entombed in your own mortality. Ours were born of hardship. Yours are dying gods, unfit to exist in Lorian—a place of freedom. I will slay the false gods and hold the stars in their place!"
Daenys loosed another arrow and barked, "Loose another round!"
The order rippled through what remained of the Estil archers, but fewer and fewer responded. Many had fallen, their bodies scattered across rooftops and alleys. Others had retreated, overwhelmed by the chaos. Daenys scowled, her eyes scanning the battlefield for her next target.
That was when she saw him—the second-in-command of the Astad cavalry, his dented armor gleaming as he hefted his blade and charged toward her. He had fought through volley after volley of arrows and emerged bloodied but unbroken. His helmet was gone, revealing a face twisted in fury and determination.
Just my damn luck.
Daenys leaned back as the blade arced toward her, barely avoiding decapitation. The edge of the sword skimmed the braid of her ashen hair, slicing through a few strands as it passed. She stumbled, her boots slipping in the mud as she scrambled to put distance between herself and her attacker.
But before the man could strike again, Tengri's seven-pronged sword pierced his gut. The Astad warrior froze, blood bubbling from his mouth as Tengri twisted the blade and yanked it free. The man crumpled to the ground, lifeless.
Tengri moved with a cold efficiency that was almost inhuman. Unlike Tasha, who fought with wild, predatory ferocity, Tengri's movements were calculated, brutal, and precise. If Tasha was the hunter, then Tengri was the beast itself—a force of nature, untouchable and unstoppable. He stalked through the battlefield, cutting down all who dared stand against him.
None could touch him.
His extra sets of eyes blinked independently, each one observing the battlefield from a different angle. It was impossible to catch him off guard. At one moment, he was surrounded by enemies, blades swinging toward him from all directions. The next, he had cut them down, their bodies crumpling around him as he strode forward, unscathed.
Tengri turned to Daenys, his voice calm but firm. "Do not fall. Stay behind me. You still have oaths to keep—to Drema and Totallis."
Daenys pulled back another arrow, loosing it into the fray. Another volley followed her shot, a ripple of archers responding to her command. She grunted, her tone sharp. "Easier said than done."
The clashing of weapons echoed all around them. Pained groans filled the air as men and women fell on both sides. Yet the Estil fought fiercer than before, their determination unshaken. This was their last stand, and they would not falter.
Daenys reached for another arrow but found nothing. Her quiver was empty. She cursed under her breath, throwing the bow over her shoulder and drawing her dagger.
"Out of arrows," she said, the frustration in her voice barely concealed. "Looks like I'll be getting closer."
"Just do not die," Tengri said, his blade slicing through another Astad warrior with terrifying precision.
The chaos of the battle thickened as Daenys pushed forward, fighting alongside the Estil warriors. She followed Tengri for as long as she could, but his speed was impossible to match. Her chest burned as she struggled to keep up, her breathing ragged.
An Astad woman, her left arm severed at the elbow, staggered toward Daenys. Her remaining hand gripped a halberd, its blade slick with blood. The woman's eyes burned with hatred as she raised the weapon, aiming for Daenys's head.
Daenys sidestepped the first jab, the blade narrowly missing her face. The woman struck again, and Daenys reacted instinctively, her dagger slicing upward. The blade found the Astad woman's neck, cutting deep. The woman collapsed, her lifeblood pooling around her as Daenys stepped back, panting.
Cuts and bruises marred Daenys's body as she fought her way toward Tengri, who left only death in his wake. Her movements became automatic, her body operating on pure survival instinct. Time lost all meaning as she dodged, struck, and killed.
Her blood mingled with the rain as her wounds multiplied, yet she refused to stop. They needed to hold the line until sunset. The Astad cavalry had no Mooneye silk to ward off the night storms. If Estil could hold until dark, the enemy reinforcements would falter, their forces broken.
But the sun hung high in the sky, and Daenys knew they wouldn't last that long.
A sharp pain ripped through her side as an enemy blade reopened an old wound. Blood flowed freely, staining her armor. She pressed a hand to the gash, gritting her teeth against the pain. Even so, she fought on, her dagger in one hand and the other clutching her side. Around her, the bodies of Estil and Astad warriors littered the streets, the muddy ground slick with gore.
Then the wyvern returned.
The beast smashed into the Estil line, its massive skull shattering what remained of their barricades. Its wings spread wide, scattering warriors as its tail lashed out, crushing men and women alike.
Tasha pushed through the chaos, her sickle gleaming with blood. Her movements were deliberate as she advanced toward the rampaging wyvern, her focus singular. The beast snapped its jaws, and Tasha caught them with a discarded shield, wedging it between the wyvern's teeth.
Seizing the moment, she leapt onto its back, her sickle hooking into the creature's eye. The wyvern let out a shriek of agony, thrashing wildly as its tail tore through another portion of the wall. Tasha held firm, sinking her weapon deeper into the beast's flesh.
The wyvern rider, clad in alabaster armor with blue accents, charged Tasha with his spear. Their weapons clashed as they fought atop the thrashing creature, their battle a blur of steel and fury.
Finally, Tasha gained the upper hand. She hooked her sickle into the rider's helm, wrenching it free and sending him tumbling from the wyvern's back. Grabbing his fallen spear, she drove it through the creature's skull, the point piercing through its mouth and into its brain.
The wyvern collapsed in its death throes, its massive body crushing everything in its path.
The sight of the beast's death reignited the Estil warriors' resolve. With renewed vigor, they surged forward, slaughtering the remaining Astad forces or driving them into retreat.
But for Daenys, the fight wasn't over.
The leader of the Astad cavalry strode toward her, his cleaver-like sword dripping with blood. His eyes burned with fury as he hefted his blade, his steps deliberate.
"You savage," he snarled, closing the distance. "I will cut you down just like you did my brother."
Daenys raised her dagger to block, but the knight knocked it aside with ease. He grabbed her by the face, his gauntlet cold and slick with blood.
"You praise your war god Drema," he sneered. "I've heard your little war cries. Why not follow in his footsteps?"
With a single, brutal motion, he drove his blade into her chest, carving a massive cross and cutting out her heart.
Daenys's breath came in strangled gasps as pain consumed her. Blood bubbled from her lips as her vision blurred. The knight raised her heart high, basking in the sunlight as he declared, "Remember, it was Dayne, knight of House Ludel under the service of House Redwyn—"
He was cut short as Reman's spear pierced his side, throwing him to the ground.
Reman was at her side in an instant, gently lowering her to the blood-soaked ground. He whispered something, but she couldn't hear him. Her vision darkened as the shadows crept in, her gaze lingering on the knight's bloodied hand, still clutching her heart.
The last thing Daenys saw was its faint, dying pulse.